Twinj: Bakhuda Tumhi Ho (Episode:33)

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Bakhuda Tumhi Ho-
Episode:33
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For a week, the donor hunt continued. Checking the list of already existing donors, calling friends, relatives, probing the hospital and almost every attempt was going on but no success. Once or twice, they found an almost same sample but it was around 30% differences which would create reactions in future.
Everyone was gathered at Kunj’s mansion, sitting in the hall and thinking what to do next when the phone rang.
“I’ll see.” Twinkle said and got up to receive the call.
“Twinkle is it you?” Dr. Ragini’s voice came from other end.
“Yes doctor any problem?” Twinkle asked panicking.
“Twinkle come to the hospital fast! It’s urgent!”
“Uh, OK doctor! I’ll be there soon.” She assured before hanging up.
Almost everyone rushed to Twinkle. “What happened Twinkle? Who was it?” Rishab asked in desperation.
“It was from hospital. Dr. Ragini asked me to come fast! It’s urgent!” Twinkle answered in dilemma.
“That means they found a donor!” Yuvraj exclaimed happily jumping to the conclusion on which Twinkle rolled her eyes.
“Congratulations! Finally! We’ve accomplished.” Rishab said contently before hugging Yuvraj and started making plans for celebration.
“Guys stop!” Twinkle shouted irritably. “What’s this huh? Doctor clearly stated it’s an emergency!”
“Maybe she wants to surprise you!” Disha said softly and Twinkle sighed.
“Don’t assume things guys because I don’t want to see disappointment on your faces later!”
“Bhabhi don’t worry! We’d never be disappointed as long as you’re with us happy and healthy.” Arohi spoke patting Twinkle’s shoulder.
Twinkle flashed a genuine smile. “That’s so sweet of you guys. Now I’ve to get going. Ask Kunj to wait for me at home, no need of coming there.” With those words she picked up her phone and clutch before walking out with fast beating heart.
***

The doctor was pacing back and forth in her cabin when Twinkle arrived. “What happened Dr? Is everything alright?”
“Twinkle you need to know this.” Saying this, doctor handed over an envelope to Twinkle.
The envelope had no date, no address and not even the sender’s name on it. She opened it and started reading very cautiously.
“Hello doctor,
I read in the newspaper, the request you had mentioned for a donor and I’m lucky enough to have the same blood group and meet the other requirements as well but I’m stuck in some personal problems because of which I can’t donate stem cells up til the end of the month. If you find any donor up till then, well and good but if not, I wanted to tell you, I’ll be there.
And I don’t want anything in return as I’ve seen someone very close to me suffering from this deadly disease and I just want to help.
You can trust me. I won’t back off.
Thank you.”
Twinkle placed the letter back on the table with trembling hands. “What is this?” It took time for her to absorb whatever she just read.
“What I’m concerned is… What if this is a prank? What if we stop searching a donor and he doesn’t show up? And Twinkle imagine how drained you’d be at the end of the month! Will it be OK to…”
“No doctor! My heart says it’s not a joke. How can anybody make a joke out of my disease? I don’t believe anyone can be so insensitive to do this!”
“Let’s just hope for the best Twinkle! But still I’d suggest to keep searching for the donor.”
“Ya! You’re right but for now this is the only ray of hope I’ve now- an anonymous letter!”
***

