SHAMINI FF : CIRCLES OF LIFE, FATE & LOVE- Part 5 [By Renima]

Hello Friends, Sorry for the long delay …….So many things crossed life and I didn’t visited this page……Kindly forgive me and pls read the update…..So if u guys have missed or forgot what happened in the previous chapter, then here are the links….. Part 4 Here

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@ Surya Loka [ Sabha]

As soon as chaaya maata fell unconscious all gets shocked…..The arrow was already hit at shanidev’s left eye and blood was clotting from his eyes……..To make every one’s surprised, all of a sudden, lord mahavishnu’s serpent [ naaga] Anantha appeared at suryaloka……All bowed their heads before Anantha……

Anantha : Shani…..

Shani : Order me, ananth naag…..What I need to do now……You can swallow my life if you want……

Anantha : I have come as the messenger of my aaradhya dev, Narayan….Triedev wants to meet you…..

Shani : What they want from me ? I have surrendered my “drishti”…….

Nandhi : Be Calm…..Shani…..Hey sheshnaag, Shani has did this big sacrifice……Now no more tests on him…..

Anantha : We are the Dependants of Hari and Hara…..We are supposed to obey their orders…..Now lord naarayan has ordered me to take shani with me to the Vaikunda….

Yamini : There’s a limit for everything…..My bhaiya has already did a big step, Now I won’t allow any one to interfere in his life ??

Shani : Yami!!! It’s the decision of Tridev’s who are worshiped by the whole world….

Yamini : Tridev!!!!! You are praising those dev who made you to get detached from the material world…

Shani : Yami!!! Don’t dare to say anything wrong about tridev……All those were part of fate and Karma….

Dhamini  : Shani, I don’t understand these  kind of things…. All I know is that here a son is been separated from his maata, a bhai is been tortured before his behan and what yami said now is her inner pain….It’s her concern towards to you….

Shani : There is no need of showing concern towards this unwanted existence……Shani was the Karmafaldaata once, later he became the Darkness in every one’s life due to his vakra drishti…..And now in history there will not be any glimpses of shani……..

Dhamini : No!!! [damini screamed] Pls don’t say these kind of words to me……I asked you for my karmafal, do u remember it ??

 

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Shani : [Laughs] Nothing is with me…..Devi Damini…….Who Am I to decide your Karmafal ? Shani is no more a Dev…… Nandi, Ananth……I am ready to leave…….

Yami and Damini : No!!! Bhaiya…..Shani….Pls don’t go…..

Yami rushes near suryadev and holds his hand…

Yami : Pitashree……Do something…..Pls stop shani……Pls stop bhai….

Yam : Yami, What’s wrong with you, yami ?? Can’t u see our maata lying unconscious on the floor ? This happened because of shani only…….When shani was with us, whole suryaloka faced so many troubles…….

Yami : Remember bhaiya, who stood as the savior in all those struggles, If shani was not with us, we would have lost our pitashree itself….

Yam remains silent for a while…..

Indradev : Devi Yami, It’s true shani has lot of courage and he has stood as the fighter and savior….And his service towards suryaloka will be remembered forever……We are grateful to shani…But it doesn’t mean that we should disrespect tridev’s decision…….It was the decision of tridev that shani’s presence and his view can affect the mahayaaga and shani is obeying tridev’s order only…First he sacrificed his eye, Next we don’t know what will be their demand ?? It will be for the betterment of the whole universe only….Am I right, suryadev ?

Suryadev : [nods his head] Indradev is right, puthri……..Shani has done the biggest sacrifice……..This was never done by any Dev in the whole history……[suryadev waves his hand on shani’s head] We should feel proud on him……[suryadev stares shani’s eyes with teary eyes and quickly removes his hand]

Shani : Pitashree, Mujhe aagya deejiye…….Shani touches suryadev’s feet ….[ surya dev blesses shani ]

Shani moves towards damini and yami …..

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Shani : Yami, When maata will wake up, she will be worried for me…….I am going without asking her permission…..Pls convince maata to forgive her putra shani…….Yam is your big brother and what he says is right yami…..Don’t argue with him……..And no need of shattering any tears for me…..More than this blood, your tears are giving me pain…..

Yami : Bhai, don’t go….

Shani smiles wiith teary eyes and moves towards dhamini…..

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Shani : My maata has accepted you as her puthri….As her putha, I have failed to fulfil the duties of a son towards his mother……..In my place, you have to look after my maata …. Promise me that you will do it…..[Shani extends his hand towards damini]

Dhamini nods her head and holds shani’s hand…….

Shani then turned towards Kakol…..

Kakol : Don’t say anything 2 me, shani…..I am your vaahan….And wherever you go, kakol will be with you……

Shani nods his head in sign of no and hugs kakol…….

Ananth : We are getting late, shani…..

Shani folds his hand towards surya loka and walks away with nandi and ananth…..

Scene shifts 2 Vaikunda…..

Brahmadev : Finally the moment has arrived….

Mahadev : This will bring a new change to the entire whole world…

Vishnudev : From now onwards, Shani will be praised by common people…..

Mahadev : They will start relating themselves with the dev shani……

Brahmadev : The biggest irony is that the people who are scared of shani’s vakradrishti will get his kripakataksh also….

Vishnudev : The time will change everything…….Shani’s new role will be begun now….

PRECAP : SOMETIMES THE THRONES CAN ALSO BECOME FLOWERS……ONE WHO WALKS THROUGH THEM CAN SEE THE TWO SIDES OF COIN…..

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  1. Renimarenju

    Thanks for the likes…I am glad that at least two guys have read this one……Sorry guys for coming so late

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