Jab love hua (ragsan) part- 5 ~fairy

Hey guyz fairy is back wid another episode…thnku so much for such beautiful comments on previous chappy.

Link to prev. Episode- Part 4

So lets start episode 5…..

“Raginiiii…dis is d limit”-said sumi enterng rags room angrily.
“Kya hua chachi(wt happened chachi)”said rags pretending to b dat d most innocent grl is d world. πŸ˜›
“Kya hua??hayy ram!!see ….see how shez acting!!as if she dont know anythng”-said sumi to swara pointing towards ragini.
“Raginiji.i very well know dat ..u had nly done something ..dats why d boy cancelled d marriage”-said sumi n den continues
“I reallly dont understand wts d prob. Of dis grl!!she nver understand dat i wants her hapliness nly…rago y u r soo stubborn …y rago..y dont u understand dat m forcing u to marry for a reason only…why dont u understand dat …ahh!!leave it”-said sumi wid moisted eyes.

Swara sees it n holds her shoulder n says-“maa !!wts dis ..now dnt cry” n den looks at rags who cnt able to bear d situation n hugged sumi.

Rags-“m sorry,m sorry,so sorry ,sorry sorry sorrry ..plz stop cryng plzzz…u know na i cnt see tears in ur eyes ..plz dnt cry “-said rags in cracking voice.

Sumi parted her n kissed her forhead…n said wipeing rags tears-“n i cnt see ..u cryng!!i love u so much baccha ..maybe shreya had given birth to u but still u are my own child.we are connected through hearts.. we are soul bonded!! …so jst have faith in me..hmm..i wl nver do nythng bad for u!!”
Rags nodded like a child n again hugged her.
Swara pouted n said-“ahh!!mom-daughter duo forgot me…not fair”

Rags says opeing her arms . “nautanki…aaja(come)”
Swara runs towards dem saying-“dat i am,,as m ur sister nly”n joined dem .
Trio shared a sweet n peaceful hug.showing dere strong bonding n care towards eo.
“Okay now stop all dese senti talks n wipe ur tears coz u know na DR.RAGINI PRATAP jst hate…..”-rags words r cutted by sumi n swara.
“Tearss….”-said swasumi smiling at dere sweet innocent doc
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“34-35-36-37-38…”-counted bheema for d maheshwari brothers ,who are doing pushupps.
“Commmon lucky bro ,u cn beat sanky bro dis tym”-hooted uttara supporting laksh,who ws totally tired till now n doing pushups wid much of difficulty..
“Hahhahaha laksh ..i think dis tym also u”ll loose ur bet”-said adarsh lookng towards sanky,who ws doing pushups really fastly n enjoyng his lill bro laksh’s condition
“Ahhhh!!!now i accept my defeat”-said laksh rooling in pain on d floor of maheshwaris gym room.
“Shit!!lucky bhai again u made us loose”-said uttara snatchng d chips packet from rashmi n poutng sadly.

“Ohoo!!looks lyk someone wl break his 87 pushups record today”-said adarsh pointing towards sanky,who ws still cont. His pushups..
“98-99-100-101″…wohooo 101…new record bhaiyaji”-shouted bheema in excietment ,as sanky stopped.
“Yeah chachu new record wowww!!”-said rashmi n ansh(adarsh-pari child) jumping on sanky..
“Yeahh!!champ n priencess …new record..bt soon i”ll break dis also”-said sanky blikng his one eye.
“Are laksh…common get up!!wt happened..y r u still down??”-said sanky forwading his hand to laksh,whoz still cuddling on d floor.
“Ahh!!bhai its paining”-laksh finally manages to say something.
“Hahahah..i already warned u ..dat pushups are not for kids..bt u ddnt listened to me once..”-said adarsh laughngly.
“Arey wt happened to my laksh”-said sujata coming inside d jym

“See na chachi ..bhai is makng fun of my pain”-complained lucky.
“Are mera baccha..come i”ll massage you ..come”-said sujata ,helpng laksh to get up
“Huh!!nly chachi is dere for me…nobody loves me here except for my sujju”-said laksh cutely.
Sujata smiles at his antics..

“Bhai pass me dat apple na”-said sanky to adarsh.
“Sanky u talked about mr.solankhi deal na..i think we should finalise it”-said adarsh passing apple to sanky.
“Yeah!!even i think d same..ahhhh!!”-screeemed sanky as he takes frst bite of apple.
“Wt happened “-adarsh goes to sanky n asked concerned
“Its paining”-sanky said pointng towards his mouth.
“Bro!!u really need to visit a DENTIST soon “-said adrsh pointng towads b blood spots preasnt at d area where sanky bited d apple.

