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Nothing is immortal except my love for you…. EPILOGUE

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~LOVE, LAUGHTER, HAPPILY EVER AFTER!~
AFTER FEW YEARS..
GADODIA MANSION..
Swara was continuously staring at her mehendi with a smile on her face.
“I will keep the same mehendi design even for our marriage!”
She smiled remembering the promise she made to him before few years, maybe each and every design was not same, but her mehendi definitely had ‘SS’. She joined her back on the bed post and closed her eyes. Life had changed so much, time has passed so much with all their lovely moments and now, they were going to marry. Tomorrow is her marriage. Her lips curved more thinking about that. Her finger having the same engagement ring which he selected before years. The happiness she felt seeing the ring for the first time in her home was doubled when he made her wear that before a weak on their engagement day! She opened her eyes and saw her sister uttara entering her room. Uttara fell on the bed with a thud and closed her eyes tiredly. Swara chuckled seeing her, “tired after dancing a lot?” her little sister nodded to her making her laugh more. “didi! This is not fair! I danced for your mehendi function and you are laughing at me!” uttara sat on the bed pouting. “I didn’t ask you do so many performances! You kept on dancing and that’s not my fault!” uttara frowned hearing swara, she was just so excited for her sister’s marriage! Swara laughed more making her irritated. “don’t you dare didi! You have mehendi in your hand, I will tickle you like anything if you don’t stop this!” swara stopped laughing but was still smiling seeing her, her sister looked so cute with her tired and angry face. “what is going on?” a sweet voice came from the door and swara stiffened and immediately turned her face to a serious one. Ragini smiled seeing her shona’s anger and went inside the room. “my sister is still angry with me?” she asked sitting on the bed but swara turned her face. “come on shona! It’s been so many days now!” swara looked at her and saw her pouting. She stood up from the bed and walked out angrily. “don’t worry didi! she will talk to you!” swara stopped outside the room hearing her uttara. Ragini smiled looking at swara stopping and said, “she is not at all angry! I know her, she is just showing ego!”… swara turned to her angrily. Ragini went to her still smiling and hugged her lightly so as to not spoil her mehendi, “how many times should I ask sorry?” she asked sadly. “I told all my secrets to you! But you never told!” swara said angrily but her voice telling her sadness. Ragini frowned and broke the hug, and swara immediately went from there. Ragini stood there sad when laksh came near, “she is still angry?” he asked, ragini looked at him and smiled. “don’t worry about that! She will talk with me soon!” he smiled and patted her cheeks. “jiju!” laksh looked inside the room and saw uttara calling him as she stood from the bed and came near them. “jiju! Shona didi is angry that ragini didi never told her love story to her. Then think about me, I can be angry on both of them na? both my sisters never told me themselves that they love someone!” she pouted. Laksh smiled seeing her, while ragini said, “please chote! Stop this, you were too young that time!” saying this ragini went from there making uttara pout again. Laksh smiled more and pinched her cheeks lovingly. She was more than a sister to him now!…
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SANSKAR’S ROOM..
“I fulfilled my promise!” sanskar smiled hearing swara as she showed her hands to him, he went behind her and hugged her from back admiring her beautiful mehendi. She promised him years ago that she will keep the same mehendi even for their marriage. “you still didn’t speak with ragini?” sanskar asked, her smile faded away. “swara! I really don’t understand why are you getting this much angry!” swara moved away and turned to face him. “sanskar! my didi knew everything about me! Everything! I always told everything to her, but she is also loving laksh jiju for so many years and she never told that to me!” she went and sat on the bed and continued, “mom planned about her marriage and only then she told that she loves someone! Sanskar, we both were so much close and I am feeling very bad that she didn’t tell about this to me!” sanskar sighed and went and knelt in front of her. “ok! So, when are you planning to talk to her?” swara bowed her head down and said, “I don’t know!” she has always been so much proud of their relation, more than uttara they both were very close. Her heart has always been an open book to her sister but her sister had all her secrets inside herself. Doesn’t she deserves to know that her loving didi loved someone? “think soon swara! You are also very sad not talking to her!” swara looked at him teary eyes as he cupped her face. “you know na? I love your smile so much! You do smile, but that will be complete if you patch up with your sister. You promised me that you