Because we have a past episode 2

Hi everyone!!!! Thank you for the support!!! Keep commenting☺☺☺

And yeah. A lot of you asked me to make the chapter longer. Will try from now on!!!

So here we go:

Radhika finally got dressed in the orange saree with a black border (remember the one she wore that night when she went to Sam’s house with saral and mala? The same one.) She looked at her reflection in the mirror. She saw her tear stained cheeks and applied some make up.

Almost immediately, she felt her body turning cold. It was as if the winds had suddenly started blowing with full force. Radhika knew it meant the onset of disaster. She smiled to herself. Once, the same winds had been a sign of him coming near her. And there was a time when this was one of the most wonderful experiences for her. But now, it had all changed. That one incident had changed her life forever. Now she hated even the thought of him.

Radhika came downstairs and froze seeing the guests. She had never in her dreams expected this. No, no!!!! What was Sammy doing here? That too with…. With him! What was their relation? And, why had Sammy not called her despite seeing her missed calls? What was happening? Why did God have to turn everything and everyone against her, all at once?

Mala called her out and tapped her shoulder on getting no response. She kept on shaking her for a good five minutes before Radhika finally responded and started walking towards him. Towards eternal destruction. Towards a life of hell. Towards….. Her first love.

Sammy smiled at her and thought that there was something wrong in the way she was behaving. She got up and went to Radhika and supported her, bringing her towards her childhood buddy. She was soo happy! Her childhood buddy wanting to get married to her best friend was perhaps the best news ever of her life. She was so delighted when she had got the news from him, and had promised to support him and ask Radhika to accept his proposal. After all, who could be a better choice for her shy best friend, who wanted a perfect life partner who would help her get rid of her past, and also fulfil her dreams of opening an orphanage. And her best buddy was all that, combined into one.

But looking at Radhika’s gait, she wondered if she was going in a wrong direction. Could she have missed out on something? Oh wait…. Was it something related to the dark she had once talked about? After she had returned from her hostel… What had she said? That guy…. Her first love….. The breakup….. The stalking….. And the threats….

Oh God! Sammy did not know why but she had a gut feeling that something was going really wrong. Nevertheless, she brought Radhika to the sofa and made her sit. Her buddy smiled at Radhika but the latter seemed too stunned to say anything. Before Sam could dwell on her behavior, mala asked her for help in the kitchen. Both of them went leaving the two alone.

Radhika suddenly felt a touch on her hand. He had kept his hand on hers. Radhika looked at him. He was still the same. Everything. The touch still have her that tingling sensation throughout her body. His intent looks on her face still made her squirm. Oh no! Oh no! This was so wrong, so very wrong. She should be running away from him, but for some reason, her legs were jammed. She could not even get up.

Meanwhile, he continued to give her a scorching hot glare. “So, how do you like the surprise, Radhika? Aren’t you happy to see your first love back?” He smirked at her.

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Hope this one was long. Please don’t forget to give your valuable comments. ☺☺☺

51 comments

    • Jeall

      |Author

      Oh God chashni, my sweetheart, I have my end semesters soon!!! That too unfortunately immediately after my birthday!!!!

      And I am pursuing law, where I don’t even get enough sleep. But don’t worry, I will try to keep up with the updates.

      But you know, I just LOVE leaving my readers guessing!!!😂😂😂

  1. Lakshita

    Vry vry nice dear… i hope m the first one to comment here but dear its again a short one…. plss try to write long.. n u rb
    Rocking afterall..

  2. Lakshita

    N other writers do post smthing if u see this comment we r too hungry now to control!!!! [ we refferred to me n other silent readers ] plsss… s after the grt encouragement m commenting first time so dearies plss make me ur frns n aknowledge me here…

    • Jeall

      |Author

      I am sure everyone is busy with their exams…. But yeah, thank you for commenting.

      And I hope your comment encourages others to comment too, I am sure the writers here love appreciation☺☺☺

    • Jeall

      |Author

      Myra….. I don’t know if you understand Hindi or not, but “Sabra ka phal meetha hota h!!!”

      (Patience brings good rewards!)

