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Spoiler Of Drawn Together Story

administratorBy administratorJanuary 21, 201643 Comments6 Mins Read
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Radhika fumed, burned and blistered as she kept staring at a woman who was smiling slyly across her husband.

The doofus wasn’t even aware that he was being hit on. Her upper lip curled in a sneer.

The idiot.

Great. He was always a walking talking chick magnet. There. Today, it’s done. She needed to lock him up in a room. That way nobody is going to give him the sly eyes and inviting smiles.

Radhika slid her glance back at the woman. She wasn’t even seeing the dresses. It was an act to look at him closely.

Her chest moved up and down with strained breaths. He was smiling down his mobile again. Ugh, he was doing that since an hour. What the heck was in that she didn’t know. Was he chatting with someone? With who? The porcupine wouldn’t even smile at a cute bunny, now he was showing his perfect teeth for everyone to see? What the hell.

With widening of bemused eyes she saw him grin while he kept tapping at the phone. Her jaw grinded. That’s it.

She marched to his side and nudged him hard in the ribs with her left elbow.

“What the heck are you smiling about?” She gritted.

He bent forward and gave a howl of a pain. She snorted. What a wuss.

He turned his scrunched up face to the side.

“Ugh…What the f**k was that for?” He said through clenched teeth of pain.

When he cursed again, Oh it burned the anger course and boil into her veins more. She bent to his eye level and glared.

“I said what the heck are you smiling about?” She asked again in a cold voice.

His scrunched up face turned red and his eyes widened looking at her angry features.

“What?” He asked bewildered.

Radhika shook her head, rolled her eyes and straightened.

“Ugh! just great, I got married to a dumb guy.” She groaned irritated at his confusion.

He straightened and rubbed the place where it hurt still. He glared across at her completely pissed off now.

“Is your brain addled? Do I need to call the mental hospital? If you keep on hitting me with those elbows, swear to god I’m going to wring you like a chicken and….”He started to raise his voice but she tuned him with an eye roll and turned around.

Arjun was surprised to the core at her nonchalant attitude. His anger would have dissolved any girl to tears, but this one just keeps shocking him at every turn of their conversation. Now, he was furious.

“Hey! You don’t dare to walk away from me when I’m talking here….you come back, you little…”He went around, but stopped dead when she gave a shout so high pitched. It made him jump.

“Hey! You!” Radhika snarled at the woman.

The woman, tall, fair, thin wearing a short pink sleeveless dress paled at her shout. Her eye round caught Radhika’s blistering glare. She pointed a delicate manicured index finger to herself. She had bedazzled red coloured nail polish on.

Like seriously. How much a barbie doll does the woman scream. So typical an uptown chick.

“M…m…me?” She asked stuttering.

Radhika fumed and put her hands over her hips.

“Yeah, you.” She said disgusted..”What are you looking at?” She gritted out.

The woman just kept staring at her nervously and she again looked over Radhika’s shoulder.

Radhika’s face cleared and tautened. She turned her head to the side and saw him popping his head to the side to look interestingly at the woman.

Really? He wouldn’t look at his wife to observe and here he was…..ugh.

She pushed her hand to the side and hit his shoulder.

“Get behind me.” She ordered him, but before he could reply, Radhika turned her head around and moved forward.

The woman loooked deadly frigtened now.

“And you, were you looking at my husband, huh?” She asked in a hard voice and walking forward.

“N…no..no, I wasn’t.” The woman hastily replied.

Radhika got in her face and she cringed away.

“Don’t lie, I saw you giving him the eye. Don’t you have an ounce of shame to hit on a married guy..” She whispered threateningly down at the now almost crying woman…”You know what I’ll do, if you look at my husband again? huh?” She muttered down…The woman shook her head. Radhika smiled coolly….”I’m gonna gauge your eyes out and…” She started to shout, but very rudely her body was lifted up in the air as if she was a rag doll and was plonked to the side harshly.

“Haha, now now darling, that’s enough.” His steely voice so light travelled into her ears warningly.

