My better half( swasan ff)episode 32 by Marsuu

Hello guys!!! I m extremely sorry for being late. Thanks for your patience.
Let’s begin:

My better half(swasan ff)
Epi 32:
Recap: Flashback: swasan clear all misunderstandings.
Present: Swara hiding something from Sanskar.

FLASHBACK:
When We Become Soulmates:

Maheshwari House(morning)
Swasan Room:
Sanskar opened his eyes feeling something soft near him.Then he saw his wife cum life lying on his chest. He looked around to see their decorated room yes yesterday they got married yesterday and become one in all sense. A beautiful smile was not ready to leave Sanskar’s lips which shows his satisfaction that he got everything in the form of Swara. He got lost in the thoughts that after promising at the lake to trust each other always is still strongly persistent. Their bond become stronger and stronger after that day. They completed their graduation and during this time sujata and shomi got to know about swasan relation but they were happy for their children. When swasan completed their graduation sanskar joined maheshwari’s company and took all the responsibilities of the business. Swara got offer for playback singing for one song and sanskar don’t want her to leave this opportunity so he went with her to Mumbai and settle her there. Their marriage was fixed when Swara came back for two months. Shomi and rajesh were happy that swara’s family is supporting her in her career.
With all the rituals, yesterday they got bounded by very pious relationship.
Sanskar came out of his thoughts when he felt swara moving. Swara slightly opened her eyes but again closed when bright light strike her eyes.
She nuzzles her face in sanskar’s chest hugging him tightly.
Sanskar: good morning swara
Swara look at him blinking her eyes.
Swara: morning
Sanskar: so how are feeling after becoming Mrs Maheshwari.
Swara: how many times u will ask this?
Sanskar: I will ask everyday.
Swara: but my answer will be same that I m loving it.
Sanskar peck her lips.
Then only there was knock at the door.
Sanskar: let me see.
Swara: hmm
Sanskar went to open the door and Swara went to washroom.
Sujata is standing at the door.
Sanskar: yes mom
Sujata: where is swara??
Sanskar: in washroom. Why?
Sujata: give her this saree to wear for today.
Sanskar : okay
Sanskar close the door as sujata left.

Later, swara is standing in front of the mirror wearing red saree. Sanskar is sitting on the couch and staring her.
She is wearing all accessories one by one. Feeling sanskar’s gaze she said
Swara: stop staring Sanskar
Sanskar: who is staring? I m admiring my beauty.
Swara smiles shyly making Sanskar chuckles.
After one month swara went to Mumbai and then she used to come after months whenever she gets time.

Flashback Ends
(So after this from where story was started. Sorry if you felt I completed flashback abruptly then i m sorry but I really i don’t wanted to drag it)

Present:
Sanskar close the diary and look at swara.
Sanskar: after writing it all the memories of our college time came in my mind.
Swara: hmm
She smiles but her smile didn’t reached her eyes. She is tensed due to that laksh.
Swara: sanskar I want to talk to you.
Sanskar; and why are you asking permission??
Swara’s heart was beating very fast as she is scared of sanskar’s reaction.
Swara: I m sorry Sanskar.
Sanskar:why?
Swara(looking down): bcoz I hided something from you.
Sanskar: what??
Swara: firstly promise that you will not get angry.
Sanskar look at her with narrow eyes and said
Sanskar: that I will decide after listening.
Swara: wo when I was in Mumbai their one boy was there he used to tease me and pass stupid comments…
Sanskar: and you are telling me now.
Swara could feel that sanskar was getting angry.
Swara: at that time I didn’t wanted to give you tension so I didn’t said but then I stopped visiting that studio where he was working so I ignored it .
Sanskar(chuckles sadly): and I was stupid to think that we don’t have any secrets.
Swara(teary eyes): plzz don’t say like this.
Sanskar: and why you told me today also??
Swara: I don’t want to hide anything from you.
Sanskar: who is the boy??
Swara: let it be it doesn’t matter now.
Sanskar(gritted his teeth): I m asking who is that boy swara??
Swara(scared): you will not do anything.
Sanskar: u are going to tell me or I should find myself.
Swara: laksh
Sanskar: I was already having doubt on him the way he was looking at you.
He went from the room.
Swara: sanskar where are you going.
Sanskar didn’t answer and directly went to laksh’s room.