Twinkle went home with the letter and as expected everyone including Kunj was waiting for her. She after approaching them showed that mysterious letter before explaining the whole story.
“How insensitive!” Yuvraj exclaimed grimacing. “That person can save Twinkle but says he won’t come just because of some personal work!”
Kunj sighed. “Yuvi! Few days ago, you hated Twinkle for not donating blood to me right? But you see what a big reason she had! We can’t judge people without knowing their side of the story.”
“Geez thanks for bringing my guilt back! I apologized from Twinkle and she forgave me right?” He questioned looking at Twinkle with hope earning a nod with an assuring smile from her.
“One minute Kunj!” It was Rishab to chimed. “You mean we should believe this?” He asked showing the letter. “An anonymous letter with no name, address, nothing!”
“Hope is all we’ve now Rishab and I’m not asking you all to stop searching for donor but… What if we don’t find one? We’ve been searching for more than a week but no success right? What if we don’t find one for a complete month? Then, this is all we’ve got! At least he won’t betray us!”
“How’re you so sure bhai that he won’t back off?” Arohi asked.
“Because I’ve a feeling inside that this is the one person on which we CAN rely on.”
“I’m with Kunj.” Twinkle announced while sitting on the arm of chair, Kunj was sitting in. “Listen guys! We should thank Lord for sending this mystery man to solve our problem. We’ll keep searching for a donor and if we don’t find one, we’ve an option. OK?” Twinkle added on which everyone nodded convincingly while Kunj wrapped his arm around her shoulder with a confident smile.
“Ok so tonight, everyone is having dinner and party at my house.” Kunj declared.
All of them exchanged surprising glances but Kunj continued. “For that there are two reasons. One is that we found a donor and second is… It’s been a really long time since we’ve been together and who knows when we all meet again. So let’s just celebrate together and have a happy time putting a-side all the worries, pain and whatever happened in the past few days. And celebrate!” Hearing his words everyone agreed merrily.
At night, all of them enjoyed, laughed and cheered their hearts which were devoid of relief from a long time. They were linked to each other by something unexplainable. One’s bruise hurt all of them and one’s happiness cheered all of them! Because all you need is a shoulder to rely on. And this is what we call family and friends!
***
In the morning, all of them were a mess. YuviSha somehow adjusted on the living room couch! But one thing was common and that was the smile of satisfaction on their faces. Tears of happiness washing your cheeks is the best thing that can happen in life. Twinkle opened her eyes and glanced around her house which was looking horrific!
Yesterday Yuvraj threw some curry on Rishab and the curry fight started with them running with food items behind each other in the whole house and Kunj watching it like an interesting cricket match instead of stopping them.
She got up tying her hair in a rough bun and went to waking up each of them. “Yaar we look hideous!” Yuvraj exclaimed combing his hair through his fingers.
“NOT worse than my home!” Twinkle replied angrily when all looked around the house smiling sheepishly. Being a woman, how long could she ignore that!
“Don’t worry we’ll clean it.” Disha said smiling.
“No need the maids will do it. Now go and freshen up yourselves.” Saying this, she walked to her room for freshening up herself.
After coming out of washroom she called out Kunj while he was lost in deep thoughts. “Kunj! Help me out.”
He nodded absentmindedly walking to the dressing table and filled her hairline with vermilion, made her wear mangalsutra and earrings. He pulled her moist hair to a side to tie the dori of her kurti.
She felt so nice, so complete as his hands moved pleasantly over her back.
All the time, Twinkle kept her eyes on Kunj through mirror who was still lost in his own world. He just followed her words like she said but didn’t even look at her.
“It’s done.” He smiled which wasn’t reaching his eyes and was about to go when Twinkle held his wrist.
“Kunj! When we’ve decided to trust this, then why not completely. I trust you. You won’t let any harm come to me. Then why can’t you trust me enough?” She asked dejectedly.
“Twinkle!” He said softly cupping her face and realized that he was losing Twinkle’s trust because of his bizarre actions and unusual behavior. He sighed deeply before continuing. “OK! I’ve to tell you something.”
“What?” She asked confused.
“I… I don’t think we’ll be able to find a donor in India so I was thinking to go abroad and meet some of the acquaintances there and talk about this. I’m sure it’ll…”
“No Kunj! Don’t lose hope like this and please… Don’t talk about leaving me.” She pleaded with teary eyes. “I’ve lost you so many times not again… Please!” She cried.
He was shattered to see her in this state. “Twinkle relax! Calm down please! I’m doing this for you! For us!”
“But…”
“Please Twinkle! I need your support. And… You’ve no idea how desperately I want to take you with me but if we change the doctor now, then it’ll be difficult for you to cope up. And I’ll be back even before you miss me.” He said hoping she’d understand. “Twinkle if there had been some other option, I wouldn’t have said anything but there isn’t. Please!” He paused to wipe her tears before adding. “If you say no, I won’t go but you’ve to agree. For yourself, for me.”
“No Kunj!” She bellowed. “This is my final decision! You won’t go anywhere!” Her lips were trembling as she said latter. “And if you do, I swear I’ll do something to myself.”
“Twinkle! Are you out of your mind!” Kunj exclaimed angrily. “How can you…”
“I can’t lose you again.” She said feebly. “And if I’m being selfish, then so be it!” She said and ran downstairs.
Kunj stood there stunned and astounded. He had never expected Twinkle to react so violently but the hope of finding the donor outside India had clouded his senses.
‘I’ve decided Twinkle, I’ll go. I won’t leave any stone unturned in trying to save you! It’s difficult to wait, but worse to regret! Even if it means going against your wishes.’
***

