Ishqbaaz 8 Years Later- Shivika, Ishkara and Rumya- FF by Luna (Episode 37)

Hi Friends, I’m back with another episode of my ff. The response of my previous episode was really negative, but I saw that coming for a while. I know you all are irritated that I’m stuck in this flashback story and not going to the present time. Well, when I started this ff, I build a lot of suspense in my ff and to reveal all the suspense…it was necessary for me to give a proper flashback….I found it necessary as a writer of my story..but as u all the readers, so it’s important for me to listen to you as well. Now it’s upto you all…what do you want me to do?? If you want me to go to the present time then I’ll go straightaway from the next episode…but some important twists are yet to be revealed. So I’ll tell you the rest of the flashback story directly from a character revealing all the suspense in one episode itself. But according to me there will be no thrill in it and it can be boring…but if you all don’t have any problem then I’m completely okay with it. I also want to tell you all that nothing much is left in the flashback story either and it’ll take me another 6-7 episodes to complete this flashback and go back to the present time.

Now it’s up to you all….You tell me, whether I should go back to the present time or complete this flashback story?? Tell me your views in the comment section and I’ll go with what the majority says.

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Note: Today’s episode is again a complete flashback of the incidents happened 8 years ago(Sorry, plz don’t kill me). In the flashback, Tej and Jhanvi are about to take divorce and Tej is about to marry Svetlana. Svetlana and Mrs Kapoor are planning to destroy the Oberois. Svetlana has hired Ishana to con Om and make him fall in love with him. Shivaye and Anika are in a serious relationship which is only known to Shivaye’s brothers, Anika and Soumya.

Recap: Om decides to tell his feelings to Ishana.

Scene 1: Ishana is standing in the park, standing leaning on a tree. She’s constantly looking at the watch and waiting for Omkara. From a short distance, Omkara, Shivaye, Anika, Rudra and Soumya are hiding behind a tree. They all are looking at Ishana.
Rudra: O…what are you waiting for…go to Ishana??
Anika: Ya Om…you should go and tell her.
Om(getting confused): But what will I say to her??
Rudra: Have you forgotten?? You have to just go say, “ I love you”…that’s it…
Om: No…I can’t do that.

Rudra: If u can’t do it then go I’ll do it.
Shivaye: Shut up Rudra!!! Om…U don’t have to take so much tension…Take a deep breath, just go and tell her your feelings.
Om: Shivaye, I’m not afraid to tell her my feelings…I just don’t want to hurt her.
Anika: Yeah, Right…but your brother thinks that you are afraid like him.
Shivaye: Hey listen, I’m not afraid okay..

Om: Shivaye, Anika…will you both plz stop fighting for some time.
Shivaye/Anika(in a unison): We are not fighting!!! (Shivika look at each other in surprise)
Rudra: yeah O…they are not fighting…they are just showing tadi to each other.
Om(annoyed): Just shut Up Rudra
Shivaye: Om…why are getting so tensed….why are you thinking that you will hurt Ishana??
Anika: Yeah Om….Ishana loves you as much you love her…now don’t think much…just go and tell her.
Om : Okay…

Om goes to Ishana….
Ishana(seeing Om): Oh…Om, you are late…I’m waiting for you about 45 minutes.
Om: I’m sorry, Ishana…I got busy in some work.
Ishana: It’s okay…So… Why you called me here??
Om: uh….I…..(Om gets afraid and looks at his brothers)

Ishana: what??
Om(turns at Ishana): Uhm…I wanted to talk to you about something.
Ishana: Yeah…tell me.
Om: uh…actually, I’ll talk to you about it later on….First you tell me…How are you??
Ishana: I’m good, but first tell me na what thing you want to talk to you.
Om thinks for a while and gives a smile.

