Manmarziyan 29th August 2015 Written Episode, Written Update on TellyUpdates.com
The Episode starts with Radhika asking Mala and Dada ji to what will she disagree. Dada ji makes excuses and tells about her earpain, asking her to clean his ear. Radhika asks Mala to say. Mala says someone is coming to meet you today. Radhika says she does not want to meet anyone, she will not marry. Mala asks her to settle down. Radhika says she won’t marry. Mala asks her to tell that person herself. The door bell rings. Mala asks Radhika to come. Radhika says she can’t love anyone else and recalls Arjun.
Arjun come to her while she picks the papers blown by air. She says she won’t come and asks Mala to go. He looks at her. Khwaishon pe likhi……………plays………………. He smiles and comes close to her. He holds her. He says your life is like blank paper Radhika, you are incomplete without ink of love. She turns and looks at Arjun. He asks why did she not marry. She says I m willing to marry, someone is coming to see me today. He asks such will with someone else’s signs. She sees mangalsutra and says I was removing it. He asks her to remove and give him. She turns and asks why did he come here.
He says I have to come to take whats mine. She says he can get other mangalsutra in Mumbai and asks him to go. He says he will go after taking his things. She says she has got her everything here. He holds her face and says you can’t lie well even today, if you got your everything, why do you make me feel your presence all the time……………… he asks why is her name in all his talk, why does his every moment wish to have her, I love you Radhika.
He says you left me and came here, but I could not leave you. She says Sam loves you. He says Sam does not love me. She asks then…. He smiles and says where there’s Samandar Singh, there is her idiot too. Sam eats food and Neil enters Radhika’s home. He says wife is resting when husband is working. Sam tells Dada ji about her choice, asking if he is good. Dada ji asks Neil does he know to clean ears. Neil asks what. They all laugh. Dada ji says love is great when there is friendship intact in it. Mala says she will get Radhika. Sam says let them be, even Lord should not come between husband and wife.
Radhika asks Neil? Arjun says Neil… no one knows how love happens, look at me, I fell in love with my way’s stones, I have my heart to my problem. Khwaishon pe likhi……………plays……………… He holds her close and kisses her. She says Sir… He says Arjun…. Just Arjun. She says Arjun and he hugs her.
After two years, scene shifts in Mumbai, Radhika wakes up Arjun romantically. He hugs her and she reminds him the schedule. He says he is getting best copywriter award today. He says you never used to take my name, and now whenever you call, you scold me and call. She says Arjun… and combs her hair. He says just name will not work now, and holds her close. Sam is sleeping. Neil wakes her up and she greets him good morning. He says now this is yours, and handsover the puppy….. They think what to name it, and suggest like Nesam, or Apple.
Arjun, Radhika, Sam and Neil come to Birdsong and greet Piyali. They all work together. Manmarziyon pe ab hum chale……………….plays…………. Arjun puts sugar in his coffee and they laugh seeing him. Some light moments while working are shown. Sam and Neil fight. Arjun and Radhika stop them. They discuss about work, while the title song plays in BG. They all hug and smile.
The show ended with a cheerful scene in Birdsong depicting their happy lives.
Update Credit to: Amena
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You are right, the take 15-20 mins in moderating. But if it’s big, they take an hour too… So annoying! And yeah, I too think we are gonna cross 2000 in a zippy… ’cause it only took 7 days to reach 1000. Another 7 days to go. Will miss you all trribly
Hi samiha….well said yaar. ..
Crossed 1000 as u wished.,..sure ll cross 2000 dear….
All of my writer friends-anu,Thena,farha,Natasha,anaya,Mandy…..u don’t even know how much I will miss u and ur story.really sorrowful.. ..??(sometimes I got jealous why I can’t write so well……Ha…ha..)
My analyser friend renu,ur pov always touched me.Don’t know whether I will get such analysis ever or nt.?
My artist friend riya,ur design is always heart touching.will feel it dear.. .?
And my advanced friend Mitty,ur spoiler news always made me first.