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“Maa y dnt u tell about d real face of dat devil to didu den she”ll surely agree for marriage”-said swara to sumi standing in hall.
“No swara she already had lost so many relations in her lyf…n if she got to know dat her real chachu is soo greedy ,. den she”ll stop believng in ny relationshps .. .i tried so much to change dat man,bt all goes in vain……. ,,,,,,,,, no..i cnt let my ragoo b shattered..i need to do smthng sooon!!n in dat i need ur help”-said sumi lookng at swara.
” i cn gve even my life for my didu”-said swara emotionally.

Sumi smiled wid tears seeing dere love.

“What consparicies u bth mom n daughter are making against me haan”-said shekher standing behind sumi n swara wid his 2 bodyguards.
“We dont have dat much faltu(waste) time to think about you”-said swra leavng to her college glareing shekher.
“Wt manners have u taught to ur daughter..hmm..see how besharam she is,apne baap se aise baat karrahe hai(she dnt know d way to talk to her father)”-said shekher annoyngly.
Sumi without payng ny heed moves towards her room.

“Stop dere!!!!b ready @ 8 p.m. ,BISHWANATH is throwng a partyas hez son RUDRA is back to india n is joing him in politics.he invited us specially.so i dnt want ny fuss..b ready on tym n tell swara also to b ready”-said shekher coldly
” n ragini”-asked sumi turning towards shekher.
“uff!!how many times i have to tell u dat wt she”ll do going in dese parties ..let her b in home nly…its safe for her”-said shekher loosing his tie.

Sumi pov-
for safety or for greed..!!he nver let her go nywhere…even he wsnt allowng her for studies .he kept her lyk a prisoner,nly for her money.but i n swara protested against his decission..n made him agree for rags studies n job…bt still he kept bodyguard for rags ,not for her safety bt for d reason dat he dont wanna loose his gold layng hen.
ahh!!sometimes i regret ,y jai had written dat clause while naming his property to ragini…if dat wont b dere!!den situation might b different.
Pov ends.

“Please shekher wt she”ll do here alone ..plz let her come wid us…n if u wont let her come den me n swara “ll also not come”-said sumi sternly.
“Ahh u mother daughter r jst impossible…okay tell ragini also to come-“said shekher irritatedly.
Sumi smiles.
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“Wow wt a lavish docoration ……i loved it didu”-said swara enterng SINGHANIYAS party headng in dere huge ancient bunglow wearng a peach color gown.
“Hmmm!!!but its reallly boring yaaar”-said rags lookng for some DJ n muzic ,wearing wine red colored short,3/4th sleeved deep neck dress wid as usual minimal makeup n dark bl**dy red colored lipstick!!her hair are curled n opened ..
“Arey!singhaniya saab”-said shekher hugging bishwanath .

“Wah!!pratap saab …m really glad to see u here”-said bishwanath gvng a wide smile
“Shez sumi,my wife..shez swara n dis is ragini)-intrroduced shekher to bishwanath.
“Namaste”-gestured bishwanath.
To which d 3 replied-“Namaste uncle- ..namaste bhaisaab-.hellow dude”
All looks weirdly to d odd one out who replied lill hatke(differently) …n everyone gaze stopped at rags.
“Hellow beta”-replied bishwanath tryng to avoid d situation.

To change d topic shekher said.
“Aur bhai!!apna chief guest kaha hai(n wherez our chief guest)”-aksed shekher.
“Aah!!dere he is….RUDRA come here my boy”-said bishwanath calling a handsome guy towards him.

A hot handsome.tall young guy comes dere .nyone cn fall on his brown intense orbs.his muscular biceps n chest are proof of his strenghth..

“Rudra…hez my frnd shekher n dis is his family &shekher hez my one n only son RUDRA SINGHANIA,he completed his studies in australia n now returned back to join me”-said bishwanath proudly .
“Namaste uncle -namaste aunty”-said rudra bending to take blessng from sumi shekher.
Dey blessed him n shekher praised dat-“after being in foreign contry also,he doesnt forgot his values” -n looks towards ragini.
“Hi “-said rudra shakng hands with swara n den looks at rags n gets lost in her angelic face.
“Hi m Dr.ragini”-said rags bringing back rudra to reality.
He passses a killer smile.n shaked hand wid her sensuosly.!!
Rags felt a bit uncomfortable n take off her hands.

