Kanchi weds Veer! OS


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Hi guys back with another OS wrote this long back but was in dilemma to post or not . If you like it Plz do comment. If it is not up to ur expectation sorry about it. It is totally different imagine kanchi as Helly Shah or anyone you like to be paired with Veer.
An old traditional house is beautifully decorated. There were guests all over.
Sunil: Today is big day for my granddaughter I wish everything goes fines.
Jaya : Yay a everything will go well. Here are your tablets take it.
Kabir: Mom is everything ready; they will arrive in any minute.
Jaya: Dnt worry beta everything is ready. Haaan where is Sanchi did not find her around.
Kabir: Mom dnt ask me I don’t knw whom the groom are coming to see. For the past 1 hr she is getting ready.
Sanchi : Ma I am ready, with full make up looking like bride

Jaya: Sanchi ur looking like bride and not ur daughter. See how much coating by touching her cheeks.
Sanchi: Ma, I should look good thn they will think how beautiful my daughter will be na
Jaya: Where is ur daughter is she ready
Sanchi: Ya where is she I did not find her.
Swara comes running with her dirty clothes- clearly shows she was playing with mud and water with kids.
Sanchi: Offo see this girl when will u grow up. Go go fast and get ready. Groom’s family will be here in anytime so go fast and get ready.
Kanchi : Dn’t worry mom he will also reject me u knw na already 4 rejected me so chillax
Sanchi: That’s my fear, all r rejecting her.
Jaya: dnt worry!  I ll make her ready.
Jaya takes kanchi  makes her wear beautiful light orange colorbSari with matching necklace and earrings.. She was looking beautiful with plated hair while jasmine flower adorns her hair.
Arav: Di di u look so beautiful, here are the things u asked. Y don’t u  like marriage?
Kanchi : NNOooooo I want to become a famous doctor like ma and papa , build a house for my grandparents, takes my parents to World tour after that only I want to get married.
Arav: diiiiiiii super, dnt worry it will take long time u fulfill all ur wish I will become big and marry u
Kanchi : Awwwwwwww my chotu and pulls his cheeks and kisses him.
Sanchi: kanchi  behave properly, don’t do any mischief.
Keys : She is not a kid and she knows everything so dnt worry.
Sunil: Ma, Sanchi  they all came, come fast. Kanchi  was looking casually. Kanchi  to herself I know how to make him run away from this place come on kanchi  you can do it.   Veer( the groom) with some of the relatives were sitting. Kabir was telling about his family history while Sanchi was tensed.
Anand : Can we meet our future daughter in law.
Sanchi : Ha ha I ll go and bring her. Sanchi  brings kanchi and makes her stand infront of everyone. Kanchi was not nervous and all she was very casual as she was 100% sure that this marriage will not happen.
Veer was awestruck seeing Swara seeing her casual nature..he  smiled. Kabir and Anand  were talking. Kanchi was not at all interested in these talks signaling something to Arav. She did not see Veer  also. Veer liked her attitude.
Sanchi : Let them talk alone for some time. Kanchi  was super happy as she was waiting for this moment.
Kanchi  and Veer  go to the balcony.
Kanchi : So what is your name , I forgot.
Veer : Ohhh dont you know my name .
Kanchi : NO if I know ur name Y will I ask , so buddu.
Veer: Ok my name is Veer Malhotra.

Kanchi : Listen, I will tell about myself, She signals Arav to bring the bag. She shows the a packet of cigar I  smoke 1 packet of cigarette daily and show the beer bottle…i drink when I am upset. I have 15 bfs. 10 already left me. 4 rejected me. So u should go out and tell that you dont like me. You will get a better girl.
Veer  was shocked and widened his mouth and eyes with her confession. Ok Kanchi moves towards her takes the cigars prove me. Just smoke a cigar and show me.
This time kanchi’s eyes were wide opened and did not know what to do. She takes the cigar and tries to put in her mouth but she places the wrong side. Her face was showing the fear and 100 reactions Veer smirks and smiles silently.

Kanchi : Throws the cigar down, listen I have dreams and lot of things to do so I dnt want to marry. You go out and tell that you dont like me. That’s it for now she rushes out.
All were waiting eagerly for their reply including kanchi . Before kanchi could tell something
Veer : I am ready to marry kanchi .
She was shocked to hear this and opens her mouth widely while Jaya stuffs ladoo in her mouth. Everyone was happy but kanchi’s eyes were filled with tears and she was standing as if her whole World has stopped and runs away. Veer  sees her and becomes sad
He goes to talk to her but she is not ready and closes the door. He felt bad where pandit announces next week there is one auspicious day or else we have to wait for 8 months.
Kabir : No we can do marriage next week only. Sanchi  also agrees.

Kanchi’s POV:
What has happened to me. I hate this veer  I hate him completely its becoz of him all my dreams are shattered. I dont know what I am going to do next. I hate this marriage and I will show Veer  who I am.

