UR Wish, MY Command…. Twinj (part 13_last part)

I m ending it today guys… Agar koi sad hogaye tho sorry… Isliye pls put smile not artificial one but natural okay… And I said that I would start a new ss I ll try nt sure… Aur koi mere contact me rehna chahthe ho tho…
E-mail I’D-
Tamannasirin92 [at] gmail.com

Link for all the parts of this ss-
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=UR+wish+MY+command

Aur another news he… Mai kal tu ke pages surf kar rahi thi aur mujhe patha chala ke its 1 anniversary of tu for me… Matlab it’s been 1 year since I m from tu on 16th nov… I have read first ff of tei and it was of maha.. Its name was ‘ fanfiction of twinj’..

Thanksgiving section…

chulbul, priya23, ramya, chico, rashiverma2199, sidmin23, ramya, sidmin, sweta, vassu di, monica, purnima.agarwal30, sohi, franciee, adya, aanya_pandey, sushmitha and thanks to all silent readers also…

Hope I have not missed anyone…
Plz readers plz do comment… Aaj ending part hai aur I want to see hw many of I have read my ff… Plz plz… If I have entertained u then plz do comment…

Link for my previous epi-
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ur-wish-command-twinj-part-12/

Recap- yuvi and kunj fighting- uv got arrested- kunj leaves twinkle…

Disclaimer: no proof reading… Plz ignore mistake…

Lets begin…

@ Railway station…

Kunj is seated in his seat in train and was looking outside… He was lost in his thoughts…

Kunj’s POV

I don’t know why I m leaving… I don’t want to leave twinkle again… But she was the one who asked me to leave… Why only me… Why I m always left alone?? Now I don’t want any. More heart break and pain… I have to leave its a perfect decision… There is no reason to live here… Twinkle doesn’t love me… I don’t want to go… I don’t know how tears started to flow from my eyes.. I was lost in thoughts when I heard “Kunj”… Did someone called me..n I looked out of the window to find no one… The train started its journey and so as my tears… “kunj” Again I heard my name… Nw I m sure it was not my ears ringing but It was someone calling me… I turned to find twinkle running with train… As train was so slow at first she was able to catch up the speed… I was shocked… She came towards my window and said “plz kunj mujhe math chodo akele… I want to be with you… Kunj plz dont leave… Mera iss duniya me aur koi nahi hai…. Kunj plz… I m sorry… Mujhe maaf kardi…” (plz kunj don’t leave me… I want to be with you… I don’t have anyone in this world other than you… Kunj I m sorry plz forgive me…) she continuously repeated this words… I wanted to stop her and hug her right then and there… Ohh…,she stumped on a stone and was left behind… Tears were continuously flowing from my eyes… And thus we were separated forever…

POV ends…
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Twinkle’s POV…

Kunj didn’t stop…. He left me forever… I m left alone… I fell on my knees… Tears were dried up by continues crying… I realized my love for him yesterday… I want him to be with me… I m so much guilty.. I know this is the punishment for me to not believe you kunj… Again tears started flowing again… I looked up to see kunj coming towards me smiling… I know thus was also my imagination… This was occurring with me from yesterday… He have left me and will never come back… I was still lost in my thoughts when I felt someone holding my shoulder… I opened my eyes… First it was blurred to see who it was but nw It is clear… Its him, kunj, my kunj… I m not dreaming… Its him.. He pulled me up by catching my shoulders…his eyes were also filled as well as mine… I looked at him and was lost in him… It was as if I m reading his heart… Every pain, love, guilt, anger was present in ocean like deep orbs… I broke the eyelock And hugged him as tight as I could which showed hw much I need him… I cried my heart out on his chest… I felt safe and secured in his arms… He too hug me back… Then we broke the hug… He cupped my face and captured my lips in a deep kiss… My hands automatically travelled from his chest to his neck and I rubbed back of his hair and pulled him more into me… He sucked my upper lip and I sucked his feather like soft lower lip… We fought for dominance of the tongue and I let him in… It felt like heaven when I felt his warmth inside my mouth… We broke after what felt like an eternity…

POV ENDS..
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Kunjs POV…

It felt heaven when I kissed her… The feel of her soft lips on my rough lips is like heaven… We didn’t wanted to Break the kiss but the need of oxygen made us do so… We looked at each other intensely… No words just our hearts speaking… After letting our hearts speak I begin ” tujhe kya zarurath thi tujhe train ke saath bhaagne ki… Aagar kuch ho jath..”(“what was the need of running behind the train.. If something would have happe…”) she cut me half and said “I love you” thats all what she said and it was enough to make my happiness know no bounds… And In reply I just said ” I Love you too..” by saying this I cupped her face and her on her faced..