Hall:
Ramta and Bua is sitting in the hall. Swara was going after Sanskar when sujata called her.
Sujata: swara where sanskar is going.
Swara came near and said
Swara: don’t know he is little angry.
Then only all got shocked seeing Sanskar holding laksh’s collar and he brought him in front of swara.
Bua: what is this???
Sanskar ignored her and said to laksh
Sanskar: ask sorry from swara.
Laksh: what I did?
Sanskar: what rubbish you were saying to her in kitchen.
Swara was also shocked that how Sanskar know.
Laksh: I didn’t said anything.
Sanskar punch him as he was not ready to accept.
Swara: sanskar leave plzz
Sanskar was again going to punch him when laksh accepted
Laksh: okay I m sorry I will never do that again and I will treat you as my sister swara.
Sujata: what is happening here??
Sanskar: he misbehaved with Swara so was showing him his right place.
Sujata: what???
Sanskar: you(laksh) pack your bags and get lost from my house.
Ram: sanskar it’s late night now he will leave tomorrow and I didn’t expected this thing from him parvati.
Bua looked down.
Sanskar left to his room angrily.
Swara went after him but she was really scared to see his anger bcoz whenever he gets angry its dangerous.

Swasan room:
Swara is tensely waiting in the room as sanskar is in washroom. Sahas and sanvi are sleeping.
Sanskar came out and swara ran to him.
Swara: sanskar
Sanskar didn’t answered and was about to move to bed but swara held his hand
Swara: sanskar plz listen
Sanskar: tell me what else you have hided from me??
Swara: I didn’t hided anything else and will never do promise.
Sanskar: whatever it is but I m hurt that u didn’t shared with me.
Swara(crying): i m sorry.
Sanskar: its okay.
He said normally and went to his side of bed and lie beside sanvi.
Swara keep staring him as she know he didn’t forgive her and he is really hurt.
She signed sadly wiping her tears and went to bed thinking that she will convince him tomorrow.
To be continued…..

Precap: leap

Very sorry for this short and boring part. But I was not having time so I wrote this in half hour. Plzz bear it next one will give better one.
And From next part it will be focused on swasan and babies.
Thank you

65 Comments
  1. Awesome…… update next one soon……

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear will post soon tc???

  2. awesome dear marsuu why again leap? r u going to start that promo wala scene kya.. dont seperate my swasan dear

    1. Mars

      Noppp swasan will not separate actually I m taking leap to show little grown up sanvi and sahas Thank you so much dear tc???

  3. Super awesome ??

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc???

  4. Neptune

    Awe poor swara but sanskaar too is right at his place… I really want to see some SWASAN emotional scenes please give some of them..

    Lovely part overall .. do post soon diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much nepuu will give swasan emotional scenes in next part and will post soon tc???

  5. NDSG

    ???????? yeh Lux soap bhi na… Iski wajeh se SwaSan k bech ladai ho gai…
    ?????????? hate him… Mere tarf se bhi do char laga dio isey

    Mr Maheshwari is angry today???? aww he must be looking cute???????? SWARA go pull his cheeks and kiss him. His heart will melt so easily????????? he loves u lot… Baby was sleeping else they will also get to know the angry face of their. Pops???????????

    1. Mars

      Yuppp aajj Sanskar angry young man ke mood mai tha???? swara has to pacify him and khoi nahi babies will also see their pops angry abhi gussa kam thoda huya?????
      Thank you so much depuu dear tc??????

    2. NDSG

      Pops ???? I loving this word

    3. Mars

      Same pinch depuuu me too love it??

  6. Rachna

    Awsm Dr…. Update soon next part

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear will post soon tc???

  7. Samaira_khan

    It’s just fabulous yaar loved it really amazing the way u expresses swasan was also.. Laksh huhh hate him.. Post son love u tc..

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear will post soon love you tc????

  8. Sweeta

    Excellent nd wonderful episode

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc???

