My Destination: Cafe Coffee Day- Chapter 24 and 25 by Jerry


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“But you know I bet I will be able to convince her, to make her love me back.” He said with a beaming smile that plastered across his face perfectly, to hide the broken him. Rudra and Omkara kept an assuring hand on his brother’s back and hugged him. “Dil Bole Oberoi !” They chorused.

“Sahil will you do a chota sa kaam for me ?” Anika asked crossing her fingers hoping for the best. “Ummm..what I would get in return ?” He asked keeping his hand on his chin. “Urgghh” she groaned and forced a smile towards him. “Whatever you wish for.” She said making a face. “Okay, then each week I will get 5 chocolates, you will buy me a new video game and the foremost important thing you will not touch my hair or apply that ‘powder’ on my face.” He said squinting his eyes. “Pinky Promise ?” He asked. “But Sahil, it will damage your teeth and about that powder thing, then how will you look handsome, I will apply a little only na..” She said holding his cheeks. “No ifs and buts, agree to the deal and I will do your work.” Sahil decided to stay firm in his decision. “Okay !” She said defeated. “What I have to do ?” He asked. “Come here !” She indicated with her hands. She whispered something in his ear and then smiled. He gave a thumbs up sign.

“Hello Jiju !” Sahil greeted Shivaay, who was setting his hair, a little upset after his brothers departed. “Hey Champ !” He said and took him in his arms. “How are you ?” He said. “Not fine.” He tried giving a sad look, focusing downwards. “What happened ?” He asked concerned. “Actually, I wanted to go to the lawn and nobody is willing to take me there, everybody is busy on their own. Anika didi is busy with the women section and Rudra with Saumya and Omkara….” Rudra reasoned. “Okay, okay I got the hint.” He said chuckling a bit at his siblings public display of affection. “I will take you.” He said and went with him towards the lawn.

As soon as Shivaay placed Sahil on the ground, he calmly tiptoed from there. The lawn was a little dark with perfect moon who gave its brightness for the two soulful people. Shivaay searched for Sahil and found that he was not there. Not wanting to waste a moment he was going in search of him when something fascinating caught his eye. He went closer to found something and he stilled.

There was the love of his life, standing beside the ice cream stand which he used when he proposed her, with a ice cream smeared face and lots of the same in her hand. She was eating nonchalantly having no fear of the other. She was looking cute, no very cute as the ice cream puddled her nose, face cheeks and lips. But more than cute she was looking funny. He looked on and then…

Broke into fits of laughter, so much that he could hear his own echo. He laughed and laughed holding his stomach. Anika saw him and waved a ‘Hi’ at him with her ice cream smeared teeth looking all funny. He again laughed and literally he did a ROFL.

Anika smiled as her plan worked and continued to stare him. “He looks so handsome and cute in this attire. I am not able to control myself. Freaking hot ! Today many girls would be drooling for him, but as I am his so called girlfriend, I will not let anybody come near him. What I have made myself ? Today I also wanted  to look the best, but its okay I can do anything for his smile. I lov…” She applied the brakes to her thought. What is she even thinking. She cursed herself numerous time for thinking like this.

After a hearty laugh of about 10 minutes, he went near her and said, “Anika look at you. What are you even doing ?” He asked. “Hey, now I can bet, Utkarsh’s ice cream are not better than yours. Your’s are amazing.” She complimented and then felt satisfied seeing a genuine grin placing on his lips. “Well, thanks.” He said. “You look awesome when you laugh.” She said. “Ohh !” He said unable to hold all the appreciations. “Let’s go for the Ceremony.” She said. “Like this ?” He chuckled. “Ohh, sorry I will change soon.” She said and, “By the way you look really handsome.” She complimented running back to the restroom proud of her task. “Praise number 3.” Shivaay exclaimed. “Not bad” he smiled and then he thought of his mom’s work. He turned the other side to see the drool, if her mother was that accurate but she had already left. He grinned foolishly, “She will be the death of me !!”

The three brothers felt a little weak and emotional while seeing their sister getting engaged but their lady love’s were ready for their men and mustered courage in them. Priyanka touched everyone’s feet and went towards her brothers. “Tu itni badi kab hogayi ?(How did you grow so fast ?”) Rudra asked with tears. “Bhaiya, I toh growed up har harayike and now don’t cry, give me a khidkitod smile.” Said Priyanka glistening. The brothers were dumbfounded and gazed at Priyanka who spoke with so much ease in front of a huge crowd. Their eyes turned towards Ranveer and now they knew why. He was the reason behind it. They didn’t had words to thank him and expressed their gratitude through their eyes. Ranveer smiled. “Prinku ! Language ! Your in laws are there.” Shivaay and Omkara said slowly. “Its okay, Shivaay and Om, she is my daughter. I won’t stop her.” Kamini came forward and planted a kiss on Priyanka’s forehead.

