Tere bina jee na paunga….ye tai hai…..kanchi os

Group of girls and boys are traveling in train……they all are singing songs and enjoying……..after finishing the song…..

ravi-guys….everything is good……but feels like something is missing…….

priyanka-same here……….i also feels so..

mansi-yes……I wish….if someone would have been here to mentor us…….

One boy(not in their group) sitting at the corner…..listens their conversation……..

Boy-may I help you….

Everyone looks at him……

Boy – can I have the guitar……

Ravi passes the guitar…..the boy takes the guitar……and starts singing…………

Tere bin jee na paunga ….Sach much mar hi jaunga

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

Hasna rona tujhse hi…. Mera hona tujhse hi…

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai…..

Maujood hai har saans mein….. Tu har dafa ye tay hai….

Tu hai dawa ya dard hai… Par hai mera ye tay hai (x2) …

Tere bin jee na paunga…. Sach much mar hi jaunga ….

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

Listening to his song other people in train also gathers there…

Tu naseebon sa …mere haathon pe ..Shuru se likha hai ….

Mera haq hai …tu aasmano se Mujhe jo lagta hai….

Tere kadamo pe jahan..

rakh dun main Kabhi jo kahe… tu Koi shak ho toh aazma lena …

Kisi din mujhe..

Maujood hai har saans mein… Tu har dafa yeh te hai..

Tu hai dawa …ya dard hai…

Par hai mera yeh tay hai (x2)….

Tere bin jee na paunga ….Sach much mar hi jaunga

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

Everyone claps for him…..

Abhi-hey bro……..you voice does wonders…….plss train.us…..

Ravi-yeah bro can you teach these song…..

Priyanka – yeah….we have been selected to sing on the program..where…..a famous singer is coming as special guest……

Mansi-yeah plss….

Boy-okey guys….

Ravi-by the way from where you are coming and where are you goings……

Boy – I am coming from jail……

Mansi- what??

Boy don’t worry.let me tell you the story..

Everyone gets curious to know the story…

Boy –I am kabir kapoor……I have great passion for singing……..

2 years ago….

Kabir and his friends are roaming around the city….while passing through chandni chowk …the stop their to eat something……everyone was enjoying..kabir listens someone singing……….he follows the voice and reaches a house……….

A girl is shown singing….

Tum mere ho iss pal… mere ho…

Kal shayad ye alam naa rahe…

Kuch aisa ho tum tum naa raho…

Kuch aisa ho hum hum naa rahe…

Yeh raaste alag ho jaaye…

Chalte chalte hum kho jaaye …..

Kabir peeks inside the house through the window…….hee sees the girl’s back and tries to see her face…she is wearing white kurti with pink Patiala… she is drying her hair…..and singing…….she has melodious voice…

Main phir bhi tumko chahungi …

Main phir bhi tumko chahungi….

Is chahat mein marr jaungi…

Main phir bhi tumko chahungi …

Meri jaan mein har khamoshi hain ..

Tere pyaar ke nagme gaungi..

Main phir bhi tumko chahungi…

Main phir bhi tumko chahungi…

The girl turns around and is revealed to be sanchi…sanchi mishra……who is very passionate about singing………kabir gets mesmerized in her beauty and song………sanchi sees kabir peeping from window……she comes outside.but kabir is still lost in his world……

She comes from behind ……and pushes him…..kabir falls in mud….he turns around and stands up…..

Sanchi slaps kabir……kabir is shocked……

Sanchi-you cheap boy…..how dare you……

Kabir-no actually I was listening your song…….you sing very good…

Sanchi-ohh hello stop you nonsense….i know you cheap boys very well…get lost from here……..

Kabir’s friend comes there and takes kabir from there…….kabir turns around and to look at sanchi…….but instead he gets a angry glare from her……

Kabir at night thinks of sanchi…..

