Khel racha kismat ne dekho #os

Hello dear Kaanchians nd Sanveerians.How r u all???I hope u all r fine nd not angry on me for becoming Eid ka chand for last few days.??

Firstly a big waala sorry to all my lovely readers nd friends for not posting next part of my ff or os.
Kaan pakad ke sorry guys.Plz forgive me …ok i m ready to do sit ups.

Secondly thank u soooo much for showing such a great nd unconditional support.Keep commenting nd showing ur love like this.???

Sorry for grammatical mistakes……Critics nd suggestions r most welcome here.
Enough of my bakwas talkings.Let’s start.
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Hello friends….i m destiny.I have many other names likeMukaddar,Naseeb,Kismat,Bhagya,Fate etc.So,u can call me anything . When a child takes birth ,his destiny also enters in the world with him.I don’t give them what they wants…I give them what they deserves.I m not the lines of ur hand.I m like a partner from birth to death.
But i m Saanchi’s destiny…..who changed her life completely.How??Here is the answer of ir question:

In morning,A girl is seen talking to Lord Ganesha’s idol nd the girl is none other than Saanchi.
S:Bhagwanji!!I m very grateful to u for sending Dr.Khadood Kapoor …i mean Dr.Kapeer Kapoor in my life.He is my fiance nd a senior doctor in SDCH.
When we met first…i just hate that Kabeer to the core.I mean he was such a strict instructor that he forced me to think that i m taking an army training or a doctor training.????

A flashback is shown
Saanchi is seen eating burger in the Cafeteria.
Cafeteria is empty…..no one is there except Saanchi.She is talking to herself.
S:I don’t know what is wrong with Dr.Khadoos..no no….khadoos is a small word for that hitler.

Kabeer passes from there nd sees Saanchi taking break in working hrs.He comes inside the Cafeteria.
K(in loud tone):Dr.Saanchi!!!
(After hearing Kabeer’s voice she stands from her seat tensely)????
K(in his khadoos avtaar):Dr.Saanchi what is wrong with u??Why r u taking snacks in working hrs??Hospital authority has already provided lunch break to all of us.
S(with burger in her mouth):Surrrr.I mean….K(interrupted):Shut up!!Dr.Saanchi first chew ur food properly then speak.
(Saanchi masticates the food properly of her mouth)
S(innocently):I was doing duty from last 7hrs in record room.When my work completed the break was over.So…
K:So,what Dr.Saanchi For this mistake,one week record room duty.
(After saying this,kabeer leaves from there while Saanchi sits in a shocking manner)????
Flashback ends.

But with the passage of time ,i get to know more about him He is a nice person.But i don’t know why i m not that much happy for my marriage.I mean when i was small ,i had some dreams about my marriage.But as my dream of getting a good lifepatner is coming true.I m not feeling….
(Before Saanchi could complete her sentence Pragya shouts Ghost!!)????
S(scaredly):Where is Ghost??
P:In ur mind..woh bhi Kabeer jiju ka.I mean we r getting late for Hospital nd u r talking to ur Bhhagwanji about Kabeer jiju.
(Saanchi throws a pillow on Pragya)
S:U scared me to the hell….nd where is Isha??
P: Today she have a important surgery with Veer .So,can she missed the chance of flirting?

In evening,after a tiring schedule trio of IshPrachi return to their hostel room.
I:Saanchi….i must say u r very lucky.U get the most hot nd happening guy of the hospital.
P:Abeo churail why r u thinking about hotness of jiju…arre i m thinking about Riya,she is very jealous from Saanchi …..gariboun ki model kahin ki.????
S:Guys! It’s not like that i m not marrying him to jealous Ria.I m marrying him bcoz according to me Kabeer is the right lifepartner for me.
P:Ok!! Mateshwari.At the end of this month,our internship will complete nd then,
I:Then,what
P:Then Saanchi ka BAND,BAAJA,BAARAT woh bhi Khadoos jiju ke saath.
S:Pragya!Don’t call him khadoos….he is cute but sometimes become Hitler.
P nd I (together):Ok Mr.Hitler’s fiance.???
IshPra starts laughing.???