Ishana(gets confused and smiles): What happened Om?? You are behaving very weird today.
Om: uhm….I actually wanted to say thank you to you…..I know we just met 6 months ago, but….in these 6 months, you have helped me to come out of my depression…Ishana, you don’t know but you have made me learn to live life again…..you have made me realize, that it’s not necessary that we’ll always get everything in our life….You have made me know that there can be thousand reasons for sorrows, but only reason is enough to find happiness…you know, my mom and Mr Oberoi will soon take divorce and end their relationship…But I’m not sad at all….in fact I’m happy that my mom will get rid of this relationship..There is no point in staying in a non-existing marriage…Now I’ve accepted that my mom and Mr Oberoi had a failed marriage, and it’s better to end it…instead of staying in a toxic relationship. Someone has said true, “ perfect life, perfect shaadi…kahaniyon mein hi hoti hain”(perfect life, perfect marriage only exists in stories)

Ishana(smiling): I’m happy for you Om…6 months ago, when I met you, you were a completely different person….but…one thing hasn’t changed yet….you are still commitment phobic….You still run away from relationships, right??
Om: No Ishana….that’s not true…yes, I believe that perfect life and perfect marriage doesn’t exists…coz now I’ve learned to accept the bitter facts of life which I previously used to deny, but knew somewhere in my heart….But now I’ll not run away from relationships…Now I’m strong enough to face all the challenges of my life on my own.
Ishana: That’s great…so I think, you are ready for marriage….yeah??
Om(grinning): uh There’s no hurry.

Ishana(smiling): are you in love??
Saathiya song plays….Om gets lost in his thoughts.
Ishana: Om…where are you lost??

Om: uh…why are you asking me this question??
Ishana(grinning): First I’ve asked the question, so first you have to answer me.
Om(gives a smile and says): uh…..yes!!! (Ishana’s face goes blank and she was just about to cry, but she controls her emotions and holds her tears)
Ishana(takes a pause and then gives a fake smile): uh….that’s really a …really a great news….who is the lucky girl??
Om(smiling): Shall I really have to tell You??
Ishana(giving a fake smile): No Om….you don’t have to say it…I understood everything…In our relationship, emotions were always more important than words.

Om: So…you don’t have any problem??
Ishana(giving a fake smile): What problem will I have?? I just want to tell you that… I’ve the same feelings in my heart like you.
Tears roll down Om and Ishana’s eyes while both give a big smile….Both hug each other tightly…. Hamnava song plays in background.
Om: Why are you crying Ishana??

Ishana: Why are you crying??
Om: First I asked the question.
Ishana(giggles and says): I’ve never felt so much happiness ever in my life.
Om: Me too….

While Om and Ishana were busy in hug, Shivaye, Anika, Rudra and Soumya watch them from a distance and smile.
Soumya: Yay..so, mission accomplished!!!
Rudra(making a cry baby face): O…you have taken my first love..but it’s okay, I’m happy for you.
Soumya: Duffer Oberoi…do you even know what is love
Anika: I’m so happy for both of them…Well Shivaye, Om has done a better job than you in proposing. You should learn something from your brother.
Shivaye: For how many times, will you taunt me for this??
Anika: My whole life…I’ll tell this story to even my children and grandchildren.
Shivaye: Okay just stop it…let’s get out of here…
Anika: So we’ll not go and meet Ishana
Shivaye(smiling): uh…let’s not disturb them.

Saying this, Shivaye, Anika, Rudra and Soumya leave from there. After they leave…Om’s Cell phone rings….Om picks up the call and talks to someone. After he ends the call…
Om(to Ishana): Ishana….I’ve to complete a
Ishana(displeased): Now?? So soon??
Om : Sorry Ishana…I made you wait for so long and now I’m leaving so soon
Ishana(giving a fake smile): It’s okay….I understand
Om: Sorry Ishana…
Ishana: You don’t have to say sorry so many times Om…I really understand…I’ll see you later on.
Om: Okay, bye..
Ishana: Bye!!!

Om turns and leaves while Ishana watches him from behind. She watches him until he gets out of her sight and after that Ishana bursts into tears and cries..She was really feeling guilty.
Ishana(crying): I’m sorry Om…but…I’m sorry….I’m sorry.

Ishana gets a call. She wipes her tears and picks up the call.
Ishana(on phone): hello!!! (It was Svetlana on the other side)
Svetlana: Hello Ishana…so….How’s the plan going on??
Ishana tries to control her emotions in front of Svetlana and speaks in a normal tone and voice.
Ishana: Plan is successful…Today Om proposed me.
Svetlana(gets excited and grins): Wow…that’s an awesome news….Really Ishana, I can’t believe you did the job…..I’m really impressed with you…but plan will be completely successful only when Om will marry you.