Kunj POV ends…

After kunj kissing twinkle on her forehead both joined there forehead and smiled at each other… A CONTENDED SMILE….

*************THE END************

Guys here is the end… No I m not joking yaar… This ss ended here… Hw was it??? The romance yaani kiss hw was it.. Hw was the descreption… I have filled everyone’s wishes regarding this ss… Like

Soo: u were twiraj fan and I made uv a positive role just for u… If ur still reading it plz do comment…

Paavu: u asked ek villain train scene and I added it.. Plz do tell if I did justice to it??

Franciee: U asked me to not make kunj forgive twinkle so easily and I did just as I said…

Priya23: I asked me a romantic scene so here I wrote a kiss scene through I m mad at it..

And all the readers.: I united twinj as u wished because UR WISH IS MY COMMAND…

This was my first ff and I completed it just by ir support… thanks for ur support… I ll try to post epilogue soon but it will be dependent on the comments…

Drop ur comments whether positive or negative… Any confusion do ask me… Plz ignore mistakes..

Love you all…

Byeee…

TAMANNA

46 comments

  1. SarahKhan

    |Registered Member

    Wow Tamanna. This was so freakin amazing. I’ve been a silent reader before I got myself registered here and I read all your ffs too. Please don’t leave! Your writings are such an addiction honestly. Best of luck for whatever you do in future! God bless!

  2. Ramya

    |Registered Member

    Tamanna it was awesome amazing specially train wala scene confession part everything dear qq I hope if der were more episodes bt ha plss come back wid other ff it’s nt request my order got it
    Loved it n love u

  3. Adya

    |Registered Member

    Hey tamanna…well we guys are gonna miss u…
    U played a very vital role in TU family nd listen fulfill ur promise okay !!!!!
    U r really a very gud writer nd keep writing
    Come back soon with a ss nd today’s episode was awesome…..i loved it…it was jst fab….
    Will miss u…all the best dor future..
    Loads of love

  4. Roshini125

    |Registered Member

    Sorry dear I am a silent reader of ur ff, but now I am happy with the ending but wished ito would hv been nice if u continued……I really loved the title itself. It’s a genuine one. And the whole story Its really awesome loved it to the core. ..plz come back soon n happy anniversary rear. . Fr tu….love u tc bye…come back soon haa

  5. Sidhanshi

    Hey tamanna yaar i’ll miss u very much… Loved this ff sooo much… The epi was awesome… Hope u’ll comeback with a blast… Love u… Bye… Take care…

  6. Simiyy

    |Registered Member

    Hey Tamanna
    I really enjoyed your ff.
    Its was sad that you ended it.
    Good luck for the future
    And please come back
    Loads of lov 💕💕💕

  7. Monica

    |Registered Member

    Hey Tamanna,
    This ss was a bliss to read throughout. It was so good that it kept me engrossed in it always. I am sad that this has come to an end but also happy at the same time cause I got a chance to read this beautiful piece of writing! The kiss was described like so well! It was the highlight go today’s part! Anyway, do come back with another ss or ff or os, doesn’t matter! What matters is that don’t quit writing cause I’ll love to read more of your works!