And I will check the fb regularly dears(but I don’t have any id),so keep me updated guys.
hey ireena…u made me emotional yaar….
wish u a bright future dear…may God bless u…
Will miss u too!! A looooooooootttttt dear !!!
Will miss u.
Nice epi dear. But what is the full form of SP and MA? I have a hunch, just making sure…
Sadiyal padhaakoo n 3men army
EPISODE 128:
SCENE 1:
HOSPITAL:
epi starts wid neil convincin arjun 2 leave 4 mumbai tellin tat he ll tak care of evrythin thr in hrisikesh…..arjun nodded in yep,hs face lukd impassive though….they went in & 2 their surprise radz ws sittin ready in bed…..she ws made wel ready by sam….she lukd fresh,elated,hr saree neatly draped & hr hair,ah! it ws a neatly combed coiffure……arjun ws dazed by radz & she threw hm an ‘am alr8’ smile just 2 convince hm 2 take hr 2 Mumbai wid hmself….Neil broke the silence sayin tat they had 2 leave as it ws time already & left out 2 finish the hospital formalities……..
“Oh! yes yes….its time…..chalo chalo jaldi chalo”sam said followin neil 2 exit the room….
radz still felt light headed & stood up wid a great deal of effort…..arjun ws al seein hr & she again threw hm the same smile 2 convince hm……Oh! she felt really dizzy & certainly needed a lil nap atleast, 2 retrieve hr strength….she ws unsteady & weak at the knees……..she hardly lifted up hr r8 leg & ws gonna miss hr balance…..arjun gave hs support 2 hr side b4 she fell……nw she managed 2 stand, clutchin hs shirt at hs elbow…..he askd hr 2 take complete rest as hs partnership wid bs wsnt more imp than hr……radz nw stood straight bt still wid hs support…..
“am alr8….koi problem nahi….chalo arjun”,she said in a firm tone wid a smile of conformity……
arjun’s left hand clutched hr wrist,hs r8 wrappin around hr waist at back & they made an exit….
SCENE 2:
Nandhini ws waitin somewhr alongside hr car…..she kept on lukin at hr watch often & gettin annoyed evrytim…..she uttered uffffffff in irritation……saral came thr & she started shoutin at hm 4 hs act on hospital…….he shouted back at hr sayin tat ws hs personal…..she gestured ‘talk 2 my hand’ wid eyes closed & face downward….in a sec he closed hs mouth & gulped hs throat…..she xtended money 2 hm & warned 2 nt stray 4m their plan…..she alerted hm 2 stay away 4m arjun …..she got in2 hr car & it moved off swiftly……saral luking at the money & smirked…..
SCENE 3:
Radhika’s house:
Ardhika got aashirvaad 4m dadaji…..dadaji blessed them 2 giv hm junior choti soon….arjun threw an ardour luk at radz & she blushed…….they got blessings 4m dilip & mala…..mala xtended vermilion 2 arjun 2 apply it on choti’s maang…..he gave a respectful grin,tuk a pinch of sindoor & applied it on radz maang…..hs eyes lukin in2 hrs & hrs in2 hs……he admired hr,hs face lit up wid glee & she ws emotional….radz hugged dadaji,mala & dilip….tears rolled down & she bid goodbye…..
Neil kept the suitcase on the car’s top….he tuk the driver seat,sam 2 hs adjacent…..ardhika tuk backseat…..radz rested hr head on arjun’s arm…..the car flew away 2 mumbai…..
END of epi 128…….
leave ur feedback buddies….just tell me if u lik my posts cos i don want 2 irk u wid my unwanted posts deariiiieeeeessss….feel free 2 say anythin buddies…..luv u loads….
Thena interesting!! Saral nandini plan seems to be a mystery!! Look forward to the next episode!!! Keep rocking!!
hey shub…thank u sooooooo much yaar
keep readin & keep gvng ur feedback…
means a lot buddy
sorry to say buddy.. u said Neil convincing arjun that he will take care of evrythng in hrishikesh askd them to leave for Mumbai.. at the end all the four in the car and U said car flew away to Mumbai..
logic missing.. sorry if I hurt u buddy…
hi anu dear….actu neil said in the thot tat radz wudnt cum 2 mumbai as she ws unwell….but radz managed 2 persuade evry1 tat job shud b gvn preference …..so no need 4 neil 2 stay back in hrishikesh…..cleared dear?
n pls no prblm in askin anythin dear…feel free…u r welcum my bud…..
yeah thena got cleared.. thanq.. keep rocking.