Screen shifts to a room in which Veer is writing something in his diary.

MOHABBAT KYA HAI?
BHAROSA YA BEWAFAAI?
YAA ISS DUKH SE RIHAAI?

MOHABBAT SHAYAD KOI BHAROSE KA SAMUNDRA HAI,
JO KABHI KISI KO ZINDAGI DETA HAI TOH KABHI KISI KI ZINDAGI LETA HAI.

MOHABBAT SHAYAD KOI KAHAANI HAI,
JISS MEIN USKA ADHURA REH JAANA USKI KISMAT KI BEMAANI HAI.

MOHABBAT SHAYAD KOI PYAAR KA AASHIYANA HAI,
JISNE SAMAY KE SAATH TOOFAN MEIN GAYAB HO JAANA HAI.

V(teary eyed):I m not completing this poetry as my story also remains incomplete.I don’t know what my desting wants?………….My love Miss.Golgappa is marrying Kabeer but it’s ok i hope u will always remain happy in ur life???
But Saanchi i will alwaya remain in ur life as a friend.

A flashback is shown:
A cute boy is seen who is moving to nd fro outside the children ward.The boy reveals to be our cutiepie Veer.

Veer’s POV:
I don’t know what is wrong woth Dr.Kabeer??Ehy he wants to take revenge from me …..I think he is a icchadhari naag who came in this hospital to take revenge from me.Oh god!!what r u thinking
Veer??Don’t scare from those kids???See they r small.

Saanchi passes from there nd asksVeer that why he is wasting his time as he is assigned in the Children ward.
V(dramatic way):Miss Golgappa lat time my duty was in the children ward ….but not again.I mean like other interns i also want to show my talent that i m capable for many things.
S(in a teasing manner):So what Dr.Veer u na bacche bhagwan ka avtaar hote hain.
V(irritating):Miss Golgappa u know they ask me such questions jinke na sar hote hain na paanv.
S:Veer..It’s ok May be after seeing ur dedication Dr.Malhotra will make u the Head Intern.
V:Head Intern …..woh bhi main…what a joke Miss.Golgappa.
S:Shut up Veer!!!
V(with a puppy face):Miss Golgappa plz try to understand, last time they asked me such strange questions…oh god!!plz save me.???
S:Then it’s ok na Veer.U r a doctor……Give answers to their questions.
V:Ok let me ask u a question.There is baby elephant …12bananas r present in front of him.But he is not eating bananas why???
S(angrily):What a rubbish quetion is this??May be he is not hungry.
V:No..wrong answer.He is not eating bananas bcoz the bananas r fake.Ok let me ask u the another question …now the bananas r real but why baby elephant is not eating them???
S(after thinking):Because now the baby elephant is fake.
V:Again wrong answer ….he is not eating bananas he is suffering from loose motion.
S(angrily):What!Oh god plz someone save me from this Veer.
V:I think u r ok with the trailer of spending one day in children ward.(He starts laughing whole heartedly)????
S:Oh god!!how can i forget this??I have an important meeting with Dr.Kabeer.

Saanchi moves forward nd somehow she slips but two strong hands holds her nd that guy is Veer.They both shares a cute eyelock.
Flashback ends.

AFTER 5 YEARS
Saanchi is dresses in a beautiful bluish pink saree with light earings.Her hairline is filled with vermilion.She is trying to wake someone from sleep.
S:Ishika beta plz get up!!U r getting late for ur school.Oh god! U r becoming lazy like ur father.
I(fake crying):Golgappa muma let me sleep plz.I don’t want to go school.I will only follow ur instructions if u will make a chocolate shake nd my favourite cheese sandwiches for me.
S:Ok beta!!I’ll made whatever my princess want.?????