Dey proceed further..
All d tym throughout d party ,rags felt someones gaze on her..she feels discomfort n turned other side bt collided wid a waiter n d juice splitted on her dress.
Swara said she”ll accompany her till washroom,bt rags said dat she”ll manage n proceed towards washroom.
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So about wt clause sumi ws talkng about??

Sorry for borng update,bt dis one is needed…

Suggest me some actor for RUDRA charecter..!!(remember hes negative.)
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So guyz done wid another chappy!!hope u all lyked it…now shower ur views in d comment box πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ …

Lots of love
Keeep rockng n stay blessed
Yours fairy;)

58 comments

  1. CrazygirlS.P

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    Superb my dear Fairy, my creative queen❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

    • Fairy

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      Thnku soooo veryyyyyyy much sammmmy sweeetheart πŸ˜‰ …keeep rockng n stay blesssed sweety πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ;)love u dr πŸ˜‰

  2. Sally_blr

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    Boring not at all sweetheart. Dare you say that word again. So RagSan are going to meet in unique way Dentist appointment. Sanky family is fun and Ragini’s family misterious. I feel Jai might have mentioned that Jai’s property will go to Ragini’s husband or kid something similar, And Swara is a cutipie. Rudra?????????????? Hmmmmmmmmmmmm????????? Still thinking???????? How about Nikitan Dheer he will suit the name Rudra or else Vishal Karwal or Rahil Azam .

    • Fairy

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      Thnku soooo much for ur comment dr…it means a lot..n thnku so much for d suggestion..love u dheer sara..keeep rockng n stay blessed my rockstar πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  3. Ashnoor

    Awesome and fairy dear upload fastttttttttt . I am dying for the suspense . Too much to handle you know πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ , hotness increased as ragini came . Anyone can be mesmerized by seeing her in bold and modern avtar . And sanskar is just soo cool . 101 nice score in push-ups . And for rudra pearl puri will be the best .
    As he’s handsome and has well built body too . And will be perfect for negative character too . As manik is soft look person . For a change. Otherwise it’s okay if you take choose actor for rudra .

  4. Sindhura

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    Awesome yar
    You comment on mine regularly
    But poat too regular
    (Even i am unable too post daily but asking u to post daily he he)

    • Fairy

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      Hahahahhaha frst of all thnku sooo much sindhu dr..ur comments means a lot to me πŸ˜‰ ..
      Hehehehe actually dr m really bsy now a days n wenever i get free tym ,instead of writng my own ff ..i read others ff n comments dere…coz before being a writer m a reader..hahahha i love readng urs n others ffs sooo muchh….n m lill lazy also hehehehe so dats d reason for d delay…sry dr,bt i”ll try to post wenever i get tym…keeep rockng n stay blessed my rockstar πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  5. akaashi

    darloooo…..back with a bang!!!!!awesome dawsome!!!sumi n ragu bonding z super.swara-sumi-ragu bonding super.the maheshwari kids bonding super.the epi z super se bhi upar.i always wanted shekar to see in negative roll cz in serial im nt able to connect with him.n secret abt clause z interesting.Rudra beware dude!stay away frm our princess.n as of villian i suggest karan singh grover…n sry fo nt commenting on previous episodes bt i swear i read t all n its amazing.u describe each n evrythng in detail wch makes it easy to imagine.stay blessed doc saiba!!

    • Fairy

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      Oh my my my myyyyyy goddddd!!!!!!!thnku thnku thnkuuuu bahauttt saraaaaaaaa…..ahh!my darlinggggg love u cho chooo much yaaar!!!u jst made my day sweeetheart……..thnx a ton for such precious comment dear….n thnku so much for d suggestion…keeeep rockng n stay blessssssed my darlingggggg sweeetypie πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  6. Asw

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    Quite interesting yaar sumi swaragini bonding is good keep going ahem sharma from saathiya for -ve character

    • Fairy

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      Ahh!!!!thnx a tonnnn yaaar…thnku soooooo much d cooment n suggestion sweety….keeep rockng n stay blesssed dearu πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

    • Fairy

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      Aww!!!thnku soooo much dhara dr…ahh!!no prob. Dear….u r reallly very sweet….keeep rockng n stay blessed sweeetypie …;) πŸ˜‰

  7. Crystal089

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    awesome loved it ohhh my sanky faury day by day u are making me fall more for him seriously 101 pushups ohh he’s so handsome i can’t express my feelings i was smiling all time reading waiting for next part to know what’s the clause and i feel sanky will make a heroic entry and save ragss waiting for next part plsz update sooon……….