“Khotiyoo..ab now don’t cry !” Dadi exclaimed seeing a tensed atmosphere. Everyone broke into fits of laughter.

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Chapter 25
“Anika Di, what are you thinking ?” Sahil asked looking at the tense figure. She turned to face him and her eyes were watery. He cupped her face, asking the reason, to which he received countless sobs from the person whom he hated to see tears in her eyes. “Sahil, I am not able to think what to do further !” She said amidst her sobs. “What happened Di ?” He managed to ask trying hard to maintain his composure. “Sahil, you know Billu ji, loves me. He had proposed me on the Drami Beach and you won’t believe that it was one of the cutest proposals I had ever seen.” She smiled a little and told him everything and cleared all the doubts which were in his mind.

“Toh now what is the problem Anika di, don’t act stubborn. I bet he is the one for you. He loves you Anika di, for god sake. Try trusting him for once, he is one of the best persons I have met on this planet.” Sahil said a little shaken and angry after he got to know that she had said no to his proposal. “But will he able to take care of me ?” She questioned him and more to herself. “Anika di, remember all the moments you had spend with him. Has he ever made you feel uncomfortable or something kind of that. I am sure he must have taken care for you.” Sahil explained his point of view.

Going through a quick flash back she lived the moments once again. How he had protected her while her finger was gonna chop, risking his finger. How he had scolded her and consulted a doctor for the minor burn on her hands. And then, how he had come with a naughty idea to feed the other with their hands. She still remembers those butterflies which she has cursed when he deliberately licked her finger. He cares for her, but her mind interjected. “Will he care for you if something serious will happen. This was a little cut and anybody who would have been at his place would have done the same thing. “But he cares for her damn it !” Her heart shouted to the brain.

“Anika di, do think about it.” Sahil said giving a quick goodnight kiss
to her. This time he didn’t felt ashamed, she was in a problem and it is his duty to protect her and tell her the right path, at least he thought so.

The moonlight fell over to a godly figure who was toddling here and there drowning in the thoughts of his beloved. He was thinking about her. He had not seen her after that Ice cream fiasco. She was looking so beautiful in that too, yes with the ice cream smeared face too. Suddenly the naughty part within him awoke. “Let’s take a sneak peak !” His heart declared tired of her teasing in his dream. Shivaay placed his hand over his chest, right on his heart. “Sure, your wish will be granted.” He said with a naughty smile on his god damn gorgeous face.

Shivaay’s POV

Fingers cross, fingers cross, I told my myself and did the same. And yeah the lottery was mine. Anika was alone in her room. Maybe Sahil had gone to sleep in Rudra’s room.

She is looking so beautiful. Just like a pari, a fairy sweet and cute. In sleep she just looks gorgeous not that tadibaaz girl. Huh !! Can’t resist myself more.

Placing myself neatly, I sat beside her. She was in a deep sleep. I leaned forward and touched her forehead but….
It was damn hot ! Burning and blazing. It means she has fever, high fever. I was getting angry on myself, it was all my fault. She ate ice creams for me, to make me happy, I know this from before. But I hadn’t thought of the consequences. I cursed myself. Gosh ! What I have done ?

Thinking for a while I processed my mind and thought that what she would be suffering from. She must be feeling horrible. The body ache must be unbearable and being the so called self less girl, she couldn’t have cared more. I hate her for that but I love her much more. She is my jaan. And this moment I have to be with her, how can I let her go. She needs someone this time who can hold her hand and tell her that I am here for you. Sahil is too small. I will be that ‘special one’ at least for today. I will take care of her in every possible way. I love her, I love her !!!!!!

End of Shivaay’s POV

Immediately the cell came out from his pocket. “Shivaay Singh Oberoi !” He roared over the phone. “Okay, hmm !”

He rushed out from there and came back with a bowl of water and a thin white cloth. Taking her head on his lap, he looked at her teary eyed. “It was all because of him.” He was guilty.

He bent over and kissed her forehead, “I won’t let anything happen to you.”