Very nice yaar waitin 4 d nxt epi !!!
Hey Mandy…..thank u buddy….
Am also wondering what are those 2 saral n nandini upto??
Hey anaya…..keep guessing dear….
Thank u soooooooo much fr reading yaar
Nice epi but 1 thing. Neil drove for Mumbai, wheras he had stated to handle Hrishikesh matters… I don’t wanna hurt you but it seemed contradictory….
Oh! Thanks for clearing confusion, dear…
Oh dear samiha he cud u hurt me yaar….pls don’t use those kinda words dear….
N to ur ques I ve replied anu above yaar….I think I wrote lil confused today…..sry buddies…evry1
n hey I likd the names u gave yaar….i likd Natal yaar n I said it in previous page buddy
Luv u loads dear…
Oops mistakes….it WS hw not he n it WS naral dear…
No prbs dear…
It looks interesting.
hey tanya….thanu u so much dear….
keep gvng ur feedback yaar
theena,…loved it 2 the core,…
i dinn felt any diif btw u n our cvs dear,…
u r moving story in the r8 track deary,…
oh renu ….my dear i woke up 2 c such praisin words 4m my 1st friend here….
oh u made an amazin sunday 4 thena…..
luv u loads….
Very nyc !!!! Theena you are just awesome dea!!!!keep continuing ur stories!!! You are doing a get job?????
loveeeeee alll ur episss lots 😀
Ireena…will miss u so mch…tkcr n god bless
thena u make me addicted to ur story day by day…feel like cant live without ur lines…jst waitng for nxt episodes
anu…great gng…u too make me happy with ur story…cos i miss mmz a lot…ur episodes mk me feel its not offair…hugs..
hey saji….omg….
u made my day dear…thank u soooooo much buddy
luv u loads…..
saji thanq so much.. it is just bcoz of the love we have for the show… thanq for ur comments. love u.
Sorry i ddn mention kfar,,natasha,,riya..
all dng a great job..talents…love u all alot for this
Hey saji ??a new frend !!! Very happy yaar !!!
No Thena hw could it feel irritating to us…all ardhika moment we njoy yarr…n abt the epi its a super duper n mindblowing… n like arjuns looks aftr hearing dadaji ashirwad abt lil choti…..wht is nandinis plan yaar..got tensed….bt like our Radhu’s smile….looking forward for nxt epi..
@ kfar yup dear ther r prob in loading commnts nw n soon we will hit the 2000 commnts….
@ Ireeena we too will miss u….Thanks for being wonderful friends dear
hey dipika……no words yaar….
thank u 4 mentioni scenes dear….
keep gvng ur feedback….means a lot dear…
luv u loads…
Farah – loved today’s story. Once again fluent writing. I like the line on ” got in to wrong tube” . that was very cheeky. , Keep going. Eagerly waiting for nxt epi. Hey drawn together is equally racy. Please update parallel if possible.
@theena: loved ur episodes,….arjun’s caring attitude 2 save radz but he ll not spare saral 4 doing such thing 2 his wife,….ly radz can ctrl arjun’s obsession n posessiveness over her,…n still he ll not allow neil 2 look after his wife,…he s like a child who wont give his toy 2 any1,…he s holding radz as she s his personal property,…& loved ur epi on the whole,….Next priya mehra entering their life,…seems quite interesting,…& wanna see more posessive arjun(renu’s wish dear),…..
& thena thanx 4 ur encouraging words,…but i doubt i can write dear but m enjoying ur epi soooo much deary,…..
Oh renu…..wat shall i say dear…….omg u made my day……
Thank u soooooooo soooooooo much dear….fr ur pov,suggestion deary……
Oh even in tis small review u rocked…..amazing talent dear…….
