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Home»Fan Fiction»“2gethr 4evr–Cocktail of Lov nd Destiny” CHAPTER 24
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“2gethr 4evr–Cocktail of Lov nd Destiny” CHAPTER 24

SidhantBy SidhantJune 8, 201811 Comments7 Mins Read
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MAHI POV

I was standing there watching them..run around & giggle in true happiness..May be this is what Love is..It can make u forget all ur pain when u r with that special person..Everything else loses its importance & that moment becomes all u can think of..No actually u cant think..all u do then is just listening to ur heart & going with the flow of ur feelings..drowning in the depths of it & enjoying !!

Suddenly Twinki came running & said “Mahi tu bol He should Sing na ??” & she winked making a desperate expression of convincing..PLEASEEE 😛 I Simply smiled & nodded 🙂

“Aree abhi to gaya tha !!” He spoke after my nod

“To…to..ummm Mahi ne nahi suna tha..& by the way now I m ur girlfriend..I need at least a Song Dedication” Lovy gave silly reasons to persuade Kunj to sing 😉

“Okay but the case remains the same..U will join me” Kunj raised his eyebrows & told his condition..Twinki simply nodded with a 100 watt smile on her cheeks..& we sat in the garden..looking at the night sky & the twinkling stars..

“HUMKO HUMISE CHURA LO..DIL MEIN KAHIN TUM CHHUPA LO..

HUM AKELE KHO NAA JAAYE..DOOR TUMSE HO NAA JAAYE..

PAAS AAO GALE SE LAGAA LO..”*

Singing this Kunj stood up & pulled Twinki by her hands to stand up..Twinki’s eyes widened as he took both of her hands to his shoulder & wrapped both his hands around her waist..I whistled & got a glaring look from Twinki while Kunj gave me a wink 😛

“YEH DIL DHADKA DO..ZULFEN BIKHRAA DO..

SHARMAAKE APNA..AANCHAL LEHRAA DO..”

Kunj sang again pulling Twinki a little more closer looking in her eyes..Aww the moment was getting so romantic & it seemed like I am the odd one out there spoiling it all..

“HUM ZULFEN TO BIKHRAA DE..DIN MEIN RAAT NA HO JAAYE..

HUM AANCHAL TO LEHRAA DE..PAR BARSAAT NA HO JAAYE..”

Twinki sang with her cheeks totally red..I was waiting for Kunj to continue but what he spoke next brought a Laughter Attack to all of us..

“Oye gadbad ja raha yarr !! Yahan to already Raat hai & is Dress mein to Aanchal bhi nahi”

Twinki narrowed her eyes..spanked Kunj at his cheek & loosened herself from his grasp..

“BABY I heard Proposal k baad the guy is rewarded with a Kiss & logically I deserve Two for proposing u twice..but yaar tu to thappad maar rahi” Kunj spoke

Twinki was walking towards me & I was finding it hard to control my laughter..She turned & gave Kunj a glaring look & spoke “U deserve this only..aur jyada mann ho to Ek aur Laga du” She winked at me & we all laughed 😀

“Chal Flying kiss hi de de” Kunj again demanded

“Sandal chahiye meri ??”Twinki spoke

“ <3 TERE HUSN SE HASEEN..CHAND BHI SHARMA GAYA HAI..

DEKH LE KAISE BAADLO MEIN WO JA CHUPA HAI ♥” Kunj spoke a Shayari

“Dude that was Fab !! U have this talent too !!?” I was amazed..He bowed down a little & gestured his thanks & Twinki stood there flushing red..

“Do we really need to go ?? I m loving this place..” Twinki spoke

“ <3 TERE LABO KI MUSKURAHAT TERE DIL KA HAAL BAYAAN KARTI HAI..

TERE HUSN KI RAUNAK K AAGE..IS SAMAAA KI KYA AUKAAT <3 “ Kunj again presented his talent in front of me..& to be true the only thing going on in my mind was the moment & the happiness in the surrounding..That was the correct moment to say that LOVE WAS REALLY IN THE AIR <3 <3

Kunj & Twinkle made a Perfect couple complimenting each other..understanding each other & lost in love along with having fun ^_^ & I was lost in thoughts of Yuvi..I had no idea what he would be thinking of me after my slap..& those words which I said which I don’t even remember now..but I am glad that I did that..It was the reason which made me know the real Yuvi..I had a Crush on Yuvi..I don’t deny that but with time the feeling was growing stronger..I was totally falling for him with every second I spent with him..& Watching these two dance & laugh here together..some where in my Heart I wished..I desperately wished to be with Yuvi that time..I wanted to make him believe that Love still exists..Its not extinct & there really are people who will stay faithful life long..

I imagined the stuffs that I will have to explain Yuvi..My family & my life..& also make him trust on Love..when suddenly Twinki spoke “Oye tune Yuvi ko thappad maara ??”

I nodded..”Keval maara nahi..She gave a big speech to him about what kind of guys girls like” Kunj spoke & then both of them started teasing me..

“Okay now lets go home..” I said “Its getting late”

“Yuvi se milne ki itni jaldi..haaan beta samajh raha hun mai” Kunj spoke & gave a high five to Twinki

“Nahi..Aisa nahi hai JIJU..” I also joined in the fun

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YUVI POV

As Mahi opened the door..she was amazed to see all the lights of the room switched off..

