DIL H TUMHARA (Episode 4)

Episode-4 DIL H TUMHARA

ITS morning time…….Atharv happy birthday……….

vividha prepares gajar ka halwa and buys some White lily for Atharv….. reach her office early to him surprise.

viv: i should decorate his cabin…. with flowers, light and ballons…… he will be surprise(excited)
and heart shaped cake…….today I will tell him that I love him…….

athv: athrv enter office everyone wish him happy birthday and good morning……

viv: she sees him and hides….. it for U my Atharv.

athv: he enter the room who……… hmm how did that…….. he moves toward his chiar and sits and see card there.

best wish to you for birthday, live long your childhood frnd vividha. he open box and see cake… happy birthday to you.

viv: surprise happy birthday Atharv, she hugs him….. did u like it.

ath: you did…… it all this bakwas…… why? tell me why? gets angry……(gets some flashes)

he began to throw things here and there……. lights, ballon, flowers…….

viv: calm down Atharv please….. what happened to…….

ath: stup!!! and throw her away she falls down, comes back to table, smash cake on walls.

viv: what happened him? why is reacting so weired…… she gets up and ask atharv to calm down……

ath: why you did all this…. he smash punsh on glass table……. and glass smash into pieces……

viv: Atharv sorry!! gets slapped….(she shocked) every one watch this.

ath: get out from here right now……. you are fired, just go away..

viv: shocked and cries……. Ath……ar…v..(she runs away from there)

sujata who is standing out sees vividha running and crying(heavliy) she stops her..

suj: kya whoa aap itna ro kyu rahi…..{what happened vividha why are U cry so much) tell me.

viv: she hugs sujata tightly….chachi…….till crying….

suj: bas bas……. aaram se,aap mujhe batiye jya hua, aur ye choot kaise lagi aap ko…( ok..ok calm down, tell me happened to u abd did got this cut)

viv: chachi….. wooooo……Ath…arv….cries again and hugs sujata…..(sorry to make you cry shivani)

suj: (shocke) atharv……. what did he do? tell me whole matter and take vividha inside…gives her water and bring first Aid…….

viv: (drinks water) and tells very thing to sujata…….

suj: (shocked) really…. I’m sorry beta from his side…..she joins her hands.

viv: no…. chachi don’t embrace me…….

suj: beta behind this is their is very evil past of Atharv……..

viv: what Chachi……? kya…

suj: beta ye baat 5 saal purani h…..( this is five year ago incidence)

My Atharv was like others happy, jolly, social but that incidence changed his life completly…….

he meet her In Indian Talent Show where he meet kajal his co-paticipant…… they shared the great bonding…..flashback………

Sets Shift to Delhi music Show………..

BIg stage semi finale anchor………. last six contenset are Atharv sujata, pushap Shina, priya deshmukh, Shena gupta, pooja kaur and Kajal Sharam……
today rwo of the will be eliminated from finale race…. are you ready for final performance before finale…..and last duet round….. audience shout…..yeah…….

All perform one by one………..anc: atlast put your hand to gather for final performance before finale….. lets welcome……
queen of sur and beauty…. kajal sharma……. and dream man of each girl, future star Atharv sujata… everyone clap…….

they sing song……. chori kiya re jiya……. performance ends…… audience once more…..once more……juges apreciate them……

now the time have come…… when we all ger are our finalist…….. hearbeat….tone…(dhak.dak..dhak…dak.)
first name is beauty quuen kajol sharma( she jumps and hugs Atharv and then everyone and thanks audience)
priya , Shena, pooja kaur……. last person who is going to finale is…….. any guess……. audience shouts pushap….. someshout Atharv..
wooo naam ha…….ladkiyo ke dil a raj kumar, dreamman(like dreamgirl) future star Atharv Sujata…….everyone congrats him and he hugs kajal….. emotional…

After rwo days welcome to…….. welcome to Indian talent show finale……. All are welcomed and perform……. time to results……

hello guys its time to announce the winner of talent hunt show………4-shena., 3 priya…… now how is the winner its atharv or kajal……..

and the winner is dreamman and future star atharv Sujata……. he falls down on his knees and cry……. kajol goes toward him and calm him down and congrats and hug each each other………….. he get his prize money and car……. over the time kajal and Atharv gets top of feats and noteable singer…….

Ath: kajal I love u, will u marry me…

kaj: yes i do love u and I will marry you…..

suj: i’m very happy for my atharv, now you can chnage him..

kaj: don’t worry maa, i will bring him in line.

after few days their engagement gets fix on Atharv birthday……..(he plans to revile this in media after enagment)

days pass like that and one day gets Father diary……. he reads it…. and gets to now that his father wanted to estabilsh top dairy industries….

ath: gtes emotional and says papa I will fullfill your dream…….

suj: beta magar you are so well established they why ? leave all this.

ath: no…….. ma’am i will make dada dream come true….. i will not let his dream shatter……….your are with me na maa……

suj: yes…beta(gets emotional) proud of my son( they hugs)

next day he with kajal and convey his dream………

kaj: are you made(tensed) you will leave all this…. name, fame, money, power everything just to come that dudh wala…. what the hell atharv.

ath: try to understand this is my father dream…… i want complete this why don’t you understand……

kaj: why don’t you understand everyone is not so lucky how earn so much uch appreciation from people…… you have goon mad atharv.