But y doubt yaar…..just write wen u find free time dearyyy……
guys… evry1 u rock wid ur story’s n pov … kfar i’m a fan of ur story.. anu natasha thena ananya… u guys r really talented n tnx 4 keeping the show alive
though i nvr used to cmmnt i daily used to visit this page to.ur cmmnts
hey can ny1 plz tell me de song 4 whch ardhika n nesam danced on 26th epi.
ishika, thanq so much for commenting for us and mentioning our names.. it means a lot dear… stay connected on Fb too… love u…
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hey ishika thank u so much yaar
Hey guys dont mind me asking do u guys watch CNWK on colors channel ??
What is CNWK? I mean the full form… Please do tell….
samiha me too dont know wat is CNWK yaar
CNWK – COMEDY NIGHTS WITH KAPIL on COLORS TV…. mandy i watch it sometimes.. but not regular..
Oh, even I don’t watch it…
hey mandy no yaar…..just watched ly our mmz & nw nothin dear
Frens today im posting bit early…
The episode starts with Nandini preparing quotation for education of children. She was called by elderly people, and she goes to them and talks to them addressing papaji and maa. Later She completes the quotation and goes to little boy, sees him sleeping and leaves to her room and sits thinking about her parents(as she addressed so).
NS pampering their puppy apple. They make her sleep. NS come to their room and Neil says Sammy I love u and acts romantic. Sammy hits his head with hers and says TIT FOR TAT for morning collision and winks. Both utter ouchhhh in pain and Sam says idiot. He says Ahh with ?, and with his smirky, face says good night and sleeps turning aside. Sam feels sorry for him and sleeps. AR have their blanket on and talks about their day@beach and lost in peeping in each others eyes. Radhika winks suddenly and arjun feels shy and blushes. They both hug each other and sleeps.
Its morning, Sam gets up and messages Arjun without noticing of Neil. Arjun replies to her hiding from radhika. All the four get ready. Sam fills her bag with all the cosmetics and AR and Neil with some clothing. Neil was bit annoyed with sam. They start to leave along with direction team. They reach almost the location point and searches for the best visuality and usage of the product.
London, nandini welcomes the sponsors and gives presentation and handsover the copy of quotation. They were impressed and they sign to sponsor for education of children.
The ad shoot goes on at T_______R waterfalls (guess the name for now) and they wrap up after completion. Sam messages arjun and arjun hides it from radhika again. Direction team leaves first. AR & NS stay there for sometime and enjoys a calm and serene surrounding with a quiet lake and the only roaring sound fills the silence is from the waterfalls, beautiful nature, greenary all over, hills reaching the sky.. (Looks like a perfect romantic date).
Arjun and Neil goes for swimming in the lake, watched by radz & Sam. Arjun asks radhu to come, but Neil being annoyed doesn’t call Sam. She jumps into the lake and acts like moving far from them. Neil notices this and swims towards her saying going beyond the mentioned line will be dangerous and pulls her back. They both have an eye lock and Sam says sorry and they both hug tightly in water.
PRECAP : AR’s romance and car breaks down.
NOTE : I’ll reveal the place, waterfalls name and location 2moro as it will make u visualize 2moro’s romantic episode. Till then guess it T_______R.. 😉 😛 … Stay tuned…
Hey I m jus guessing is it thoseghar waterfalls in satara !!!
Really good, wondering what Arjun is hiding from Radhika…..
anu,….awesome update dear,….
loved ur story too,…
u n theena rocked it yaar,…
good job yaar,update sooooooon.
hey anu vry much likd tat nesam moment in lake buddy…
me too wonder wat is tat surprise yaar….
Very nyc episode anu!!! Loved it!!! Keep going!! You hv a gt an awesome talent??????
“SMILE DOESN’T ALWAYS INDICATE HAPPINESS, RATHER IT ALSO INDIATES HOW MUCH YOU CAN HIDE PAIN” – Novelist Humayun Ahmed.
samiha,…oh my dear,…
loved it yaar,…i even experienced it dear,…
& thanx a lot 4 reading my comments n its really touched my heart,…friend,…
“EVERYONE WILL GIVE YOU PAIN. YOU JUST HAVE TO FIND SOMEONE WHOSE GIVEN PAIN IS TOLERABLE FOR YOU”-Humayun Ahmed.