will keep smiling, be happy swara! Talk with her na?” swara smiled with tears remembering the promise she made to him in the railway station of Patna.. that she will keep smiling if he is always with her! “even you promised to be with me forever!” sanskar smiled wiping her tears. “I will always be with you!” straightening himself from the floor, he reached to her level and kissed her forehead. “do something soon! Because I don’t want you to be sad!” she smiled hearing him and nodded to him. she stood up from the bed and started going outside when sanskar suddenly called her, “swara!” she turned to him and raised her eyebrows. “no need to wake me up tomorrow at 4.00! I don’t think I will be able to even sleep! I am so excited!” she smiled hearing him. he continued in a loving whisper, “I can’t wait for tomorrow!” her smile grew wider as she said, “arey! Sleep fast, then only you can wake up early!” she laughed as he smiled back seeing her laughing. “good night!” she said. “good night!” he said and she walked out of the room still smiling happily!..
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NEXT DAY MORNING 6.30 AM
SWARA’S ROOM..
Ragini knocked the door. Swara who was setting her hair saw her didi through the mirror. Ragini got inside and kept the tea on the table moving near her. “show your mehendi!” swara kept her hands at the back. “no, I will not show!” she said angrily. Ragini frowned and said, “shona! Stop this na! arey! This is not done!” she pouted. “accha, ok! I will count till 3, if you don’t behave normal with me na, then I would…” swara smiled that was unnoticed by ragini. “haa! I would also not talk with you!” swara folded her hands near her chest and looked at her confidently. “1,2..” ragini got nervous as she was still not talking with her. “2..” swara chuckled and said, “it’s not 2 after 2!” and before ragini could say anything, swara immediately hugged her tightly making her startled. Ragini got tears of happiness as she hugged her back smiling. “sorry!” swara said. “for what?” ragini asked hugging her more tightly. She missed her sister! “I was just angry that you didn’t tell that! I am so sorry!” and when she heard her shona’s voice going a bare whisper, she knew that she was going to cry! She immediately broke the hug and held her face in her palms, “shona! Don’t cry!” swara controlled her tears and said, “see! You know everything about me! But I don’t know about you!” she said pouting making ragini laugh. “don’t cry like this on your marriage! You should be happy!” swara smiled and hugged her. “I am really very much happy didi!” ragini smiled. It was she who had known about the love of her sister from the starting, her chote shona who used to be happy when sanskar takes her out, when sanskar gave compliment to her and slowly when sanskar also fell in love with her sister, her joy was uncontrollable. Ragini broke the hug and kissed her forehead lovingly before saying, “I am also very happy for you!” swara again her sister and said, “I missed you didi!” ragini smiled caressing her hair. “I also missed you! Accha! Now, I have so many work after all your marriage. I will go and see them! You drink your tea!” she said breaking the hug, she was about to go when swara caught her hand, “come back soon! I have so much to tell you!” ragini smiled. Indeed, so much was remaining to talk between the sisters. She nodded to her and walked out. Swara took her tea and drank it fast as she had to meet her love, sanskar!..
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SANSKAR’S ROOM..
Swara pushed the door with bang as she got inside the room so much excited but frowned on seeing sanskar sleeping. “I don’t think I will be able to even sleep!” she imitated his words like him and stormed near the bed as she jumped on it. “sanskar!” she shook him. he opened his eyes lazily and whispered, “I can’t believe it became 4.00 so soon!” swara rolled her eyes at his words. For god sake! It is going to be 7.00 soon! “sanskar! it’s not 4.00 now and you told you will not sleep!” she said with a pout. Sanskar rubbed his eyes and said yawning, “I was really not getting sleep! I slept so late!” swara again shook him, “haa! I believe you, now wake up!” she said shouting, he finally opened his eyes fully and asked whining, “what swara?” she pulled his hands so that he can sit on the bed and listen to her. She made him sit forcefully and said, “you wanted me to be happy na? I am very happy now sanskar!” sanskar was still now rubbing his eyes and when he understood her, he immediately looked at her. “everything is fine?” she nodded to him. “you talked to her?” she again nodded to him making him smile widely as he hugged her. “see, how happy you are! Why were you showing ego?” she broke the hug and said with her innocent voice, “now everything is solved na? why are you digging them again?” he chuckled hearing her and then fell on the bed pulling swara on him. “come on sleep now!” he closed his eyes saying this and hugged her tightly while swara widened her eyes, “sanskar? do you even know what is the time? All are awake! Get up now, sanskar today is our marriage and you are lazy even today?” she broke the hug and dragged him from the bed pushing him to washroom still scolding him while he walked lazily. She pushed him inside the washroom and closed the door asking him to get ready, she was about to go out of the room when she heard his voice from inside that made her blush, “your wish, my command! Soon to be Mrs. Sanskar maheshwari!” ….