ath: i need your support…..please understand… he hugs her…. you i love you so much…please..(hugs her tightly)

kaj: thinks something and breaks hugs okk…. do it…. I’m with you…

time pass and finally day comes……. Atharv birthday and his enagement with kajal…… his phone rings….. Atharv: yes( yr aap boliye) ok done this will be my last concert
okk done…….. he waits for kajal and he doesn’t turn up…….

then shreya: immediately turn the tv…… athrv breaks into pieces……..he cries…… News: india talent show runner up or famous singer kajal sharma and jaidev prakash(famous) are soon going to marry everyone shocked………….he cries….. and says why….. its happen with me only….
first my dadi left me, than my papa left and now she betrayed me, why did you play such games with me answer me good.

vividha and sujata eyes are filled with tears (she get shocked) then what happened chachi…….

my Atharv shattered into pieces after never able to recover aur kuch aaisa hua……..

kuch at concert he performing for the last time actually kajal and jaidev celebration…. Atharv sees her and starts kya hua tera wada wo kasam wo irada.(md rafi)
concert ends Athrv goes to convience kajal…..

kajal: what did you think that I will spend my life with dudhwala……..

ath:I will work hard I will make this one the best in country….

kajal: everyone dreams same atharv, now leave me my husband waiting for me,(holds her hand) she turns and slap Atharv and ush to ground….. he(ath) gets shocked by all this.. he again breaks into pieces……….. car horns……. they come(main sence) they both see…

viv: Atharv ke gham ko dekh kr aab mujhe iss aur zada pyaar ho gaya h{ seeing his pain now love him more)

suj:(shocked) what do you love my atharv really……..vividha will you marry my mad son please…(she pleads her)

viv: chachi please don’t cahchi, I promise I will change this mr Sadiyal sujata to my Atharv sujata….. its promise of Vividha Atharv sujata……

suj:(shocked and turns toward her) sachi m aap….. really you are….(she nods her head postivily her down due to shyness) sujata smiles they hug each other….

viv: thank u chachi they both tears thier eyes….. they wipe their tear….. chachi will leave after some time….can stay for time in your terrace…… sujata leaves……

viv: love u mr sadiya sujata…….. she smiles and remember atharv…..

PRECAPE: they both have hug and kal hona ho(heart beat) what happening to me………..

sorry for bieng late busy……….. firstly because of my entrance test preparation which is 7,14 and 20 may. so busy preparing and yes some personal issue which disturbed me as well as my studies……… thanks for your support and love to both My FF fiction hope you gonna like this part too……please comment it boast up my confident……. especailly to silent readers……

21 comments

  1. ShaSha

    One of the best episodes, just loved it…no words. Hope to read the next episode very soon😍

    • RAOne

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      thanks for your support glad you liked it keep [email protected]

  2. aisha

    wow what a amazing flashback Hats off to your imagination loved it but felt bad with what atharva did with vividha but there are ups and downs in every relationship and it works amazing yaar keep it up

    • RAOne

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      thanks for your episode your keep reading, you know to do something big you need give small pain. something big is comming… read the precap, you even know i can see her(Shivani) in [email protected]

  3. Simran

    Really..Really..Superb..Awesome..Flash back also nice.i feel sad for vividha what atharv did to her.Hope our Vivi will bring back atharv sujata.ur way of thinking is amazing dear.

    • RAOne

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  4. Sandy

    Nice way of expressing yaar but I have a request that don’t make atharv beat or push vivi when he is angry .I can understand that u have made it to show that atharv hates to celebrate his b’day because of his fb but his character can never be replaced .He respects each and every girl and respects their views and thoughts . Plz don’t be angry with my suggestion because I really respect atharv’s character so much(even though it is fiction).I hope that u understand it 😊.
    Keep writing dear and all the best for ur exams 😊

    • RAOne

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      yes I know about Vikram character and his role is inspiration for me……. what he did was to bring something big(you even know i can’t see Shivani in pain) thanks for [email protected]

  5. Sunanda12345

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    Superbbbbb raone…..πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ
    Future star atharv sujata i just luved that word😍😍😍😍😍
    Very emotional episode also😒😒😒😒😒

    • RAOne

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      thanks for support keep reading and keep [email protected]

  6. Sweety

    SuperbπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ..Good work…I don’t want to see atharv harming vividha.really sad for vividha.Fb is so emotional..Now vividha will start her work to bring back our atharv sujata.

    • RAOne

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      thanks for your your support keep reading……to get something big small sacrifice are always [email protected]

  7. Diya

    dear sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry a bigwala sorry.yes yes I know I’m late.vo exam😒……
    but it was superb.fabulous……awww πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’– really liked it dear.our vitharvπŸ‘

    • RAOne

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      thanks for your support buddy……… I do understand …… studies should be given more priorties than anyother things……@diya

  8. Sunanda12345

    Sunanda12345

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    Hi raone I need a help from you. When iam posting my ff it’s get that “134 request your entity is very large. Wt it means????
    I written a short story not tooo long plsss help me raone plsssss

  9. Sunanda12345

    Sunanda12345

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    Raone mystery network is very slow.can u plss say here wt you typed in wall post. I can’t see anything on my wallpost bcoz of slow network

  10. Linah

    U have quite a great imagination and the way you put it into writing is just fabulous. I enjoyed all the episodes, your characters r well portrayed, keep up this gud work n please upload nxt episode soon am eagerly waiting.

    • RAOne

      RAOne

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      glad u liked the episode thanks for your support….have posted my sirf tum hi ho today…. after it is posted u can enjoy [email protected]

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