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Manmarziyan….. Second Chance Life 9

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Second chance life….
Episode 9: life needs some fun

Neil was not able to sleep. He tried to lie down and close his eyes. But he couldn’t. He was restless. He paced here to there and again the same in his hotel suite. Then lounged back on the couch but again stood up cursing nothing in particular. Why couldn’t he sleep. It was the same since the charity function. Stupid function. But he knew it was not the function at fault but a certain brown eyed brunette that had him so restless. The whole night went through his mind again and again. Her appology. Her tear filled eyes. Her voice. Everything. He was melting. But he didn’t want to. What if this was another drama. Another play directed by her father. But the disgust that he saw in sam’s eyes for vivek was true. No. He stopped his thoughts there. She was an actress, a good one at that. She could fool him. Like last time. But neil, again his heart pleaded with him, last time she may have had a plan but soon she fell for you. And was going to stick with him disregarding her father. No neil, his brain said, think smartly, don’t be led by emotions, you’ll only be hurt again.
He shook his head and went into the washroom. He poured cold water onto his face and looked in the mirror.

Neil: i will find out what you really are, samaira. Then only i will decide whether to let you into my life, my heart again.

Radhika blinked her eyes open. She looked around drowsily. She was so comfy. She got sight of the clock and blinked in shock. 7.00am. But she was never able to sleep much. Once she had her nightmare she will not be able to fall asleep again. Didn’t she had her nightmare last night? She tried to remember back. Yes, she was sure she had one. But then….. Her thoughts were interrupted by a groan and her comfy pillow started to move. Then she remembered last night. Nightmare. Sobbing. Arjun.
She slowly turned to look at him. She had her head on his chest and arm around him. He had one arm around her and one tucked under his head. He was watching her. Radhika got up from the bed and felt embarrassed. She had had her sob fest all over him. How humiliating. He must be thinking that she was a crybaby.

Radhika: um… how… i mean… you need not have stayed yesterday. I was fine.

Arjun: its okay. I had a good night’s sleep yesterday.

He winked at her.

Radhika: well you can leave now. I am okay.

But arjun ignored her and stretched yawning. He placed both his arms folded under his head.

Arjun: why leave when i am so comfy here? This bed is seriously good and i have such a beautiful view before me.

Radhika opened her mouth to retort but nothing came to her and closed her mouth.

Arjun: by the way… do you know that you talk in your sleep? Its cute. And thanks….. i didn’t know you had such high opinion of me.

Radhika now panicked: i do not talk in my sleep…… Do i?

Arjun smiled: yeah you do. But don’t worry whatever you said yesterday was good.

He got up from her bed and left after winking at her. He stopped at the doorway and turned around.

Arjun: and be ready by 8.30 am. We are going out.

Radhika: where?

Arjun shrugged: out. Just be ready.

Radhika: but why?

Arjun: cause….. your life needs some fun.

After he left she went into the washroom and looked into her reflection at the mirror.

Radhika: do i really talk in my sleep?

Sam knew what she was about to do was dangerous. But she didn’t have another choice. She was following her father’s car in a taxi. She had a doubt that vivek was going to meet with the person he talked to on phone yesterday. She has not informed neil or arjun as she was not sure of vivek’s intentions. When she had proof she will give it to neil. Her father parked his car near a closed godown. It was a factory complex that vivek was planning to buy. She knew this since she had been present there at the meeting. She got out of the taxi at some distance from vivek so as not to alert him to her presence.
She payed the driver and followed him. Sam had a scarf covering her face except her eyes. She had on a sunshade on her eyes. Sam saw a man wearing a black suit and a hat also enter the godown after her father. She stealthily went to peek in the window. The man was shaking hands with vivek. And then they got into a discussion. Sam strained in to hear their conversation.

Man: it is as if someone had tipped him off about our movements. He has made the dealings tough. We need to plan more. He is scrutinising everything.

Vivek: that neil mishra! No one would believe seeing his intelligence that he was adopted. He have the same brain for business that sharat had.

It took everything in her for sam to stop from gasping aloud. They were talking about neil and some business deal with him.

Man: but what concerns me more is how he got suspicious. Are you sure details from our end are not leaking.

Vivek: no one knows about this other than the both of us. So what about the girl. Are you-

Just then sam’s phone rang and all three froze hearing the ringtone. Sam immediately disconnected the call and ran away towards another building. She hid inside a garbage basket and held her breath hoping that she won’t be found. She heard footsteps passing the basket and held herself motionless for sometime. After sometime she heard vivek’s sound.

Vivek: whoever that was must have escaped. We should be more careful. That neil is smart. Don’t under estimate him. Lets leave now and i will inform you about the next meeting.

Then she heard their footsteps and gradually it faded away amd silence was restored. She must have hid in the basket for almost half an hour. On her way home she thought about what all happened and decided that it was time to arrange a meeting with neil and arjun.

Next: life needs some fun- part 2

Sorry guys…. i know this was a short update but i was busy. I will update redefined on thursday and scl on friday…..