      P.s. I did not know people consider even this as short, no worries, I will make the next one longer.☺☺☺

  3. Crazy Girl

    Cmeon jeal… i was expctng along one… i was so enthusiastic while reading it… i was enjoying to the core… the way u present it was awsme… u made me feel each and every part of it… this episode was not long dear… you have to write long and long untill the page ends lol… on the very episode u made me flat by ur ff… nw u r one of my fav wrtr n ths one s one of my fav ff… luvd it to the core… anticipating fr nxt part… pls update soon n pls make a loooooongggg one… i dnt wish to end so soon so make it longer dear… tc…

    • Jeall

      |Author

      Oh God crazy girl, you will sure make me crazy with that comment of yours!!!

      Love you loads, and sorry for this short one, actually I wrote it in the fifteen minutes break I get at college.

      And I have to study too na? Or how will I pass?😂😂😂

      And thanks for your comment

  4. Jewel

    |Registered Member

    jeall, this is superb, why radhika is so scared of him?? what happened btwn them before?? i am really curious to know everything. this story is really interesting jeall. please post long chapters. and come with the next soon….

    • Jeall

      |Author

      Our pseudo names are too similar😎😎😎

      And yeah I will try my best. But unfortunately you are in for a disappointment because I am known for keeping up the suspense for too long.

      Thanks for the comment

  5. we

    Wonderfullllllll!!!!!!! The storyline is going well; to b very frank my mind is just occupied by one question…….. What happened between ardhika😵😵😵

    Waiting eagerly for the next epi……. And for the reply too…..😁😁😁

    • Jeall

      |Author

      Hahahaha dear, how do you know it’s Arjun?????

      Anyway, thanks a ton for your comment☺☺☺

      And yeah, I am.sure everyone is thinking the answer to the same question!!!😛😛😛

    • Jeall

      |Author

      Hahahaha, I wonder what will happen if I post the entire story in one go? I am sure even then everyone will ask me to make it longer, because they did not have enough. 😂😂😂

      How I wish I could have shown my English professors, all these comments!!! It might have convinced them to give me better marks!!!

      Anyway thanks☺☺☺

  6. arti viswanathan

    Excellent episode jeall dear….i loved it. Tc and loads of love dear…. U should name that persons name darling….i think u should have done in this episode nevertheless radhika is going in wrong way what does that mean dear…. Will be waiting 4next episode

  7. Viprida Annuru

    Hey, it was kind of intriguing. I mean, did she have a not-so-good past with him. The chapter was amazing but not lengthy enough for it kept me craving for more!!

  8. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    Jea I’m extremely sorry for not commenting in your previous chappy……….I tot to read everything slowly…….I liked it………really nyc………I too had cold shivers reading it…………….

    Jea I’m very happy….I was looking forward to meet a person studying law…….I have a question…….is MARITAL RAPE an offensive crime in India?????? what sort of punishment will the guy get if his wife complains against him???? can she simply make a request at the court??? I mean how will she approach the court with a complaint…..the proceedings????? What if the girl’s parents are full support for marital rape??? will they be punished too???? what are the punishments for performing child marriage?????? min age for a woman to marry is 18 ri8???? can you tell me the sections they will be violating in both the cases?????? plzzzzz?????

    I’m sorry if I’m being too demanding…..I want to write about it…that’s y…….

    • Jeall

      |Author

      Hey aasthu, no need to say sorry.

      And to be honest, I am a first year student. So I am.not really the person to say much on this, but yeah, marital rape is, unfortunately, not an offence in India. There are no laws against it.

      I think all a wife can do is to approach the court for divorce, citing cruelty as the reason. But it does not mean that the husband will be punished.

      As far as child marriage is concerned, the parents of the child can be arrested and fined. However, the marriage is voidable at the option of the minor party. As in, the marriage can be dissolved at the behest of the bride or the groom, whoever was a minor, once they turn 18 (for girls) or 21 (for boys).

      I am really sorry, but I have no clue about the sections, I am.sure you can find something relevant (like related case laws and sections and judgements) on indiankanoon website.

      And no worries, I love this field of the law, so you can ask me such questions☺☺☺

  9. Roma

    Wowwww jeall…my dear…it’s very intriguing n mysterious…what happened in the past which made rads so scared from her first love….Sam is very sincere best friend of rads…the plot is very exciting. …plzzzz continue dear. ..keep it up. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug 😉

    • Jeall

      |Author

      Bear hug to you too Roma!!!!!

      I guess you are running behind….. Coz two more episodes of this FF are already out!!!!

      Thanks anyway for your lovely comment. Keep supporting😘😘

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