Avniel love for life (Episode 5)

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Niel : (whispers to avni ) i tought its your b’day n u will recieve gift but i got a lottery ??

Avni :(smiles) wat lottery ??

Niel : youre tubelight eat some dryfruits to sharpen your brains

Avni still wonders why did niel say lottery ?

Ali comes after washing his face on fathima ‘s request

Bebe : oye did you like d gift ?

LAvni : yes bebe its nice

Neil and neela smile

Everyone are sitting n having i’c

Shweta : tillu take some tips from your papa he is v.romantic and blushes

Prakash : oye oye im not soo romantic !!

Bebe : its in khannah jeans actually !! Even your dadaji and even my sunny so as generation moves on .. so i cant imagine my grandson …

Avni whispers to niel : dont think im less im ayesha haider and ashish mehta ‘s daughter so .. its out imagination …

Niel smiles

Ali ‘s pov
I wont let u enjoy your honey moon !

Shekar : i dont think niel needs any tips anyone who has such a beautiful wife will automatically get awesome romantic just like a hollywood movie

Nira pulls shekar’s ears : as if im not beautifull

Everyone laugh

Shweta : none can compete ananya n tillu

Prakash : we our theyre compettitors ..

Everyone laugh

Neela : acha its getting late

Avni : sit na ma .

Neela : no beta its getting late

They hug n leave

Precap : ali plans evil .. will avni cancell d plan ??

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And sorry for short update !

Spoiler alert : after chap 15 d story will not match d present storyline of naamkarann
Please do comment it matters a lot .. 5 comments is less for me !!

  1. Ahk26barbie

    Its intresting.Thank you for welcoming me.I’ll read daily.Keep writing.

  2. Very nice storyline. I loved it. Please update soon.

  3. Very nice storyline. I loved it. Please update soon. Eagerly waiting for it.

  4. The episode is nyc …..but plzzz keep it some what lengthy & story line is awesome ….waiting for their honeymoon trip & romance plzzz upload it very soon….

  5. Nice story line but pliz make it bit lengthy….
    Waiting for honeymoon track….

  6. It’s amazing dear I never missed it ff. And I always try to comment and sometimes I’m not able to comment.

    Waiting for another chapter

  7. Zaina

    Really nice year. keep writing.

  8. Sweetgirl7

    Dear it is awesome but please write lengthy ones

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