Kabir-itss called love at first sight…….i don’t even know her name……but she is lady don……but anyways her voice…..it made me crazy………I will soon express my feeling to you miss akdu…..and you will understand that I m not a bad boy………

Other side sanchi thinks about kabir as a cheap boy……she starts hating him to the core………

After one week……

Sanchi returns to her hostel she is intern in sdch….and kabir also returned back to his home from his grandma’s home……

While sanchi,isha and pragya and other girls were having born fire..at night……they were enjoying……..otherside kabir had come on picnic from his college ……while they were returning….there bus got stopped in middle…..they were outsode sdch backside…….

Everyone came outside…by the time the bus get repaired……..

Veer- hey kabir bro………..we are getting bored……plss sing a song……..

Everyone starts hooting for kabir…..

Kabir picks up the guitar and starts singing…………

Tere bin jee na paunga ….Sach much mar hi jaunga

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

Hasna rona tujhse hi…. Mera hona tujhse hi…

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai…..

Maujood hai har saans mein….. Tu har dafa ye tay hai….

Tu hai dawa ya dard hai… Par hai mera ye tay hai (x2) …

Tere bin jee na paunga…. Sach much mar hi jaunga ….

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

Sanchi and other girls listen the song from otherside…….

Sanchi smiles listening…….

After kabir finishes………../girl from sdch starts clapping and hooting for kabir……….and they ask his name…….from otherside boy tells his name…….

Sanchi(in her heart)-kabir…….yes I got my dream boy……my kabir…………..

Sanchi starts blushing thinking in her mind….ishgya notices it……..and pinches her …

Sanchi shouts……….kabir listens her scream…..for a second he felt like his heart bit skipped…….

Veer- hey boy lets go…….bus is ready…..kabir bro lets go…..

Kabir looks towards the wall……..

The bus leaves from there…….sanchi and her friends also goes to their rooms…….sanchi shares her feelings with ishagya….ishagya teases her……

Pragya-oye yar……..u fall in love with his voice……..

Isha-yes if he will be fat ugly and all….then also you will love him…….

Sanchi-love doesn’t happen seeing face….itt just happens ……….and my heart say he is my soulmate…….KABIR……MERA KABIR….

Ishgya looks at her blushing face………..

After 1 week……kabir comes to sdch…when he enters his heart beat starts rising……he feels something is going to happen……suddenly he listen a voice……he turns around and sees sanchi…discussing about patient with the nurse……he gets mesmerized seeing her…

Kabir’s pov-now I understand why I felt not leaving this place that day…..because you were here…….see god also want us to unite….that’s why gave me so much signals……today I will clear every misunderstanding between us……..

Sanchi notices kabir…….she comes to him……

Sanchi- you ……you again came here……..you were following me…….wait I will complain about you……

Sanchi runs towards upstairs………kabir also follows her…….

Sanchi-you are still following me…….

Kabir-plss…..you are misunderstanding me……plss listen to me……..

Kabir pulls sanchi……..sanchi jerks his hand…….and mishtakenly looses her balance………but before kabir could save her….sanchi falls down….kabir runs towards her……everyone gathers…….. sanchi is bleeding heavily….and sees kabir’s face and gets unconscious sanchi is immediately taken for treatment……

Kabir is tensed…..and remains there…….ishagya comes there……they see kabir there…..

Pragya- may I know who are you.???

Kabir looks teary eyes……

Isha-hey why are you crying….we don’t even know you……but you are crying for an stranger……

Kabir-no…..i know her…..actualyy….i …..i…….

Pragya-okey.stop crying….tell me who are you…..

Kabir narrates the whole incident how….sanchi misunderstood him in chandni chowk……and then in hospital how the accident happened……..

Isha-plss don’t worry…..as soon as she gets well….we will make her understand……..

Pragya-yup.so what’s you name……..

Kabir- I am kabir…

Isha-kabir…..i had listened this name earlier…..yes…….are you that singer kabir who came few days ago……behind sdch….

Kabir-yes but how do you know…..

Pragya-destiny has played with you both…..

