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Dil se bandhi ekk dorr by Vrushy and Hales (Chapter 1)

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Hello Everyone.
Chapter 1
The little angel.

Laughter like bells chiming woke Naira from her sleep. She smiled softly still keeping her eyes closed. The bed started bouncing up and down. Still she kept her eyes closed, hiding her smile. Then she was tickled by small soft hands and she finally relented. This was a routine for them. Everyday she woke up like this. She placed her arms around the warm soft body of cuteness and hugged it to her. Again the chiming laughter rang out.

“Mumma wakeup !!” the little angel said.

Naira lifted the almost weightless cuteness up and then nuzzled at her neck making her most favourite sound chime out again.

“Mumma I am hungry.” the little one said.

“Ok ok i am getting up.” Naira cooed into her neck.

Naira looked at her world, her life jumping up and down again on the bed and smiled affectionately. The cute little 4 and half years old.

Oops !! Not 4 and half. If the little terror heard that, she will become furious and will stubbornly say that she is almost five years old showing up all five fingers of her right hand.

Naira got up as the blabbering baby voice went on and on.

Kaira was talking non stop about how her day was going to be. Yes, Naira had named her daughter kaira as no matter how bad her past was, the name always brought a smile on her face.

Her daughter got that non stop talking habit from Naira. Though most of her words were not correctly pronounced or were not clear.

Naira took her little angel in her arms and carried her to the kitchen after washing both their faces and brushing. In the kitchen they had a routine. Both of them will make break fast together.

Naira was taking out utensils and the ingredients to make breakfast while kaira was sitting on the slab n watching. The maid offered her that she will make the breakfast ,but naira refused saying, “My princess likes to eat her favourite dish made by her mumma only !!”.

Listening to this kaira exclaimed with joy,
“wow mumma !! My fav dish !! That means kachori ?!!”

Naira paused for a second as she got some flashes when she heard the same tone of saying kachori. Memories are hard to let go off, she thought.

Naira wards of those thoughts n says “Yes,kaira your favourite kachoris”

Naira made kachoris while Kaira sitting on the kitchen counter drew smily faces on them using ketchup. The smily faces were wobbly and distorted but still cute.

Naira had her own dance academy where several instructors worked under her and conducted different batches of various dance forms. Being an independent woman since the starting she had left Singhania sadan when kaira was born. As she didnt want her family to bear the taunts and sympathy glares of the society. She had rented a small flat and started doing a job as a waitress.

Soon she had earned money to start up her academy and thus now she owned a lavish penthouse as well as her dance academy.She was wealthy today, and all because of her hardwork and ambitions.

That day Naira had taken leave to take Kaira to the hospital. Kaira was a pre-mature baby,and had to be kept in incubator for few days after birth and then kept in hospital for two weeks. She was always falling sick much to Naira’s distress.

Kaira caught pneumonia and infection soon after she was born and it was an intense month with treatment and recovery. Then it was found that her heart was not fully formed so disgnosis after diagnosis were done. Finally the doctor concluded that it was the after effect of being born pre maturely and they assured that it will become okay with time. But then it didn’t become okay with time.

Naira had been visiting each and every doctor in India to cure her daughter. But all of them had given up. She was angry as no medical science was able to find a cure for her daughters disease.

The only sunlight she got on these dark days was because of her bhai, Naksh who being a doctor himself had found out a doctor in London who was ready to do the surgery. The doctor Naksh had found was very well know and also he had done many such successful surgeries. Naira and kaira were supossed to leave for london after 20 days. But before that she needed to meet her doctor in Udaipur for the last time to make sure that kaira was fit to travel.

Naira had already lost one of the most important person in her life four years ago. She wasn’t strong enough to loose kaira now. She had her fingers crossed and hope for everything to get better soon.

Precap : Where is Karthik ?!!
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So this is the surprise I was talking about. Its a new FF. Its a collab work of mine and Hales. Both of us had this similar plot and story in our minds and thus we have come together to write this.

We hope that you like this story and shower your love and appreciation on us as you have been doing on our individual FF’s as well. Do tell us what do you think about it.

Also in this FF Naksh is a doctor by profession.

Do comment. Keep smiling and keep watching Yrkkh !!

57 Comments
  1. it’s amazing….I love ur surprise hales n vrushy……again one new plot….its interesting…..naira is already mumma of cute little girl ….update soon…can’t wait to read next

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      We will post next Chapter soon.

    2. Hales

      Thnk u yr! We r glad u liked it😉

  2. Vinni05

    Wow lovely surprise just awsome
    Can’t wait for next
    Wat happens to kartik

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Your question will be answered in the next Chapter.
      We will post that Chapter soon.

  3. Fantastic

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂

  4. Wow This is surely a lovely surprise as i have loved both of your individual ff’s.
    Nice start.. Waiting for the next part and story to unfold and Kaira the little girl was so cute just as her name.. Loved it!!

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      We will post the next Chapter soon.

    2. Hales

      Ayesha m so glad yr u liked it! N m more happy tht u liked this surprise…next one comming soon😘☺

  5. Fenil

    Awesome Story line.
    I loved it….Title of story also meaningful .
    Thank U So Much for this Vrushy and Hales.

