UR Wish, MY Command…. Twinj (part 12)

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Hi guys… I m so sorry for being late but kya karun this exams… Leave it… plz don’t ask me to continue it bcz if I would do so I’ll bore u all bcz I don’t have anything to drag in it and also my father will be back on 3rd dec so I won’t be able to post it… So I ll try to end it asap..

Guys and hw can I forgot… Mere acche din aagaye waapis… Mujhe firse 25 comments mile… I can’t define hw much happy I m.. Plz aaj bi utnehi cmmnts dedo… Plz frnd samaj kar…


Dreamer….Arundati, sohi, sameera, sidmin23, priya23( I m so happy that u broke ur silence) , simiyy, twinj, ramya, Franciee, kai( as u requested I have included the English translation), chiku, monica, sushmita, Purnima.agrawal30, rashiverma2199, vipul, presha, sidvee, twinjsidmin( vassu di I m posting for u now happy na…) pavvu, zuha fathima, sidmin, sweta, jisha di, aksa.nikoria..

Link for previous part-


Recap- revelation of uvs plan.. Twinkle kidnapped by uv and uv’s demand…

Disclaimer- no proof reading so plz ignore the mistakes..
Today’s epi is boring so plz bear with me …

Lets begin..

Twinkle’s POV (my first ever pov I don’t know how it will be)

“Itni jaldi nahi uv” (“not so fast uv”) was all I could here… I recognized the voice… Its of my kunj… He is back… Finally now I’ll be able be able to ask forgiveness from him… Hw… uv have fallen down and kunj with a closed fist… Haan kunj ne maara… Yeehh… Uv ka yahi haal hona chahiye.. KUNJ… Kunj plz get up… Kunj stood up… Ab yeh dono kya kar rahe… Yeh dono fight me jhud gaye… I hope kunj ko kuch na ho… Yeh kya kunj niche… Kunj ke face se tho blood nikal raha hai… Agar mein bandhi nahi hothi na then I would have just gone there… Koi kholdo pls.. Fir se dono ke beech fight… Suddenly kunj mere godh (lap)… He have closed his eyes….

Pov ends….

Actually this happens with me when kunj and uv fight on tv…

(Readers I m giving u summary to avoid confusion)

NOTE: Kunj have fought with uv’s men before coming to uv…

“Itni jaldi nahi uv” (“not so fast uv”) kunj said this and gave a punch on his face and uv falls down.. Next uv punches kunj and he falls down… So twinkle said Kunj… In her mind… They get into serious fight either uv taking power or kunj… They both were fighting when uv pushes kunj and he falls on ground and his head in twinkle’s lap… He is covered with blood and eyes closed….

Twinkle: (mouth tied) ummm…. (thinks) kunj yeh kya hua tumhe utho…,plz kunj utho…
(Kunj plz get up…what happened to u??)

She cries… The tear drop falls on kunj’s eyes… kunj slowly opens his eyes… He looks at her struggling and crying… His heart aches to see his life tied in a chair and face devastated by continues crying… He slowly cups her face… She too looks at him and they get into painful eyelock which shows pain, guilt, love, anger everything… Which is later broken by kunj who released her…

Both suddenly heard gun shot… Uv points gun towards kunj but kunj takes it from him… They again get into a fight and now kunj takes the control… Kunj points the gun towards uv who have fallen in ground… Uv looks at twinkle…

UV: twinkle dek na kunj kya kar raha hai hw can he… Mai tera pyaar hun na… Plz mujhe bacha le…
(Twinkle see what kunj is doing.. Hw can he? I m ur love isn’t it… Plz help me..)

Kunj feels hurt listening this… While this time uv takes the gun and now again fight…( I know u all are getting bored but what can I do… Its needed)

Uv points the gun towards twinkle but police comes at the same time and arrests him… They take uv but uv whispers to kunj

UV: srry kunj… Tujhe tere pyaar se alag rakhne ke liye but now u propose her… Mai use maarne wala nahi thi…
(Sorry kunj. I had to keep ur love away from u but now u propose her. I was not going to kill her)
I have said everything to her… Bcz I have gone through same pain… And I don’t want it happen with u too…

Kunj feels shocked and looks at him… He gets his answer when uv signs him that his lover is dead now…

After that twinkle comes running to him and hugs him then touches her forehead with him…


#Don’t be shocked yaar.. Actually I wanted to end it here but hw could I not fulfill my reader’s wish so kuch scenes add karne ko baaki hai…#


Kunj was still in a shock so he didn’t responded her but when he came into his sense he jerked her… She looked at him shocked…

Kunj: twinkle plz I m sorry par mai tujhe maaf nahi kar saktha… Tujhe mujh par bharosa nahi tha tab aur tu tho yahi chahthi thi na ke main yahan se chala jaaun so teek hai… Mai jaa hi raha tha ke mujhe tere kidnap hone ki khabar mili… Main yahan dauda chala aya..
(Twinkle I m sorry but I can’t forgive you. U had not trusted me that day and u wanted me to leave na so I was leaving but had to return as I got the news about u being kidnapped. I came as fast as I can)

Twinkle listens this being guilty because she knew she was wrong… Kunj removes her hand from his hand slowly and turns away from her… she stands there being shocked and tears rolling from both of their faces…

Screen freezes when twinkle leaves his hand and kunj turning away…

To be continued….