Ishagya narrates how sanchi…falled for him….through his voice……kabir gets happy listening to it…..

After one hour……

Doctor comes outside…….

Isha-doctor how is she….

Doctor-she is out of danger……but…..

Kabir-but what doctor……..

Doctor-sanchi has lost her eyesight……

Ishagya and kabir were shocked….

Doctor-don’t worry……it can be cured by treatment……but it will take around 4-5 months……

Kabir-okey doctor tell me what we have to do…..i will do everything to make her well soon…….

Days passes by……….

Ishagya introduced kabir to sanchi……but kabir asked them not to tell them that he is the same boy whom she considered as cheap…..

One day….

Sanchi-kabir…….you know that cheap …because of him…I lost my eyesight…………now I will not be able to fulfill my dreams……for him my dreams are shattered………..

(sanchi came to medical line because her parents want……she actually wants to be a famous singer)

Kabir listens it and gets teary eyed…..and leaves from there…ishagya looks on………

Next kabir comes to sanchi…..who is sleeping……..

Kabir comes near her…….and pecks her forehead and smiles seeing the natural beauty…..

Kabir’pov

Sanchi…..i know you hate me……but I promise..i will help you to fulfill your dreams….you will become a best singer………..you dreams are not shattered……its just beginning…………I promise I will make you life as beautiful like a heaven……I know one day your hatred towards me will end……..

Sanchi wakes up and feels kabir’s presence…….

Sanchi-kabir are you there…

Kabir-yes……so sleeping beauty finally waked up……..so get ready fast I will take you somewhere….

Sanchi- but where…..

Kabir puts his finges on her lips…….these makes sanchi blush…..

Kabir-shh..No ifs and buts…….i am giving you your cloth go fresh up and change….

Sanchi nods…….

After sometime….sanchi comes out….wearing light green frock suit…….with wet hair……kabir gets mesmerized seeing her………he recalls how he met sanchi first time……..

He notices sanchi is going to bump into wall…….in a mean time kabir pulls her and they both fall on bed…..sanchi on top of kabir……sanchi blushes…..kabir looks at her innocent face…

Mile ho tum humko …Bade naseebon se..

Churaya hai maine… Kismat ki lakeeron se…

Teri mohabbat se saansein mili hain ..

Sada rehna dil mein kareeb hoke …

Mile ho tum humko …Bade naseebon se….

Churaya hai maine… Kismat ki lakeeron se…

Kabir makes sanchi stand.and holds her hand and makes her sit infront of dressing table…..sanchi is about to take the comb…..kabir hold her hand and put it down on her lap….and he takes the comb and starts combing her hair……..

Teri chahaton mein kitna tadpe hain ….

Saawan bhi kitne tujh bin barse hain …

Zindagi mein meri saari jo bhi kami thi…

Tere aa jaane se ab nahi rahi….

Kabir takes out matching ear rings and makes her wear that……then he takes out silver bangles …and makes her wear……while all this sanchi becomes teary eyes seeing kabir’s care for her…….

Sada hi rehna tum… Mere kareeb hoke..

Churaya hai maine…. Kismat ki laqeeron se…

Kabir pickes up stone bindi…and puts on middle of forehead….now sanchi looks complete…..kabir holds sanchi’s hand…..and makes her stand…..

Kabir-chalo lets go……

Sanchi holds kabir’s hand……kabir looks at her……sanchi immediately hugs him………kabir sees sanchi is crying…….

Kabir-what happened sanchi…..why are you crying..

Sanchi- you are ddoing so much for me…….but I have nothing to give.you…..i cant even see your face….

Kabir(in mind)-if you will see me you will start hating me again……..

Sanchi-why god do this to me……

Kabir-sanchi is it not enough to feel me….is it necessary to see my face……

Kabir holds sanchi’s hand….and puts it on his face….sanchi touches his face emotionally……..kabir also becomes teary eyed…….

Kabir-okey lets go….

Kanchi leaves hand in hand…..

