A Burnt Rose – IMMJ2 : Chapter 1 – Broken

YO! Friends, Firstly, Thanks a million for your immense responses
Secondly, I beg your pardon for not updating you in these last 2-3 days. I had a very tight schedule last week, that’s why I wasn’t even able to reply to your comments too. TODAY I HAD REPLIED TO ALL YOUR COMMENTS ➑  https://www.tellyupdates.com/a-burnt-rose-ishq-mein-marjawaan-2-intro/
Thirdly, Again I’m apologizing for not providing a proper backdrop for the storyline…… Here you go,
[This storyline starts from where Ridhima left the Vansh and VR mansion. Sia woke up from comatose and revealed the truth. Vansh urges to bring back Ridhima, but all his efforts go in vain. Then a leap of 3 months(Oops I accidentally typed ” three years” actually that is three months only). Then our Intro chapter and continues]
Fourthly, Shall we start our chapter πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
A Burnt Rose- Chapter 1

He was fuming in anger seeing a lady in her mid-twenties with coffee for him.
” How many times I told you to stay away from me and how dare you peeked into my room Ahana?”
He asked bursting all his fits of anger out.
Ahaana replied him back within the nick of time with full attitude.
β€œSeriously Vansh Are you still behind that Ridhima? who is no more in your life ?”
Vansh gave her a stern look and moved to the washroom without uttering a word while an angry Ahaana left the room. As soon as she reached her room started throwing everything around her vision in anger, which almost made her room messy.
” How dare you insult me Mr Vansh Raisinghania,” she shouted. Someone from her doorstep was enjoying the whole scenario while having peanuts.

While Vansh stood under the shower without even changing his clothes, the first drop hit his skin. The warm droplets formed steam as he stood there without moving at all. As of he closed his eyes the voices started banging on his head.
{ ” Vansh, today your hatred towards me will meet an end, I LOVE YOU Vansh.”}
He shrieked ” RIDHIMAAAAAAAAAAA” within his mind. tears broke free from his misted eyes, the rest followed in an unbroken stream which left him so weak and frail.

While in Ahaana’s room she was still busy in expressing her anger. (claa, claaap) Like a shot, she heard a sound and turned towards the direction of that claps. A man in his late twenties wearing a casual tuxedo entered.
” Waah….waah, Vansh Raisinghania’s so-called wife is facing a tornado?”
He queried on mocking her.
She gave him an angry look. He continued,
” You could never own the title, Mrs Vansh Raisinghania, until Ridh……”
“Ridhima, Ridhima Ridhimaaa, everyone is behind her only, Then for what purpose I’m here” she shouts bursting all her waves of frustration. She continued.
“It’s been 3 months since she left everyone’s life and still, she is ……. I won’t, I won’t …… ”
“I will be there for you always, never mind of being my ex-fiance” He made a face.
” Kabir just mind your own business”

She left from there thinking “Vansh I will make you pay for this”
While Kabir thought ” These are only the after-effects of double-crossing me, After Vansh, you’re my target”
Vansh was moving towards a room when like a shot, Angre came along with a Mobile phone.
” Boss today is 19 January and she is on line now”
Vansh attends the call
” Wishing you the happiest birthday and a blissful life Miss Astha, and I’m sorry AJ is on the way so I wasn’t able to attend your party tonight” (Kaisi hain, mera picture Astha πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹)
As soon as Vansh cuts handover the mobile, Angre moves from there without uttering any word.
Vansh enters a room which was filled with extreme dark, he seemed to be staring at the unforgotten memories and broken promises.
” I ….am…. sooory……… I..am…sorry Ridhima,”

A luxurious Car was heading to VR mansion, a mysterious lady in her mid-twenties get down from the car.

Author’s note:

I’m so sorry for the grammatical mistakes as today my English became too worst than ever. And I had provided a very long update for you all, and also I took one day leave from my school and studies to update you guys. So Thoda toh tareef karlo mera Hard work koπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
So guys start riding horses of your mind 🀭🀭🀣🀣
What happened to Ridhima 3 months ago?
Why Vansh is in such a dilemma?
Who could be the new mystery woman in VR Mansion?
Keep reading…….Keep smiling πŸ’•

  1. amazing episode and
    cannt ridehorses of our mind bcoz exam are coming

    1. Denza

      Ta, dear πŸ₯°πŸ₯°
      And Give a best shot on your exams dear πŸ€—πŸ€—
      ALL THE VERY BEST πŸ‘πŸ‘

  2. Bohot achi picture/ movie hain…πŸ€—πŸ€—
    Vansh ne mujhe wish Kiya..Wow!!
    Waise tumhare kehne par hi Kiya toh tumhe aur vansh dono Ko thank you
    Chapter was awesome you are good in writing both comics and thrill..πŸ’—β£οΈ
    Maybe Riddhima became independent and moved on in her life..
    Or is dead for the world