Saanchi comes out from the Ishika’s room.”HAPPY ANNIVERSARY”Mrs.Saanchi Veer Malhotra.Veer congratulates Saanchi with a beautiful red rose?????
S:Happy anniversary u too.
(She accepts his rose nd give him a side hug)
S(teary eyed):Thank u sooo much Veer for being a part of my life.5yrs ago,on the same day,on the day of my marriage with Kabeer i lost him in an accident?????When everyone was cursing me for being a bad omen,u took my hands nd married me.Thank u ……
(Veer placed his hand on Saanchi’s mouth)
V:No need to say anything…..the reason of Kabeer’s death was an accident..not u.Nd i must thank u for giving me another miss golgappa.
(Veer kisses on Saanchi’s hand thankfully)

Ishika comes there.
I:Mom-Dad i also want a kisshi from both of u.
V nd S(together):ok sweetu.
Both Veer nd Saanchi kisses on Ishika’s cheeks.

Screen freezes on Sanveer’s happy family.

Oh god Veer ki potry toh Ahuri hi reh gayi.Let me
complete.
MOHABBAT NA SAMUNDRA HAI,NA KOI AASHIYA AUR NA HI KOI KAHAANI.
MOHABBAT TOH IBBADAT HAI TERI,JISKI IJAZAT RAB SE MAINE HAI PAAYI.

THE END.

After reading this,i think u all r gonna kill me.
Thank u sooooo much for reading such a crap os.Don’t forget to press like or dislike button.
I m waiting for ur comments.
Stay safe nd HAPPY NEW YEAR in advance.
Love u all????

23 Comments
  1. Riyarocks

    durgeshwari ki bachhi……..itna emotional os…….upar se isko sanveer bana diya……..bohut himmat aa gyi tere main…….ab chup chaap ek kanchi os likh……..wo bhi do din ke andar(1 din socha tha, but concession de rahi hoon, 1din extra)…….luv u sweetieeeee…….bye…….tc

    1. Negisanyukta

      Nhi dii. Gabbar singh ke rhte hue mujhme kaise Himmat aa skti hai??? Just joking ???
      I m 100times sorry dii…i don’t want to let u down but can’t write anything in coming few days. ????
      Love u too dushtani Didi. ????

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u too much dear.Love u????

  2. Super buthey as per Riya I also want kanchi os within this two days ?

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u soo much for sweeeti.?????

  3. Anu88

    So so emotional story….i am feeling very sad…….but so so beautiful and wonderful story yaar……….

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u soo much for ur loe nd support sweetie.

  4. Swethaa

    nice but hope we get kanchi os next time

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u sooo much.

  5. RuCh23

    It was so sad at the same time so beautiful!!! But next time Sanyu, definitely a Kanchi one!!

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u sooo much didi.luv u????

  6. Shayra

    Oh god being a Kaanchi fan u wrote on Sanveer….not fair.But loved this wonderful story.

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thank u.Keep commenting dear

  7. Maharani iss os ke baare mein kam se kam mujhe toh bata deti.Horrible os ..teri tarah?????just joking.Emotional hai……
    Luv u sweetie????

    1. Negisanyukta

      Bhai ho ya Dushman.????

  8. Sanveer

    Superb Story!? Post an Kanchi os as well soon

  9. Niyaaa

    Sanyu nt fair yaar ek to itne din baad post kiya uper se kabir ko maar daala or sanveer bana daala ab fatafat kanchi happy ending wala likh..mujje nhi pata bye gud nit tc??

    1. Niyaaa

      Hehe.. Sikayat k chakkar m os k bare m to bolna hi bhul gyi.. Emotional os yaar feel bad for my poor kabir.. Sayari part is awsome.. Bye

    2. Negisanyukta

      Thanks u apko much dear for ur constant support.It really means a lot to me.?????

  10. Emotional but written too beautiful I don’t mind if it is sanveer Bec as u said it was destiny and the lines u wrote we’re superb keep.writing

    1. Negisanyukta

      Thanks u apko much dear.Keep reading and commenting dear.
      Kuch u sweetie.????

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