Whole night passed as Shivaay tried his best to lower down the temperature. He would cry sometimes cursing himself or would simply hope for her to recover. He would keep his head on her and look at her with affection. It happened because of him.

At four in the morning, he checked her temperature again. It was normal. He was relieved. Kissing her forehead and taking her hand in his, he wished that he must be in the place of her. He caressed her face.

“I love you Anika. I promise I will try never to come in front of you. You would be free Anika, you would be fine. I love you like one could ever possibly do.” He said as he descended from her room not before peacefully tucking her in. And then he smiled, amid his watery eyes.

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Heya cuties !! I am back again with two updates, Surprise !!!!!! I hope you all liked it. The next chapter will be the last. So do comment everyone, along with the silent readers. Thank you for reading ❤

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70 Comments
  1. Jerry I loved it yaar
    It was khidlitod jerru
    Shivaay’s tears hurt me yaar?????????? plzzzzz shivika plzzzzz
    Otherwise u r a very very good writer n u too know that right???
    I am speechless
    It is amazing the way u keep everyone hooked wid ur ff
    CCD has gained popularity thru ur ff I guess.
    ??

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Naymaz Di !
      Thank you so much. Di, wait for some more time, till the last chapter, I wish you will like it. Awww, your wish will be granted soonish na..
      So happy that you loved it. Hmm, let’s see how many people go to CCD !!??
      Love ya❤

  2. VHM

    Hey Jerry…how are you and how’s your health.

    Awesome episodes Vedika….had been very eagerly waiting and then you gave double dhamaka…you are just fabulous dear…love you loads…keep smiling and take care…stay healthy?❤️?❤️?❤️????

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Harika Di !
      Yeah now I am fine, thanks for asking.
      I am so happy that you liked the chapters. Thank you so much, double dhamaka, you liked it na??
      Love you too dher sara❤

  3. Aashi9

    hey Jerry, the update was absolute awesome
    loved the bro-sis bond of Anika-Sahil
    ice-cream scene was funny but adorable
    Anika’s insecurities are highlighted in The best way possible
    loved Shivaay as always
    hope u update soon
    luved it and luv u
    take care

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Aashi Di !
      Thank you so much. I am glad that you found the update awesome. Ice cream yeah, I mean as I am titled as the cute writer, I love to write scenes that are not romantic but cute. Hope you liked it too. Yeah, Shivaay is the adorable one??
      Yes, I will try updating soon. Love you too.
      Take care❤

  4. Mrunal1

    Ommmggghhg it’s toooo awesome yaaar loved it to the core

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Mrunal, thank you so much. I am happy that you loved it and also delighted to find a new reader?

  5. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome and sweet one dear.. Love you dear

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Nikita di. Love you too !❤

  6. Alekhika20

    Superb update

    1. Jerry_36

      Dearest Alekhika ! Thank you loads??

  7. Lovely Updates!!!
    What a pleasant surprise~2 chappies ?
    Anika’s way of making Shivaay happy was too cute…They r so adorable ?
    Sahil & Anika’s convo was emotional…
    Shivaay is so in love with her, hope so Anika too realises her feelings soon ?
    Waiting fr d nxt ?
    Lots of Love ❤

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Shivika !
      Thank you so much dear. I am glad that you liked the surprise. Yeah, I wanted to justify the term ‘Cute’ and hence used it. Yeah, it was kind of.
      Your wish will be granted way too soon dearie?
      Will try posting soonish. Love ya❤

  8. Navz

    Nyc episodes dear..gud to see u back after soo long tym.

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Navz. I am so glad that you remember me !! Love ya?

  9. Dhar

    Hey Jerry…. A khidki todh episode… Plzz do post the next update ASAP…… U were like gaayab.. U nailed yaar… Loved it

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Dhar !
      Thank you so much. I am glad that you liked it. Yes, I will try posting sooner. Thanks again sweetie?

  10. Fenil

    Hey Jelly Sissy.
    I must say it was khidkitod chappy.
    The way Sahil kept his childish conditions before His Anika Dii….Anika told about Proposal to Sahil just love their sibling bond.
    Anika did cute act for smile on Shivaay’s face so cute
    Prinku-Kamini-Ranveer-ShivOmRu moment was beautiful.
    I thought same end of this chappy like JTHJ….Shivaay decided to leave Anika so sweet.his care just simply awesome.