Wah wah amazin dear I also love poets n poems wich cnten emotions!!?????
hey samiha am a mad lover of quotes yaar…
n these posts r amazin dear…
great Humayun Ahmed
May……August.my journey with manmarzian.at first I didn’t get Hindi well.but with watching manmarzian I learned it .u guys also helped me.
I want to thank amena wholeheartedly.u really provided awesome post everyday.salute to u.
Thanks aaaaaa llllloooooootttttt dears for ur wishes.u guys take care and lead a happy,smooth and confident life.☺☺???
ireena,…wat happened my friend????
y r u talking senti senti ,…..
@ Thena….wonderful epidode again….m liking d caring n loving Arjun…..awwww…hope Rads gets well soon….Neil n Sam are such good friends…..n Nandini’s reaction to Saral: talk to my hand…haha….in between MMZ I was forcefully reminded of Palak from Comedy Nights with Kapil!
@ Anu….good that u updated earlier…m getting to read so many awesome updates before going off to sleep….but my brain’s so sluggish….I’m unable to guess nething about d Falls:-\ n what r Arjun n Sam planning? Well guess I just need to wait for d next update….btw its always Radhika who blushes….but now Arjun was shying away n blushing…..well that’s a first…good one!
@ Thena forgot to mention- that bit where Dadaji blesses them to give Junior choti n then Arjun’s look n Radhika’s blush…..it was all too cute:)
raashi,….How r u dear????
its a long time,..i saw ur comment dear,…
miss u dear,…
M good yaar…..hope u r fine dear:) n I missed u guys too..m not dat consistent out here these days but m trying to improve….as it is we haven’t got much time:(
oh raashi dear…..u touched me again…
really njoyin ur feedbacks….
keep dng buuy…luv u loads
Hey raashi & me too had a fun writing that talk to my hand dear….hahaha….lol
I will keep doing that Thena:)…..n that talk to my hand thing was fun! Haha…Enjoyed it!!
@ telly bytes:
Please dont close this site & please open a new Fan page 4 Manmarziyan like Desitvbox .com,….
please please please,…i dont wanna miss all my friends here n i dinn ve fb too,…please TB,consider my request,…i hope atleast u ll hear my request unlike Starplus,….
U can find such amazing comments 4m all my friends here,…Each comments is highly commendable n no words 2 describe every1’s talent here,…
please consider my request,..please,…here v r not chitchatting ,…n our comments r related ly 2 mmz,….
I wish they would consider ur request…..would b so happy…….infact that’s a wish of all of us which u voiced out!! Thanks a lot for that!! Love MMZ:)
“One can easily be identified by his Laugh. Everybody cries in the same way, but everybody laughs in their own way”-Humayun Ahmed.
This words r really really valuable dear to me.I think on this page only u r younger than me(ha..ha..)so wish u a very successful and happy life…??
Yeah, probably…. Thanks a lot. Wishing you a very happy goodbye……
So true!!
@all freinds,..:
Thanx a lot friends 4 reading my comment n m impressed by all ur encouraging words n i dinn try 2 write sth like theena, anu,amaya,natasha,kfar,…. but i wanna fill the blanks which most of us felt rushed by cvs,…
But still i cant write my filler episodes comments as i ve less time 2 roam here cox of my studies friends,….n if possible ill try 2 post my reviews about nesam 2day r 2morrow n ll continue reminiscing old ardhika memories,…
So that u can connect with current epi by theena n anu n link with remembering wonderful old ardhika memories thru my comment at times,…
LOve u all Friends,….I never think that i love all my friends here like my real life friends,…Thank u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much 4 all ur love 4 ur RENU,….
Ha…ha…sorry for being senti…renu.Anyway,hope u to have a good way in future.bye bye.I hope to meet u in future and have ur high thoughtful words.miss u ……?
