Twinj- Marriage, betrayal, love (68 & 69)

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I m soo sorry for the late friends.. i didnt got time to write..
soo now i m here in front of u with the next episode.. i hope u will like it…
Sometimes i think that i m exaggerating the story… if u also feel so plz do tell me so that i can think to do something in this regard..

n yes.. thank u soo much gys for ur lovely comments.. i know i m not getting a whole lot of comments but still those who are commenting.. it really means a lot to me..
i feel good to know that people may be waiting for my writing.. thank u soo soo much for this… n i m happy that i could be able to make a silent reader comment omn my ff..
thank u so much.. it really means a lot..

Chalo.. i know.. i m speaking too much.. but its ok.. itna to chalta h na..
ok ok.. i got it.. we will proceed towards the chappy.. enjoy..
n ha do tell me if u like it…
Episode-68 & 69
Leela- See rt ji.. i know.. there is some problem which u are not sharing with me.. i can see tension on ur face..
plz do tell me.. JO bhi problem h hum log milkar solve karange..
lakin aap batayange hi nhi to kaise hoga..
rt- nhi leela.. aaisa kuch bhi nhi h.. (he was not looking into her eyes)
leela- its ok.. rt ji.. if u dont wanna tell..
but i m telling u.. if it is related to my angel’s marriage.. n it will create any problem in her her than i wont tolerate it..
(saying this she got up n was about to go but rt grabbed her hands n asked her to sit..
She sat without any argument..)
rt- humari angel ki life me koi problem na ho .. thats why i m doing this..
leele- matlab.. m kuch samjhi nhi..(confused)
rt- u know mr luthra na..
l- ji.. vhi aapke business rivals..
rt- haa.. vhi.. his son.. Raghav Luthra.. he is back of our daughter..
l- ji ye aap kya khe rhe h.. vo raghav.. casenova.. that womaniser.. chii.. par aapko kaise..
rt- (holding her hands) leela.. listen to me..
I dont know how he know our twinkle but.. one day.. he along with his dad came to me n asked me twinkle’s hand for his son raghav..
i politely refused.. but he became hyper and warned me that.. he can do anything to get her.. n leela.. i fear.. what if.. what if he do something to our daughter.. he can snatch her from us..
n i cant let that happen.. (having tears in his eyes..)
leela’s eyes are moist too n she pressed his hands assuring him that she is with her..

She was about to go controlling her tears but rt stopped her again n said-
rt- leela .. ek aur baat h jo maine aapse chuphai h.. aaj m aapko vo bhi batana vhahta hu..
m aur nhi jhel sakta ye sab akale..
leela gestured him to continue his talks..
rt- u know our elder daughter MISHA..
leela had tears in her eyes listening about her daughter after so many years.. the pain which she have hidden somewhere in heart from long is now comming out..
U know na.. on her 3rd birthday.. she got kiddnaped..(leela nooded) it was all done by mr luthra only.. due to business rivalery..
l- what!! (shocked) why didnt u tell me before..?? how could u do this rt ji.. i had the right to know about my daughter.. (she was crying vigerously)
n why didnt u complain about him if u knew the truth..
rt- becoz.. he blackmailed me that if i will open my mouth then he will killl my daughter.. n at that time ur condition was not good listening to our daughter’s death news..
atleast i had the relief that wherever is my daughter.. she is all fine..
(now he too was crying badly)
leela n rt both hugged each other n consoled each othre..
leela departed from the hug..
l- it means.. my daughter is alive.. zinda h vo..
rt- zinda to h laking hume nhi pta kha h.. aur kis halat me h.. 21 saal beet gaye h..
l- (smiling in tears) mere bacchi.. (chocked with tears) zinda h mere bacchi.. to fir aap dhundhte kyu nhi usse.. aap kuch kejiyae na.. humari bacchi to dhundhiyae na..
rt- tumhe kya lagta h leela.. maine kosis nhi ki.. zameen aasman ek kar dia tha maine usse dhundhne ke liye.. par.. nhi kar payya m kuch bhi..
n he won leela .. he won.. he snatched my one daughter from me.. n i cant let him snatch my other daughter.. i cant afford to loose our twinkle.. (crying badly)

Again both hugged each other n were crying..
rt- aur haa.. twinkle ki shaadi ke baad.. hume yha se nikalna h.. agar hum yha rhe to vo pta kar lega ki humne tw ki shadi kar di h…
uski salamati ke liye.. hume usse door jaana hoga..
i told everything to karan about our leaving.. but we have to hide all this from twinkle.. i cant afford to see her breaking..
Leela nooded while crying..
rt- (wiped his tears n tried to look happy) aacha.. aab plz ye rona band karo.. agar twinkle ne dekha to usse bhot bura lagega..
we need to be strong for her..
leela nooded n wiped her tears…