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Fenil Bhaiya !
      Thank you so much. I am so happy that you found this chapter Khidkitod !??
      Yeah, all the points that you named I am delighted to know that you are a keen reader. By the what’s JTHJ ???
      Happy Independence Day !
      Take care❤

  11. Ashwinee

    Heyoo Jerry , as usual mera mooh bandh karaadiya ??. Love you loads and take care

    1. Jerry_36

      Hello Ashwinee Di !
      Thank you so much. I am happy that I was able to do that??
      Love you too❤

  12. Shivika4eva

    Good one jerry… Can’t believe it’s going to end…. Waiting for your update

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Dear ! Yeah, its going to end. Thank you tons. I will try updating soonish?

  13. today’s updates are awesome …….
    Oh sorry ,I forgot to introduce myself ….
    I am a silent reader of your updates …
    I loved what all you write…
    keep writing

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Shivanya !
      Thank you so much for commenting. I am really happy that you love my writings and glad to discover a new reader. Stay tuned for the last chappy. Will try posting soonish❤

  14. Heyaa Jerry !
    The chapter was such a lovely one….
    Super duper khidkitod ??…
    Annika’s ice-cream scene was so cute….
    Shivaay getting worried for Annika…
    But why is he leaving her?…

    This was such a lovely episode…
    But the next chappy will be the last one…??…

    I will be really sad that my favorite ff will get end…

    But I am gonna wait for the next chapter,the epic one….
    Post soon dear…
    Love you loads ..
    ❤?..

    1. Jerry_36

      Heyoo Sophia !
      Thank you so much. I am happy that you liked this chapter. He is leaving her as he blames himself for her condition, for her getting unwell, thus to make her feel safe and secure he kept a stone on his heart and took that decision.
      Yes, the next one will be the last, that’s sweet of you. I have a TS in my mind, will try updating that too, don’t think I will leave your picchha itni jaldi !??
      Will try posting soon. Love you too❤

  15. Fati

    Heyoo Jerry, How are you?
    What about ypur examination?
    Awwww, the chapters.. Fall for it? A wonderful writer u are, indeed. Shivaay always care for Anika, and once again he did care for her? I loved how Sahil made her realize that he cares for her. Is it going to end? Seriously? How many chapters left? Another shock for me? Okay promise u’ll comeback with a great ff again.
    Jerry, you are amazing
    Love u loads❤

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Fati !
      Thank you so much dear. I am fine, my examinations were too.
      I am so glad that you liked the surprise. Yeah, Shivaay cares for her always, Anika just don’t want to accept the fact that she is in love with him?
      Yeah, it is going to end. Only 1 more chaprer is left. Thanks again. Love ya❤

  16. Jerry it’s Amazingggg dr…. Just luv it…

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Banita ! Love you?

  17. Jerry dear, due to lack of time i can’t comment on this ff.but trust me whole ff is sooo cute and your propose wala idea was cutest part….

    Keep writting like this and yaa i wil be not able to comment but i will be a silent reader. …ok.have a great day .

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Arpita !
      Missed you so much, how are you ? Chal, its okay. Don’t mind. I am happy that you loved it.
      Yeah, will definitely. Its okay, but the next one is the last one. If you have time then please do leave your precious feedback.
      Love ya❤

  18. Love epi……it was awesome drrr…..

    Double epi made my day drrrrr……

    Waiting for next ……

    Love u drrr…….

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Sumitha Di !
      Thank you so much. I am happy that you loved it. Will try posting soon. Love you too❤

  19. Fffan1234

    That was superb khidkitod double update. I absolutely loved it. Looking forward to next part.

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Dear. I am really delighted that you loved it. Will try posting soon?

  20. Niriha

    Awesome…loved it.anika and sahil scene was ?? I hope anika will accept shivay proposal and confess her feelings towards shivay soon waiting for next part …Take care

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Niriha. I am gald that you liked the brother sister bond. Yeah, your wish will be granted soon?
      Will try to post soon❤

  21. Anagha

    Hey Jerry ❣
    Came up with a double dhamaka !!.. enjoyed it completely. The ice cream Wala scene was cute , nd billuji was indeed a good doctor.
    Sahil … Mature talks which doesn’t reflect his age .
    How are you btw chotu sis ?.. all good ?… Take care !
    Love ya ❤

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Anagha !
      Thank you so much. Yeah, just thought to give a the readers a surprise. Glad that you loved it.
      I am fine, what about you ??
      Love you too❤

  22. Aryaraju

    Superb.. Loved it

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you tons Arya !?

  23. Pui

    Excellent Jerry ! I never understand how to depict emotions like you do with such ease… Loved the update along with the writer…??