    • Fairy

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      Omggg!!!!crystalll ur such a darling yaaar!!!ur commments always makes me smileeeeeee….i dnt know how to thnk u yaaar…bt stilll thnku thnku thnku sooooooooo soooooooo much yaaara….u r reallly special to me…keeep rockng n stay blessssed sweeeetheart πŸ˜‰ love u yaara πŸ˜‰

  8. Silent_writer

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    Fariiiiiiiiiiii it’s amazinggggggg sis i lovedddd the epi now sanky will go to rags definitely yayyyyyyy n shekar huh hate him loved swaragsum bond its amazing happy that they lov truely rags n now w8ing for scnd meeting hmmmm rudra villan i dont knw many things about neg ones but aditya from ek duje k vaste n stay blessed n keep rockingggggg

    • Fairy

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      Awwww!!!my sisssy thnku thnku soooo much yaaar fizzzzo……thnx a ton for such a heart touchng comment n ur suggestion…love u a lotzzzz yaaara…keeep rockng n stay blesssed sweeetypie πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  9. Riya

    Di I am back in your ff…Episode is really fabulous amazing…Just loved it Fairu di…By the way you real name is Fairy or something else?I am just asking…If you don’t want to say then it’s OK…Enough for today…I am giving this comment with so much difficulty because my exams are going on and my mom is not allowing me to touch mobile…So take care and keep smiling☺😊

    • Fairy

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      Oh my baccha thnku sooooooooooooo vala much yaaar …thnku thnku sooo much sweeetheart for such a sweet commment….thnx a lot..
      N dr my name is farheen πŸ™‚ …
      Ohh dr alll d veryyyy bst for ur xamzzzz….m sure u gonna rock it!!!keeΓ¨p smiling n stay blesssed sweeetypie πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  10. Astha

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    for a kind information its not a boring update……..
    its cool emotinal n jolly
    swaragsumi bonding is just amazing…… loved it…..
    scene at mm…. sanlak & adharsh scenes is jolly….
    shekar…. rakshas……
    abt the clause i dont have any idea…. i dont know if the will was not o rag’s name shek will kill her is actually safe i think….
    sanky going to meet dentist…. waiting to see ragsan scene dear….
    as u said villain came…. he is luking rag wid lust…… to whom i suggest opposite rag? what abt sahil?
    rudra i dint like him.
    rag is going to rest room…. hope see not going to meet sanky…. is she facing rundra???
    waiting for next part from my darling writer….
    till now i didnt told abt rag na….. in starting she kept innocent face na…. that was awsm….
    love u my doll… keep smiling n rocking…. i know u’ll be busy but dont stress ur self… be cool be happy. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    • Fairy

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      Ahhh!!!asthu u made my day yaaar!!!thnku thnku thnkuuu sooooooooooo much yaara…rhomba thnku asthu…hehhehehe
      M sooo happpy dat u lyked d update….love u choooooo much sweetheart!!!!!
      Thnx a ton for d suggeation sweety..
      Keeeep rockng n stay blesssssssed sweeetypie πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ always keep smiling my jaan πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  11. Deesh

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    Cutiepie!!! What an update yaar!! How dare u can say that it is boring?? Just loved it yaar. Eagerly waiting for the next. And about rudra, u can choose any one u like dear. Superb update! Take care and keep smiling. Love u😘 πŸ™‚

    • Fairy

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      Love u sooooooo much yaaar deesh!!!thnku thnku soooo much my sweeetypie….thnx a ton yaaar…keeep rockng n stay blessssed dearu πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  12. Jazzy

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    fairy mamma finally u uodated sooo got ur inspiration hehheeh and sanskar kya aaapke massodo se khoon nikal raha ha kya aaapke toothpaste me naamak ha????? hehheheh
    ok coming to update it was amazing dear loved ragini the way she greeted hahhaha khash i could greet tge same way and for negative character maybe shaurya from eht or maybe karanbir vohra

    • Fairy

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      Hahhahahaha yeah my baccha inspired me πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ hehehhehe…
      Omg jazzzy ur sooooo funny..masude se khooon hahahaha lol πŸ˜€ ….
      Thnku so so soooooo much yaaaar for d comment n suggestion…keeep rockng n stay blesssed sweeetheart πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ love u dheΓ¨r sara πŸ˜‰

  13. Anaita

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    Hey dear! Your ff came out as a surprise for me. I didnt knew that u r writing any. Well this one was fabulous and I need to mention about manjoulika scene. It was hilarious… πŸ˜‚ And I would suggest Vatsal Seth or Karanveer Bohra and about this epi it was incredible. I think jai whom Sumi was talking about has named all his property on Ragini’s name. Just a wild guess.
    Well keep rocking and stay blessed πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‰

