I love u forever. …….u r in my heart- OS (vitharv )

Hi guys this is sunanda…..iam very happy and glad that iam writing os on vitharv
(JANA NA DIL SE DUR )
it is a beautiful love story of vividha and atharva…. there love empowers everything….no limit to their respective eternal love…..

HERE GO THROUGH THE STORY (OS )

—————————————————————-

(Main male lead of the story “ATHARV MAHESWARI #
young ,dynamic ,hot looking person that every girl have 2 mesmarise of his cuteness….very kind hearted person )

(Main female lead of Story “VIVIDA VASHIST” young good looking beautiful girl with a nyc personality that every boy can flat of her beauty and she is very kind hearted and innocent )

(Vivida and atharv are very rich….Maheswari’s and vashists are family friends…)

(Vivida had a elder Bro with name of mahesh and atharv had a elder sister with name of manasvini (((Manu )))…..)

(Mahesh is not interested in business so that vivida is running the vashist industries company and atharv is running Maheswari industries )

(One day vivida is gng 2 temple of wearing a beautiful saree…..atharv also gng 2 same temple….her saree(last piece )duppata….is flowing on atharv’s face )

THAT IS THE FIRST MEETING OF THEM…..

(another day atharv and vivida are walking at footpath….one boy was hitted by a lorry…atharv and vivida saves the boy…..)

THAT IS THE SECOND MEETING OF THEM…..

(at Mumbai YOUTH FESTIVAL function was conducted whom the youngsters below 26yrs are allowed to it )
(Vivida and atharv—Manu and are mahesh went for participation and their names are get registered….)

(Later an announcement came that the boys names rolled in one bowl which the girl want 2 pick the slip and want 2 choose the partner)

(Every one coming and choosing the slips and picking their partner….vivida got atharv and Manu got mahesh….)

(The anchor says that they have to perform a couple dance…..there are 40 couples..in that we will select 20 couples…who will dance nicely and brought a wonderful chemistry b/w them..)

(The anchor says that 5 judges who will see the couple dances on screen )
1ST ROUND…….

THE DANCE START……..

(atharv and vivida manages their dance….looking made for each other….and made an awesome chemistry…..they have an talk while they are dancing….)

THE ROUND GETS END…..

(20 couples are choosen and in that there are manu and mahesh. ….vivida and atharv….)

2ND ROUND–PUSH UPS……

(The boys will do pushup while their partner sits on him and in This round 10 couples will select )

(Every one doing push-ups….atharv doing it very nicely which shocked vivida )
(Manu and mahesh are out )

(The 10 couples are selected and in that there are vitharv )
this round gets end….

VIVIDA-you done your push-ups well….impressive….
ATHARV-tq sooo much…

3RD ROUND——‘
(The couples have 2 run in building by keeping their girls on their shoulders….)

(The race start….atharv running fastly by managing vivida….sweat was running in atharv body where vivida wipes his sweat..which shocks……)

(5 COUPLES ARE CHOOSEN)

(Where in 10 couples 5 couples reached the end at same tym…….)
THE ROUND ENDS……

4TH ROUND-(cooking competition )

(5 COUPLES START COOKING……)

(cooking gets completed…..)
(The 5 judges are taking 5 couples dishes )

ITS WINNER ANNOUNCEMENT…….

(##**WINNER IS VIVIDA AND ATHARV ##**)

(they both happily jumps and have an tight hug )

(They get an award BEST COUPLE…)
(nxt day their father said them 2 goto London for an meeting….)

(IN London atharv proposes 2 vivida….)

(Vivida accepts his proposal they both cute…lovely…romantic moments at London )

(They return back 2 India…..)

(AN alliance is fixed 2 them…they get shocked by the truth that vivida is gng 2 marry her childhood frnd “RAVISH TAGORE “(who is also a frnd of vitharv ))

(Atharv alliance is fixed 2 ravish sister sangana )
(Manu and mahesh alliance get fixed )

(Atharv and vivida are in very tough situation that one side their love and another their families rescept )
(They did not wish that bcoz of them their fathers frnd have 2 come at risk….)

(Vivida cries badly……by remembering atharv…and atharv also cries by remembering her….)

