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Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (SS Part 14)

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Well im back again guys….
I know super duper… Blockbuster late….
N I’m really sorry guys….
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz maaf kr do… N if u want u can throw all your chikni’s n chameli on me….
Bt plzz maaf kr do….
So waise toh I’m already late so without any further ado .. let’s get started…
Waise for ur convenience u can read the last part… Sab yad aa jayega… Hopefully…

Scene 1(In the compartment)
Shivay and Anika were trying to call naira but she wasn’t talking the calls as she was unable to hear the ringtone in the hustle and bustle…

Naira:- konsa compartment tha yr…. Umm…(trying to remember…) Arre ha … I think 3b… Or ye…
(She spots a man near the washroom gate)
Excuse me bhaiya…
Man:- ha boliye…
Naira:-bhaiya ye konsa compartment h??
Man:- 1b
Naira:- ooo.. Thank u bhaiya☺
Man:- aap kho gayi h kya madam???
Naira:- aree nh nh…. M toh bas galat compartment m aa gayi jalidazi m…
Waise ye 3b konse side h.. ??
Man:- ye aage wali side…
Naira:-Ohkkk… Thank a lot bhaiya…

Scene 2(in compartment no. 3b )
Ani:- ye Naira kaha reh gayi…??? Shivay apko dhyan dena chahiye tha na… Aisa kon krta h??.
Shivay:- Arre wo mere sath hi thi par pate nh last moment m kaha chali gayi…πŸ˜‘
Ani:-Kha chali??? Kaha chali gayi ka kya mtlb hota… Aap uska dhyan nh rakh skte…
Ek station p toh uske sath nh reh skte life time kya sath rahenge….
Shivay:-arre don’t start again… Usse kabhi meri zaroorat nahi padi yr… Tum overreact kr rahi ho…
She is not a kid Anika…
Ani:- I know she is not a kid Shivay… But even u aren’t one… U should have noticed that someone walking beside u is missing…
Shivay:-(with a tensed face) I’m sorry Anika…
Ani:- it’s okay Shivay… I hope Naira ne train miss na ki ho…

Scene3( Naira finally reaches in compartment 3b)
Naira’s POV
Ohhhhh god… Kitna tension lete h ye dono…
Naira:- heyyyyy bhagwan… Kitna tension lete ho tum dono… Bas karo yr… M koi bachi thodi hu…
Thik hu m…
Or pahuch bhi gayi tum dono k pass… Ab to ye frown hatao apne faces se…
Ani:-oooo god… Where were u?? N your photo?? Why weren’t you receiving it god damn it…
Are u okay??
Shivay:-Anika bas kar….( Is cutt off in between)
Ani:- u shut up….!! I’m talking to her right…
Stop interfering…
N u?? Kya hua… Muh kyu nh khol rahi ab ha????😣😣😣😣😣😣
Naira:- Sorry mumma
Anika:-its okay… Wait a second…
Mumma…?????? Kya mtlb h tera??
Naira:- ab mummy ki tarah sathi toh or kya bulaungi….πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
Ani:-Stop it okay….

Shivay:- waise have ever called your mom as mumma??(he asked in funny way)
Ani:- Shivay what’s wrong with u????
Naira:- it’s okay yrrr…. Chill maro….
M thik hu…
N chalo na kuch khate h… Mujhe bht bhook lagi h….

Shivika:-(together) bhukkad…..πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
A/N:- I’m really sorry guys… I know this is such a bakwas start… But I m really sorry guys as I’m typing it at 1:12 n I’m hell tired….
N on top of that I have stopped writing since quite sometime…
Bt I’ll manage soon…
I really need your comments this time…
I have never asked you all to comment…

But this time I really want each n every reader if mine to comment cuz I’m having second thoughts about continuing the story…
So if it’s not good or hoti the mark or u think I will be able to continue it then plzz comment guys…
I really need u all this time…
Luv u all…
N I missed you guysssss sooooooooooooooo much😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

20 Comments
  1. Welcome back.. It’s nice but focus on shivika yaar. There is no progress in their rishta.

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot for commenting dear… The next parts will be mainly for them.. I’m glad that u came up n asked me to do it….
      Thanks a lot dear☺

  2. pls write in english

    1. JanviSingh

      I’ll try writing for sure dear…
      N thanks for reading..

  3. It is nice one dear.. Plz processed fast…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot nikki….
      Don’t worry I’ll progress it fast….
      Even I think I have stretched it for long….
      Thanks again for reading..😊

  4. Nithu

    nice

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot nithu..
      I’m really glad that u commented…
      Luv u😘

  5. Aana

    Welcome back jalebi….I am so happy to see u back ..nd missed this story too…nd even I want shivika scenes…
    Iske alava everything is awsm…
    Hope to see nxt epi soon.
    Love u jalebi…
    Bye

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a loottttt for commenting starieeee……
      Luv u loads asπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’πŸ’
      N I needed to come back for u all who never give up on me..
      N abt shivika… I’ll be concentrating on them only in the coming parts…
      So no worries…
      N I’ll make it longer next time….
      😊😊

  6. Finally! I have been waiting for this like forever..
    Update nxt part asap dear…nd make it a bit longer..

    1. JanviSingh

      Of course yr… I’ll post ASAP….
      N make ill it longer for sure….
      N thus is such a sweet comment yr….
      U made me smile instantly….
      Luv u dear😘😘😘😘

  7. Alekhika20

    Nice part

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot for reading dear….😊😊

  8. Fenil

    Nice part

    shivay ki awaz hi nahi nikal rahi hain…haahahahah

    naira ko toh mein Shivangi Joshi hi imagine karta hun.

    I imagine whole part heheh :D:D:D Darpok shivay nd bak bak machine anika.

    I will read from first chp but send links.

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwwwww… Thank u soo much for reading bhaiya…..
      Oopssss…… I know thanks nh bolna tha…
      Par apne reader ko toh bol skti hu na…
      N it’s great that u were able to imagine it bhaiya….
      N I’ll send u the links… Don’t worry…😊😘

  9. Awesome epi dear…… but add more shivika sence….. & pls continue dear becz it is one of my fab ff……

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwww… Thanks a lot dear….
      N I’ll definitely continue it for u all…
      N guess what.. the next part is updated n published too…
      Soo u can have a look….
      N thanks a lot for reading dear😘😘😘😘

  10. Awesome update dear…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thank u sooooooooooooooooooo much Ankita…..
      Luv u sis😘😘😘😘

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