Tere piche piche ..untold story by Saizaa episode 2

Hey guys how are all I think my story is not enough good..
That’s why no one comment but no problem I will try my best…..
Episode start with siyaam and Krishna arguing over food cart…
Krisna:- hey mister go from here..with your broken bus..?
Siyaam:-mem see my bus already broken so today i can’t go from here and I think you became hyper ..you know what I have solution for it .wait a minute I made fantastic water melon juice …I will prepare one for you..?
Krisna:- I don’t want anything ..water melon juice my foot..
Saiyam:- Oi hello.. Don’t be silly ..I offer u in free..??
Krisna:- standing in angry and thought watermelon juice…
Scene faded krisna’s smirking face??

Next day..
Two girl came to saiyaam’s food bus and order water melon juice..
Girl1:-hey..what is this .look there is a fly in juice..
Girl2:-where show me..yes u r right..
Hearing this noise siyaam get down from bus and asked wah at happend..
Where is fly there is nothing
Girl1:- u don’t have eye so didn’t see..
Saiyaam:- so tell me if fly here where it is go(he saw krisna peeping other side from road)
I think the opposite side off road..
They start arguing..the girl go after saiyaam’s caught them..
Saiyaam brust intu lought???and shouting to krisna ..what kind of actress u hire they didn’t even know to act good.. If u asked me than I brought for high class actress ..(Hahahah)???
Scene stop in saiyaam’s cute smiling face

Pls.!!!frnds comment how was it I will continue my ff if all support me..cmnt pls.!!

  1. Shaani

    Nice episode… Keep going… There may be silent readers also dr… It happens sometimes.. Don’t get disheartened by less comments.. Sometimes it happens…
    I don’t know about others.. For me ur story is going good..?

  2. Lovely episode. Your story is different and refreshing to read. I really like it. Keep up the good work!

  3. AnahitaAnnie

    Oo new avatar of kriyam..its so cute…and don’t get disheartened by the number of comments…u r doing great…?

  4. Awesome episode … But nxt time make it long

  5. Today it was nice
    Your ff is better now
    Keep updating and you will improve

  6. Saizaa

    Thnx all…next episode I will update soon ..
    Thnx shaani Apu..??

    1. Shaani

      See u got 6 comments now… When ppl get attached to ur story… More ppl will comment.. It will take time but.. Keep going… There r some silent readers also.. So don’t worry..keep writing..?

  7. Nice epi dr.don’t be disheartened. There r many silent readers too.plz post d nxt epi soon.

  8. Fidato

    Hey don’t worry… Keep going… If you can make it little more lengthy… I’m sure you can do it…
    Nice to see funny Sayyam…

  9. ohho..saizaa..plz ..Again!!???

    Tomar pichu pichu…

    ami chaina pore keo ei baparta jene Bangladesh k and Ei desher manush der k niye krp kisu boluk..

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