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EVENING..
Swara came out of the home beautifully dressed in a bridal dress, with both of her sisters holding her hands, the attention of all the guests turned towards her. The lawn was shimmering with the lights and beautiful decorations.. lawn! They selected this place for their marriage years ago! She saw sanskar sitting on the elegantly decorated mandap following the instructions the priest was giving to them and was also stealing glances at her. She walked to the mandap with her sisters. She closed her eyes feeling his touch and fragrance of the flowers when he adored her with the garland. She also made him wear the garland. When the priest instructed them to take the seven promises, the seven rounds that is going to bind them in a pure relation, sanskar caught her palm interwining their fingers. He walked forward taking her with him. her memories going back to the time when she dreamt of getting married to him, it feels more magical when dream comes true, her heart jumping with joy. She felt tears brimming in her eyes, she holded his hand more tight as they took rounds around the fire praying for a happy and a love filled life ahead. All the people present there showered them a lots of flowers, she gets overwhelmed when they completed the rounds and sat down. He had the ‘mangalsutra’ in his hand. this was it! They were going to be married.. and that is going to happen in a fraction of second and suddenly the time he took to bring the holy chain near her chain suddenly seemed like an eternity! His hands at the back of her neck making her wear it, she closed her eyes as tears flowed from her eyes, she smiled in happiness as sanskar filled her hairline with vermillon. He wiped her tears and smiled at her, “we are married swara!” she pressed her lips in a thin line so much overwhelmed, she nodded to him continuing to cry and smile while he continued to wipe her tears of happiness…
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LATE NIGHT..
MAHESHWARI MANSION..
SANSKAR’S ROOM..
Swara was standing in the balcony watching the sky. She closed her eyes and smiled feeling sanskar hugging her from back. “do you know how much you loved the moon when you were young?” swara held his hands that was on her waist and moved back closer to him to feel him more. She nodded a no still closing his eyes. He looked at the full bright moon and said smiling, “you used to smile cutely whenever you see a full moon and you will not eat food whenever it is a new moon day!” she opened her eyes and asked, “really?” sanskar hummed in response and then said, “I always used to convince you saying that you are itself a moon!” she gasped with surprise, sanskar never told her these things. She freed herself from his grip and turned to him as he cupped her face, “I used to say that you are my bright moon!” he joined his forehead with her holding her hands. “when I first time met you, when I caught your tiny delicate hands for the first time, I never thought I will have to hold your hand for lifetime!” she smiled hearing him and took her face away from him to see him and cupped his face, “but our love story was planned a long ago!” she whispered choking with happiness. Sanskar lifted her as he took her inside, she caressed his cheeks lovingly when he said, “when I lifted you in my hands for the first time, that time also you were touching my face like this!” her smile grew wide hearing him. whenever she looked in his eyes, she saw his love and that made her shiver with happiness to again and again realize that he loved her like anything. He was her friend, her love, her life, her husband! And she was his love, his angel, his devil, his wife! She was lost in his eyes until she felt the soft bed beneath her that was filled with roses. She closed her eyes welcoming the new beginning of her life feeling him kissing her gently. ‘The boring party of his mom’s friend’- that was his thought when he first time entered the gadodia mansion at the age of six, but that changed his life so much! He kissed her lovingly and first time he cried with happiness! Effect of his love swara! She was with him now! Their painful and lovable journey that was filled with emotions reaching its destination as they both smiled at each other feeling their love.. the feeling that made them feel the heaven in the earth! Her breathe going unsteady feeling him more and more close to her, her heart flowing with happiness as they became one that night!…
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AFTER A MONTH..
MORNING 4.30 AM..