    • Fairy

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      Oh anaita dear….. πŸ˜‰ πŸ™‚ m sooo happpy to seee ur comment sweet..ah!!!thnku sooooooooooooooo much for such a sweeet comment sweeetheart….love u soooo much πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ hehehhehe m happy dat u enjoyed dat maunjolika vala scene… πŸ˜€ ..n thnx a ton for ur suggestion…keep rockng n stay blessssed dearu πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  14. Asra

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    fabulous update dear….how can u say it’s boring? ?…it’s not boring dear….y everyone asking thz question…all ff r awesome Thn y asking thz question…u Sally lahari all r asking thz…again don’t ask thz question dear…plz….
    and coming to ur update…mind blowing dear…swaragsumi bonding superbbb…laksh u r funny dear….101 pushup omg Sanky u r really great man….i can’t believe thz….laksh don’t do
    thz again yar….nxt time u caught double pain ya….Sanky s going to Dr. Ragini Pratap for his dental checkup….eagerly waiting for nxt one sweety….i want to give a nick name for u…u give me a permission hena? ? tkcr dear…

    • Fairy

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      Awww!!!dear again ur comment made my day…ahh!!!thnku thnku thnku soooooo much sweeetheart for such an heart touchng sweeetest comment dearu…..
      Yeah ofcourse u cn gve me a nck name…aww!!dats sooooo sweeet of u πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
      Love u chooooooooooo much sweeetheart…..keeep rockng n stay blesssed darling πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  15. A.xx

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    fab loved it and i don’t like rudra’s intentions at all……
    love sanky’s families bonding and love rags’s bold avatar…
    can’t wait for them to meet again and see what happens…
    loved it and post soon as u haven’t posted in ages.xx

    • Fairy

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      Awwww!!!m so sry dr…bt m reallly very bsy now a dayssss……welll thnx a tonnnnnn for d comment dr…it means a lot to me…thnku sooooooooo very much sweeety…keeep rockng n stay blesssed cutypie πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  16. Akshata

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    101 push ups???? really sansku???? you are so strong but dekh ke lagta nahi hai……. and laksh only managed 38??? shame on you atleast 50 to kar lete.
    loved rag, swara and sumi’s emotional talk and their bonding. shekhar is so greedy….
    There she did it again………. hello dude???? if sansku listen this he will surely get heart attack. Fairy i loved that word odd one out hahahahaha. i think there is some clause which stats that ragini should get married before some specific age so her property will get her back to her other wise no.
    THIS IS NOT BORE INFACT ITS AWESOME, I LOVE THIS UNIQUE AND ANTIQUE PEACE OF RAGINI, AND (how can i forgot my sansku) OVER THE TOP SANSKU.

    • Fairy

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      Omg!!!!aksha wt to say yr…ahhh!!!m fan of ur comment hahahah litterelyyyy….u always makes me smile through ur comments….u reallly inspires me to write more n moreee…realllly dear …i admire u soooooo muchhh….u r realllllly vvveryyy sweeeeet…love u choooo much sweetheart…..keeep rockng n stay blessssed dearu….god blesss u cutypie πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ keeep smiling πŸ˜‰

      • Akshata

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        so sweet of you. thank you so much. after reading your reply i am flying in the sky. again i am copying your dialog keep rocking n stay blessed…… πŸ˜€

  17. Kakali

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    Fairyyyyy !!! sorry dear for my late comment.. !!! *hug u. !!!
    Loved the episode…
    hmmmmm lemme think about Rudraaa !!!
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    . wait a minute meri Fairyyyyyy !!!

    lemme think deeply !!!

    ohhh haaaa !!! got it.. !!! u can take HARSHAD ARORA !! huhh i dun know his real name… but he accted in Kaisi yeh yarrian !!! n was Fav5’s rival …. but he is cuteeeee *pull Fairy cheeks n runnn….

    *drove back to say THNK U… ;-*
    n yeah LOVE U ALWAYS… !!!
    GOD BLESS U.. BYEEE !! ;-*

    • Fairy

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      Awww!!my pikachu πŸ˜‰ thnku thnku thnku soooo much sweeetheartttttt!!!
      Meri choti judwaaa love u lotzzzz hahahaha….
      Lotz of hug n kisses πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
      Thnx a ton for d suggeation dearu…
      Keeep rockng n stay blesssed meri pyaaari patar patar…. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

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