I played the song on my mobile

“GUSTAKHI MAAF KARDE..ABB TO INSAAF KARDE !!

APNA DIL SAAF KARDE..KEHNA TO MAAN LE !!

JAANE BHI DE BHI HUA..JAANE BHI DE..

GUSSA TERA JHOOTHA…JHOOTHI MOOTHI BERUKHI HAI !!

JAANU MAIN TO JAANU..TERI NAA MEIN HAAN CHHUPI HAI !!

AYE SANAAM NA KAR SITAM..TUJHKO KHUDA KA VASTA !!

HEY..

GUSTAKHI MAAF KARDE..ABB TO INSAAF KARDE !!

APNA DIL SAAF KARDE..KEHNA TO MAAN LE !!

JAANE BHI DE BHI HUA..JAANE BHI DE..”**

“YUVIIII !!” Mahi shouted “Come out where-ever u are..I m not angry..in fact I m sorry dear for that slap” & she started moving her hands right & left in the darkness to find the switch..

I immediately lighted the candle on the table..There were two glasses kept with straws 😛 & I tried yes I tried making a Cake with the Breads & Chocolate Jelly kept in the Freeze..Also I decorated with the Marigold flowers petals which I plucked off the flower pot in her balcony..

She stood there with her eyes wide open..& staring at the scene in front of her..& then I started singing

“BAATEIN KUCH ANKAAHE SI..KUCH ANSUNI SI HONE LAGI..

KABU DIL PE RAHA NA..HASTI HUMARI KHONE LAGI..

WOOOH WOOOH WOOO WOO WOOH

SHAAYAD YEHI HAI PYAAR..

KEH DE MUJHSE DIL MEIN KYA HAI…AISA BHI KYA GUROOR

TUJHKO BHI TO HO RAHA HAI…THODA ASAR ZAROOR

HO YEH KHAAMOSHI JEENE NA DE

KOI TO BAAT HO.. ***

MAHI WILL U BE MY GIRLFRIEND ??”

She nodded her head & ran to hug me..

“I wanted to tell u something” she said while hugging me” I also don’t have any parents like u..& I wont ever leave u..& the most important one U SING REALLY BAD but that was really cute what u did for me..”

EVERYTHING WAS PERFECT NOW 🙂 <3 🙂

TWINJ came in the room & congratulated us..while me & Mahi stood there smiling 🙂

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HOW WAS THE CHAPTER GUYS ?? 🙂

Reviews please 🙂 & I am busy these days but I really love u all for showing so much love to this story ^_^

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* HUMKO HUMI SE CHURA LO-MOHABBATEIN

** JANE BHI DE-HEYY BABY

*** BAATEIN KUCH ANKAHI SI-LIFE IN A METRO

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11 Comments

  1. Cindy on June 9, 2018 12:14 am

    Incredible
    Twinj ???
    Twinj teasing mahi??
    Twinkle blushing☺☺??
    Twinkle’s slap to kunj??
    Yuvi’s surprise was so cute ??
    Yuhi’s hug?
    Super excited for next
    Post soon dear
    Love u loads❤❤
    Stay blessed??

  2. yashika on June 9, 2018 10:51 am

    firstly, u r awesome & ur shayaries r mindblowing…luv them so so…….much….
    really it was an amazing epi…specially song wala part ..then kunj ka kiss mangna & twinkle ka neglect krna …& then uv ka proposal it was perfect…
    luved it .plz post soon
    r u a boy or a girl ?

    • Sidhant on June 9, 2018 11:42 am

      Boy

    • yashika on June 9, 2018 4:20 pm

      ohhk….ur shayaries r seriously awesome ??? luving it .

  3. SSK on June 9, 2018 3:31 pm

    It was an amazing story, I was so much waiting for the episode and the last part of Mahi and UV was also amazing. Twinkle and Kunj scenes were also really amazing. Plz post real soon. 🙂

  4. Riya on June 9, 2018 5:09 pm

    Awesome epi….superb shayareees

  5. Sia on June 9, 2018 5:57 pm

    Hi sodhant sorry for commenting late I was kinda busy in my study and the episode was really awsm loved keep writing and please post soon take care and always keep twinj up by it awsm ff

  6. Msmahi on June 10, 2018 11:53 am

    Fantastic fabulous episode
    Shayari awesome ????
    Song wala part vry funny “oye gadbad ja raha h yrrr”
    Plzzz post soon

  7. Msmahi on June 10, 2018 11:59 am

    Fantastic fabulous episode
    Shayari awesome ??????
    Song wala part vry funny “oye gadbad ja raha h yrrr”
    Plzzz post soon

  8. Ananya_DSK on June 11, 2018 3:20 pm

    Hello! Remember me? You are doing a great job!! Everything was so happy and bright in this episode… Twinkle and Kunj: extremely cute together!! Mahi missing Yuvi was totally adorable, and the icing on the cake was Yuvi’s proposal!! All in all, this was an episode to remember… Honestly, there was a different kind of positivity about this episode!! Fantastic!! Hoping to see the next episode soon…
    P.s. Sorry for being late

  9. Ramya on June 11, 2018 6:39 pm

    Wowwwthat was awesome
    Love is in air
    And I love your song selection.
    They are just amazing
    And he more importantly that awesome
    How lovely they are.
    Loved it

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