Swara smiled in her sleep feeling a loving hold around her, she opened her eyes lightly and saw sanskar hugging her, she hugged him more tightly and then her gaze fell on the clock, ‘4.30 am’ “how come my alarm didn’t ring?” she whispered to herself and looked around the room to find her phone. “it was me who switched off the alarm!” she looked towards sanskar hearing him, he said that still closing his eyes. “but why?” she asked, sanskar opened his eyes and rolled taking her beneath him. “happy birthday devil!” he said excitedly making her frown. “what?” he asked confused. “happy birthday devil!’ will anyone wish like this?” she asked imitating him. “but you love it when I call you devil! right? My innocent devil?” he said rubbing their noses. He hugged her tightly nuzzling his face in her neck, she closed her eyes and smiled hugging him. “swara! You have turned 23! You are growing old!” she frowned hearing him and broke the hug, “sanskar! you are also 29 now! Did I tell anything?” he chuckled seeing her anger and said pinching her nose, “accha, ok! Get ready now!” swara widened her eyes and asked, “now? Sanskar! the time is just 4.30!” sanskar sat on the bed and said, “arey, I want to take you somewhere! Go now!” she sighed getting up and went to get ready!..
She was dressed in a simple salwar and walked with him outside lazily. She went near the car when sanskar called her, “swara!” she turned to him. “where are you going?” she looked at him confused hearing him, he smiled and said, “we are not going by car!” he said and dragged her to the back side of their home. she smiled seeing her cycle that was clean and perfect to ride now! Sanskar went and sat on the cycle and came near her, he gestured her to sit and she sat in front as sanskar rode the cycle. She shook her legs and wrapped her hands around his neck kissing his cheeks. She laughed as the fresh cold air of the morning touched her skin and made her hairs fly. She smiled remembering the time when sanskar took her in cycle like this last time, but that time they were just friends, at least according to him! but today, they were lovers, they were husband and wife! She dug her face in his chest hugging him tightly feeling warm. “swara! Is it too cold? Shall I go slow!” she smiled feeling his concern and said, “go more fast! I am fine!” she hugged him more tight, “pakka?” he asked. “pakka!” she said and he rode the cycle just too fast making her laugh with excitement and she hugged him more tightly. She closed her eyes feeling blissful in his embrace, she really didn’t wanted this journey to end! She opened her eyes after a long time when she no more felt the cycle moving, ‘GADODIA MANSION!’ she was surprised that sanskar brought her to her old home. he got from the cycle and took her inside, she was confused, what was he going to surprise her? Sanskar brought her near the same tree where she crafted ‘SS’ before years. The bark still had that, but in a branch that was not so height, it was crafted, ‘happy birthday devil!’ she smiled seeing it. She looked down and saw her hands as she felt his touch, sanskar was sliding a diamond bangle in both her hands. She gasped seeing that. “happy birthday!” he whispered near her ears making her more happy. She turned to him and immediately hugged him tightly murmuring a ‘thank you!’ he smiled breaking the hug as he took her inside, they both went to the temple of the home getting blessings from the god and then moved to shekhar’s photo. Swara caressed the photo and closed her eyes as if feeling his blessings, she wiped her lone tears and smiled walking with sanskar. they both came out of the home, he went to the cycle again when swara caught his hand, he looked at her confused, “sanskar! propose me na, please!” he gets surprised hearing her. “swara?” she locked his one hand between her hands, “please! Propose me exactly like you proposed me for the first time! Please! Please!” she said making him smile. He hugged her and whispered, “I will always tell you what you should talk! I will give you reasons to smile! I will always hug you!” she smiled hearing his words and closed her eyes remembering the day he proposed her. “you will always wake up in my embrace! Will you give me your hand, swara?” he too smiled saying them remembering that day. “yes!” she said excitedly and broke the hug, “now let’s go!” she said holding his hand. “but why did you suddenly ask?” he asked curiously, she smiled and said, “it made me feel that there are still so many years to be spent with you!” she whispered softly staring in his eyes. He smiled and said, “swara! You took my words so serious when I said that you are becoming old!” she smiled back softly and hugged him. “there are still so many years swara! You are going to be with me forever!” she smiled more as she broke the hug. She nodded agreeing to him. they both went to the cycle and again continued their fun and blissful ride..
Should this even be said that they lived happily ever after with each other always by their side, with their whole family, with a lot of teasings and fun, with their heavenly hugs and passionate kisses….