Thanks Renu, you really are a good friend…..
None of us know each other in real life, but here, a virtual frienship and love that has grown amongst us will evermore be fresh in my mind and heart. Will miss you all after the site closes.
Samiha i really like ur quotes, its really nice dat ur finding time to check and see fMous lines. Very cooool 😀
Hey renu about nesam huh……wow…
As usual i ll wait here dear
So, here I’m with my update and all my lovelies here just open your hearts and blind the undermining people with your positive light and beauty of your soul…(alright itz me after listening to the song ‘Titanium’
You shoot down, but I won’t fall…Im TITANIUM..
So just shutting and updating n guys I don’t wanna confuse u with my stories but I hope you like em..
Alright, Chicas…this is dedicated ya all
Drawn Together
Radhika’s nerves were frazzled, her hands sweated, her body becoming cold with worry, confusion and bewilderment. The reality of her situation was getting to her, just months ago she had been attending parties with her mother and now she was going to a high end business party with her husband. Well, a pretend one. She was going to mess this up. What if she trips over something? What if she blurts out something inapproriate?
She was not an unmarried girl in society. She was a wife. Wife of a multimillionaire tycoon, the black hearted prince that everyone hated most. She was now Mrs. Arjun Mehra.
The thought made her dizzy. She lifted up her phone to cancel the plan, that is telling him not to include her in the dinner party, but, Radhika stopped herself. The contract, her freedom. He was going to divorce her if she did not particpate in the farce of this marraige
As usual,fab episode,dr.my wishes for u at previous page.miss u..
last week this day our beloved show went off air,, I think no one remembered.. remembering all the last episodes scenes I made a story not to miss any lead character, keeping aside all the other characters. I didn’t add birdsong too as it was theirs from then… 😉 😛 …. that’s the reason I posted today’s episode so early..
NS with apple,
AR on bed,
Nandini di (main character as the whole story revolved around her revenge)..
Apparently that day was my bday. Aug 29. One ended. Many new mmz were born!!!
yeah shub. we remember..
thanq so much raashi… yeah u have to wait til tomorrow.. love u..
(ireena dedicating this update to u dear hav an amazing life ahead :D)
A deep inhaled breath pulled up and gathered frayed nerves. She straightened her spine and tilted her chin in determination.Gathering up the before bath lotions she got into the bathroom. She needed a serious bubble bath. She pulled the knob, the water start filling and Radhika poured lavander bits in it for soothing up her nerves. The smell instantly vapoured around from the hot steaming water.
She closed her eyes and dropped into the bath.
Half an hour later, Radhika felt like herself, she straightened her hair and finally slid into the gown. She saw herself in the looking glass, the image blinked back surprised at her. The girl in the mirror was gone and a woman came out looking a lot like her but potrayed a mystery of altogether an another person.
For the first in the tensed evening, a smile graced her lips, her run away confidence came back tenfold, it also brought a little colour to her pale cheeks.
The black gown hugged to her curves, almost a second skin. The soft shimmery material was beautiful, it leff her shoulders and arms bare, but she had black mesh wrap to over up before going out.
Radhika slid into a pair of cinderalla shoes, good, it lifted up her from the ground a good three inches. Now, she will not be dwarfed by her husband. She felt like a princess. Well, a demure princess to a black hearted prince, her mind commented wryly. Hmm, but he was not a bad sort. He was just…her forehead crinkled for a word to describe a tug of rush she felt when she saw his half smile, her mind grabbed a word from the zoom of intense vocabulary that she already thought of from looking at him from top to bottom. Yes, Alluring, he did exclude the mystic dark allure from his strong built frame, it is that she felt or Radhika just described a vampire. Well, he very well looked like and behaved like though.
Devilshly handsome, compelling piercing hazel eyes. What plays behind the gaze? What was behind the mask of iron?
Enough said, Radhika did not want to stray anywhere near him, or else she was danger of losing sanity if she so ever got any closer.
