A PHOTOGRAPH #Kaanchi last part

Hello friends….how r u all??I hope u all r fully fine nd enjoying ur life.Firstly a big teddy hug to all my lovely readers who commented on previous part of this os.Keep commenting nd showering ur support like this???

As this a two shot os,so this is the second nd last part.Sorry for grammatical mistakes.Critics nd suggestions r most welcome here.

So let’s start:
As Saanchi is deeply immerse in her thoughts.
A flashback is seen:

In hospital???
Outside the room no.30,a man is seen moving to nd fro.He is looking tense ??nd the man reveals to be none other than bussiness tycoon KABEER KAPOOR.
The female doctor comes out from the room with a smile on her face.
Doctor:Congratulations!!Mr.Kapoor mrs.Kapoor have given birth to a baby girl.??

(Hearing this,Kabeer’s tensed face converts into a happy face.His face starts blooming like an actor honoured with the title of best actor???)

Kabeer:Can i plz met my wife nd daughter???

Doctor:Sure Mr.Kapoor.
(In extreme excitement of meeting his daughter for the first time he hugs the doctor)

Kabeer(realises):Sorry doctor…i mean i ..i..was that much excited..uuuuuuh…sorry .??

Doctor:It’s ok Mr.Kapoor.I can understand ur feelings
.
Kabeer:Thank u doctor..
(He comes inside the room and nurse handovers baby to Kabeer)
Kabeer(teary eyed):I don’t know how to express my feelings of becoming a dad of u ……my small princess.U r most beautiful gift i had ever in my life.??
(Kabeer kisses on Saanchi’s forehead )

Kabeer:Thank u soooo much Saanchi for being a part of my life…..u supported me in every up nd down of my life…….nd this time this happiness of becoming a dad is beyond words.I luv u….???

Saanchi(lying on bed):Luv u too Kabeer…..
Suddenly Ransh and Aysel…..i mean Mr.Bad boy nd Miss.dramaqueen reaches there.Aysel takes baby in her hands)

Aysel:Awwwwwwww…..she is sooo cute.See kabeer bhaiya her eyes has gone to u.???

Ransh:Nooooo……her sweet eyes gone to my lovely bhabhi.
Aysel:What r u saying bhaiya???See properly her eyes r same to same like Kabeer bhaiya.

Ransh:Ok !! who is the elder between both of us??

Aysel:Of course u.

R:And who has more experience of life???

A:As u r elder than me of course u r more experienced than s me.

R:So,it’s final that her eyes has to Saanchi bhabhi.

(Aysel nd Ransh both starts arguing on this topic nd the baby starts crying.Aysel handovers baby to her bhabhi)

Kabeer(irritately):Both of u r not ashamed …even here u both have started ur Dog nd cat fighting.???

A nd R(together):Sorry bhaiya nd bhabhi….
A(innocently):But Kabeer bhaiya …..as i m here bua (aunt)I’ll choose name for her…….Rihanna…..Rihanna kapoor nice name na bhabhi??

S:Yaa…it’s a beautiful name.

R:But i don’t find anything beautiful in this.Rihanna…it is something similar to Rhino…..

A:Ransh bhaiya u become chachu nd i become bua so alphabetically B comes first.So,i’ll name the baby.???
Kabeer:Guys!!plz don’t start again.I think u both should go to home to arrange welcome party for my princess.

A nd R(together):Command accepted….
Aysel hiddenly click picture of the happy Kapoor family nd in this way i(photograph)took birth.

Flashback ends.

In morning,(Kaanchi’s anniversary)Saanchi is making parathas for our princess…cum Gabbar Rishika.Rishika comes there with a newspaper on her hand.
R:Muma…..in this newspaper it is written that today a meteor will fall nd “PYAAR KI KAHAANI NA ADHURI RAHEGI,KISMAT AAJ USKO POORA KAR KE RAHEGI.TU PAYEGA APNE HAMSAFAR KO…KIMAT KO BADALNE MEIN DERR NA LAGEGI”Muma what does it mean?????

Saanchi’s pov:
God!!!I don’t believe in this…bcoz the way destiny play a blind fold game with me….my trust is break from this mohabbat ,kismat,kaynat .

R:Muma……I think u also don’t get this like me.

S:Rishika!!I have prepared breakfast for u nd i m getting late for office.I think i should leave now.Ok!!bbye sweetie…no masti with chachu.Ok!
R:Ok mumma.

(When Saanchi open the door to leave for office..she found Kabeer.)

Saanchi:Am i dreaming??Is he Kabeer?

(Kabeer is smiling.)

Saanchi(teary eyed):Kabeer u r back …….where were u from last two years…..do u know in your absence…how many problems i faced….nd Rishika..she thought that u r busy in a meeting with bhagwanji…..
(Kabeer place his hand on Saanchi’s mouth)

Kabeer:Shhhhhhhh……i m back….ur Kabeer is back.I know u thought that i lost my life in an accident. But i was in coma from last two years.But ur love force me to come back.
Saanchi hugs Kabeer nd starts crying.Rishika also comes there and ask Kaanchi to also include her in their hug.

Screen freezes on Kaanchi’s happy family.

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32 Comments
  1. Aafiya

    Superb…

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u dear for commenting but i need a small favour of urs…..two stories r cooking in my mind.?????One is KAALA CHASHMA on kaanchi nd second one is on SanveerNAUGHTY LOVE.????
      So don’t forget to tell me which story do u want to read???
      Keep reading nd commenting dear.???