    Let’s see what happens🧐

    1. Denza

      Nothing is impossible for Denza 😎😎
      Here you go with my chat-pata hindi 🀭🀭
      “Maan gayi ki Ridhima mar gayi
      Toh Vansh batein karenge kis se”

  3. Wow nice episode.waiting for next episode.

    1. Denza

      Ta, dear πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

  4. Nice episode …..I feel the mystery woman is riddhima

    1. Denza

      Ta, dear πŸ₯°πŸ₯°
      Mystery lady = Ridhu…….May be or may not be it might be πŸ€”πŸ€”

  5. Well so ahana get her place very well!! πŸ˜‚
    No worries dear people make mistakes doesn’t matter they rectify it or not matters😊
    Nice going dear πŸ‘
    Excited for the upcoming events 😍
    Well maybe or maybe not she’s ridhimaπŸ€”
    If she’s so make sure to don’t forget to mention ishani’s pov πŸ˜‚

    1. Denza

      Ta dear πŸ₯°πŸ₯°
      Ishani is now out of scene dear, Hatta diya meine πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

  6. FirstRaysOfSun

    What happened to Ridhima 3 months ago?
    = Only Denza knows it.
    Why Vansh is in such a dilemma?
    =Maybe because of loosing Riddhima or because of some business deal
    Who could be the new mystery woman in VR Mansion?
    =I think the mysterious woman is Riddhima. As it is your ff,it can be someone else also

    Like a student I answered all your questions πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I will continue to make you remember about the update so that we can get it faster.I didn’t think deeply as I didn’t want my brain to exhaust.

    1. Denza

      oh hoooo Aluuuuu 🀣🀣
      Two among you’re guess is r8
      To know which it is…..

  7. Oh wow interesting very interestingπŸ˜€…
    The precap sounds like it was Riddhu….and i wonder what happen 3 months back….
    Okay…im stopping my predictions there…
    And waiting for the next oneβ€πŸ˜‰

    1. Denza

      Predictions are welcomed Dear πŸ₯°πŸ₯°
      Stay tuned
      Keep smiling 😊😊

  8. Wow amazing starting😍😍❀️😍❀️😍. It’s really awesome πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–. Thanks for updates 😊😍❀️. keep rocking dear you and your updates 😊😍❀️. Iam waiting for your next updates 😊😍❀️.

    1. Denza

      Ta, Sree πŸ₯°πŸ₯°
      You’re comments always bring an extra confidence on myself πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°
      Stay Tuned,
      Keep supporting
      Keep smiling

  9. Priyadharshini

    So nice and great updates 😊
    Thanks for updates 😊.

    1. Denza

      Ta, Priyu πŸ₯°πŸ₯°
      Staaaay Tuneeed
      Keep loving
      Keep smiling

  10. It’s really super and awesome πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–
    Waiting for next one πŸ’–πŸ’•.

    1. Denza

      Ta, DearπŸ₯°πŸ₯°
      Stay Tuned,
      Keep smiling ……keep loving
      By the Way What’s expansion of JJ 😁😁

  11. Wow fabulous starting😍❀️😍❀️😍❀️
    Thanks for updates πŸ‘
    Keep rockingπŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯.

    1. Denza

      Ta, Dear πŸ₯°πŸ₯°
      I’ll try hard keep you all Rocking
      Keep smiling
      Keep loving

  12. Awsm yaar..i really enjoyed ur ff….

    1. Denza

      Ta, Shivu II πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      Keep smiling and Enjoyyyyy

  13. Wow Veryy nice! Interesting precap.

    1. Denza

      Ta, Leishu πŸ₯°πŸ₯°
      Only Precap ?? What about my Update 🀨🀨

    2. Not only precap, episode is also very nice πŸ₯°… looking forward to reading your next episode.

  14. The precap is full of suspense🀭 loved it❀…
    And thanks for me my new nick name shivu ☺πŸ₯°

    1. Denza

      Ta Shivu I πŸ₯°πŸ₯°
      Hey, From now you’re Shivu I
      While Shivani will be Shivu II
      Its gonna be full of Suspense dear πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

  15. Muntaj

    Den you never change 🀣🀣🀣 yaar

    1. Denza

      ?naih iksik udid
      Special reply for you πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ˜…πŸ˜… my sweet Minty

  16. Naira_u_singh

    Superb, now i can’t ask for longer updates bcs i know how difficult it isπŸ˜… to write one

    1. Denza







      Whole credits for you only πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    2. Naira_u_singh

      I didn’t know that someone will take from my crazy ideas to disturb vaishnuπŸ˜…

  17. Samaila

    I’m guessing it’s Riddhu. πŸ₯°πŸ˜

    1. Denza

      Then one question rises
      To whom was Vansh done Apology ?
      Think…..Think πŸ˜…πŸ˜…

  18. KMG

    Amazing episode,I am sure that Riddhima is the woman that arrived in a car

    1. Denza

      Ta dear πŸ₯°πŸ₯°
      Theese much confidence,
      Lets see who could be that lady πŸ€”πŸ€”

  19. RianshianSumellikan

    It’s lovely

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