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Home»Fan Fiction»No matter what I do it’s never good enough because I always end up hurting u (A devakshi ff) part 6
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No matter what I do it’s never good enough because I always end up hurting u (A devakshi ff) part 6

rj12By rj12November 15, 201621 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hi guys, I’m Rithika here
I know I’m very late but only because my exams are starting and there is a lot of homework to that’s why I’m late but I promise that whenever I’m free I’ll post some back to back episodes..
Let’s start..
Dev brings Sona home and takes her to Ishwari’s room
Dev : Ma dekh mein teri ……..
Ishwari : Beta tu maan gaya tu meri bahu ko laya
Sona laughs but controls herself
Dev : Ma shant rahye ye teri nutritionist
Ishwari : Sorry beta
Dev takes her outside
Sona : U don’t want to marry
Dev : No not interested
Sona : Oh that’s y aunty was behind u
Dev : I know

Sona stands still
Sona : Teri toh love story boht boht mushkil hai. Tu uss insaan se pyar karti hai jisse shadi mein koi intrest nahi hai
Dev takes her to the kitchen
Dev : This is the kitchen u can do ur work here and Kichu bhaiya will be there to help u
Sona : Ok u can leave
He leaves. After sometime she takes the food to Ishwari
Sona : Aunty yeh khaiye
Ishwari : Nahi mujhe nahi Khanna yeh ghas-phus
Sona : Ok I thought if u eat this then u’ll get to eat whatever u like……but every alternate Sunday
Ishwari snatches the plate
Sona : Very good
Ishwari : Now I can eat whatever I want right
Sona : Sure but every alternate Sunday

Dev sees this from outside and smiles
Dev : Ma kisiki baat toh sunti hai
One week passes. It’s a Sunday morning she arrives at the Dixit house
Ishwari : Arey Sona beta tum yahan lekin……
Sona : Aunty I know what I told but next Sunday ok
Ishwari : Ok beta. Sonakshi can u please wake up Dev for me know I have a lot of work please beta do it for me
Sona : Aunty me!!!!!!
Ishwari : Me!!! Kya me…. sirf utane ke liye toh kah rahi hoon
Sona : Ok aunty
She goes to Dev’s room
Sona : Dev wake up
She shakes him but he doesn’t get up
Sona : Get up Dev
Dev suddenly pulls her on the bed and hugs her
Sona : Dev what r u doing
She settles when Dev tells her……
Dev : I love u
She settles but then comes to senses and then struggles but then leaves
Sona : Obhodro
Downstairs

Ishwari : Kya hua woh utah
Sona : Nahi woh uth hi nahi raha hai
Ishwari : Ok I’ll wake him up later
After a few hours Dev comes down
Dev : Hi Sonakshi
Sona is lost and just smiles
Sona : Don’t u remember what u said
Dev : What
Sona : (thinks)Iska matlab inhone yeh neend mein bola
Dev : Sonakshi
Sona : No….nothing
Time passes by very quickly few weeks pass Dev finds Sona crying in a room he goes with a handkerchief
Dev : What happened y the long face
Sona wipes her tears
Sona : Nothing just missing ma, baba
Dev : Y where r they
Sona : They r in Mumbai they sent me here so I can become a nutritionist I miss them a lot
Dev : Then take a leave for some days and meet them
Sona : No thanks patients r more important I’ll meet them some other time
Dev : Ur wish
He leaves
Sona : Ma baba I miss u alot
*************************
How was it
Hope it was long enough
If not sorry I’ll make up for it because I can’t post long ones as my exams r also on
But still will wait for ur comments?

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    Rithika Bhatia Study in 9th youngest in my family very stubborn but sweet, hate being called cute sweet and all crazy & mental with my friends & family but I change myself out?

    21 Comments

    1. Princess on November 15, 2016 10:06 am

      Awesome episode dear

      • rj12 on November 15, 2016 7:24 pm

        thanks u so much princess

    2. Aarti32 on November 15, 2016 11:41 am

      It was really amazing, cute n bit senti too

      • rj12 on November 15, 2016 7:28 pm

        thanks aarti
        btw r u a silent reader(just asking but hope u replyy)

      • Aarti32 on November 15, 2016 8:42 pm

        No dear, I’m Aaru..hope u remember..my actual name is Aarti.

      • rj12 on November 15, 2016 10:16 pm

        Okk I do still remember u????

    3. erika on November 15, 2016 4:41 pm

      awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee epi dear very cute one

      • rj12 on November 15, 2016 7:28 pm

        thank u so much erika

    4. Maleeha on November 15, 2016 4:51 pm

      Amazing…..?❤?????????…….I love u ….???……Omg dev…..????????

      • Maleeha on November 15, 2016 4:52 pm

        And best of luck for ur exams…..?????❤????

      • rj12 on November 15, 2016 7:30 pm

        thank u soo much maleeha

    5. AnShIta on November 15, 2016 4:58 pm

      Hey di!
      This was amazingly beautiful!
      I mean, look at what all Dev said to Sona while he was half asleep! Awwww<3
      Do post the next one soon if you can!
      And, best of luck for your exams!
      Love ya!!!!

      • rj12 on November 15, 2016 7:30 pm

        thanks a lot anshita

    6. Heshine on November 15, 2016 6:09 pm

      Wow….!!!??Rithika its really awesome ….dev was too naughty….!!! at sleep..!! Haha….??pls post the next one soon …!! Will be waiting fa it…!! And all the very best for ur exams..!!????prepare well….
      Try post a longer one if ur free…!! If not koi baat nahi…!! I’ll wait..!!!???????
      Love love…???
      Heshine…!!!???????

      • rj12 on November 15, 2016 7:34 pm

        thank so so so much heshine
        but don’t worry will post long episodes soon

    7. rockzzzzzz on November 15, 2016 6:12 pm

      Well it was a really sweet and cute episode..loved it when dev in sleep said i love u to sona…i understand ur situation as i am also going to have exams from next week..try posting whenever u get time?

      • rj12 on November 15, 2016 7:34 pm

        thanks so much pari

    8. rockzzzzzz on November 15, 2016 6:13 pm

      And ya forgot to say,ALL THE BEST TO YUO FOR UR EXAMS???

      • rj12 on November 15, 2016 7:35 pm

        thank u again pari but my exams r starting tomorrow

    9. Manya on November 15, 2016 6:52 pm

      Awesomeeeeeeeeee❤️❤️❤️❤️

      • rj12 on November 15, 2016 7:36 pm

        thanks ayushi

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