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Hey everyone! There is a lot I need to say before I start with today’s part … I had nothing to do in these days as I was not well so I’ve written a couple of episodes which will be posted occasionally. Once those episodes get exhausted I don’t know when will I get to post next because I’m going to get hell busy till 15th June because 3 of my very close cousins are getting married… Too much of shopping is to be done before that … So I’ll post my ff on Sundays & sometimes on Wednesdays so that I can still stay in touch … The ‘original track’ of the story is about to begin . The ff is called Jo Tu Mera Humdard Hai for a reason … Hints are there in this part itself… Thanks all of you for showering all the love you people have specially for the previous one thanks all of you commented in that one … but the story is not just about two people meeting in school & falling in love it’s way more than that. Though I am scared in starting the track I have to but I solemnly declare that everything that will happen now will lead to Dev & Sona becoming Devakshi in the long run… A mother can hear calls for improvement in her child but not cater to demands in structural changes … This is my 1st ff … I’ve given my heart & soul to it … please support me in the future also
SONA’S POV: It’s been a week … where are you Dev? All these walks from the bus stop to home seem worthless without you… You are not even receiving my calls… Hope you are fine
Jatin: Sona … will you have ice-cream?
Sona: No … Jatin is Dev fine now?
Sona’s POV: All I know is you had fever & were admitted to a hospital … Which hospital none of us except Jatin knows … He is not telling me, he says you don’t want us to worry …You don’t even find me worth of sharing your pain & here I’m dreaming of sharing my life with you
Jatin: Sona … I need to say something important … don’t know how you’ll react but I
Sona: Jatin … is it something serious?
Sona: About Dev?
Jatin: No … Just viral that’s what he has told us
Sona: Ohhh … Is he picking up your phone?
Jatin: Yes …
Tears welled up in Sona’s eyes. She quickly controlled herself
Jatin: Sona … Kwality walls … Won’t you have your favorite Magnum?
Sona was lost in her own thoughts… Her mind was dwelling somewhere in the past
Dev: Sona … ice cream?
Sona: You scream
Dev: Very funny
Sona: Wo to mai hu
Dev: Will you eat barf ki malai ?
Sona: What’s that?
Dev: Ice cream … you didn’t get it the first time
Sona: Tumi eakdum …
Dev: Eakdum Smart, Intelligent, Handsome
Sona: I was saying Tumi Eakdom Impossible … Now why are you smiling?
Dev: I like this Tumi Tumi …
Sona: Oho … So you are loving Bengali?
Dev: I love it only when you say it
Sona was as red as a tomato. Ms Bose had become Ms Blushing Bose.
Sona: Learned that song that you are going to gift me?
Dev: Which Song?
Dev: Sona …
Sona’s POV: Sona … I love my name … when you say it in that husky tone
Dev: You are blushing …
Sona: No … no … uhh … let’s have Ice cream
Dev: Which one will you have?
Dev: Itna amir nahi hu mai (I’m not that rich)
Sona: Fine buy me a cola
Dev: Itna garib bhi nahi hu (I’m not so poor)
Sona: Cornetto chalega?
Dev: Daudega … but which flavor?
Dev: Wasn’t Vanilla your favorite?
Sona: Tha …
Dev: Ohh so you’ve started liking chocolate
Sona: No I love it … Won’t you ask why?
Dev: Puchunga nahi to bataogi nahi kya?
Dev: Acha acha … please don’t get angry
Sona: You’ve killed the feel of it
Dev: Fine mat bolo
Sona: I will still speak
Sona: Go to hell I won’t tell you ever
SONA’S POV: Eakdom Obhodro … Eakdum Imp … No Eakdum smart,intelligent,handsome … but still he will always do something to become Mr. Obhodro … Duffer … I was about to say that I like chocolate because you love it … I love you Dev, I love everything related to you … Keeping this inside me is so tough but how do I propose you just like that … That will be the most memorable day of my life & I’ll leave no stone unturned to make it the best day of your life too … My only only my Mr. Dev Obhodro Dixit
Jatin: Sona … Sona can you hear me?