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked the story as well as the title !!

    2. Hales

      Aww thnks to u yr for reading n sharing ur veiws n liking our style of writing! ☺😉

  6. Lasyashree.10

    amazing…both of you…vrushyand hales di….my favorite writes…..thanks ah lot for such a nice combopack……lovedit to the core!!!

    and may god blss u both all my happy wishes to you!!

    and ya…whereis karthik? any painfulpast to naira with karthik??
    please…reveal fast….i’ll die with curiosity

    and any ways….love you both!!

    great work…by greatwriters….

    love youlove you lve youlove you…tothe core!

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      All your questions will be answered in the upcoming Chapters. We will post that Chapter soon.
      Me and hales also love you a lot lasya !!

    2. Hales

      Lasya u r sister to me dear! U r very close to me n vrushy both… we luv u too! M so so glad u liked it!😉

      1. Lasyashree.10

        And Di!! I know that😎 And it’s a great surprise you bath together…thanks ah lot for this yaa!!😍

  7. Whoa… awesome plot..
    Where is Kartik… same question from me too..
    Cant wait for your next update dear

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Your question will be answered in the next Chapter.
      We will post the next Chapter soon !!

  8. It was very nice. Pls pls pls update soon

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      We will post the next Chapter soon.

  9. Wow brush this is amazing!!!
    Please post the next episode soon!!!

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      We will post next Chapter soon.

  10. What a bond you both have keep up the gud work no words as always it was mind blowing fabulous and hope to see ur next part soon when r u going to upload it all three …hope u understand tc luv u both stay blessed

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Well yeah, hales is like a bestie to me.
      Glad that you liked it.
      We will post next Chapter soon !!

    2. Hales

      Thnk u so much! Glad u r liking it
      N yes vrushy is such a sweetheart tht we become so close frnds …besties in no tym! Hopefully this ff will rock!😉

  11. ok so mine 2 favourite writer of tu r togeather nd writimg a ff.. i lovedthis to core..update next soon

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Will post next Chapter soon !!

    2. Hales

      Aww this means a lot! Hopefulky we will stand up to ur expectations😉

  12. Rosa18

    Awsome Hales dii and Vrushy dii there could be no better surprise than u both starting a ff together btw ur ff was very heart touching and nairas condition brought tears to eyes waiting 4 the next chapter..

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      We will post next Chapter soon !!

    2. Hales

      Thnk u so much rosa!😘

  13. Wow it’s amazing episode…..and the new story line…I liked it so much…….it is combination of vrushy and hales……so we are expecting more guys all the best…just rock…..and the 1 st episode was fabulous

    1. Hales

      Thnk u! Hopefully we will stand up to all ur expectations!😉

  14. Reyaa

    U guys nailed it …. update nxt part soon eagerly waiting …. love it n love u both so best of luck

    1. Hales

      Thnk u so much reyaa ..we r so happy u liked it ☺

  15. Wow! Loved it. Very excited to read a ff by two of you. Eagerly waiting for the next part…..

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      Even we are excited to write a FF together.
      We will post the next Chapter soon !!

    2. Hales

      Thnk u …even vrushy n me r equally excited to write it together!m glad u r liking it😉

  16. This is just wow 😍Loved it
    Plz update soon

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      We willl post the next Chapter soon !!

  17. Shesha

    Wow vrushy dii this is amazing… loving the storyline
    Can’t wait for the next part

    1. Vrushy

      Thaank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      We will post the next Chapter soon.

  18. Nice start Vrushy and Hales…
    Keep going…..
    I am sure that Karthik and Naira are divorced….
    Post the next one soon…

    1. Hales

      Thnk u ….to know tht plz keep reading the ff😉☺

  19. Twana

    Aree a new one!!!
    Nice start Vrushy n Hales!!!
    Keep it up!!
    AWSOME writings!
    Will surely find a time to read the missed chapters of ur Last ff!!

    1. Hales

      Thnk u so much! M so glad u liked it!☺😉

  20. Anyan

    wow loved it very exited for nxt part..
    And u 2 r my fab writers
    update asap..

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      We will post next Chapter soon !!

  21. DI,BEAUTIFUL STORY LINE!!!TNXS TO BOTH OF U FOR PRESENTING THE [email protected] POST THE NEXT [email protected] CAN’T WAIT FOR THAT.LUV U BOTH…!!!

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      We will post the next Chapter soon.

  22. Soumya85

    Omg it was awesome i love ur surprise…u both r superb writer sorry I was not able to comment on ur both personal ffs but i will surely comment here

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.

  23. Sethidisha002

    plz bring kartik back

    1. Vrushy

      You will get karthik in the upcoming chapters.

  24. Tvfan1

    This is amazing!!!
    A great work from great writers
    Sorry for the late comment
    It’s Sooooo interesting
    Do post next chapters soon!!

    1. Vrushy

      Thank you 🙂
      Glad that you liked it.
      We will post next chapter soon !!

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