Her chest was moving up and down in too much anger. Her breathing got escalated. She looked around to see people in the shop were watching her and the two of them with rounded eyes.

Oh, whatever.

He looked around too embarrassed to the core. He smiled and laughed good naturedly. His left hand went down and he rubbed her head vigorously.

“Stop it.” Radhika tried to push at his hand which was spoiling her straight hair.

His wrist was like iron band. The veins were hard steel strips.

God, he had bison like strength.

“She is just crazy.” He explained while moving her head to and fro..”I was taking her to check with the psychiatrist tonight. Seems like I have to move up the appointment to right away…” He muttered in explanation still to the displeased looking customers.

They nodded their heads sadly looking at her in understanding and moved about to their way minding themselves again.

Radhika could not just believe what he said.

“Psychiatrist? How dare you…” She started to say but he closed her mouth tight with his right hand.

“Mmmsbnnmm.” Radhika tried to talk, and clawed at his hand with her failing ones.

“Enough of this. Shut up and keep walking.” He glared down at her, as his other hand caught her moving head firmly.

He plucked a few dresses from off the hangers and threw those over her head moving away his hand over her mouth finally.

Radhika breathed in relief and took the dresses off her head and observed those while walking.

What the hell. She glared up with burning red face while he made her speed walk fast to the changing room aisle.

“These are excel. Why do you think I’m extra size always. Do I look that fat to you and…”

Her mouth closed in a snap when he looked down at her with seemingly thunderous face.

Radhika cringed back. Oh crapity hell. He was angry. Her inner voice sing sang.

Awesome, you managed to piss him off again…..

**********

-kfar

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43 Comments

  1. Sasha on January 21, 2016 8:33 pm

    Yay so awesome! Nw waiting fr ur updt eagerly. Updt soon. Ur story gives peace to our to our( me and nikki) minds

    • nikki on January 21, 2016 8:43 pm

      thanks for writing it on my behalf
      i guess even i will………… today
      check it b4 going to bed

  2. Rj on January 21, 2016 8:37 pm

    omg its awesome dude
    and by the way h r u? hopefully better now
    plz post bbatcb soon, waiting for NeSam
    can u update it by tomorrow?
    plz try to do that i am dying to read the next part
    plz plz plz
    well i am actually glad that u r updating something or the other regularly now, i mean at least one ech day
    and believe i love it
    plz update NeSam waiting like hell
    lovvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuuuu

  3. nikki on January 21, 2016 8:39 pm

    love u kfar
    its awesome
    loved it to the core
    want to read the whole part
    but b4 that wanna read bbatcb
    love u loads

  4. Devi on January 21, 2016 8:44 pm

    Awesome

  5. Sammy on January 21, 2016 8:44 pm

    R u the one who started The Seers. Why aren’t u continuing it? Or r u posting it with other name?

  6. Manha on January 21, 2016 8:55 pm

    Farha this is awesome, fantastic, fab…… It was tooooo gud. I just want to read the super update. Can’t wait when it will be posted. Oh god i’m laughing like anything. Plzzz update it fast n very fast. All excited. Plzz make it fast. Too much excited that i’m repeating lines again n again. Sorry n plz make it fast. Plzzzzz

  7. sunshine on January 21, 2016 8:56 pm

    Oh please do hurry with the update…your story is darn magjificent!

  8. Lakshmi on January 21, 2016 9:03 pm

    Awesome farha. Eagerly waiting for the update. Update soon. Love u ??..take care..

  9. roshini on January 21, 2016 9:03 pm

    pls pls updae soon…

  10. Advaita on January 21, 2016 9:12 pm

    Awwww, so possessive Radhika is!! I LOVE U DI !! Really , a hearty thanks for posting the spoiler . U know what , I am going crazy bcoz of ur stories. The spoiler was so amusing….hahaha.Psychiatrist scene was the best one …..oh Arjun is mad.Plzzz post the story too and that too soon …..like real soooooooon. Any of ur story. Keep writing. Take care 🙂 🙂

  11. Haya on January 21, 2016 9:32 pm

    Update fast. Yaar

  12. Hayathi on January 21, 2016 9:44 pm

    Ha ha ha like seriously radhu agar koi itna handsome boy saamne hein tho dekna padta hein na ha ha ha poor girl

  13. kanthi on January 21, 2016 9:45 pm

    Please kfar!! Please… Update the next epi fast…I am tooooooo eagerly waiting for it….both DT and nesam…. These are my most fav ffs…..I love them …..please update them asap yaar!!!!