Twinkle- they didnt knew that i have listened everything.. i was literally crying putting hands on my mouth so that they wont come to know about my presense.. n thats the only reason i agreed to marry.. n we got married.. (crying bitterly clutching kunj’s shirt)
Kunj was so shocked with this revelation.. he cursed himself for hurting such a pious soul.. she have bear so much already n leaving her on her marrriage day.. he gave her more pain..
Tear skipped from his eyes imagening her condition after his betrayal..
Twinkle stopped for a second.. n thenagain continued..
Tw- U know sid.. i was not getting anything what my parents were talking about at first.. but when i came to know i have a elder sister.. i felt blessed..
i always wanted an elder sister in my life.. we could share each other clothes.. we could fight for silly reasons n what not..(laughed b/w her tears imagining her life with her sister)
but when i listened that she was been kidnapped when she was just 3.. my heart broke into million pieces.. i was not able to think anything..
then i concluded that i will do whatever my parents think right about me.. altough i didnt wanna marry.. but i dont wanna give them more tension .. so i agreed.. n i got married..
she hiccuped between her sobbings.. she was not able to speak more..her back in order to calm her down assuring her that he is with her in this situation of need..
Twinkle again started..
tw- u know i was not ready for marriage.. but when i take wows in front of fire.. i was determined to make my relation with my heart n will accept everything..
even though i was not ready.. i thought me n my husban would becoem friends first.. i thought he will understand me n support me in my dreams.. i started thinking abou my future..
but he.. hhe left me on my marriage night only.. even one time he didnt thought to talk to me.. we could compromise..if he didnt wanted taht relation..

Kunj was now in tears seeing her lady love in so much pain just because of him..

tw- not only me.. he left his family becoz of me.. maa. papaji.. adi bhai.. bhabhi.. aliya.. what was their fault.. thye to loved him na.. but no he was such a coward that he choose to elope..
sometimes i curse myself for maa’s pain.. u know usha maa.. she missed him so much but she never showed n papa ji.. he is so much angry with kunj that he didnt wanna see me.. just becoz of me.. i feel so pathetic to think that today my family is in pain.. becoz of me..
they gave me so much love.. just like my parents..
then i thought i will fulfill his space in their life.. n i became their loving daughter.. they never differentiated between me n aliya.. even they loved me more than her.. sometimes i feel so lucky to get them in my life..
but still ther is some hole in my heart which can never be filled..

k- (in mind) such a pious soul she is.. but what i did? i did a sin.. how can i do so.. she is even thinking about my family after so much humiliation n taunts from society..
even she is concerned for maa. that she misses me.. i m very thankful to her that she took care of my family in my absense.. but today i fell in my own eyes.. i dont deserve her..
but what can i do.. i love her.. i lve her soo much..

Now opening ner heart in front of kunj she is feeling relaxed.. (they talked for about 4 hours sitting there only)
she departed herself from him.. wiped her tears n stand up from there.. she turned her face n asked..

tw- now also u think that u wanna spen ur life with me.. after knowing that i m married.. that i have been dumped by my husband..??
bato sid.. now alos u feel the same for me..
kunj was numb for a second..
Getting no reply from him she thought that he wouldnt accept her now..
She started movig from there..
Suddenly she stopped listening his voice..
k- if i say.. i m the only cause of ur sorrow.. then would u forgive me?? (with hope)
Twinkle was confused listening him.. she turned towards him..
Now kunj started moving towards her..
tw- what u wanna say sid?? u are to my good friend.. u always supported me.. how can u be the reason of my sorrows..??
k- sid nhi kunj.. kunj sarna.. ur deceiver husband..(tears flowing for his eyes)
tw- what are u saying sid.. how can u be?? no u cant be?? (she was blabbering n was going backward untill she hit the wall)
kunj started comming towards her but she showed him her hands to show him to stand ther itself n not to come near her..
twinkle was shattered knowing that sid.. his so good friend is the only her cheater husband..
Kunj was crying seeing her this condition.. he never imagined it.. he knew she would be angry knowing about his identity but not this..

k- (he was trying to go near her her, to console her) i love u twinkle .. i really do.. n i wanna live my life with u..
Tw- Stop..! stop there itself.. dont dare to come near me..
[ background music–
Kaise Bataye Kyun Tujhko Chahe
Yaara Bata Na Paaye
Baatein Dilon Ki Zuban Aankhon Ki Tujhe Samjhayen
Tu Jaane Na
Tu Jaane Na
(Kunj was reminsing his happy moments with twinkle)

Tu Jaane Na
Tu Jaane Na

Hmmmil Ke Bhi
Hum Na Mile
Tumse Na Jane Kyun
Milon Ki Hai Fasle
Tumse Hai Jaane Kyun
Anjane Hain Silsile
Tum Se Na Jaane Kyun
Sapne Hai Palkon Tale
Tum Se Na Jaane Kyun
(THeir first rain dance, their one day outing , everything was roaming in front of their eyes)

Kaise Bataye Kyun Tujhko Chahe
Yaara Bata Na Paaye
Baatein Dilon Ki Dekhon Zuban Ki Aankhe Tujhe Samjhayen
Tu Jaane Na
Tu Jaane Na

Tu Jaane Na
Tu Jaane Na
(Other side.. twinkle was also imagining his care towards her when she met with accident.. how he took care of her… how he made her eat medicines.. how he bear her tantrums.. etc..)