THE END
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A/N- i am at loss of words to express what i feel right now! First of all friends, i have always written short stories like one shots, three shots, five shots, ten shots.. this is my first ever longest story, so i really feel as if i have achieved something! there are many talented author who write long long stories, but this is the first time for me! Thank you so so so so so so so so so so much for supporting me! you all mean a lot to me!!!
if there are any people who have still not commented in any of the chapters.. i will be very glad if i get to know their reviews today!
If there was particularly any favourite scene for you people in this ff, do mention them!
stay blessed and happy. take care and NOT TO FORGET, i love you all so much!! see you soon lovely people!…

90 Comments
  1. Sumayyah

    oh man you are seriously just fantastic
    I just love each and every scene of it especially that 4. a.m waking up Sanskar holi scene Garden scene in which $$ was crafted by Swara
    sisters bond is amazing
    I also love Ragini’s character here she was with her in every situation
    Swara a little bit emotional but cute by
    Sanskar k to kya kehny ….
    no more bak bak just love it
    (weeping) will miss it
    surely come up with next warna you have to bear consequences
    congratulations for first ever long ff
    ba bye and
    take care
    love you (wiping tears)

    1. Sumayyah

      yay I’m the first I’m the first wohoooo
      amazing

      1. Raina

        yep!! you are the first!!

    2. Raina

      crying? i am so sorry for making you cry!!!
      aww!! yours words made me very happy!
      i am glad that you loved ragini’s character!!
      your threaten of writing a new ff is actually so cute summayah!! lol…
      you too take care and i love you so much!!
      you have been a great supporter sumayyah!!
      thank you so much dear!!

  2. MAHIRA

    Raina… my sweet chote Raina…
    what to say…
    Awesome would be so underestimating this wonderful piece of pure lovely swsanious story… i was weeping like an english mom on her child’s wedding during the whole marriage scene *and you know what, i was just imagining you as Swara :p*
    i love the fact that they kept as mad and childish even after marriage… Sanskar remaining her how their story started, talking about memories she never knew because she was too young…
    In the story… i loved…
    Swara’s heart touching unconditional love to Sanskar…
    Sanskar’s confused feelings… fighting insidely between love and friendship and not knowing where it will lead him… a man!
    i loved the shock that the cuty Sanskar was a cop engrossed in a vendetta against her father’s killer…
    i loved the holi scene… the way he confessed his unknown from even himself feelings…
    i loved the 4.00 AM waking up madness!
    I loved the the shamelesseness of this 2 lovers :p :p
    I hate the endings… any ending… i feel deeply sad at any ending story… but it’s ok, i’m sure you’ll be back with another beatiful story :p
    And ha… mubarek ho mere chote… first long story then… many many others i hope for you and us because it’s lovely and you should be proud of yourself to be able to write such beautiful stories at you so young age * bear di’s hug and kiss you cheek*

    1. Raina

      imagining me? *widening my eyes*
      i can never be swara!!!!
      aww!!!! who said only english mom? all mothers cry during the wedding of their children!! but still sorry for making you cry didi!! *holding ears*
      i am very very very happy that you loved the all of them!!
      sorry for making you sad by it’s ending and thanks for your hope that i will come back!!
      aww!! *blushing to your last lines*
      didi!! each and every comment of yours in this story have made me so happy and feel motivated!!
      thanks a lot!!!
      love you!! *hugging you too*

  3. my my my oh my god such a lovely one just fantastic

    1. Raina

      thanks a lot swathi!! thank you so much!!

  4. Vanisha

    It was awesome as always….
    I love all the scenes of this story
    Congratulations for ur first ever long story
    Will miss this story a lot…
    Pls come with a new story soon

    1. Raina

      will try to come back soon!!
      i am very happy that you loved everything!!!!
      your words mean a lot dear!!
      thank you vanisha!

  5. Simin

    Awwww i will miss this n uuuuuu

    1. Raina

      thank you so much didi!!!
      will try to come with new story soon so that you don’t miss me!!

  6. It was just too good….no words to describe…I can’t pick a particular scene of Season coz u hv given us a number of their lovely scenes…
    I always eagerly wait for ur story to be uploaded…I love the way u write…the words u use r just amazing…. I’m a huge of it..and off course U….