She sat on the chair opoosite to the dressing table. Make to her suited minimal, a blooming pink lipstick, mascara, liquid compact and she was done.
renu, samiha thanq so much for the comments.. love u loads.. big hug..
mandy : few hrs to go… ill reveal the details soon.. love u.. big hug..
kfar: as usual u r making addicted to ur story.. keep in touch buddy… bug hug…
mitty: where r u?we r missing u.. come soon dear..
I really don’t knw wat to say
he cud I possibly love ppl I have Neva met so much
I have been a silent reader all along but can no longer help myself from commentin @ thena…there s no diff btw u nd cvs, infact u r almost better….@kfar,renu,anu,ireena, sameeha,Natasha,happy….I love u all and reaaly wish to meet u… I come here to read ur comment everytym and its like cold water to my head when m sad….love u loads deaaries….
thanq so much reda for commenting for us.. that too taking my name means a lot.. love u.. stay connected on Fb as well….
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Anu dear. ..really donno Wat to say. ….Once again I m telling u ..u guys are amazing amazing amazing. ..better dan mmz cvs. …Eagerly waiting for more stories. …..keep rocking yaar. …???????
hi reeda….welcum 2 mmz friends group yaar….
n u words…oh means a lot….
thank u so much dear
Thena dear i hv been tryin since morning yaar to come n read ur epis..all in one time i read turning pages. Yaar its so nice dearrrrrrrr 😀
thanks so much dear for such a nice comment
Just as she was searching for some jewelery, the door creaked open and their stood her husband near the threshold, husband/ pretend one/her freedom holder/in short a stranger.
She saw his image in the mirror, has he grown an inch taller since she last saw him or was he this tall always?
Her serene heart started palpitating again, he was wearing a black Armani suit, he looked deadly handsome, well except the granite expression. His hair gleaming black was gelled up a little. He had a box in hand, Radhika frowned.
With deep sense of discomfort she got and turned around slowly.
He wasn’t at the door but strolled himself inside and he stood now right in front of her.
Radhika glanced at his eyes, his gaze arrested her in a lock of freeze, his eyes now warm brew, slid first at her hair, then down slowly, leisurely, to her forehead, eyes, it stayed a second there and Radhika’s breath held up, then it slid down to her nose, lips, cheeks, chin and all over her face, then down her body..
His stare arrested on her bare shoulders, it made Radhika extremely uncomfortable, then his gaze slid down slowly to her toes. His eyes, sharp came back to hers. She tensed up yet again.
Was he planning to give her a heart attack? if so, he was so close to succeeding.
He then broke the intensely disturbing stare.
“Turn around.” He said, his voice deep and burring, which made her jump a little.
His voice flat and must say drawly and bored.
Was this guy any interested in going to the party, Radhika had hoped to socialize with friends and family, as a said duty of newlyweds, but to her dissapointment and also relief is that..the man was as isolated and marooned as if a shipwrecked/not found/missing person/ in short, he was a complete recluse.
“Turn around, Radhika.” He said again, this time a tad annoyed, his face still a hard granite.
Why should she turn around? She wanted to ask, it was at the tip of her tongue, but she swallowed the words and did as she was asked for no as ordered to.
She turned around, he a good four inch taller than her, he looked ibto her eyes in the mirror.
He moved closer, his body warmth hit her back, still looking into her eyes, he opened the box and took out a beautiful looking ruby beaded necklace attached to a platinum clasp.
Radhika gasped looking at the rubies, it was so beautiful the necklace, it blinded her eyes with its brightness. With mesmerised eyes she saw him open the clasp. He slid it around her neck, the cool heavy perch of it made her shiver. His warm fingers touched her skin while he clasped it. His touch heated her skin and blood. His fingers slid along the necklace creating a heating pattern at the back of her neck. His eyes turned a shade darker, his forefinger slid down slowly on her back, Radhika shivered feeling it, his finger travelled down her spine, but stopped midway. He buttoned the zip of her back, frimly zipping up her gown, her cheeks heated, her eyes stayed locked to his warm honeyed gaze.