Ishana: uh….I just want to know when will I get my 20 Crores.
Svetlana(grinning): Once you marry Om…you will get your 20 Crores.
Ishana: But how will I convince Om to marry me so soon???
Svetlana: It’s not my job to tell you that…You are smart…you can think it yourself.
Ishana: Okay…fine.
Svetlana: Okay…Bye….but think fast (Svetlana cuts the call)
Ishana throws her phone on the ground in anger. She breaks down. Ishana recalls her first meeting Omkara and their therapy sessions.

Ishana(monologue): What are you doing Ishana??…Omkara was already broken from inside all these years….He again learnt to smile coz of me, but when he’ll know my truth….he’ll break completely….…No, I can’t do all this… I have to tell all the truth to Omkara…..I can’t let him and his family get destroyed by Svetlana….I’ll not let it happen….and for that, even if I have to destroy myself and my family….then also I’ll not stop.

(Ishana again wipes her tears….Saathiya song plays)

Scene 2(In Tej’s Office): Tej is sitting in his Chamber. Svetlana enters.
Tej(seeing Svetlana): Oh…Svetlana…how are you??
Svetlana(smirking): What happened Tej?? Why you called me here in your office?
Tej: uh…I wanted to talk to you about something.

Svetlana(suspiciously): about what??
Tej: About our marriage…you know, in few days…I’ll give divorce to Jhanvi…then I can marry you.
Svetlana(smirking): Oh….I understood what you want to talk about. You want to ask me where we’ll go in Honeymoon after marriage, right?? Tej…It doesn’t matters to me, where will you take me….but..if you really want to consider my choice then,….I really want to see Paris…you know, It’s called City of Romance.
Tej: uh…Svetlana…you are not understanding…..I can’t marry you.
Svetlana: uh..what…what did you said??
Tej: I said..I can’t marry you Svetlana.

Svetlana(shocked): what?? What?? You are joking right??
Tej(grinning): No Svetlana…I’m serious…I’m dead serious.
Svetlana(shocked: But…but…what about our love…we love each other.
Tej: Svetlana, try to understand…I love you…but more than you…I love my business and this Oberoi empire….If I’ll marry you then this my stocks will go down and I’ll suffer loss in Business.
Svetlana(furiously): You should have thought of these things before Tej.
Tej: I thought about it and I thought I’ll handle it…but from few months, my company is going in loss and Shivaye has gone ahead of me in Business…Marrying you will result in more loss of my company and I can’t take that risk.
Svetlana(furiously): I can’t believe it…you are giving me this stupid excuse…what if you would have married me and then your company had suffered loss….then would you have left me for your Business.

Tej(smiling): Of course I would have…Tej Singh Oberoi is first of all a Business man and then a human being..For my business, I can stoop to any level.
Svetlana(furiously): Tej..I’ve never seen a more disgusting person than you….
Tej(grinning): Oh really?? Then go and watch your face in the mirror…Don’t act like you are a saint Svetlana…You were marrying me coz of my money and Oberoi surname and not coz you are in love with me or something…First you wanted to trap my son Omkara in your love and then you dumped him for me….Don’t think I’m a fool…but…if you want…you can remain as my mistress…I don’t have any problem with that.
Svetlana(furiously): Tej, I swear I’ll kill you.

Tej(arrogantly): Hold your tongue Svetlana….you are talking to Tej Singh Oberoi !!!
Svetlana(furiously): I know very well who you are, but you don’t know who am I…Tej…. I’ll destroy you and your family completely.
Tej(seething): Get out!!!!
Svetlana(furiously): You start counting your days Tej…I’m not going to leave you and your family…..I’ll break this Oberoi family completely…that you’ll never be able to fix it up.
Tej(shouts in anger): GET OUT OF MY OFFICE!!!!
Svetlana(smirks and says): I’m going Tej…don’t raise your Blood Pressure.

Svetlana gets out of Tej’s Chamber.

Svetlana(thinking): My whole hard work went in vain…I should have understood that Tej is a jerk…He can never me…I was a fool to leave Om for him…Now my only hope is Ishana….I have to somehow get Om and Ishana married and make her enter in the Oberoi mansion as soon as possible.

To Be Continued…..

No Precap…

Thanks for reading…..I hope you all liked this episode…. Appreciation and criticism, both are welcome…Plz comment and give your views. I’ll update my next episode on 23rd April.