    If possible I request u to plz give us the link of all ur is n stories till date….
    And frankly I’m really gonna miss u n ur story….love u…keep writing… N keep giving us more amazing stories…take care..love u

    1. Swasan*

    2. Raina

      thank you so so much aliya!!! your words overwhelmed me dear!!
      thank you so much!!
      love you too!!
      will try to write the next story soon!! you too take care!!
      coming to my stories….
      my first story was: “Seperation made our relation more strong” (swaragini- ten shots)
      here is the link
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=seperation+made+our+relation+more+strong
      second one: “One of the days in swasan life……” (swasan one shot)
      link:
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/one-days-swasan-life-os/
      third one: “One of the days in raglak life…….” (raglak one shot)
      link:
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/one-days-raglak-life-os/
      NOTE: IT IS JUST SAME TITLE ALIYA! THE STORY IS DIFFERENT!!
      fourth one: “Sanskar maheshwari married his favourite fan……..” (swasan three shots)
      link:
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=sanskar+maheshwari+married+his+favourite+fan
      fifth one: “You will be my bride and this is the promise of your prince….” (swasan five shots)
      link:
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=you+will+be+my+bride+and+this+is+the+promise+of+your+prince
      sixth one: “Her Mysterious Smile…….” (swasan one shot)
      link:
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/mysterious-smile-swasan-os/
      seventh one only this story “Nothing is immortal except my love for you….”
      and now recently i posted swasan one shot named “Finding the true love of my life…”
      link:
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/finding-true-love-life-swasan-os/

  7. Prashasti7

    Wow wow wow they get married Dii u didn’t invite me na…..Ur chote is angry on u huh *turn face other side* see m not talking to u …….But i love u sooo much I’ll miss this story…😔😔😔😔 plz come soon with a new n exiting story ……..But m still angry u have to pacify me

    1. Raina

      love you much more prashu!!!
      will come with a story soon!!! ek second!! you typed these things turning your face? *giggling*
      anyways, no worries! i will pacify my chote!!

  8. Sus

    Omg so beautiful story dear
    Sanky is too awesome and amazing, a perfect person
    Swara really a cry baby but too emotional really she loved sanky selflessly
    Ragini an awesome sister, i really like her character a lot, if both are shown like this then it would be commending dear
    overall too emotinal but brilliant ff
    waiting for yor next work

    1. Raina

      thank you so much for your support Sus!!!
      your words meant so so so sooooo much to me!!!
      thanks a lot, will try to come with next story soon!!

  9. Meera_s

    Awesome..i read this ff in one go today..loved it..will miss this dear..come back soon with another swasan ff

    1. Raina

      in a go??
      i am really glad you loved it!!!!
      will try to write one more story soon!!
      thank you meera!!

  10. Really loved it

    1. Raina

      glad you loved it!!
      thanks ridita!!

  11. Wow just awrsome nd i miss this ff vry much…

    1. Raina

      thank you so much anu!!

  12. Mahisha

    Its amazing
    I was eagerly waiting for it to gett uploaded
    My favourite seen was when sanskar was teasing swara about their holi party and sujata’s drama after spotting them on same bed
    Tc and love you

    1. Raina

      i am very happy that it is your favourite!!
      you too take care.
      thanks mahisha!!
      love you too dear!!

  13. Kiruthi

    Wonderful epi

    1. Raina

      thank you kiruthi!!

  14. Itbi jaldi khatam kiun kar di but khair it was so amazing ke I was seriously smiling like an idiot throughout

    1. Raina

      i am very happy that it made you smile saima!!
      but i felt that it should not be dragged anymore. sorry if it disappointed you!!
      thank you!

  15. Awesome….Miss ur FF so much…… Comeback soon

    1. Raina

      thank you so much swasan!!
      will try to come back soon!

  16. loved it sooo sooo much 😊😊

    1. Raina

      i am very happy that you loved it!!
      thank you stg!!

  17. Swarna01

    Amazing bt itna jaldi kyun khatam kar di? Vry bad. Vry nyc part. Ek aur epilogue pls 😀 😀 😀 😀

    1. Raina

      as an author, i love all my stories to such an extent that i can keep on writing them!!
      but as a reader, i feel that it should not be dragged anymore!!
      i am really very sorry for disappointing you swarna!!
      you have been a great supporter, thank you so much!

  18. awesome come back soon with next ff

    1. Raina

      will try to come back soon!!
      thanks anu!!

  19. Awesome..gonna miss this ff

    1. Raina

      thank you so much sreya!!

  20. AnuAnn

    LOvwd it loved it loved it

    1. Raina

      i am very happy that you loved it AnuAnn!!!
      thanks a lot for your support!!

