Sukor-My love Episode 09

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sukor- my love episode 09

My heartily thanks to who are all comment for my ff and silent readers too…. I know my ff is not getting recognition like other ff on the same udaan page… even 10 peoples are not read my ff….but it’s okay I am not going to stop writing…. I think I should change my writing style….
This ff is really short and sukor only
Suraj: I said I’m a cricketer… why don’t you believe me?…. said with frustration in his voice… you crazy dog…
Chakor: Okay… I believe you… I want a diary…. Mr.sun
Suraj: Why? I’m not going to buy anything for you…. When will you leave from my house?
Chakor: What? I’m not going anywhere… I have to be with you… you know me already I don’t remember anything…. Where can I go? I pleaded him…
Suraj: no… I won’t accept that… you really frustrated person… how can I stay with you?
Chakor: please… understand me… please… I won’t disturb you…Mr.sun
Suraj: did you promise that you won’t disturb me and my family….
Chakor: I promise you…so please don’t ask me to leave…Mr. Sun
Suraj: okay… okay… why do you need a diary?
Chakor: it’ll help me if I lost my memories again…. For that I want a diary…
Suraj: okay… I will buy for you… but money for diary? (He extended his hand for buying diary)
Chakor: what? I don’t have money… I give it to you when I return to my body… I promise…please believe me… Mr. Sun
Suraj smiles and said okay….
Chakor: can’t you introduce your family to me?
Suraj takes family photo and tells everyone name and relation to him…
Chakor takes one photo in her hand and ask him who is she?
Keep the photo where it is…Don’t ask anything… His voice suddenly rose.
Oh my god… he is so scary when he speaks likes that….
Chakor kept the photo in side table and said to him I’m going to look around your house…Mr.sun
Suraj: Okay… but don’t try to scare my family….
Chakor: I won’t…

Chakor comes to suraj room after one hour
Mr. Sun Your house is really big… your mom doing something with long thread and long stick….
Suraj: she is knitting sweater… she loves to do that…
Chakor: oh… knitting… your sister also has lot of beautiful dress…. I want also dress…sees my dress it’s full of blood stain…so please buy for me…. Mr. Sun
Suraj: you are already dead… why you are concern for that?
Chakor: I’m dead yet… so please buy for me… Mr. Sun

Precap: suraj and chakor’s trip to Tajmahal

38 comments

  1. priya

    I was eagerly waiting for this ff. I don’t get time to comment but I have read all your ff’s upto now and they are awesome and waiting for next one

    Try to avoid mistakes

  2. Nisi

    Really amazing story ya…I loved your ff..
    Plz don’t stop writing ya….. We always support u………..
    So intha fanfiction ah continue pannuna, OK va….. Inga naraiya silent readers irukaga, so don’t worry dear.. keep it up..

    • Athira

      Ennaku entha ff romba pidichiruku.Athanala thayavusenchu continue pannunga.Entha ff muttum thaan naan read pannuren.Ana comment panrathilla .please continue pannupa

    • TP

      ur story reminding me the malayalam movie “vismayathumbath” starrng mohanlal&nayanthara….bt dont worry ur story s entrly diffrnt…….updat soon

  3. Sia

    Dear ur ff is really very interesting….n actually I was a silent reader but from now onwards I will regularly give my comments on ur ff so that u can know that so many people reads it but some r silent reader lyk me….n never stop writing ur ff as it is fab….

  4. Sukanya

    Please don’t stop writing. Your ff’s are very nice I loved it a lot. But please write lengthier ff’s.

  5. urooj

    Hi guys ….
    I must say all the ff on this page of udaan are very interesting ….i like all ff actually i love ….bcoz u all guys if u r reading my comnt plzz keep writing ….u all r awesome
    Love u sukorrrrr

  6. Tarn 💜

    Don’t worry your fanfic is amazing, and has a very different concept than the others. It’s unique in its own way. Not boring at all.

  7. Angel

    Huh! F.U.C.K Off Urs This FF Because It Too Boaring..U May Write Suraj Opening Chakor Dress And f**king Her Harder And Kissing And Smooching Chakor Boobs And So On If U Cant Write About It Then Stop It! And Guys For Urs Kind Info I Wanna Tell U That I M The Same Sukor Hater Of Udaan Telly Updates..Hahaha Her Team Udaan Have No Right To Punish Me. Bcoz Its Not Their Udaan Official Page!

    • Mala

      |Author

      Hey if you don’t like udaan serial and my ff too then don’t watch and read…. Don’t use those words… It’s verbal abuse… Be on your limits…. Okay… You shut up angel……

      • Komaljanu

        |Registered Member

        hey mala dont mind it plz…….the person has commented very bad things in my ff too and now i guess tha it is the same person….we cant do anything…. and i m dam sure now the person will use my name and comment as he or she whomever it is a dam coward.only knows to use others name.cant comment from their original name.anyways u dont worry its ok we r there for u……

    • Sia

      Ohh God Who the hell r u man??? Don’t u never ever dare to say these kind of disgusting things in this page….I wish u could have come in front of me then I would have beat u with ur dirty slipper….GET LOST from here u idiot, despo, mad animal….

    • Cutie

      if you dont like this… dont visit this page b***c’s son…..

      If you only want to s*xy stories go and visit those f**king pages…. not here….

      you dont have rights to order others to write in different way… You ASSHOLE.

  8. Aarohi

    Oh please Angel stop writing this dirty words. it is not shoot at urs name and this ff is the best ff and i love this story very much..plz just be scared of got atleast. my father is the indian dsp but i m not gonna tell him abt u coz i kno that the god is watching all things and i m 100 Percent sure that he will give u a big slap!

  9. Asha

    I love you so much colors and I am the biggest fan of yours in Tanzania 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  10. Angel

    This girl is soo cheap she is using my name to make me a culprit in sukor ff pls guys dnt believe her u know she is fake i m having puple colour box and she is having green plss team udaan help me and block her

    • Mala

      |Author

      Sorry I didn’t mean you… See how horrible her/his comment…..
      I’m really hurt because of this word…..

      I’m really sorry….

  11. NUPUR

    plz mala tum upset mat ho..Ek ki bajese tum hurt mat feel balki hum logo ki lia encourage ho..o badtameez ladki yehi to cahti hea..ki tum likna band kardho..jindigi me calne ke lie bohot sare ase log milenge but we should be continue…usme itni himmat toh hea nehi ki asli id use kare..ur dusre ko kia likhna caie chala dene par nikal chuka hea..plz don’t be hurt..and update next part of ff…

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