hello guys I am back….. today I am uploading a short fan fiction……as I am quite busy right now . Hope you all don’t mind.
so let’s get started.
In Neelam and Virendra’s room.
Sonia: what should we do now mom? How are we going to arrange 200 crore in 5 days? All of these things are happening just and just because of that laxmi and her family. I had already said that there is no need to give so much respect and love to this Laxmi, see what she did to us, Disgusting.
Ayush: shame on you Sonia. How can you speak badly about that girl who saved your brother’s life by risking her life many times? You should be grateful to her.
Karishma: ayush. How can you talk like this with your sister? You are blaming her because of an outsider.
Ayush: You leave it mother, you never thought well of Laxmi sister-in-law. You have always tried to bring her down in everyone’s eye. You always try to find fault in her. All you wanted was that Rishi brother should leave laxmi and go to Malishka, Just because Malishka is your relative. How can you, being a woman, do this to another woman?
Virendra: let it be ayush. Don’t argue with them. There’s no humanity in them. They only care about money and status not man.
At the same time a servant comes.
Servant: Sir someone has come to meet you guys.
Servant: mam, guruji.
Virendra: Why has Guruji come to meet us today? Did you call him Neelam?
Neelam: no I didn’t call him.
Grandma: I think something is wrong. Guruji never came uninvited. There must have been some big reason behind his arrival.
Virendra: let’s go and meet him.
Everyone touches guruji’s leg and take blessing from him.
Neelam: what happened guruji? Today you are suddenly here, is there any problem?
Guruji: problem is very serious Neelam ji and it is related to rishi.
Neelam: what happened guruji? There is no danger in my son’s life, is there?
Virendra: calm down Neelam, let guruji talk.
Guruji: Neelam’s concern is justified. I have come here today because I have seen a strange change in the constellations of rishi, which is not good for him.
Neelam: How do we correct these constellations? We will do whatever you say. But nothing should happen to my rishi.
Guruji: it is not easy to change constellations. But first bring me the horoscope of Rishi.
Ayush bring the horoscope.
Guruji get shocked seeing rishi’s horoscope.
Guruji: Misfortune, great misfortune. This cannot happen, if this happens, then the life of rish…
Virendra: what happened guruji? Why are you worried? Is everything ok?
Guruji: nothing is ok. Rishi’s life is in great danger and this time no one can save him. This time Markesha dosh will definitely take away his life.
Everyone get shocked. Neelam get scared and hug rishi.
Neelam: no I will not let anything happen to rishi. Nothing will happen to my son.
Rishi: don’t worry mom I am ok. Look, I am standing in front of you safe and sound.
Neelam: why is this happening guruji? Until morning everything was ok. How come rishi’s constellations change all of sudden?
Guruji: All of this has not happened suddenly, the constellations of rishi had started changing from yesterday itself. It seems that Rishi’s shield is moving away from him. It seemed that till now the thing which was protecting Rishi from Markesha Dosh is now disappearing. Rishi’s savior is his wife laxmi , bring me her horoscope.
Everyone got worried after listening to Guruji. They understood that why the constellations of rishi were changing.
Neelam sign ayush to bring the horoscope.
Guruji get shocked to see Laxmi’s horoscope.
Guruji: this can’t happen.
Neelam: what happened guruji?
Guruji: there is a bad news Neelam ji. Now laxmi can’t save rishi’s life.
Grandma: why are you saying like this guruji? You said that Laxmi’s horoscope is very strong and she can save rishi from his Marrakesh dosh. Now what happen?
Guruji: Because now the constellations of Lakshmi are not with the sage, but are against him. It seems that something very bad has happened to this girl. Somebody has broken his faith. Somebody has broken the heart of this girl. And whoever has hurt this girl has invited his own ruin.
Everyone get worried after listening to guruji’s words. They don’t understand what to say because it was they itself, who hurt laxmi.
Guruji get suspicious after seeing their worried faces. He understand that they are hiding something from him.