  21. SNY

    Amazing epilogue …….i hv no wordz to describe ur stry Raina❤❤❤❤❤thiz is my fav ff😘😘😘😘
    Plz cm back wid new stry😊😊😊😊tc and stay blesssed 💙💙💙💙💙

    1. Raina

      you too take care and stay blessed my dear SNY!!!
      your words made me super happy!!!!
      thank you so much dear!!

  22. Simi

    Awesome dear…
    All their moments r running like a trailer…
    Strict sanskar, sanskar’s rejection, their meeting before leaving patna, railway station scene, holi, Swasan’s kidnap, Swara’s unconditional love, Swara in hospital, sanskar’s realisation, confession n proposal, happy moments, swasan marriage 😘😘😘 will miss this ff😢😢😢😢
    From all these my favorite scenes r promise took in railway station n sanskar’s proposal 😊😊

    1. Raina

      thank you so much simi for telling these things!!!
      it means so much to me!!!
      you have supported me from the beginning of the story, thank you so much dear!!!!!!!!!!!!

  23. beautiful epilogue..i enjoyed d whole story so much..
    my most fav scenes were when sanskar realised his love for swara and
    sanskar propsed swara in GM..it was a grt journey..
    loved it so much..gonna miss it..plz come back with a new story..tc..

    1. Raina

      will try to come back soon!!! you too take care!!!
      i am very happy that you enjoyed it!!
      you mean so much to me kumu!! you have always commented and made me happy!!
      thank you dear!!

  24. It was awesome epilogue Raina love it and I love every scene of this ff.

    1. Raina

      i am really really glad that you loved everything!!
      thanks a lot yamee!!

  25. awesome dear…will miss this ff

    1. Raina

      thank you so much veena!!

  26. Seebu_s

    Amazing…will.miss this ff dear

    1. Raina

      thank you so much seebu!!

  27. Rabia0032

    Awesome amazing no word dear just amazing loved it…

    1. Raina

      i am glad that you loved it!!
      thank you so much rabia!!

  28. Namra

    So its over now, the epilogue is here… It means the beautiful journey of NIIEMLFY ended now… Oh god…!!! I’m not having any words to describe what I’m feeling right now… Too emotional situation, isn’t it…!! I just wanna say I loved this story from the bottom of my heart… Thank you so much Raina for giving us one of the beautiful love story of our SwaSan… The story that starts from their cute friendship, then one sided love, then heartbreak, then realisation of the other, and then finally to an Amazing love story… And about the favourite scene I must say I loved each and every scene very much so it’s difficult for me to choose a particular one…
    Oh god its literally the last time I’m commenting on this ff (sobbing) :'(
    I’m gonna this ff very much, but I know every story has to end someday so that a new story can start… Please do come with a new concept on our beloved SwaSan… Take care stay blessed and love you very much…

    1. Raina

      please don’t cry namra!!!
      and what shall i even say to you dear? there was not a single time when your comment failed to bring a smile on my face!!!!
      i am very very happy that you loved this story!!
      and please don’t say thank you!!!!!
      i will surely try to write the next story soon!!!
      thank you so so so soooo much dear!

  29. awesome dear…loved it sooo much….

    1. Raina

      am glad that you loved it!!
      thank you neha!!

  30. Arshaanya

    Wow loved it so much…
    Wil wait for ur nxt story raina 😉

    1. Raina

      aww!! thank you so much dear arshaanya!!!
      glad to know that you loved it!!

  31. y my all favourite stories r coming to end😭this is amazing ff..loved it…come back soon with many more swasan ffs😍take care…

    1. Raina

      will try to write the next one soon kat!!!
      am glad you loved it, please don’t cry!!!
      thank you dear and i love you too!

