“That Unknown Feeling”- Chapter 10: Challenges

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Yuvani tugged on Krishna’s hand once they entered the store, leading her away from the boys.

“Yuvani!” Sayyam called out, “where are you both going?”

‘Girl talk,’ Yuvani mouthed, while Sayyam could only roll his eyes.

“Girls,” Sayyam sighed, “right Yuvaan?” He glanced at Yuvaan expecting a response, but Yuvaan simply turned around in irritation and walked away, busy with his phone, leaving Sayyam all by himself.

“Krishna…” Yuvani looked at Krishna slyly. “What do you think about bro?”

“That Khadoos!” Krishna exclaimed, surprising Yuvani, “He’s so irritating, you know? But he’s mysterious too. Sometimes, I feel like-”

“I was talking about Yuvaan.”

“Oh.” Krishna paused, her eyes wide open. “Umm, yeah,” she smiled hesitantly, “Yuvaan is nice too. He cares for me.”

“Has he proposed yet?” Yuvani asked, watching Krishna’s face carefully.

“P-proposed?” Krishna bit her lip nervously.

“Yeah,” Yuvani replied coolly, “you both are dating, right?”

“I know, but-” Krishna started to explain, when she was cut off by someone

“Hey,” Sayyam appeared out of nowhere, “What’s going on?” Krishna sighed, relieved that the awkward situation with Yuvani had been avoided.

“Where’s Yuvaan?” Krishna looked behind Sayyam.

“I don’t know,” he shrugged, pointing to the left, “he went that way,”

Yuvani realized that this was the perfect opportunity to leave her brother and Krishna together. “Wait, I’ll go find him,” she huffed, “till then, find something you like, okay Krishna?”

“Okay,” Krishna responded, walking away, while Sayyam trailed close behind her.

Krishna stepped over to the counter and began to examine a sari, when she remembered something. She gasped softly, and Sayyam looked her strangely.

“What happened?” Sayyam asked, looking at the ground.

“Where are you looking?” she followed his gaze and glanced at the ground.

“I was just making sure,” Sayyam said, while Krishna shook her head in confusion. “Listen- whenever girls gasp, it usually means that they’ve seen a bug, so I was just checking” he clarified.

Krishna face palmed in frustration, “No, I just remembered, next week is Yuvaan’s birthday,” she stated.

“So?” Sayyam didn’t understand what the big deal was.

“You idiot, I have nothing to wear!” Krishna snapped, her patience wearing thin. At that moment, a sales woman walked up to them, smiling brightly.

“Hello sir, can I help you and your wife with something?”

“No, he’s not-” Krishna began, when the Saleswoman spoke again.

“It’s hard to find a couple like you both these days, are you both newly-married?” the Saleswoman looked between them. Sayyam burst out laughing, unable to control himself. Krishna had never seen him laugh before, and smiled slightly, watching him double over in laughter.

“No ma’am,” he leaned over, still laughing, “she’s just my…”

“-friend,” Krishna completed for him, “I’m just his friend.” Sayyam looked at her for a second, his head tilted to the side.

“Oh, I’m sorry, I didn’t know,” the woman giggled, touching Sayyam’s hand lightly, “Besides, any girl would be lucky to have you as her husband.” Krishna’s gaze shifted between Sayyam and the woman, and she frowned, her eyes narrowing in irritation.

“C’mon,” Krishna pouted, tugging on Sayyam’s arm, “you have to help me pick my outfit.” Sayyam stumbled after her, leaving the lady behind.

“What happened?” Sayyam slipped out of her grasp and stepped away, purposefully putting some distance between the two of them.

“Didn’t you see?” Krishna glared at him.

“See what?” Sayyam questioned, oblivious to what had just happened.

That saleswoman was flirting with you,” Krishna threw her hands up, fed up with his ignorance.

“Arrey, so? Even if you want to be my friend, don’t give yourself so much importance. Besides, I’m not a girl, that she’ll take advantage of me.” Sayyam scoffed.

“You know what?” Krishna retorted, “Leave. Right now.”

“But your outfit-” Sayyam pointed at the counter.

“I don’t need you,” Krishna yelled indignantly.

“Fine,” Sayyam hissed, “but I challenge you: you will call me back yourself and ask me to help you.”