19 comments

  1. Samm

    Samm

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    nice one luna 🙂 i think you should deliver all surprises in one episode and then continue to develop the emotional part accordingly. when all the suspense is out at once, it might appear not so thrilling at the moment, but reading he reactions of each and every character and how it affected them might be a better option than reading about how it all came about 🙂 it’s just my point of view and you may do as you see fit 🙂 waiting for more 🙂

  2. Aarti32

    Aarti32

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    More 6-7 episodes!! It’ll take d whole month of March.. Anyways, plzz post soon n continue wid d flashback 😞😞

  3. Kelly

    Please make a summary of the fb you know your story is really good but this much fb make me tired.Please lovely friend consider my advice

  4. Alish

    Alish

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    Hey luna..alright first of all about our opinion then i would say carry on with ur flashbacks only but as u r saying that it would still take 6-7 episodes then by the time u will upload ur episodes it will be too long and a time will come that we readers will lose our intrest..but generally u shoulD carry on with ur flashbacks only on the basis that u will upload sooner as possible..alright dear.
    And about today’s topic it was as wonderfull as it is alwyz been..luved it..upload next epi soon..😊
    And dear yes i remembered now that u are having some personal issues at home thts why u couldn’t upload regularly..is evrythng alright..!! U can share with me as a friend..pm me if u have not any issue..😘

  5. Well wisher

    Pls go to present
    Or post all the flashback episodes in a day or two
    Or finish the flashback in one episode
    Pls pls pls.🙏🙏

  6. Ruksy

    Ruksy

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    You should continue the way you want to because it’s your ff. When we want something to happen on TV and it doesn’t happen our way we still watch it because we know whatever they show we enjoy. So ffs should run the way the writer wants. Even if there is a point in a tv show or ff that we don’t enjoy that time passes. To be honest I’m loving your current story and all the revelations. Don’t kill the enjoyment by forcing the suspense all in one update.

  7. Ishana24

    Ishana24

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    Superb update..u can continue with the flashback because I too can realise there are more to go and I know you don’t want any loop hole in your story..juz go ahead,dear..

  8. nikitajai

    Hii dear… Update is nice… Plz summaries your flash back episodes in one or two long updates to finish the flash back journey….
    Eagerly waiting for the next update…

  9. Pratha

    Pratha

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    Luna u came with a bang n I really don’t have any problem with continuation of d flashbacks. U can cont. with it till u want, I just want to read ur ff as I’m loving d current flashbacks n I really want to know what happened 8 years ago bcoz as ur title says 8 YEARS later so for that we have 2 know what had happened 8 years ago…
    So Cont soon n Pl. try 2 post regularly or with one day gap….
    Lots of love 2 u💓💓💓
    Love
    Pratha

  10. Ankita

    Amazing update… plz continue the way you want… Eagerly waiting for the next episode… post soon…

  11. Renimarenju

    Renimarenju

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    Luna…So gud 2 see ur ff’s update……The episode was nice , specially ishkara…..no words 2 describe it as u expressed it damn beautiful…..Ok…abt ur question on flash back……After reading this one , i think certainly it’s necessary 2 show the flash back within few episodes….. So i have no offence on it……But the thing is luna, many people finds difficult 2 connect with present and flash back…..And u are telling abt 6 or 7 episodes which means there may be a chance that some readers may lost their patience…….Any ways i don’t have a prblm for it as 2 show the story in progress , the creativity of author matters a lot…..And u can come with flash back on 6 or 7 episodes, but u have 2 satisfy reader’s demands…..I mean 2 say u can certainly write , but in every sundays u should try ur level best 2 post……Because the long gap may create more confusions for readers, that’s what i think…..Else if u don’t have choice 2 update @ every weekends, I think u have 2 make updates long and may be that will work, it’s just my suggestion only…..Obviously ur writing skills are amazing and i know u will do complete justice 2 ur ff…… Miss critic, now it’s totally upon ur preference and take ur own time and then decide
    what u have 2 do……Being a reader and friend am always ready 2 read it…..and comment…..Bye….dear

  12. Ghosha

    Luna…write your ff in the way u want. U might be having a story and the way to present it already in your mind..write according to it..otherwise we wont get the satisfaction. It will be boring some one narrating the whole story in one episode..the only thing is update your ff often. The delay between the episodes make the readers to lose the connection. Please write the story the way u planned it. It is only 5 or 6 episodes more…rest ur wish..

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