  32. Mica

    what is this ? an epilogue without mature content ? *pout
    huhuhuhu… their love just incredible, childish and mature in the same time…
    i love the way their heart and brain created many problems and how to deal with it..
    i love it , but huh! still no mature content ???????? 🙁

    1. Raina

      i am very happy that you loved it micu!!!!
      thank you so much dear for your support!!!!
      i love you so much!!
      and mature content??????????????????????????????????????????????????? how can you expect such things from an innocent creature like me?????????????? *hide under the blanket*

      1. MAHIRA

        Innocent !? You ??? Your Swasan almost gave heart attack to Sujatta before there marriage
        I’m the most innocent of you all… ;p

      2. Mica

        are you sure ? gimme another ff to believe… 😛
        innocent my foot!!!! you made Swara suffer all the time

      3. MAHIRA

        this why i kept innocent souls like you out of the tent………………………………………….
        you can’t even imagine how shameless can be our Sanskar Maheshwari…

    2. MAHIRA

      Huh!!! Have I spoiled you that much!!!!???? You’re asking for mature content!?!? Sanskar’s side effects :p

      1. Mica

        shameless fans leader, shameless Sanskar, my mess brain ..uuugghhhh
        stop saying you are innocent when even a store room can be something uncontrolable…

      2. Raina

        micu is right!! you made a store room so romantic!!!

    3. MAHIRA

      If you find the store room…. Shameless!! Wait and see the academy in the next chapter :p
      And swara suffering ??? Should I check your comments on season 1 ? About the ” poor” sanskar ?
      And ha… Mere Swasan are married couple… They can do all the shameless things they want :p

      1. Raina

        saw your comment before but thought to reply when you will update the chapter you are talking about!! and now, *fainting*
        you are the god of innocence!! *bowing my head and joining my hands*

    4. MAHIRA

      Storeroom is nothing compared to what comes next :_p

      1. Raina

        yes! yes! store room is nothing!!
        huu… *fainting*
        i can’t even describe what happened to me when i read it. gosh!!

  33. Vyshu10

    awesome

    1. Raina

      thanks vyshu!!!

  34. Shreeyu

    Raina….!!!
    It was just marvelous…. I loved it soooo very much… Honestly speaking that this was a wonderful story, I loved it a lot…!!!
    Well can’t say abt any specific scene cause each and every scene was very special…. But still I loved the last scene the most… It was sooo sweet…!!

    I would just say continue writing dear, come back soon with another story, I’ll be waiting for u…!!
    TAKE CARE
    THNK YOU😘

    1. Raina

      i am very very happy that you loved it!!
      i will definitely continue dear!!!!
      you mean a lot to me shreeyu!!!
      thank you so much dear!
      you too take care and i love you!

      1. Shreeyu

        Awww Raina so sweet of u dear… Hehe glad to know I mean a lot to u😘😘😘

  35. Loved it sooo much raina….!!!!💕💕💕💕💕😍😘
    No words for dis ff…..the story was fully loaded with passion,emotions,feelings….each nd every chappie was a treat itself…complimenting d previous chapters….completely cherished swasan’s love journey in ur ff….ur writing gives me goosebumps….!!!!.i love ur writing style….while reading ur story it feels like dat i am watching some movie as it is so easily to visualize….ur expressions are really…..!!!!!
    Loved the complete epilogue…..
    I loved the way sanskar referred swara as Mrs. Sanskar Maheshwari….it reminds of the serial as sanskar was so possessive for her dat he always used to refer swara with his name as Mrs. Sanskar Maheshwari, after marriage when he used to be in full mood…..!!!!😉😉😉😉😉
    Uuugh….i m missing them soo much…..!!!!
    Love u loads raina….!!!!
    Keep writing…..
    And ya no particular scene to mention as i love the complete ff….!!!!

    1. Raina

      awwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *blushing* hugging you tightly DA!!!!!!
      thank you so so so so so so soooooooooooo much dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
      even i am missing swasan badly!!!!
      love you more dear!!!!!
      i am very glad that you loved the all of them!!!

  36. i have to read so many ffs and this ff is added in that list…loved it dear…just now read prolongue…will read soon..

    1. Raina

      thank you so much soumya!!
      hope you will like this story!!

  37. Rockleon

    First of all!!!!
    Again I’m soooo sorry for not commenting !!!
    The epilogue was awesome!
    Feeling.sad but a chotooo sa request plzzzzzz come up with a new ff love you soo very next
    Miss u alot

    1. Raina

      arey!! it’s ok baba!!!
      will try to come back soon!!
      thank you so much for your love rockleon!!!
      will really try my best to write one more ff soon!!

  38. Shifa96

    It’s awesome dear..loved it.
    Do write more..
    Was offline from TU so couldn’t read or comment on it earlier.
    Take care.

    1. Raina

      very happy to know that you loved it shifa!!
      you too take care..
      thank you dear!

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