“Put on the earrings.”” He whispered into her ear, his breath fell on her neck and bare shoulder………
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A break I need girlies 😀
Till den, dedicatin dis song to u all…David guette…’Titanium’
You shoot me down, but I won’t fall…..I’m TITANIUM..
oh farha am freezed….
wat a description my dear…..
u stopped my breath buddy….keep rockin deary
Heyyyy dear thanks a lot ya 😀
Farha your writing has captivated me. I am falling in love with the story. Ur writing is too good. You will go places girl. I wish you a great future. Loved the lines especially his eye movement.. Very eager for the next episode.
Shub thanks so much friend:D
it made my day reading ur comment I hv been tryin since morning to come here but got stuck since i was out all day 😀
hahah hope i could go place and means ur falling in love wit my story 😀
missed a few words haha means a lot that ur falling in love wit my story n sigh, wish i cud go places,. its u all who comment so nicely on my story:D
So, bear with me here here updating the other story…wat can I say I’m an owl. And i forgot I dedicate the song to Rads too, she and ever persistent nature to do, the song reminded me how she tried hard to stay strong even when people were shooting down her will…come whatever may she is TITANIUM..
Chapter -4(Together)
Did she just that out?Did he hear it? Oh my god. She looked back at him again. No, he didn’t. If he did, he will be running far far away from her. Real far away. Stupid fool! You almost did confess. She shouted in her mind. Somebody just shoot her now. She looked around. Crap, she did almost made a fool of herself in the middle of the crowded canteen. Oh, god, she was going to be sick.
She pulled at her hand, but Arjun wouldn’t let go. She tried again and again.
“What? What’s wrong?” He gave her his full attention after several pulls.
God, what does he eat? He had so much strenght even though he was lean.
Sam frowned.
“Yeah, Rads, what’s wrong? You look pale.” She asked concerned.
“Nothing is wrong.” She flustered up and fake laughed.
They both gave her an eyebrow raise enquiry at the same time.
what? She shook her head. It looks like they were both long lost sister and brother, who just met, and Radhika became the third wheel here.
“I..I just need to use the washroom.” She explained, and slid a lock of hair behind the ear, it was irritating how fell over her eyes constantly.
She avoided Arjun’s stare which was burning holes on the left side of her head.
“Ohkay.” Sam nodded her head slowlyike she really was trying to understand her.
She pushed back the chair and got up with heavy heart and mind full of propelling thoughts. She turned to leave the table but a tug at her hand held her still.
“Arjun, my hand.” She said in a low tone, looking down at their joined fingers.
His hand was large, glorious and manly and hers was puny, pale and totally unsuitable to be held with his.
“You going to look at me?” His tone sounded intently curious.
Oh, no, she was not looking at him.
“Arjun, please, I need to go.” She said and pulled at her hand again.
He got up too and drew closer to her.
“Hey, look at me.” His voice a soft whisper of caress in her skin.
She finally looked up at his eyes giving up.
“What’s wrong?” He asked putting his hand on her cheek.
“I..I just want…” She tried to form words.
“Oh, my god, Ari, what the hell are doing with the stalker?” She heard Saina’s cold voice float through from behind Arjun.
Radhika looked over his shoulder.
Saina stood there with one slender hand over her hips, quite clear in an anger stance. The other arm held a shimmery blue designer bag. She had on a red sleevless long length figure hiugging dress. Her long shoulder length hair fell over in a smooth silky mess. She pushed aside the hair over her back.
Great. Radhika was going to throw up. For real.
She lookedback at Arjun. His eyes were closed. Like he was praying for something…..
Radhika’s eyes slid to Saina’s.
Hello, Ms. Model..who are you calling stalker? and Ari? really?
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nice story,eagerly waiting 4 next update………….
Ufff! Really nice. But you stop at critical points….. Please continue soon…..
Good story……..waiting 4 te rest…
Its getting interesting,waiting for other part. 😀
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verrry good morning to alll chassanis here
@Thena love u too dear…
@renu its ok dear ur pov on old memories all do the work of icing on cake…n waiting for ur next pov…..
@ kfar ur story is mindblowing dear…keep going…
Thank u dearrrrrr 😀
Thanks Bhavu and Abbz means a lot 😀