    1. Jerry_36

      Thank you so much Pui. That sweet of you to say such kind words. Love ya❤

  24. Hello jerry……. guess u might not remember me… i used to comment on ur ff sometime ago but missed a gew epis…. now i read it again n i really loved it…..anika n sahil convo was beautiful….loved the shivika scenes esp the caring shivaay……..waiting eagerly for next….

    1. Jerry_36

      Heyoo Anu !
      No dear I definitely remember you. Its okay, I am glad that you decided to comment on this one. Thank you so much. Really happy that you loved it. Will post today only. Love you❤

  25. Madhuani

    Double dhamaka!!!Yayy???
    Aww…both the parts were awesome.
    Sahil comforting n explaining anika too good.
    Obros feeling emotional for their sis ?
    Prinku using her bhabhi’s words was great?
    Anika having fever? but shivaay is really superb.
    He was their by her side throughout the night that’s called love.
    Pleasure reading double dhamaka.
    Tba for pm.
    Love you??

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Madhu !
      Thank you so much. I am happy that you loved both the chapters. Yeah, Obros were emotional. Yeah, I just wanted to depict love in this manner, personally its my favourite type of affection that one should get, and be lucky. Love you too❤

  26. Gayathri.visu

    OMG!! Double surprise….I liked it Vedu.

    Awwwwww!! Obros n Prinku’s senti moments…..really wonderful n heart touching dear! Too good. And ice cream scene again u proved, u r indeed cute writer Vedu…..sooooooooooo cute!!

    In first part, u explained Obros n Prinku bonding. And second part Anika n Sahil……wow yaar!! Amazing….Sahil’s advice n Anika confused feelings! Shivaay’s caring for Anika…….excellent dear. No words for our Shivika…!
    Hey Vedu….how r u dear?? Hope u r fine..

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Gayathri Di !
      Thank you so much. I am glad that you liked the double dhamaka. Thanks again for mentioning me as a cute writer, I love being called the same??
      Yeah, both the chapters had their own significance. Shivika rocks, haina !! That’s why I love them to the core.
      I am fine di, how’s uh ???

  27. Sairish

    heyyy Jerry di…
    you wrote the chapters marvelously…
    everything was perfect beyond perfection…
    how can you write so very well….it’s what I wonder all the while …
    bechara sahil…”powder scene was amazing ????” i really loved it..
    awwww….annika and shivaay’s cute moments stole my heart while the ice cream wala scene …
    I mean I love each and everything about your ff and this chappy ..
    this was a double treat to me …yippiiieee…
    ……
    so..how are you? I hope you’re fine now?? take care of yourself ..
    have a great day
    TAKE CARE DI
    LOTS OF LOVE
    SAIRISH
    ❤❤????

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Sairish !
      Thank you so much. I am gald that you loved the way I wrote my chapters. Awww, that’s sweet of you??
      Powder scene !! Yeah, it was kinda hilarious and Shivika, they are the whole haan of this chapter. I am so happy that you found them adorable.

      I am fine dear, how’s uh ?? Love you too❤

  28. It is awesome and sweet one dear.. Superb.. Loved it.. I hope anika will accept shivay proposal and confess her feelings towards shivay soon waiting for next part …Take care

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Sweety !
      Thank you so much. I am glad to find a new reader, thanks a lot for your comment. Yeah, your wish will be fulfilled. Will post soon ?

  29. Zaveesha

    Hi Vedika…. Woww double dhamaka… I have not checked TU from two days nd when I saw the surprise I was very happy…

    The episode was just adorable… very very nice…the love nd care which Shivaay show for Anika is damn cute… superb…

    Take care..
    Best wishes

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Zaveesha !
      Thank you so much. I am gald that you liked the surprise. So happy, that you loved Shivika here. The next one is being uploaded. Love you loads❤

  30. Nila

    Wow surprise thank u vedu???
    How r u now?
    Shivaay cares for annika & decide to leave Annika aww lovely thought?quite surprising too
    Prinku&brothers convo?????
    Tc & back soon
    Love u vedu??
    Waiting for the climax

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Nila Di !
      Thank you so much. I am fine now. I am happy that you liked the surprise. How’s uh ?? Yeah, it happened because her beth was his priority. Take care. Love you too. The next one is uploaded❤

  31. Awwwwssom???
    Superb. Loved it jerry

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Shruti !
      Thank you so much. I am happy that you loved it??