Twinkle didn’t tell anyone down there about her conversation with Kunj. ‘When no one is going anywhere, what’s the need of spoiling everyone’s mood without a reason?’ She explained to herself.
After some minutes Kunj also joined them and silently had breakfast like nothing happened. But no one knew what was going on in his mind. After breakfast, everyone left for their respective homes and Twinkle went upstairs to her room. She opened the wardrobe and caressed a book with love. She smiled at the silly things written in it. She heard Kunj cleared his throat and abruptly closed that book and was about to place it back but it was too late. He swiftly snatched it from her.
“What are you hiding? And what’s in it?”
“N… Nothing!” She said turning her head.
“I love the way you stutter and steal your eyes when you lie.” He smirked and put a hand on one side to stop her from escaping.
“L… Like I said nothing.”
“OK then. I’ll see myself!” He shrugged lightly and was about to open it when Twinkle shrieked.
“Fine! Leave the diary. I’ll tell you!” She screeched.
“Good.” He said pulling her cheeks and placed the diary back on it’s place.
“Kunj, I had started writing this diary when I came to know about my cancer. In it, I’ve written things I wanted to do before I die. In case, I don’t live.” She whispered audibly.
He looked at her intently holding her by waist and pulled her in his embrace tightly. “Nothing is happening to you. Soon you’ll be alright and we’ll be doing all these things no matter how crazy it sounds… Together.” He said with so much confidence that for a second she forgot that they were still searching for the donor.
She was overwhelmed with his reply and snuggled in his chest. “Yes Kunj! Soon, everything will be alright.”
***
At night, Twinkle clung tightly onto him afraid that he’d leave. She had lost him so many times because of so many reasons and couldn’t bear that again! Being here, in his arms felt so right, so perfect.
In the morning, Twinkle opened her eyes and saw Kunj’s side empty. She got up, wore her slippers and checked the bathroom but it was bolted from outside. She went downstairs to check the kitchen and living room but he wasn’t there either. Panic went through her veins like an electric wave as she thought, ‘no! Don’t let it be what I’m thinking!’
She ran through the corridors, bedrooms, terrace and every single corner of the house still hoping she’d find him but she didn’t! Defeated, she fraily walked to the room. Her face covered in tears and found a note there which she angrily picked it up. It read,
“Twinkle,
I know you’ll be angry over this betrayal but trust me I had no choice! I couldn’t let anything happen to you. I tried talking to you about this, explaining my point but you wouldn’t listen. I’ve to go Twinkle. Even if I fail, I’ve to try.
Please take care of yourself. I don’t know exactly how much time it’ll need but I’m sure I won’t return empty handed.
-Your, not-so-perfect husband.”
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Thank you very much for reading.
Okay! I know you guys must be mad at me for getting extra ordinary late but actually I wasn’t feeling well at all. Was sick with stomach:/ but now that I was better so thought to update because I didn’t want to test your patience;)
Coming to episode, no comment from my side… I want to read your suggestions so please don’t forget to share your views before leaving this page. Even silent readers are obliged to comment. Next one will be the LAST one of this story which I’ll post depending on the views.
Keep smiling:-)
Love you all<3
Take care!

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56 Comments
  1. Hi Maha di
    Epi was all Happy happppppy nd bit emotional tooo..
    But nice…
    And last episode ??

    End on a happy note only please pleaseeee …
    Don’t make depression, sad , heartbreaking type of ending na di PLEASEEEE

    Post sooooonest

    1. GET WELLL SOOON
      AND POST SOON????????

      1. Maha_Aijaz

        Thank you very much Sunaina for commenting:* Ya! I’ll keep that in mind and hopefully you’d like the ending:)

  2. Hi Maha di really glad to see it episode posted it gives so much happiness to see ur episode posted very awsm episode and I think that kunj will find a donor I feel it might twinkle relative or brother or someone who might be the donor but do pls s keep a happy ending please and post the prologue of the other story immediately after this ff is getting over really Sad as the story is at the end it was really a beitiful journey and I want the other story to be same like this which connectts it to us and I know it would as u have written it _the best writer till date u would be remembered by everyone do as u had given such a beautiful story to us that no one can forget it and do get well soon love u di

  3. Hi Maha di really glad to see it episode posted it gives so much happiness to see ur episode posted very awsm episode and I think that kunj will find a donor I feel it might twinkle relative or brother or someone who might be the donor but do pls s keep a happy ending please and post the prologue of the other story immediately after this ff is getting over really Sad as the story is at the end it was really a beitiful journey and I want the other story to be same like this which connectts it to us and I know it would as u have written it _the best writer till date u would be remembered by everyone do as u had given such a beautiful story to us that no one can forget it and do get well soon love u di u have changed my view toward Pakistan if Pakistan has people like u than it is really a pure country but just because of some people everyone is blamed u have raised the standard of Pakistanis in my eyes and actually di now I feel that sometimes we get love and happiness from people we don’t know how I got happiness from u di i love u