“Challenge accepted,” Krishna replied harshly.

With that, they both stormed away in opposite directions, determined to prove each other wrong.
So guys, what do you think is gonna happen now? Sayyam always has couple tricks up his sleeve 😉

Until next time 🙂
-Shreya <3

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  1. Amazing yuvani sayyam bonding kriyam soooo cute ?????next post soon

  2. Really loving your ff.. Very interesting and I love the sayyam yuvani bond. Waiting for more long episodes..

  3. Saiyani is superb…I always liked yuvaani..Krishna was irritated seeing saiyyam with another girl …jealousy ooh? I want the bomb to blast fast…ya and wanna see who wins..

    1. Fanficwriter

      Gurl, true…I’ve always wanted jealous Krishna too??
      Thnx for reading?

  4. hehe sayyam is no naughty?loved this epi❤

    1. Fanficwriter

      True?? just wait and watch?

  5. hehe sayyam is so naughty?loved this epi❤

  6. Mithila Farzana

    You are such a great writter.nice episode.interesting…..

  7. Yuvaan’s actions in this episode are indeed an embodiment of his deep-rooted hate and ‘irritance’ for his brother. The way in which he avoids even a single word with his bitter-enemy-brother is just truly splendid. This young man can just never speak a polite word or even a WORD with his long-time-no-conversation-with brother. This person is a true freak who cannot stand the best personality on this planet. I cannot hate him more.
    Yuvani and krishna’s actions in this episode were truly awesome and superb. Yuvani’s thoughts and words are supremely great and will surely help bring the broken hearts together. Krishna’s dialogues were pretty amazing and all her words are seriously well-planned and thought-about. The conversations between krishna and sayyam was extremely adorable and magical. All of their actions and the sales-woman’s thoughts were just magnificent. Their minutely described bickerings and adorable actions along with the new-challenge were a pleasure to read and gloriously written about. The story is definitely a treat to readers and is sute to make you win over hearts…

    1. Fanficwriter

      You’re comment hit the nail on the head today Shivani, awesome analysing???

  8. Hey shreya,
    Hope you are enjoying yourself and making the best use of your time during this break. May you perform really well in your academic and personal life. Its really a greatly exhiliriating feeling to be able to converse with such an immensely talented person like you.
    If you dont mind, could I have the opportunity to know the state which hosts you presently and the school you are going to make prpud in the upcoming future. Nonetheless, please dont take it as a compulsion amd share only if you are comfortable.

    1. Fanficwriter

      Hey no, its completely fine…I’m guessing by now that we are friends?
      Also, there’s no need to be overly formal with me, honestly??
      I live in Bangalore and I’m gonna go to pre-university soon, but I don’t know exactly which one yet…so yeah?

      You should register and get a account so that we could maybe chat sometime (since I’m not on social media currently)?

      Also, I just wanna say thanks for all the positive comments you’ve always given me, it means more than you think??

  9. This part was really very amazing.. Loved it!! U are bringing up those scenes which no one would have ever thought of no doubt why your username is “fanficwriter”!! Eagerly waiting for next part! ???

    1. Fanficwriter

      Thanks Aveesha??

  10. Fidato

    Shreya….Love it love it…So much… I have no words…To praise…It’s just amazing like always… Yuvani Sayyam they really portrait siblings in ssel even though they get very less screen space… Loved their convo….

    I think Krishna will call back Sayyam for sure…To help her with outfit…

    1. Fanficwriter

      Thanks Fidato??

  11. AnahitaAnnie

    Wooooooow….I seriously don’t have any words to praise u…that saleswoman part was just fantastic..the perfect blend of comedy and jealousy was great…U rocked the episode like always…

    1. Fanficwriter

      Thanks Annie??

  12. Prethiga

    loved it as always… there is some small fights happening and its fun… i am very eager to know as to why krishna forces herself to be happy with yuvaan… so in this chapter i did get a hint that saiyyam too has feeling for krishna and the part were krishna gets jealous was awesome… and anxiously waiting to know what happens next… pls ppost the next chapter soon…

    1. Fanficwriter

      Thanks Prethiga…your questions will be answered soon?
      Thnx for reading?

  13. THAT WAS AMAZING AND ? funny. I thought it would be awkward for them

    1. Fanficwriter

      Thnx Aisha?

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