Karishma: what is so special in her horoscope that can ruin someone? We know that her horoscope can save rishi but this doesn’t mean that we have to get sacred of her. She is just an ordinary girl without her horoscope.
Guruji: she is not an ordinary girl because if she had been an ordinary girl, she would not have been able to save rishi from Marrakesh Dosh. Her horoscope is not special, she is itself special. Do you all remember what I have told you earlier when you all were trying to find a girl for rishi, who can save him ……..that there are only a few girl in this world who have taken birth with a special horoscope…. which can save rishi from his Markesha dosh……but there wasn’t a surety that whether that girl will be successful in saving rishi or not…….because those girls only have a special horoscope, they don’t have the power to change the fate……but laxmi is different from that girls because she has the power to change the destiny. The time when rishi was attacked by a crocodile, I told you all that no one will be able to save rishi….Even the Havan that we had done to save rishi’s life, was also unsuccessful. At that time there was not even 1% chance of Rishi’s survival. But still Laxmi had brought him out of the mouth of death. At that time Laxmi’s horoscope did not save Rishi’s life, it was Laxmi’s love for her husband, who saved Rishi’s life. Until she is with rishi, I can guarantee that not even god can take away rishi’s life. She is Savitri of this KalYuga, in front of whom even Yamraj had to accept his defeat.
Rishi remember the crocodile incident, how laxmi fight with crocodile and save his life…….how she was hurt but still she bring him to hospital without caring about her own injuries. He remembers all the incidents when she risk her own life and safe his life. [In his mind “Why god why did you do this with laxmi? Why did you bring her in my life, even after knowing that we can’t be together? Why did you make her so good and so innocent that I can’t see her sad? Why?”]
Guruji: call laxmi. I want to talk to her.
Everyone start looking towards each other. Ayush [in his mind “how to call her when she is not here? How to tell you guruji that the one who hurt her are we itself”]
Ayush sees towards Karishma who sign him to not to speak. Ayush turn his face and looks towards guruji. [In his mind “no mom, I will not keep quite. I will tell everything to guruji”.]
Ayush: we can’t call her guruji. She will not come.
Guruji: why? Isn’t she here? When will she come? I can wait.
Karishma: shut up ayush.
Ayush: no mom I will speak. You can’t stop me…….not after knowing that how much laxmi is important for rishi. We have to tell everything to guruji because we all know she will not come now.
Guruji: what do you mean by that she will not come?
Ayush: because she left this house and rishi.
Guruji: what? Why?
Ayush: because the one who hurt her are us. He tells everything to guruji that has happened until now.
Guruji get shocked and stand up.
Guruji: how can you do this Neelam? How can you be so much selfish that just for saving your son’s life you destroyed that girl’s life? I told you about that special horoscope, so that you can save rishi. But I never told you to cheat or deceive that girl. Even after Knowing that your son is under the influence of Markesh Dosh and his life is in danger, you still made him do such a wrong thing. You know that a girl is considered as goddess in our society, ruining a girl’s life is considered as a great sin. How can you guys do this? You all have also made me a culprit because it was me who ask you all to get rishi married to laxmi.
Neelam: we know that we did wrong with laxmi. But we did this just for saving rishi. We didn’t have any ill intention towards laxmi. We always treat her as a daughter-in-law. We just want to save rishi….we never want to hurt her.
Guruji: you didn’t save him. You have increased his trouble. Marriage is known as the most auspicious event, but you all have turned it into a joke. What did you think that as soon as the Markesha defect will be removed from your son’s life, you will remove Laxmi from rishi’s life and then everything will be alright? No that never happens, even after the removal of the Marrakesh defect, he would have to pay the price for what he did with Laxmi. But now as that the truth has come out before the removal of markesh dosh effect, rishi’s trouble has increased. Whatever you have done has put your son’s life in danger. You didn’t save him, but have pushed him in the mouth of death.