Anand  and Veer stayed in their place as only 1 week was left. Veer  tries to talk but kanchi  avoids him completely. She was not interested in all these arrangements. She did not even select her jewels or saree she simply noded. She is not the same bubbly kanchi , she became so quiet, no masti no smile.
2 days before marriage she was sitting in her room resting her head in bedframe while clutching her pillow tightly. Her charm was totally lost. Veer  knocked the door but she was lost in her own thoughts. He went inside and closed the door.
Veer :  swara he touched her shoulder. She came back to her senses and jerked.
Kanchi : what the hell, what r u doing in my room, get out.
Veer : with red shot eyes: kanchi  listen I was trying to talk for past 3 days but ur not listening to me.
Kanchi : I dnt want to hear get out. I hate u I hate u to the core.
Veer  could not take anymore: he holds her tightly and pins her to wall.
I met you before 1 year in Chennai while helping an old couple. After that I met u couple of times but u did not even notice. Maybe  this is what attracted me. The childish nature, The Jhansi ki rani roop, ur dreams these all made me fall for u. When my parents were talking about our marriage, I thought it was destiny and I was the happiest person. I thought to give ur dreams as gift after marriage to show how much I loved you, but it is of no use. I will talk to my parents and cancel the marriage. He goes out in full rage.
Swara took the file and an immediate smile adorned her lips. He had made her continue her studies, booked a World trip for his parents and my parents. He has transferred his Chennai farm house to my grandfather’s name.

O God what did I do, he cared so much for my happiness but I hurt him so much, omg I have to meet him. She runs and searches for Veer. He was searching for his parents. She goes before him, he avoids her, and she again goes in front of him.
Veer : What the hell kanchi , wait for 2 mins I ll talk to my parents and u can be free.
Kanchi : I need to talk before that pleading with her eyes.
Veer ; No I dnt want to talk anything just leave.
Kanchi sees here and there pulls Veer to the room. I am sorry I know I hurt u, but what to do if u have dreams and it get shattered u will come to know. I am sorry.
He did not pay any heed to Swara, U hate me now what.
Kanchi : Noo now I dont hateeee u
Veer : thn prove it.
Kanchi : Again but how
Veer : pulls her by waist kiss me. Kanchi  is shocked by his sudden action.
Kanchi : Ok leave me and close ur eyes. He happily agrees and closes his eyes. He feels a kiss on his cheeks he opens his eyes and find Arav kissed him while kanchi holding Arav.
Veer: kanch you cheater  i willnot leave u wait and run behind her.
Sanchi  and Arav are running. She got back her her old charm, masti and a perfect life partner understanding and caring and were happily married.
Now what about Sanchi and Kabir….
Their room
Sanchi: Finally Kanchi is married…am so happy …now only Arav is left and then we will be free.
Kabir: hmm so fast..i wish we had another son/daughter smiles naughtily.
Sanchi: no I am done with it…finally we got Kanchi married and you want another one…omg i will die..lets sleep…tomorrow we  have to go to the hospital..
Kabir: So fast…i am not feeling sleep let’s do something..
Sanchi: laughs…lets sleep stupid….good night
Kabir: Good night baby

                                  THE END

That was it….thanks for reading

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30 Comments
  1. Wow so nice amazing saanchi is with full makeup ha funny is will so cute and beautiful

    1. Moonlight25

      Thanks Divya

  2. That’s amazing yaar.what a story yaar.fully entertaining .this is so so so awesome☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

  3. Nice one

  4. Omg dear..this was a superrrr se uparrrr waala update ??loved it to the core of my heart ????it seemed like I’m reading a short romantic novel ?? u proved that a story can be osm even if there isn’t any negative character.. u just nailed it dear…. for me, this was the best
    os till date??u & ur writing skills r simply amazing ???

    1. Moonlight25

      Aww thanks you so much Riya! This was the best OS never expected that..thanks a lot

  5. It’s so good moonlight really awesome. Suprb just loved it a lot.

    1. Moonlight25

      Thanks a lot

  6. Trisha139

    Oh moonlight I would just say super se upr mst perfect fabulous awesome mind blowing …..even these words are so less to prove how much incredible writer you are ….that cigrate part bought the widest smile on my face nd I was like hiding that or else I would have to explain to my little sister what I was doing …??…seriously You made my day nd me too hv something for u next part of my ff ??but yes pls don’t try juttas on me free reading the puzzle … this is a sincere req ??

    1. Moonlight25

      Aww thank you so much Trisha! Your comment brought a wide smile to my face…of course I won’t throw any juttas on you..i don’t want you to get her..love you

  7. First of all I didn’t noticed properly that was kanchi not sanchi I skipped it BT after think ohh this on was about their daughter kanchi then I read os this one was gd BT I am not read more scenes of them and their love my lovable kanchi….gd one …

    1. Moonlight25

      Thanks a lot Premamohan

  8. it was nice os from u moonlight
    well done and its awesome

  9. Anee

    Wow wow wow amazing, fab,superbb.you are amazing writer dear moonlight. Make more os on kaanchi.keep writing.

    1. Moonlight25

      Thanks Anee and sure

  10. U r amz moonlight n pl write more os only on kaanchi\sabir pair

    1. Moonlight25

      Thank you and sure

  11. Abhilasha

    Superb dear…. It was so adorable
    .. Simple sweet…. Loved it so much!!!!

    1. Moonlight25

      Thanks a lot

  12. Wow lovely
    But any knows why wardharosyy and ramvajini donot update their ffs
    Plz i want there new episodse
    Plz anyone reply plz?????

    1. Moonlight25

      Thanks…but I don’t know what happened to them…also i miss their ffs

  13. Swetatitli

    Awesome yaar ???

    1. Moonlight25

      Thank you so much!

  14. RUSHI

    moonlight woooowww I mean tooo good yaar such such a cute story I wanted more of it ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ I still cannot stop adoring sooo unique name itself attracted me love u

  15. Moonlight25

    Aww thank you so much Rushi! I had a wide smile reading your comments!

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