    Take care and come back soon,
    Lovess! xx

  8. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    WOaaah it’s amazing 😍😍😍😍lovely. I always loved ur ss it was amazing 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘sweetest of all.
    Loved it u r an amazing writer
    Love u😘😘

  9. Paavu

    |Registered Member

    Tamu dear kya kahun ek toh yeh tears rukne ka name nahi le rahe hain and second thing is ke tum otni sweet ho na ufilled my widh actually ek villiais one of my fav picture so I asked and u fulfilled ty yrr and ya can I say one thing I knw u dont read my ffs but today I m gonna post 2 fgs out of my 3 ffs and pls read cos in one of dem I ll pay a tribute to u for fulfilling my wish bas tum apne liye padh lena ur tribute and den if u dun want den dun love u urr ready fr rribute

    • ishu… yaar I read ur both the ffs but I don’t get time to comment and its my favorite film too… jab tumne yeh scene pucha I was like… saare din me kahan pe add karun but then when franciee asked me to make kunj angry on twinkle so I got the idea… I m so happy… and plz don’t cry bcz I can’t see tears in my frnds eyes… okay??? btw thanks for the comment

      love you

      • Paavu

        |Registered Member

        Ok acha koi nahi dear bas ek wrd likhdia karo himmat mil jaati hai na ty fr rhinking whole day and srry ki maine aisa scene add karne ke liye kaha aur tumhe pareshan kia and ya apni tribute ke liye tayyar rehna

  10. Priya23

    Ending kardia…….. Maammmaaaaaaaa……may ro rahi hu…..I missed u sooooo much…….koi baat nahi tum bhtttt brillent writer ho or tumne bola tum phir aouge 1new story k saath hay naa chalo maaf kia isliye ha nai to or kya …..huhh……or …..thanks mere dimand pura karne k liye meri janeman…….and the episode was just mind blowing,,,, awesome,,,, beautiful,,,, stunning,,,, marvelous,,,,emotional………luv to the end…….I always luv ur ff very much……and I would luv to read further ur new story’s…….. and plsssss don’t stop writing ……i luv u sooooo much…..or tum cahte the ki hum apne pure dilse comments kare lo kardiya because…. *UR WISH and MY COMMAND*……….

  11. SidMin23

    |Registered Member

    Episode was mind blowing but Iam sad with you because U planning to end up such a nice story of twinj wish you will keep in posting twinj os or also ff if u can. Will miss this ff from today. Romantic yani kiss was cute.

  12. ariya

    Tamanna di…. ending kr di i will miss u i know i never commented on ur ff but m sorry i really read ur all ffs….. but u have to come back

  13. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Aishu tum bahut buri ho…I dint expect u would end it so soon…this is one of my fav SS…I’m very sad that it ended…from the first to the last the episode it was amazing…I enjoyed it thoroughly…plz do come with new ff or OS…

    #XOXO ❤❤😘😘

  14. SIDMIN-Daamini

    |Registered Member

    Tamanna u will be missed a lot… n baby it’s a request that please come back with a new ff.. u just can t leave tu …. n i loved this epi a lot… the emotions were described so beautifully… u r truely a great writers but please don’t leave tu … it’s request ..
    Love you

  15. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Love you yaar When I talked to you I found you to be so cute and sweet and your ss it was awesome I have read each episode of yours and i love your writing please start something new 🙂
    Love you Take care 🙂

    • mili I m blushing yaar… love you too and thanks for always supporting me through the journey… and I have posted an os named uff… this crush… if u have time plz do read

      love you too… tc

  16. Vipul

    |Registered Member

    Hi Tamanna, how r u? this is not fair yar itni jaldi end kar diya…. par chal koi nahi…. lekin jaldi se next ff start kar diyo….

    Well epi was amazing…. fully romantic wala…. too cute…. their kiss was superb…. everything was just perfect… N I’m happy that I’m reading ur ff since u started it…. ya I know I’m not cmnting from 1st epi but what to do yaar that time I was not resisterd n nor I had my own email id infact still I’m using my bro’s id so pls yar forgive me for not cmnting before….pls…

    N sorry for late but kya karun yar main majboor busy shedule mein choor…

    Waise tune mera ff nahi padha…. pata hai boring aur bakwas hai par phir bhi ab post kar diya hai toh padh le plsssssssss

    Achha now babye…. love u….
    N come soon with next ff

    “Shalini/Neha”

  17. Sweta

    Hey tamanna i m so sad u ended ur ff bt plz come with a new ff soon n epi was so good i m unable to find words to appreciate ur writing skill plz come back with a new ff its a request yaar

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