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Hey Sia! First of all are you the same Sia… I mean your logo is changed;) Second of all thank you so much for such kind words:* I’ll be back soon In’shaAllah… Not going anywhere, will keep disturbing you all XD
      Coming to the last part of your comment… I’m actually so happy that I brought a good impact of Pakistani in your mind. And trust me the one who are spreading terrorism belongs to no nation, no culture and no religion. They’re just morons! We all are just like you and you all are just like us. And I’ve made so many friends here from different countries and religions and I’m proud of that.
      Loads of love dear:*

  4. Baby

    maha dii
    loved it fun and emotional
    last the end i donno feeling like something strange i donno plss post soon dii
    loved it m out of words after this
    actually m eager excitement is running but the fear is also running through my viens i donno am w8ing post soon didu love u ?

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you so much dear for commenting:*

  5. hii..its Piya here…actually i had exams so i couldnt comment.. well coming to the episode it was as usual fantastic…..plz end dis story on a happy note..plz plz plz…i want to see our twinj together…

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thanks a lot Piya dear for commenting:* I’ll keep that in mind while writing this ending:)

  6. What an amazing Episode
    I was wondering if kunj could donate the stem cell he had the same blood group right?

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you dear:* Hmmm… You’ve to wait for knowing that;)

  7. Epiosde was amazing and emotional too
    Eager too know that who is that mysterious donor….plz end it on a happy note plz appi..plz a happy ending for this ff plz
    Post the next part soon
    And i m eagerly waiting for ur new story on twinj plz start it also soon plz

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much dear for loving the episode:* Don’t worry I’ll keep your words in mind and yes even I’m so excited for my new story;)

  8. Seriously i am short for words after reading this it was so spectacular
    No need to apologize as health comes first
    Hopefully u will get well soon
    Coming to episode, I don’t know why but somewhere in my heart I think kunj is the one who had given the letter because when he went back to doctors cabin he took more time than he should have taken (previous episode)
    And now also why would not the person write his name and then kunj went saying that he is going abroad I know it sounds a bit stupid and weird bcz I don’t know even if it is possible but let’s see what happens
    Next one would be LAST I am going to miss u very much until u come up with a new ff
    Extremely excited for next hopefully ends on a happy note with twinj together and living a happy life
    Post soon
    Loads of love <3

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you so very much dear for such an amazing words:* I’m truly happy that you all liked it:) Hmmm… Your guess is…! Well you’ve to wait for knowing that wether it’s right or wrong but I assure you the ending will be worth reading:)
      Loads of love<3

  9. Presha

    Awesome
    Loved it

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thanks a lot Presha:*

  10. Plzzz end it on a happy note ??

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Okay Purnima:)

  11. Himanigaur

    Heyy I hope you’re all okay now.. the episode was just awesome.. little late is better than never right.. pls post the next one soon..

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Ya I’m all good now Alhumdulillah:) Thank you so much dear for commenting:*

  12. Really I couldn’t make any guesses regarding the last epi………..I don’t know why I am feeling so much sad……….. maybe because Iam gonna miss this FF very badly……the chap was asusualll amazing………..

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Riya:) Don’t be sad dear:*

  13. Hello maha api…
    I am very sad ? Bcz of last episode ?…
    Epi was perfect ??… But twinj scenes was emotional??…
    And that letter ? part is really a suspense so no guesse about letter…

    API again a request ?… I know I do requests in every cmnt but what to do??????….
    I can’t stop ?? myself…
    Plzzzzzz give twinj romance and twinkle angry ? scene with kunj due to his leaving….

    Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz…… It’s a last request…

    Ok byeee…
    Luv u?…
    Plzzz fulfill my request…
    And MUST give happy ending…

    1. And I forget to say plzzzzz post soon …. Infact as soon as u can Bcz I can’t wait ….
      And LOVELY Api take care of ur self and get well soon perfectly….