Nigahon Mein Dekho Meri Jo Har Bas Gaya
Woh Hai Milta Tumse Hoo Bahu
Ooo Jane Teri Aankhen Thi Ua
Ya Baatein Thi Wajah
Huye Tum Jo Dil Ki Arzooo
Tum Paas Ho Ke Bhi
Tum Aas Ho Ke Bhi
Ehsaaas Ho Ke Bhi
Apne Nahi

Aise Hai Apne Gile
Tum Se Na Jane Kyun
Milon Ki Hai Fasle
Tumse Hai Jaane Kyun
Tu Jaane Na
Tu Jaane Na
(Both were lost in their memories n tears were flowing from their eyes..
his calling her syappa queen, her anger, her calling him sadu n much more was comming in their mind)

Tu Jaane Na
Tu Jaane Na

Khayalon Mein Lakhon Batein
Yun Keh Gaya
Bol Kuch Na Tere Samne
Huye Na Begane Bhi Tum

Ho Ke Aur Ke
Dekho Tum Mere Hi Bane
Afsoos Hota
Dil Bhi Yeh Rota Hai
Sapne Sanjota Hai
Pagla Hua Soche Yeh
Hum The Mil
Tum Se Na Jane Kyun

Milon Ki Hai Fasle
Tumse Hai Jaane Kyun
Anjane Hain Silsile
Tum Se Na Jaane Kyun
Sapne Hai Palkon Tale
Tum Se Na Jaane Kyun
(kunj was remembering his proposal, her breakdown, her crying face, broken heart n he was guilty of his doings..
Twinkle was crying clinging on the wall)


Kaise Bataye Kyun Tujhko Chahe
Yaara Bata Na Paaye
Baatein Dilon Ki Dekhon Zuban Ki Aankhe Tujhe Samjhayen
Tu Jaane Na
Tu Jaane Na

Tu Jaane Na
Tu Jaane Na ]

Kunj again gained some courage n went towards twinkle… twinkle sensing him comming immediately get and was about to go when she felt dizzy..
Her hands on her head n everything was roaming in her mind from her marriage to his betrayal to their friendship n proposal n then the truth..
She was loosing her senses..
Before she could fall down.. kunj rushed to her n grabbed her before she land on floor.. She was now unconscious..
Thats it.. i hope its a pretty long update..
i hope u liked it.. today i revealed a lot about leela-rt talks..
Twinkle’s state n kunj’s truth.. hope u liked it..
bbyee take care..
keep smiling…

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  1. SidMin23

    It was wonderful and truth fanlly came out and hope soon twinkle accept kunj as her husband and forgive him what he did he truly love her and do post next soon.

  2. Monaaaaaa babe,
    Really really really u can’t imagen ki how much i missed ur updte,???? Not liking yarr m LOVING it soo much babe,???????? And 2day’s epi was just wht 2 say yarr it’s was FANTASTIC,????? Rt’s truth was shcking ?? and now finally kunj truth is revealed but tw rction was so heatbrkng ??? So many more emotional scene are coming now wow ??? now m damn curious to knw about next update ki what will happen,?? So plzzzz plzzzz plzzzz plzzzz post soon, eagerly waiting 4 it,☺☺
    Love you sweetheart,❤❤

  3. Presha

    Hey monaa loved it dear the realizat8onwaz up to marh the fb was too good u nailed it u pened the emotion very well

  4. Chiku

    Hey monna darling
    Woaah it’s amazing!!! Lovely loved it????
    And ha u need to complete century for sure ?????
    Post soon

  5. Asna

    wow yr the episode was awesome
    So much emotional episode… n i think mahi is only misha… Oh god hiw much guilty is kunj by knowing the whole truth…bechari twinkle how much she has to suffer…. plzz make twinkle fine n make them unite…

  6. SidMin

    Awesome just loved it too good ❤❤❤❤
    Feeling sad for Rt and Leela get lost their daughter ….. but i think Mahi is Misha …. their daughter ….. Don t know just a guess we’ll Kunj revealed it finally …… I hope Twinkle forgives him …..
    Love you post soon ??