Ishagya sees everything hiding outside…..

Isha-I hope sanchi will understand the reality…..

Pragya-ofcourse she will….they both love each other a lot…………

Kabir takes sanchi to room filled with almost all types of musical instruments….

Sanchi-kabir where are we……

Kabir-feel it you will know……

Sanchi starts roaming she touches the instrument……she touches harmonium…..then sitar…….a huge smiles comes over her face….kabir sees it and gets happy to see her happy……sanchi picks up the guitar….and comes towards kabir……

Sanchi-kabir…..will you sing with me………..

Kabir-yes why not…..but which song……….

Sanchi-your song…….the song which you sang that day……..

Both starts singining……

Kabir sings………

Tere bin jee na paunga ….Sach much mar hi jaunga

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

Hasna rona tujhse hi…. Mera hona tujhse hi…

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai…..

Sanchi smiles and starts singing……

Maujood hai har saans mein….. Tu har dafa ye tay hai….

Tu hai dawa ya dard hai… Par hai mera ye tay hai (x2) …

Tere bin jee na paungi…. Sach much mar hi jaungi ….

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai……

Tu naseebon sa …mere haathon pe ..Shuru se likha hai ….

Mera haq hai …tu aasmano se Mujhe jo lagta hai….

Kabir sings

Tere kadamo pe jahan..

rakh dun main Kabhi jo kahe… tu Koi shak ho toh aazma lena …

Kisi din mujhe…..

Maujood hai har saans mein… Tu har dafa yeh te hai..

Tu hai dawa …ya dard hai…

Par hai mera yeh tay hai (x2)….

Sanchi sings

Tere bin jee na paungi ….Sach much mar hi jaungi

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

Kabir claps for sanchi…..sanchi smiles…

Kabir- one day whole world will clap for you like this…….

Sanchi hugs kabir…

Sanchi-I love you kabir……….

Kabir hugs her back

Kabir- I love you too meri jaan……you know doctor said soon…..you will get fine……..

Days passes by……..kabir trains sanchi…..kanchi were madly in love…….

Kabir took sanchi for singing in many concerts…….day by day….sanchi became well known over the city……

Kabir took sanchi for playback singing……soon sanchi became famous singer…….

It was day of sanchi’s oppression…….kabir went to temple for praying for her……soon he got call from ishgya that sanchi’sopresion was succesfull…………..kabir was very happy……

Sanchi’s bandage was opened……she saw everyone…….isha.pragya..her mother…..and father…….doctor…….but did not find kabir..

Sanchi-where is kabir……..

Isha-he is coming……..

Kabir gets his bike.but suddenly a old men comes begging infront of him..to give him lift……..kabir agrees

While on way……

Kabir-uncle where should I drop you…..

The man takes out gun puts on kabir’s head………….

Man-ride where I say you…..

Kabir gets shocked….

One police man comes on bike infront of them…..he comes and pulls out the man……..

Kabir-sir…..i didn’t do anything.this man asked for lift…….so i…..

Police man-I know he is a serial killer….

The culprit takes out a knife from his pocket and stabs the police man…..he falls down…….the culprit runs away from there…….

Kabir comes to police man he takes out the knife……

Kabir-sir……keep you eyes open……I will call doctor……

Kabir calls ishgya……but they are busy with sanchi….and doesn’t notices his call……

The police van comes and sees the situation……..and misunderstand the situation and arrests kabir for killing a police inspector…….

Kabir is given life longprison…….but after getting evidence…….after 1.5 years…..he is released……….now he is going to meet sanchi……..

In this 1.5 years….no one knew where kabir was….sanchi still waits for him…..

At present……

Ravi-such a nice love story……..i hope your heroin is waiting for you……..

Kabir-hope so……

Priyanka-don’t worry she will surely accept you…………

Kabir teaches them the song ‘’tai hai’’…….

