KISMET – Chapter 1

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What’s the pain she’s experiencing now, it’s not the emotional pain she has been enduring all this while for her Bihaan; His slap stung her face left her staggering backwards clutching her face, eyes watering, did my Bihaan slapped me. She couldn’t believe herself, and was trying hard to focus on the reality before her.

Bihaan’s words echoed;
“Lord has punished me by getting you in my life, I will not bear this punishment;
I break our relation, get out of my life; I end all my relations with you right now”.

Weeping profusely, Thapki was shocked and emotionally confused,
“No, Bihaan, how can you let me go when you are in peril, I will not let it happen”, she wanted to protest. But before she can express her thoughts, Bihaan left the room in anger with rest of the family.

Totally shattered, Thapki ran out of Dadi’s room conceding her defeat. She reached their room, Bihaan was nowhere to be found. She stuffed her clothes into a bag, and was about to leave when she realized there’s still hope to reconcile. She writes a letter to Bihaan; Thapki leaves the letter on their bed for Bihaan.

“Dear Bihaan, I’m sorry to be the cause of your pain and understand you have lost trust on me. But I beg you to give our relationship another chance, I need you by myside as I am bearing the symbol of our love. Yes, I am pregnant and blessed with our child, we are going to be parents soon. I made several attempts today to share this good news with you but unfortunately fate had decided otherwise. Though you want to end our relationship, our child has given us a chance to pursue our love and relationship as a family. I have left the house but I’m waiting for you near the landmark bridge, where we met first. I can’t imagine a life without you and want to reconcile our differences;
Let’s start life afresh, please come for us. Love, Thapki.”

With beautiful memories of Bihaan and with hope of reconciliation, Thapki left the house walking towards the Landmark Bridge.

Traffic steady passed by as she reached the bridge, whenever the lights shine on her, she hoped it was Bihaan but to her dismay it was just another passing by vehicle. She was certain Bihaan will come for her and continued to wait in the dark night. An hour passed and Thapki was lost in her thoughts, when she heard a woman’s cry. She looked in the direction of the cry, saw a woman hurt in the road. She rushed to her aid, found her bleeding profusely without much consideration, Thapki unpin her dupatta and started to wrap it around her arms to stop the bleeding. Thapki stopped a taxi, and instructed the driver to rush the woman to the nearest hospital for medical aid, and paid him the fare. She took another dupatta from her bag, and continued to wait for Bihaan. Time passed and the night was getting cold, Continuous crying made Thapki drowsy and weak, she huddled against the bridge. Just then a car stopped near her, Thapki eagerly rushed to the car, and stopped…

Bihaan returned home late and walked into his empty room. Though he was still angry with Thapki over today’s incident, he knew she cannot bear to live without him. He walked towards the balcony, hoping to find Thapki there, but the balcony was deserted and dark. Did she move into the guest room, he walked quickly to the guest room, to find it empty! He was getting restless and started to pace around the house, did Thapki for real break her relationship and left him? He felt confused and angry, decided if that’s what she wants so be it, and fall onto his bed. It was 3am, but he couldn’t sleep a wink, Thapki occupied his mind which disturbed him. Wanting to confront her, he took his bike keys and knew exactly where to find her, in her parent’s house.

He pressed the doorbell of Thapki’s parent’s house, hoping for Thapki to open the door. But Aditi was at the door, looked at him surprisingly. He walked passed Aditi angrily, called out to Thapki to come out. Aditi was confused, asked Bihaan why are here in the middle of the night, shouting for Thapki. Bihaan ignored her and walked towards Thapki’s room to find an empty room. He stride towards Aditi, “where’s Thapki ask her to come out”. In an angry tone Aditi shouted, “I’m asking the same thing to you, Has Thapki not suffered enough, what have you done to my sister this time?” Bihaan looked at her confusingly, and told Aditi that Thapki has left their home after an argument. And he was expecting her to be with them. Aditi broke down and shouted at Bihaan, “What have you done to her now, where is my sister?”

Bihaan was devastated, jumped into his bike speed around the city like a madman but couldn’t find Thapki. Out of desperation, Bihaan screamed into the eerie night. Where are you, Thapki?

Precap: Police ask Bihaan to identify a person in mortuary.

RatanaMala ([email protected])

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20 Comments
  1. I’m shattered…
    Wow, awesome…

  2. Its a new story which is related to some early episodes of TPK…but its going on a different level.I just like it…keep writing.nice title,its not a single word…its depicts so many inner meaning…the meanings are reflected in Thahaans life.

  3. amazing very nice brilliant keep writing try to update soon much better than cvs

  4. Mala you posted it here also….great going dear. .but I am waiting for the next update please post soon on IF…

    1. RatanaMala

      Hi Rinka, I have PM you in IF. Let me know what you think, appreciate it.

      1. Yes I had already commented on your OS that day itself when you posted first on IF. I am waiting eagerly…

  5. Thanks for your encouragement, lee-na, pooja prabha & anu. I dont like TPK current torture 😢! In Kismet im exploring the what if situation, your feedbacks greatly appreciated.

  6. OMG …. It was an amazing episode …. This episode in itself is a great start … Loved the episode …😘 .. Plz update soon … It’s impossible to wait for the next episode ….😀😀

    1. RatanaMala

      HI NaiTan,
      Glad you like it. I will post the Chapter 2 on Monday. Thanks for your feedback.

  7. Vinolin.d

    mind blowing episode.because of it was gave relief for me.I am totally upset about real tpk.but its very nice story line.keep it up dear.

    1. RatanaMala

      HI Vinolin, Im in the same page as you are on TPK current track, wanted to vent my frustration. Instead decided to fulfill my expectation in my first FF, KISMET! Your feedback/comments, bad or good, is appreciated. Thanks for reading.

  8. Its vry intrstng nd amzng epi plz update soon cnt wait dear….

  9. Really heart touching story..
    great writing of you.. 👧
    Expecting good story from SW TPK like you do…

  10. DivyasriSivaKumar

    hi mala this is very new..it starts from where they actually got separated and i like how the story flows..do continue it..looking forward to next part

  11. Sulbi

    Hi Mala dear… i was so frustrated in TPK… u have made me relax with ur ff… it was awsme dear…. loved it…. update soon waiting for it…

  12. Vinni7

    Wow dear amazing one!!! 👏👏👏
    U wrote it very beautifully 😍
    Great going 😊

  13. oh vwry nice…i know u will make story diffrent….and waiying for next.m.

  14. Manish ki deewani

    its amazing dear ….waiting 4 next part

  15. Sri Wahyuni Hatta

    best story….i like it…..

  16. RatanaMala

    Hi (Simi, Dewi, DivyaSri, Sulbi, Vinni7, Sadia, Manish, Sri Wahyuni) Thanks alot for your encouragement and appreciate your feedback. Will post Chapter 2 soon. Thanks again

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