  9. Bush1122

    Sanskar did a very good thing….
    Just loved ur update….
    Are they going 2 separate after the leap???
    Plz dont seperate them… plzzz…..
    Plz show some emotional and caring scenes betweem Swasan…
    Plzzz

    1. Mars

      Nooo leap is not to separate swasan but to show grown up babies. Will give emotional scenes between swasan Thank you so much dear tc?????

  10. Independent

    Happy that laksh didn’t make any misunderstanding nice one dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dii tc???

  11. Awesome…

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc???

  12. Awesome epi….

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc???

  13. Loved it… N ya sorry for commenting in small words.. Actually I was angry on u… ???
    So sorry …actually the reason is that.. U were taking time n then was updating the stories which u don’t write. ..so I thought u r neglecting ur FFS… Isliye sorry….
    This was awesome.. Sanskar is right at his place…
    Waiting for the grown up babies. ..update soon ❤❤❤❤

    1. Mars

      ???????? you were angry and i didn’t got to know u should have told me how could I guess from small comments????.
      Actually I m not neglecting my stories I know which story I posted when and has to continue but the problem is I m not able to manage time now a days???? But I will try to give frequent updates and u don’t get angry okay???? and no need of sorry???
      Thank you so much dear will post soon????
      Take care????

  14. Abirsha

    Awesome mars!!! What happened to that sanskar’s obsessed lover??? U didn’t show how they got rid of her in past

    1. Mars

      Yeah I didn’t show sandy but forgot to write that swasan ignored her sorry for the mistake will try to cover in coming updates. Thank you so much dii???

  15. Prashasti7

    thnkx god there will b no more laksh drama but sanskar is hurt ?? lets c how swara z goin to pacify him n yaa plz focus on swasan n babies

    1. Mars

      Yupppp from next part I will focus on swasan and babies???
      Thank you so much dear tc????

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc???

  16. Awesome marsu thanks for update.hey marsu did she agree to continue her ff by u. Sorry if I am demanding u more .

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear and its okay but I didn’t received any message from her till now whenever I will get I will inform you tc?????

  17. Hai sis I am asha I think you remember me how are you . I think every couple should talk with each other to clear misunderstanding and after a long time reading my swasan ff i am very very happy and episode was nice. Mars sis I have a request will you do it for me please (I am asking you with baby bear eyes)???

    1. Mars

      Hey dear and yuppp I remember you well thank you so much dear and u can ask what you want to????I will try to do it.
      Take care?????

  18. AbrahamEzra

    Seriously what this lakshs problem yaar. Such a pervert.
    Poor swara. And sanskar is really hurt. Hope their problems will solve quickly.

    1. Mars

      Yeah they will solve their problems soon don’t worry???? thank you so much dear tc???

  19. ahhaaaahaaa…. trailer part nahi cahiye….. swasan ka separation…. can’t digest it…..

    1. Mars

      There is no swasan separation don’t worry thank you so much dear tc???

  20. Tamil

    Amazing dear….

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc???

  21. Vyshu10

    Awesome..loved d ep. U wrote in half an hour ??

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear yupp I wrote this epi very fastly that’s why so many mistakes???? take care?????

  22. Neha_01

    nice dear,,waiting for a bigger update

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear next one will give big one??? tc??

  23. Soujanya

    Awesome…

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc???

  24. Superb loved it

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc???

  25. Too good dear….. Loved it so much.waiting for next part post soon.

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear will post soon tc???

  26. AnuAnn

    loved it

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much anuu dear????

  27. superb part.. whenever u wrote it always good.

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you so much dear tc????

  28. Super dearr

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc???

  29. Really sorrryyyyy for late comment.. ???.. just read the story.. Loveddddd the update.. The flashback of Swasan finally getting married to each other was soooo much fun.. Their marriage happened and they were happy with each other.. ???.. In the present m happy that Swara told Sanskaar everything and Sanskaar taught that annoying Laksh a lesson.. ????.. But Swasan fought with each other.. ???.. Sanskaar is so hurt and ??.. Hope he is fine in the next update.. ???.. Loving the story so much.. Pleaseee don’t separate them.. ????.. the entire update was as usual amazing and super fun.. ???.. Just brilliant.. ??

    1. Mars

      No need of sorry yrrr??? thank you so much dear and swasan won’t separate don’t worry???take care???????

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