Hw was it?? Sorry for boring u all… I’ll try to post asap… Thanks for commenting once again…

Drop ur comments whether +ve or -ve… Suggestions are always welcome… If any confusion do ask me… Plz avoid mistakes…


Love u all…


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  1. aj chulbul cmnt lisr me na dekh kr itna bura lga na sachi yr kya bataun kal na mera exam hai but still i am here reading ur ff yr i am sorry for not cmnting on previous part yr and aj ka epi was too gud but misunderstandings hdi clear kr de yr i cant see twinj separated yr …., and han i misss all of my grup members yr or ek bat sab ko bta dena ki i will be back to eat thier heads on 5 dec mujhe add kr dena grup main on 5 and han sbko lehna ke i miss them a lot muaaaahhhhhh to all of them and for mahi di specially i am missing her cling me bacha and han sabko bolna agr mujhse vat krni ho to call karen i am always free for them
    i kniw mujhe sab miss ni krte but i miss them a lot or tujhe miss krti hun main…
    i love u guys a lot ye messsage unhe convey kr dena kr unke reactions ka screenshot mujhe send krna abhi ke liye itni bak bak kafi hai do come back fast and start a new ff for us muaaahhhh
    love from ur chulbul

  2. Hlww tamanna…….the episode was too good…..yunj fighting was bang…..u describe well emotionally twinj and thier pain…..hope soon kunj forgive twinki……and pls give some romance between twinj if u want I don’t forcing u….he he he…… Love it very much yaar…..plsssss when u get time post soon….will be waiting… Luv u lodsss…tc..byyy…..,,,,,,

  3. It was awesome tamanna
    Uv was nt at fault hw cute he is yr
    N ab yeh Kya hoga gaya naya prblm I hope soon twinj wiill unite by km feeling very bad dat u r ending ff kash tum quit na karo loved it n love u

  4. Chiku

    Woaah very cute????loved it?????soo cute. Finally twinj saath mien honge. Loved it
    Post next soon
    Love u?

  5. Rashiverma2199

    Awesome episode…

  6. SidMin23

    Brilliant episode post next part soon.

  7. Aishu meri jaannnnnnn tysm for posting this episode soon for me…as usual the episode is so good…loved yunj fight…very excited for next episode…try to post soon…

    #XOXO ❤❤??

  8. Sohi

    Hey tamanna you are not boring me at all but plz end this ff soon as I also think their is nothing much left in it so end it and start a new story when you will get time bye take care and post other one soon

  9. Kritika14

    Hey Tamanna,
    This was incredible. I mean, what a twist! I am so eager to read what’s gonna happen in the upcoming chapters! Do post soon.

    Lovess! xx

  10. MINDBLOWING yaar. Just MINDBLOWING, superb, awesome…

  11. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing

  12. Aanya_pandey

    Amazimg episode it ws.. hope u post next soon

  13. Adya

    Hey tamanna …..that was superb…the twist was amazing….
    Well I used to call u di…but came to know that you are younger to me…
    Post soon….
    Love u

  14. dreamer...arundhati

    Tammy lovely 1

  15. Awesome tammana loved it and i hope kunj forgive twi soon

  16. SidMin

    Awesome 🙂 Just Loved it 🙂 Love you 🙂 Post soon 🙂

  17. Omg why an epi it is just awesome n I lv it ???

  18. Dry it is what not why

  19. Sry it is what not why

  20. Awesome

  21. Hi Tamanna, how r you?…. episode was awesome fabulous n superb… loved yunjs fight… and ur first pov was great…loved whole epi….

    N sorry for late comment actually since few days I was not active on TU bcz of hectic shedule… so pls yaar don’t be angry at me… pleaseeee…

    Lots of love♥♥♥♥


  22. Baby

    my tamanna dear yeah……..srsly m sshocked wat was dat uv ne jo kaha………
    srsly nailed it loved it sooooooo much osm fab marvaelleous ♥ 😀
    thank god aise end nhi kiya 😀
    love u lods♥♥

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