(Vivida calls to atharv and share her pain..both share their pain each other….)

JANA NA DIL SE DUR…..JANA NA DIL SE DUR…
JANA NA DIL SE DUR…. (sad version plays)….

(Atharv consoles her and said her that if their luv is true…they surely wins…..)
(Vitharv enjoyed in luv for some days…..)
(THE DAY CAMES WHICH THEIR LIFE TURNS..)

(Vivida and ravish marriage…atharv and sanjana..marriage)

(Vivida sits in mandap sadly………..and cries recalling their sweet moments)

(Some one cames and sit at mandap beside vivida )

(They take 7 rounds and he keeps sindoor in her manng….she sees him….HE IS NONOTHER THAN ATHARV…..)
(she gets happy and hugs him…)
(She asks him how can he here )
(Atharv looks at ravish )

FB……….
(atharv is crying by holding vivida’spic and says “”**I LOVE YOU VIVIDA….HOW CAN I LEAVE WITHOUT YOU””** )
(ravish hears This and consoles sanjana and our families…….)
FB ENDS…..

MR.MAHESWARI-we always wish our children are to be happy…..but u wish that we have 2 happy…we proud of you….

(Every one smiles )

(Atharv wears sindoor to her neck….)

(The marriage gets completed…their luv wins…)

(There will be hurdles in love…we want 2 have capacity to bear and fight back..)
(If there is honesty, sinceyarity..in our luv it really wins….but it will take tym )

(We will read hardly when we r gng 2 write an exam…here incase of luv we are writing an life exams…it will also take tym to get good result )

(Belive in true love….bcoz there is not end to TRUE LOVE )

—————————END————————-

HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT…SRY FOR ANY KIND OF GRAMITICAL MISTAKES….I WANT 2 SAY ABOUT TRUE LUV BY THIS OS……

HAVE A NYC DAY GUYS 😊😊😊😊

35 comments

  1. Sandy

    Superb sunanda di .
    Keep writing not only jndsd ff but also other articles , short stories, poems etc u have that capability
    All the best for ur future diπŸ€—πŸ˜‡
    I can’t complete my comment without mentioning about ur cute dp ..atharv in his favourite blue shirt 😍

  2. Simran

    Superb awesome..πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ.No words..dear..
    All the best..πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

  3. usha

    Hi Sunanda, nice presentation dear. Vidharv’s love is eternal so that they can face any hurdle of life together until they win in their love. Bt as a frnd , may i give a simple suggection dear, vidharv’s empowerment through love is missing here. U only concentrated on their love . Vidharv should fight fr their love together,right? Here Raveesh again showed his mahanta by cancelling his marriadge with vividha and this is happend when he saw adharv’s cry. I can’t accept this frankly. Bcz ,Adharv is a strong iron man and he does not want anyone’s sympathy fr getting his love back. Dear this is just my suggection. so don’t feel bad .Anyway ur writing skill is amazing. Gud night dear.

    • Sunanda12345

      Sunanda12345

      |Author

      Tq for sujjestion..I won’t feel bad…this is just os…in can’t concentrate on all things…hope you understand…
      Tq sooooo much 😊😊

  4. Diya

    Sunanda dear….vitharv’s meeting….1st time…..awesome
    and the total OS….just muaahhh.so cute.
    yes true love is the history of enormous patience.loved it dear.
    πŸ’“πŸ’–πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘

  5. Jasmin

    Jasmin

    |Registered Member

    Hey Dii!! First of all the os was an amazing..i loved it..but as the criteria of competition u should have added some creative dialogues..anyways here r ur marks..

    Title: 8/10
    Story: 35/40
    Understandable: 9/10
    Reader’s attention: 14/20
    Creative dialogues: 10/20
    Total: 76/100

    I hope u aren’t sad with the marks coz they r somewhat less..but i know u will surely try to improve it..

  6. Sreelekshmi

    Is this what happen last in I Love u forever u r in my heart or any difference in the episode no 14 Sunanda can u explain me

Before submitting a comment, please be sure it meets our comment guidelines.

Before submitting a comment, please be sure it meets our comment guidelines.