  14. sonia on January 21, 2016 9:59 pm

    come on…. update next part soon….

  15. cherry on January 21, 2016 10:00 pm

    Awesome. Pls update soon.

  16. Tanya on January 21, 2016 10:24 pm

    Possesive Radhika! It was simply awesome!Great work kfar.

  17. aathy on January 21, 2016 11:00 pm

    I can’t wait more…plz upd soon.

  18. Manisha on January 21, 2016 11:01 pm

    Kfar pls give a date… When r u going to update next part?????

  19. Chinmayi on January 21, 2016 11:14 pm

    Farah di,how r u!?
    Thanks for the spoiler,radhika is really crazy….no no craziest …waiting for your update

  20. sravya on January 21, 2016 11:31 pm

    Wow ! This is awesome ! I guess the reason for Arjun’s smile while tapping his phone is because he is looking at their kiss selfie in the car (LOL). They are surely getting Drawn Together. Please give spoiler of BBCB also.

    • cool ff on January 22, 2016 1:05 am

      Yeah i figured that straight away that he must be looking at that pic then when she finds that out shes gonna be so embarrassed lool
      Thank you so much for the spoiler in your busy schedule were all really greatful!

  21. zayn on January 21, 2016 11:46 pm

    Pls update Dt i am dying to read it ….
    It was supebr awsome n mindblowing

  22. Kruti on January 22, 2016 12:39 am

    Wow superb… plz plz plx update the chapter sooooooon 🙂

  23. Krithi on January 22, 2016 1:08 am

    Farha thanx for the spoilers.. Really enjoyed radhika’s behaviour… Oh now I want to read the story badly… But first update DT2 as you have said earlier… Will be waiting for ur updates… Do update soooon…. Plzzzz. Dying to read it…???

  24. Rg on January 22, 2016 4:08 am

    Hi farah u do have magical hands. Ur spoiler only whets d appetite for more. If u thought to just give a small hint if ur forth Coming chapters it’s has not satisfied me in any way as I want to read the whole chappy now… But every day morning I check to c a story from and when I c it am truly glad. I understand u can write only those stories which works or evolves in ur head for tat time but I badly want u to update all d other stories as well . Esp mmz (new beginning) Shina’s story as well as d others…. I love all ur works. Can plz update ur other stories as well. Especially mmz where arjun reads radhikas letter. Am bearly able wait for d suspense thou I have seen on tv. I want to c ur version of it. Plz plz farah do consider my request.. sorry for pestering u.. tc

  25. Roma on January 22, 2016 4:10 am

    Awesome Farha my darling, it’s hilariously amazing spoiler, I can’t wait to read the whole chapter now..laughing like hell, your sense of humour is mind blowing dearyyy…rads burning in jealous n arjun annoyed by her…finally she made him angryyyyyy, pissed him offff..such a sweetheart farha…anxiously waitingggggg for dt,dt2, bb, bd, ss, bg,aiwtciu, and many more… plz update your all stories one by one when you find time…plzzzzzzzzzz. .love you loads and bear hug…take care sweetie, muaaaaahhhhhh

  26. Shree on January 22, 2016 4:30 am

    Superb spoiler!! Thanks farha … I’m still laughing

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

  27. Vivi on January 22, 2016 8:04 am

    Ohh…hw cute….luvvvvvvd it….radhika was jealous….plz….pretty plz…update sooooon…luv ya..tc

  28. Shub on January 22, 2016 9:35 am

    Farha, u R killing us with these kind of spoilers. U hv a magic wand to stir us up!!! Yeh dil mange more! Want to see the jealous radz. Hope they break the thin screen between them and realize their true love.. Waiting eagerly for the nxt update!!