    2. Aafiya

      Kaala Chasma on Kanchi.. Because the name itself is different..

  2. Dhruti

    sweet and lovely story…………….

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u dear for commenting.It really means a lot to me.???
      Thank u dear for commenting but i need a small favour of urs…..two stories r cooking in my mind.?????One is KAALA CHASHMA on kaanchi nd second one is on SanveerNAUGHTY LOVE.????
      So don’t forget to tell me which story do u want to read???
      Keep reading nd commenting dear.???

    2. Dhruti

      kaala chashma on kanchi because i’m excited after reading the title…..

  3. lovely
    write more

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u dear for commenting but i need a small favour of urs…..two stories r cooking in my mind.?????One is KAALA CHASHMA on kaanchi nd second one is on SanveerNAUGHTY LOVE.????
      So don’t forget to tell me which story do u want to read???
      Keep reading nd commenting dear.???

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u dear for commenting but i need a small favour of urs…..two stories r cooking in my mind.?????One is KAALA CHASHMA on kaanchi nd second one is on SanveerNAUGHTY LOVE.????
      So don’t forget to tell me which story do u want to read???
      Keep reading nd commenting dear.???

  4. Amazing, please come back with another os, ft soon.

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u dear for commenting but i need a small favour of urs…..two stories r cooking in my mind.?????One is KAALA CHASHMA on kaanchi nd second one is on SanveerNAUGHTY LOVE.????
      So don’t forget to tell me which story do u want to read???
      Keep reading nd commenting dear.???

    1. Negisanyukta

      Firstly so sorry dear…i read ur writings but didn’t get the time to comment….u r a fab author.???

      Thank u dear for commenting but i need a small favour of urs…..two stories r cooking in my mind.?????One is KAALA CHASHMA on kaanchi nd second one is on SanveerNAUGHTY LOVE.????
      So don’t forget to tell me which story do u want to read???
      Keep reading nd commenting dear.???

    2. Priyankashaurya

      thnks a lot dear………ohk i will help u out…….send me lttle intro about the plot if u can……..in message….i hope u dont mind

  5. Swethaa

    soooo amazaing..

  6. Swethaa

    soooo amazing..

    1. Negisanyukta

      Hiii dear…so gud to see u.Thank u for commenting….really means a lot to me.??

      Thank u dear for commenting but i need a small favour of urs…..two stories r cooking in my mind.?????One is KAALA CHASHMA on kaanchi nd second one is on SanveerNAUGHTY LOVE.????
      So don’t forget to tell me which story do u want to read???
      Keep reading nd commenting dear.???

    2. Swethaa

      ofcourse…when you free post small intro of the two stories dear..definitely i give my opinion…tc..

  7. Anu88

    How are you ashu………we miss u so so much dear……it’s so so amazing and mind blowing hae…….. please yaar post another story soon……….time din tum kaha the yaar……… Love u so so much dear…….tc yaar…..

  8. Anu88

    How are you dear……we miss u so so much dear……it’s so so amazing and mind blowing hae…….. please yaar post another story soon……….time din tum kaha the yaar……… Love u so so much dear…….tc yaar…..

    1. Negisanyukta

      Hiii dear…so gud to see u.Thank u for commenting….really means a lot to me.??
      Thank u dear for commenting but i need a small favour of urs…..two stories r cooking in my mind.?????One is KAALA CHASHMA on kaanchi nd second one is on SanveerNAUGHTY LOVE.????
      So don’t forget to tell me which story do u want to read???
      Keep reading nd commenting dear.??

    2. Anu88

      Ofcourse yaar kaala cheshma on kanchi……. please yaar write soon dear

  9. Anee

    it was amazing dear…..come with another os,ff bye tc.

    1. Negisanyukta

      Hiii dear…so gud to see u.Thank u for commenting….really means a lot to me.??
      Thank u dear for commenting but i need a small favour of urs…..two stories r cooking in my mind.?????One is KAALA CHASHMA on kaanchi nd second one is on SanveerNAUGHTY LOVE.????
      So don’t forget to tell me which story do u want to read???
      Keep reading nd commenting dear.??

    2. Anee

      off-course yaarrr kaala chashma on my fav kaanchi.

  10. Mahin

    amazing….this was mind blowing……

    1. Negisanyukta

      Hiii dear…so gud to see u.Thank u for commenting….really means a lot to me.??
      Thank u dear for commenting but i need a small favour of urs…..two stories r cooking in my mind.?????One is KAALA CHASHMA on kaanchi nd second one is on SanveerNAUGHTY LOVE.????
      So don’t forget to tell me which story do u want to read???
      Keep reading nd commenting dear.??

    2. Mahin

      dear kala chashma on kanchi And i just love to read your Fanfiction….

  11. Ziyarasheed

    All’s well that ends well?
    Between, I think Rihanna was better than rishika. I liked aysel’s argument….B for bua comes before C for chachu.?

    1. Negisanyukta

      Hiii dear…so gud to see u.Thank u for commenting….really means a lot to me.??
      Thank u dear for commenting but i need a small favour of urs…..two stories r cooking in my mind.?????One is KAALA CHASHMA on kaanchi nd second one is on SanveerNAUGHTY LOVE.????
      So don’t forget to tell me which story do u want to read???
      Keep reading nd commenting dear.??

    2. Ziyarasheed

      But dear, I can’t choose just from the title. Do tell something about the plot..atleast sends msg…hope both might be good. But still curious to know what’s cooking in your mind?

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