Sona: Yaa! (She snapped out of her flashback)
Jatin: Worried about Dev?
Sona: No … Why will I be?
Jatin: Good … Sona … when you came in the school for the first time … I was your first friend
Sona: Yeah! The Bong connection worked.
Jatin: You can confide in me Sona … What is bothering you?
Jatin: I’m not pressurizing you… Do it if you want
Sona: Joti … Dev …
Jatin: Yes … What about Dev?
Sona: Dev … is fine right?
Jatin: I’ve answered that already
Sona: Dev is your best friend …
Sona: What does he think of me? Does he even count me as a friend?
Jatin: Why are you asking this Sona?
Sona: He can talk to you… tell you how he is … &
Sona: He’s not even picking up my phone.
Jatin: Then what is this coming out from eyes? Sweat?
Sona couldn’t control & started crying
Sona: Yes …I’ m crying … what else should I do? He has not come to school for a week… He isn’t picking my phone & he’s telling you everything … What is this? If you want to have fun Sona is there then shouldn’t Sona be there with him in his pain … I feel like a toy …
Jatin: Sshhh … Sona
Sona: Sorry Jatin … I’m just … I’m just
Jatin: I can understand … Dev is my childhood friend … if he doesn’t respond to me he’ll not be left in one piece
Sona: Don’t you dare hit him
Jatin: I can … that’s my right … All 5 of us are friends … but we share different equations with each other
Sona nodded her head.
Jatin: As far as I know him he can’t see you worried & as far as I know you … you can’t see him in pain … All of us are friends … but the two of you
Sona: Two of us?
Jatin: Never mind
Sona: Thanks Jatin
Jatin: Ab thank you bologi tum mujhe
Jatin: What I mean is … sukha sukha thank you nahi chalega … Have the ice cream and
Jatin: Pay for the ice cream
Jatin: What hawww
Sona: Fine I will
Jatin reached home & called Dev
Dev: Hello …
Jatin: Kaisa hai bhai?
Dev: Better … all this exertion caused by the school’s work must have caused this fever
Jatin: Sona was asking about you
Dev: What did you tell her?
Jatin: That you are recovering … Dev
Jatin: That possibility that the doctors were talking of … Is that confirmed?
Dev: Not yet
Jatin: Don’t worry … everything will be fine
Dev: It has to be unless
Dev: You send me those Bengali songs that I’d asked for …
Jatin: I’ll come to meet you & then you can rehearse
Dev: Fine … Jaldi aao
Jatin: Shouldn’t we tell Sona about that possibility?
Jatin: Okay … I’m coming to meet you …
Dev: Don’t forget the songs
Jatin: Sure … khud ko bhul jaaun gaane zaroor le aaunga
Dev: Perfect … Just Perfect
Jatin: Theek ho jaa fir bahut pitega
Saying so Jatin disconnected the call …
I was right … Sona loves Dev & Dev loves Sona …
Jatin was ready to go & meet Dev but it began raining heavily. There was nothing for him to do so he switched on his Tv but because of the bad weather there was no signal. He tuned into radio
Milke bhi hum na mile
Tumse na jaane kyu
Milon ke hai faaslein
Tumse na jaane kyu
Anjaanein Hai silsile
Tumse na jaane kyu
Sapne hai palko tale
Tumse na jaane kyu
Kaise bataye kyu tumko chahein
Yaara bata na paaye
Baatein dilo ki dekho jo baaki
Aankhein tumhe samjhaye
Tu jaane naa
Tu jaane naa
Jatin’s POV: Leave it Jatin … She is the one you cannot have … Love can’t be forced … It will hurt but you will have to get out of this … For Dev, for Sona & for your friendship … For things that may have happened don’t spoil things that exist… I would have loved it if she reciprocated … hard luck … The best thing that you can do is act as a cupid in their story … You’ll find your Ms. Right someday … Care for Dev more than ever now cause your Sona … no … just…just… Sona loves him & it’s your priority to care for the one whom your love loves.
Wo afsana jisse anjaam tak
Laana na ho mumkin
Usse ek khoobsurat noor dekar chodna accha
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