  32. Adia23

    Hey Jerry,Was waiting forever but it was indeed worth the wait!.I absolutely love Shivika’s Ice cream romance and Sahil gosh has is surely smart his thoughts the powder scene was so cute makes me wanna squeeze his cute face!.Please upload the next episode Fast eagerly waiting!

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Asia !
      And I was Waiting for your comment. Thank you so much. I am glad that you liked it. I am happy that you loved theirs moments. Awww, sweetie???
      The next one is uploaded, let’s see when it is uploaded. Love you❤

  33. Zainab

    Khidkitod! Dhamaakedaar! Dhinchak! Ek dum bhaukaali chapter!. I was waiting for this and sorry for commenting sooooooo late?. You know I really wanted to have such a chapter where Shivaay is taking care of Annika. Fingers crossed that this would be Annika’s drama like she would have kept an onion under her arms and have got high fever? (serial logic… I saw this somewhere???). Now Annika will come to know about Shivaay’s true love for her and will propose him in an AWWWW MANNER?. (Waiting!!⌚)

    How can I forget aur Bahubali Annika?! She held Shivaay in her arms? Oh yeah!!?. Post the next soon and dont forget RuMya and OmRi! Annnddd!! GET WELL SOON!!?

    Bye!⛄
    Zainab!

    1. Jerry_36

      Hey Zainab !
      Thank you so much. I was missing your comments yaar. All the four words remind me of my town, love you yaar, for all these things??
      Its okay. I also wanted to write a scene where this would happen. The next part is uploaded, check it yourself??
      Yeah, this wish will be checked. I have updated it. Hmm, utha Kiya tha Anika ne. Sorry, yaar they are not there. Really sorry. Now, I am good.
      Love you❤

  34. Tanz

    So so so so sorry Jerry ? I’m terribly late… believe me I had read it the very day you sent me the link but I couldn’t comment then due to my busy schedule (due to my physics u.t. that after so much of efforts also didn’t go well… leave it)….but I’m here now ?
    Ok the surprise was wonderful….and I loved it! Giving two episodes together..clever haa….and I toh totally enjoyed it….
    The first episode was amazing….. Annika did succeed in bringing Shivaay out of that gloomy mode….but at what cost!!! Buddhu…. Pehle Shivaay ne itni saari ice-creams kha ki thi ki woh acchu-acchu karta hua ghum Raha tha….but Annika madam toh seedhe bistar par hi pad gayi??but we again get to see the caring side of SSO….which I totally adore?
    At first, I thought Annika’s reason to reject the proposal was quite silly…. I mean the taking care thing is not such a big deal but then as I thought about it… I realised it wasn’t silly . Annika is a girl who has always loved others,but never been loved(except Saahil)…. she’s the one who has always taken care of others but never been cared for….. It’s instinctive for her to think about the level of ‘care’ she would get out of this relationship…So I agree with her insecurities….
    It was very well written Jerry and second episode was quite emotional…. loved it….
    So…. I know I’m late and this going to happen in the coming month too coz half-yearlys are approaching…. Don’t get sad Ok(?) but do miss me as I’ll miss you too (if I’m late)….and… I’ve decided to make a change in my comment from next time onwards…. you’ll know….
    Till then, take care and study well
    Love you ❤

    1. Jerry_36

      Tanz, at this moment I am jumping. This is the longest comment I have ever got. For this comment, main kisi ko bhi maaf kar soon. Thank you tons Tanz, love you so so so much.

      Its okay yaar, itne acche comment ke bad no sorry. What happened, did you not like it ?? I am glad that you liked my idea of posting two chapters.

      Hmm, Anika was successful. Truly said if the matter is concerned about Shivaay, no matter what she will do anything. An Shivaay is also the same na, for his love realisation he ate many ice creams. Both are mad and perfect for each other.

      Yeah, you are absolutely correct, it is funny and unreasonable. I wanted someone to ask this question. Actually she had realised that she loves Shivaay but she didn’t wanted to accept it as she never thought that someone can love her so much. So she was trying to give herself reasons so she can hate him and thus her stupid mind gave this. I know this is a little illogical but main hoon hi esi. Sorry.

      Its okay. All the best for your future. I will surely miss you dost. What change ?? Take care. Love you too. Thanks again for this humongous comment, loved it❤

      1. Tanz

        It all came from my heart❤ Even I realised the length of the comment after I had posted it….and I said na you’ll know the change…wait for it sometime… although it’s not such a big change….

      2. Jerry_36

        Well, the next part has been posted. Love ya❤

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