  29. LAVANYA on January 22, 2016 12:44 pm

    Hai farah ma’am,,
    Am really happy to have read your spoiler today. fell like my day will be good.got to read a lovely part..am very thankful to you..one can see how striking your spoiler can be.. trust me..am saying this again..release this story as a book..and see the reception..you will be the J.K.Rowling of India..Sorryif i had spoken anything wrong..but am falling short of words to express my happiness that i get by reading your fabulous stories..and my admiration of you..

  30. Abi on January 22, 2016 2:39 pm

    Farah….pls don’t do this…i don’t want to say,”U R PARTIALITY ”…sry….i said …because i can’t wait farah…i m a CRAZY FAN for ur BILLIONAIRE BANKER AND THE CHIRPY BEAUTY story….u know ,u can’t even imagine that how i m despirating ur story abt nesam…u update DT 1 story nd the spoilers also…but u didn’t update my fav story….

    I accept that u may be busy…but pls update,,daily …u r disappointing me…,,.pls…pls…pls……..farah its too late u know..

    Ur last update was on my ward exams now i finished my labs nd sem theory exams..still u didn’t update….wat s dis farah!!!????!!!!!!!! U know next week board exams…hayyooo:-(:,(

    i m saying this much..pls farah|O|O…..update DT2:?:&:-/:S

    Guys(who r ll here)..pls tell her(farah),
    if u want to free from my essay like balaberings then pls update farah:P:D

  31. Abi on January 22, 2016 2:56 pm

    I don’t know ,who r all waiting for ur DT2 like me…if nobody wants (hope many r want )…no problem, u should update it for me because i m telling to my friends nd college abt u nd ur story.they r loving it u know…..they also read ur story here but they don’t comment because we don’t have that much time…..but farah ,u nd deepthi made me to comment here…i m begging u to update nesam ,ok now i feel relax because i shared my thought here…whether u r reading or not….As a big fan..i told everything 😀

  32. nisha on January 22, 2016 4:56 pm

    hey farha how r u dear hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm spoiler is amazing dera i loved the jealous rads I loved it totally and waiting for the update excitingly dera

    lvoed it a lot

    keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend

  33. dipika on January 22, 2016 7:30 pm

    wow amazing…hahaha…rads became truly a loving protective wife…Eger to read full version

  34. Ameena on January 23, 2016 9:59 pm

    Tanks for the spoiler…update the next part soon…luv u ???

  35. anu on January 23, 2016 10:21 pm

    thanks for updating this spoiler. actually a big thanks and a tight hug and truckloads of love and wishes. I am eagerly waiting for you to update nesam part. pls update it soon. u said that u would update in 2 or 3 days and the time is up. so get going girl. hope you are alright and feeling well. I just feel my heart racing up and down when you say you are not fine.. stay healthy❤❤❤lots of love.

  36. Ameena on January 23, 2016 11:27 pm

    http://www.tellyupdates.com/just-fun-2/

  37. Advaita on January 25, 2016 10:02 pm

    Hey di, plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzźzzzzzzzzz post any of ur story but make it real soooooon, I can’t wait anymore.

  38. Thena on January 26, 2016 12:13 am

    This is u, my intelligent dear farha. Tis is outstanding man,!!!!!!!! Am speechless n dumbfounded. I swear, u hv Way to go. Ur life will shower ur flowers of love in near future cos u deserve it. Hugssssss. Keep up ur amazing work. Wat is nt in tis though tis is short. Extraordinary stuff n obviously out of tis world. Love u loads dear 😀

  39. Advaita on January 26, 2016 7:29 pm

    HAPPY REPUBLIC DAY EVERYONE !! Hey di, where r u? Plzzz post next part na. Ok bye. Keep writing. Take care 🙂 🙂

  40. Krithi on January 26, 2016 7:41 pm

    Farha Plz update story na.. I am waiting…. Plzzzzz..

  41. Kruti on January 27, 2016 11:51 pm

    Hey Farha waiting eagerly for the update…
    Plzzzzzzz update sooooooooooon 🙂

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