Neelam and everyone get shocked.
Neelam: please don’t say like this guruji. Nothing can happen to my rishi. There might be some way to save him.
Guruji: nothing can happen now. The only person, who could have saved rishi from his Marrakesh defect, is no longer in his life. Now Markesha dosh has taken such a formidable form, from which even god can’t save rishi.
Virendra: please don’t say like this guruji. There might be some way to save rishi.
Neelam: please guruji; there might be some way to save rishi. You are our only hope.
Karishma: don’t cry sister-in-law…….nothing will happen to rishi. Laxmi is not the only option we have…..I am sure there might be some other way to save rishi……… That girl and her family has already done so much dram in our house, we can’t let her come back.
Virendra: shut up Karishma. Right now we are all worried about rishi’s safety and you are still blaming laxmi.
Karishma: brother I…
Neelam: enough Karishma … for god sake keep quite.
Guruji: One should never be proud of his money and power. Remember one thing; Karishma ji that Laxmi is not an ordinary girl. You have not done any good by breaking her trust. I can clearly see the ruin of you people. She was a blessing of god whom you all didn’t cherish.
Guruji started leaving from there, but stopped in the middle, turned towards Neelam and said :“ I considered you as my daughter Neelam…that’s why I am telling you this that if you want to save your son’s , then bring laxmi back. If anyone can remove death from the rishi’s life, then that person is only and only Laxmi. But this time it will not be easy to get Laxmi’s trust. She will not be able to accept your son with a true heart like she had accepted earlier. But you can try.
After saying this Guruji left from there.
Neelam: no I can’t let anything happen to rishi. I am going to bring laxmi back.
Virendra: Take care of yourself Neelam. Where will you go? We don’t even know where is Laxmi?
Rishi: yes mom dad is right. You are not feeling well. You should take rest. We will take about this later
Neelam: no I can’t take rest. Your life is in danger. I have to bring laxmi back. Ayush you call nakshu and tell her that we want to meet laxmi.
Outside the obroie mansion someone standing behind the tree calls nakshu and inform her about guruji’s visit.
Inside the mansion.
Ayush call nakshu and put the phone on speaker.
Nakshu: hello Mr. Ayush how can I help you.
Ayush: nakshu Neelam aunty wants to meet laxmi. Can you please tell us where she is ?
Nakshu: I am sorry. But my sister is not interested in meeting anyone from obroie family.
Neelam: it is very important for us to talk to laxmi. It is about my son’s life.
Nakshu: sorry Mrs. Obroie but I can’t put my sister’s life in risk, just for saving you son’s life. Good night.
Nakshu hang up the call.
Neelam: no I will not accept the defeat. Ayush you find out the place where laxmi is living right now. I will meet her face to face tomorrow.
Nakshu: how are you feeling sister?
Laxmi: I am ok nakshu. You don’t worry. I am going outside for a walk.
Nakshu: should I come with you?
Laxmi: no need nakshu. I will be ok on my own. I just want to have some fresh air so I am going in the nearby park. I will not stop living my life because of some people.
Laxmi smiles towards nakshu.
In hotel’s lobby laxmi was going outside, when she stop in mid. She get shocked to see Neelam, standing in front of her.
It was superb really felt nice reading this……………… part now they will realise lakshmi value and now …………….Rishi will understand his feelings toward lakshmi and then he will get to know Malishka’s true face I think so she will not help Rishi in that business Matter but instead of that lakshmi will help out him in his life and in business administration it’s my opinion what about you all
This was so good….especially saying of guruji that not only lakshmi’s hororscope but lakshmi is also special…and now its time for oberois to pay for it..
Super update as always. Keep up the good work. Please try to upload on daily basis.
Please upload daily awesome story please
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thanks for your love and support . I am happy that you all like my fan fiction. I am writing a new fan fiction……just wait for some time ……I will upload next one in few days.
upload soon please . I am waiting for a long time