After 3 hours……kabir reaches sanchi’s mansion………now sanchi is a very well known respected famous singer……some function is going to happen……

Otherside a girl is shown getting ready in pink gown………her eyes are shown…….he smiling lips is shown…….someone calls her…….she turns around and is revealed to be sanchi……….

Isha-ohhoo sanchi you are looking damn beautiful………

Pragya-yes….mashallah……….

They here noise from outside…….

Sanishgya comes at balcony…..they see someone is arguing with security guard………..

Sanchi-what is happening here……..

Guard-mam…..see this boy is arguing to come inside…….i said no one is allowed but he is saying he knows you……..

Guard moves side…….and sanchi sees kabir…kabir sees sanchi……..and gets emotional…….

Sanchi gets angry…..

Sanchi-you cheap……because of you I have to face so much problem in my life….you are again here…….security….threw him out….

Ishagya tries to stop her.but she doesn’t listen and goes to her room…..

Kabir shouts…

Kabir-sanchi plss listen once……theire are many things to tell you..pls…….

Sanchi shuts the door……

The security guards beats kabir badly……blood comes out of his mouth……

Sanchi gets ready….suddenly she hears someone singing kabir’s song ‘’tai hai’’…………she immediately runs towards the hall………

She runs…….

She shouts ….kabir’s name……but is disheartened to see group of students singing the song on stage……

Sanchi comes on stage……and stops themmmmm

Sanchi-it is kabir’s song…..from where did you all learn this song……tell me……

Mansi-kabir only teached us……

Abhi-so you are only that sanchi about whom kabir was saying……omg……

Priyanka-yes….kabir told us about your love story…..

Sanchi-where is he…..tell me……..

Ravi-he was arrested in a false case the day of your oppression…he is released today….he is coming to you only.

Suddenly sanchi hears someone singing the song……the voice is coming from the entry door if the hall……..all audience also looks at that direction…..

Kabir comes there…stumbling……

Kabir sings…

Tere bin jee na paunga ….Sach much mar hi jaunga

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

Kabir looks at sanchi teary eyes…..sanchi looks on teary eyes…..kabir opens his arms…..awaiting for sanchi to hug him…

Maujood hai har saans mein… Tu har dafa yeh te hai..

Tu hai dawa …ya dard hai…

Par hai mera yeh tay hai .

Tere bin jee na paunga ….Sach much mar hi jaunga

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

Ravi-yes he is kabir…..

Sanchi understand her mistake and runs towards kabir……and hugs him……

Sanchi breaks the hug and looks at kabir and touches his face…

Sanchi sings

Tere bin jee na paungi ….Sach much mar hi jaungi

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

All hoots and claps for kanchi……..kabir kisses sanchi on forehead….they both hug each other….

The group sings the song at back…..

Tere bin jee na paunga ….Sach much mar hi jaunga

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….

The story ends at kanchi’s smiling faces………

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Actually I took the idea if the story from a Bengali movie sathi……..i hope you liked it……..many of you asked me to come back….so I cameback for you….thank you to give so much love………love you all very much…….

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Bye tc..love you all of you…………

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  1. Hey
    The os was awesome
    Post such wonderful os and ff soon
    Take care
    Lots of love

    1. Priyankashaurya

      Thank you tanvi

  2. Dhruti

    Hi Priyanka!!! lovely story 😊👌…..post next story soon….. TC 😊

  3. It was amazing to get in kanchi version in our language the same movie is acted by Vijay and simran the movie name is thullatha manamum thullum the only difference is the heroin become collector instead of singer loved it 😘😘😍😍tc lots luv come back with more stories

  4. AAYU

    Hey dear
    the OS was awesome with so many twists and turns
    I really loved it
    Keep writing more
    Take care
    Love you

  5. Rishika

    It’s awesome dear

  6. Anu88

    So so amazing and awesome and superb and mind blowing os yaar………. it’s really beautiful and gorgeous and wonderful and outstanding story yaar…………….I love this os so so much yaar……………..lots of love for you and your family…………….

  7. Short and sweet simple story with beautiful songs

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