  7. Purvi128

    Hey Monaa …,
    U know what u stole my heart with this piece of writing … yrr such an emotional epi …! It was awesome …the truth about rt nd leel’s talk was quite interesting … twinkle’s breakdown nd Kunj’s guilt was ???????????????? U know I am also crying imagining their situation .. I hope twinkle forgive him soon …! Nd yaa i also think that Mahi is Misha …!
    U really rocked yrr ..! It was superb .. so emotional .. heartbreaking epi ????? Me bhi ro rahi hun un dono ke sath sath …..!
    Feeling so sad for TwiNj … plss unite them soon ..!
    Waiting for the union eagerly ..!
    Post next asap ..!
    Love u ??❤❤

  8. Purvi128

    Nd 1 more thing … last mein twinkle unconscious …. i hope she is fine …! Afterall humara hero hai na ussy thek kerny ke liye ..!

  9. Sohi

    It was soo emotional I was in tears at the time of flashback
    Yaar really you write drama scenes very well
    After knowing whole I want twinkle to not forgive him so easily
    Do continue and post soon bye

  10. Twinjfan.tamanna

    too good epi yaar…. It was so emotional… loved it

    with love,
    Urs Tamanna

  11. Shalini15

    Hey Mona it was awesome mind blowing superb emotional and heart touching episode. feeling bad for twinj n that flash back was too emotional. Hope twinkle will forgive him nd accept his love in her life and also as her husband. Waise I think mahi is her sister well let’s see in next episodes. please post next asap ?????

    Lots of love ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

  12. Awesome episode monaa I loved it I hope twinkle forgives kunj soon continue soon ?

  13. Monaaa it’s really
    I have tears dear rula diya
    Amazing loved it
    Feeling bad fr both
    Plsss post next one soon
    I’m he’ll excited plssss plzszzzz
    Love u keep smiling

  14. Aanya_pandey

    Mona darling!!! That was such an emotional update… Soo good!! Twinkle’s deep hidden pain.. n will b waiting what twinkle will decide about her realtion with kunj

  15. Baby

    ohhhhhh god monaa di☺
    loved it too emotional episode
    dont know ab kya hoga bt m really excited for nxt
    plsssss post asap di cant wait loved it sooooo mch☺
    it was interesting painful cute adorable n wat not speechless
    finally truth is out☺
    love u lods di☺☺

  16. Episode was emotional yet exciting
    Felt very bad for twinkle
    Don’t let twinkle to forgive kunj that easily
    Do continue

  17. RUTU.....

    Awesome amazing fabulous episode dear and emotional too feeling bad about twinj I hope twinkle will forgive kunj soon
    I’m eagerly waiting for next episode plz post soon
    Lots of love and keep smiling ???

  18. SidMinTwiNj

    Hey Mona
    Firstly so sorry for not commenting on previous episode and sorry for commenting late on this episode… I was hell busy with my studies and then was out of station too… Now coming to episode finally the most awaited moment is here… Loved it… Flashback was so emotional feeling bad for RT and Leela they lost their daughter and Twinkle lost her sister… I’m very excited to know what would Twinkle do now after knowing truth… Plzzzzzz try to post next soon…

    With love❤

  19. Amaya Bhardwaj

    Hey Mona,
    First of all I wanna tell u that u are NT at all exaggerating it babes….U r thinking completely wrong got it…..
    Nd I have read ur all ur episode bt didn’t comment on then becoz I didn’t hd my Email id so…I luv ur FF it’s mind blowing nd I was waiting fr it…
    Nd This episode was too emotional yr FB and twinj scenes made me cry…..I hope ki twinkle forgive kr de kunj ko nd they unite……I think mahi is only misha…JST a guess..
    Plz plz plz post next one soon ..

    A big wala sorry to all the writer for NT commenting guys….. I have made new Id JST one week ago to comment on ur ffs ….I really dilse appreciate nd love ur work….U guys spend ur precious time to write this ffs…Really hats ???off to u all writers….I didn’t hd habit of reading bt u all made me do so with ur fabulous piece of writing….I will try to comment on ur FFs regularly guys…..

  20. Amaya Bhardwaj

    One more thing Mona will u like to be my friend…

    1. Monaa

      Why not amaya.. I would love to..?☺
      N thank u so much for ur lovely comment.. N appreciating..

      N thank u all the people who comment.. Thank u so much.. It means a lot.. ??

  21. Amaya Bhardwaj

    No need to thanks babes……
    Now that we are freindship…….
    U know na no thanks ND sorry in freindship….
    ND srsly speaking u deserve it dued….
    It’s my duty to be appreciate my friend specialy when u are doing such a great job..ND I wish if God can give u extra hours so that u may write more such wonderful episodes ND ffs……
    ND ya plz post next episode soon……
    Eagerly waiting for ur next episode yrr…

    Love u babes
    Always stay HAPPY ??????

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