      1. Maha_Aijaz

        Thank you very much Anaya for writing such sweet words throughout the story:* I hope you’ll like the ending too:)

  14. Commenting for first time your ff has been a beautiful journey i loved it ?
    No words to explain your writing skills because you are a precious star ?
    Eagerly waiting for post I will wait for your new ff
    Post soon

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Oh! Thank you very much Hina for reading and writing such kind words:) It truly means a lot:*

  15. An Amazing & Touching Story it is!

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thanks a lot Shaveerkti:)

  16. Wowww. Its amazing. Mwhy do i feel that kunj is the anonymous donor.
    Please post soon and dont show sad ending.
    Please ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Lala:) You’ve to wait for the confirmation of your guess dear:*

  17. hey Maha
    it was superb but there is something fishy like
    all of sudden kisi ka letter send krna …
    kunj ka abroad jana…..
    u said next will be last but ab jb tumne diary wala scene dikhaya h toh twinkle jo kch crazy krna chahti h uske bare me toh hme pta chalna chaiye or twinj milke Kre woh sub.
    or twinj ka romance bhi chaiye ….
    or happy ending krna plzzzzzzz
    bs yhi suggestion h mere
    Post next soon
    Luv u & take care

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you Yashika dear. Don’t worry about the ending:) hopefully you’ll like it;)

  18. Amazing update

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you:)

  19. Vibhu

    Maha dear, ❤?
    it was really very beautiful. The way kunj , Yuvisha, Aarohi and Rishab are supporting her is just out of the world.
    And that letter with no name — Eariler, I thought this can be sent by Chhaya. Maybe, she’s apolosising for all that she did. But after reading the whole chapter, I have this feeling that this donor is Kunj himself. I am sure about it. ?
    That’s coz the last line of the letter said that the person has seen someone very close to him suffering with this disease. Also kunj and Twinkle have same blood group, so this may be possible.??
    I really wish my assumptions go wrong coz I really want this story with a Twinj happy ending and they should stay happily ever after !!!✌❤?
    Waiting for the last part of this masterpiece. Please post soon✌
    Bye! ☺
    Take care

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Vibhu! Let me tell you… Your guesses are always so amazing that I can’t tell you:* Will miss your assumptions a lot but not that much because I’ll be back soon:)
      Thank you so much dear for loving the story throughout. Hopefully you’ll like the ending too:*

      1. Vibhu

        Hahahaa .. That’s really so sweet of you dear! Even I will miss uh. Hopefully this wait won’t last long ..

  20. Hi maha dear
    Episode was superb but mere ko aesa lag raha h ki kunj hi donor h
    Aur isliye hi vo abroad gya h twinkle se jhut bolkr aur vo letter bhi kunj ne hi bheja tha

    Yrrr next episode last hoga??????plzzzz yrrr ho sake to aabhi end mat karna aur sad ending to bilkul mat krna plzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzz
    Post soon dear
    Luvvvvvvvvv u dear

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you so much Msmahi:) Please don’t be sad, I’ll try my best to make the ending worth reading:*

  21. SSK

    The episode was fabulous. It is coming to an end. Why I think that at last Kunj will become a donor as he and Twinkle have same blood group so might be he will only donate. Just one request Maha please no sad ending. I want this FF to end on a happy note.
    Please post soon 🙂

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much for loving the episode:) For knowing about your guess to be true… You’ve to wait a little;) but thanks a lot for supporting dear:*

  22. Amazing…
    Loved every bit of it..Loved tge way kunj took careof twinkle,pampered her??
    I am also thinking that kunj is the donor himself..And poor twinkle,she became so incomplete without kunj..
    Next one will be the last???
    Don’t do this plzzzzzz..??
    Do post soon..
    Bye..lots of love

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Rayna:* Please don’t be sad! I’ll be back with another one na:)

  23. SidMin23

    Nice episode and do end in happy note

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you:)

  24. This ff is very close to my heart ♥ I always did wait for it little bit sad ? because it’s gonna end but it’s really an amazing ?? ff post soon can’t wait and u said u will post depending on response now please post it

    Get well soon ?

  25. This ff is very close to my heart ♥ I always did wait for it little bit sad ? because it’s gonna end but it’s really an amazing ?? ff post soon can’t wait and u said u will post depending on response now please post it

    Get well soon ?
    Come back soon

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Juhi dear for such sweet words:* it means a lot! Do support like this and I’ll keep writing. And yes I’ll post soon:)

  26. fantastic…….

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you:)

  27. Hi Maha….i really love ur ff…always waiting for the update…it really kind of gives me such pleasure when i read it….u r such a beautiful writer…this ff seems so real…it has touched my heart….pls do update soon…lots of love to u dear…??

    1. Maha_Aijaz

      Thank you very much Siddhi for such sweet words:) keep loving dear:*

  28. Ramya

    Awesome Amazing
    Letter sounds do mysterious
    Just loving the way track is going on
    So impatient to read next one

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