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34 Comments

  1. Brin on April 4, 2016 4:58 am

    This story is so interesting, waiting for the next update. 🙂

    • Amy on April 4, 2016 5:00 pm

      Thanks brin 🙂

  2. Rg on April 4, 2016 5:37 am

    Gud one amy

    • Amy on April 4, 2016 5:02 pm

      Thanks rg 🙂

  3. moni on April 4, 2016 6:55 am

    nice one.

    • Amy on April 4, 2016 5:02 pm

      Thanks moni 🙂

  4. rosie on April 4, 2016 7:33 am

    What…thu n Fri…amy dear seriously I don’t want u to be busy…lol…kiddin…as usual u r fantastic writer…plz write a suspense story book n don’t forget to send me soft copy…lov u …tc??

    • Amy on April 4, 2016 5:07 pm

      Hey rosie…. thank u…. even i don’t want to me to be so busy 😀 …….. oh if i write a book first copy will be for you with my autograph 😀 😀 🙂 take care dr

  5. Sv on April 4, 2016 7:37 am

    I was scared if sam gets caught thank god nothing happened. Ardhika part was fun I loved it. Update the next part soon my dear god of suspense writer amy . Love u dear take care .

    • Amy on April 4, 2016 5:11 pm

      Thanks sv….. take care dr…. 🙂

  6. roshini on April 4, 2016 7:53 am

    Good One Amy.

    • Amy on April 4, 2016 5:11 pm

      Thanks roshini……. 🙂

  7. aastha on April 4, 2016 8:00 am

    i too was tensed like sam….pity she dint seethe guy in black……was it not saral??????????plzzzz update asap…..love u…

    • Amy on April 4, 2016 5:17 pm

      Thanks aastha… you will soon know if it was saral or not….. 🙂

  8. Hayathi on April 4, 2016 8:43 am

    Nice dr

    • Amy on April 4, 2016 5:20 pm

      Thanks hayathi 🙂

  9. Shree on April 4, 2016 9:51 am

    It was cute!! S wants to help Neil… Wants to win his love ..

    Post soon… Love you ??

    • Amy on April 4, 2016 5:21 pm

      Thanks shree 🙂

  10. Gauri on April 4, 2016 9:54 am

    Amazing update Amy…you are keeping the suspense very well…waiting for the next one 🙂

    • Amy on April 4, 2016 5:22 pm

      Thanks gauri 🙂

  11. susi on April 4, 2016 3:03 pm

    Superb yaar ……..ardhika part was fun…..waiting for next one …….

    • Amy on April 4, 2016 5:23 pm

      Thanks susi 🙂

  12. subha on April 4, 2016 3:59 pm

    awesome yaar…..please update soon………..

    • Amy on April 4, 2016 5:24 pm

      Thanks subha 🙂

  13. Abi on April 4, 2016 4:20 pm

    OMG… amy??

    U nailed it today….. Hayyo… The story s just awesome… Especially the talk abt Neil’s intelligence….. I was fliying… Becoz i love only??????……. My mind s despirating….. That if i were sam?????…. I really really like him…

    Pls…. Update soon…. Dying for it???… Bye sweetheart??

    • Amy on April 4, 2016 5:29 pm

      Thanks so much abi….. 🙂 🙂
      The whole time i was reading your comment i was smiling in a “aww this comment’s cute” way……
      And its not just you… its impossible to not love neil…… 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • Abi on April 4, 2016 10:16 pm

      ??? thanks for the reply amy?….. And yes… Its impossible to not love neil…. ??…. Again i m saying…. Pls guys… Bear me?

      ” I LOVE NEIL, LOVE NEIL, LOVE NEIL……………. “???

    • Amy on April 4, 2016 11:58 pm

      Me too 😀 😀 😀

  14. usha on April 4, 2016 4:57 pm

    good episode.

    • Amy on April 4, 2016 5:25 pm

      Thanks usha 🙂

  15. maandey on April 5, 2016 2:30 pm

    OMG……dnt i comment here yesterday……yes i did…but alas…..it was not posted…..amy…love u sweety…love your story….. <3

  16. Roma on April 6, 2016 3:03 pm

    Wowwww awesome, marvellous episode. ..arjun very lovely comments….rads speechless….life really needs fun….I’ll wait for this funnnn…neil in dilemma, fight between his heart n mind…but I’m sure sam will win his trust soon…Sam wow very brave act but she missed to see the other guy….vivek n saral both same pinch, they deserve worst possible punishment for killing beautiful lovely family and spoiling rads past….keep it up honeyyy. …very very interesting n exciting story. ..eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . .

  17. Abi on April 6, 2016 10:14 pm

    Dear amy…. ???..

    U r time, s going finsh now…. I mean u hav to post ur update…. I got tired of waiting. Waiting. Wating??

    Its enough??, sweety pls update soon… If u took so time means, then u hav to give a long update dear?….. It s not a request?…. Its ur big fan’s order… ??????

    ???? just joking…. But pls… Update soon, i m waiting for u??
    Bye???

  18. Abi on April 11, 2016 12:58 am

    I m still WAITING for u nd ur fiction amy….
    Dear pls.. I konw u may be busy but pls… ????????

    Still waiting with lots of patience ??

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