Kanchi #FS #that_one_shot

“What the hell r u doing here ….at this hour and specially in my kitchen !!! …..I said answer me !……” she yelled panicking In a long white night gown with crop top nd shorts….her hairs were left loose …Nd a bright spark was clearly shown on her face ….!

He was acting to be busy in cooking still managed to gave a light reply ….”I have my own name ; nd that’s worth to be taken instead of yelling “….!

Her anger touched the heights …”kabeerriiiiiiiii ! Now happy ” she again shouted !

He replied not even frustrating a bit …”it’s dr Kabeer…khduus saanchi ”

How could have she remained calm ….she too yelled …”it is AGENT SAACHI ; head of cbi team … nd u r a criminal ! ”

She was impatiently waiting for what would he say … but he was as calm as water flowing through the waterfall ….!

” look I am talking to u …I thought u as a nice person helped u gain justice nd here I am now …didn’t knew wht u did wd me ” she remarked !

This time he was been too irritated by her unending questions in front of his calm tone !
He answered …
“I raped u ! Any more questions ?”

She was just left with an oval face !!
He turned to go towards the frizz for some ingredients ….
She just followed him nd warned in a calm tone …”u …u r gone ….I will encounter u God promise … khduus ! ”

Kabeer- was that a warning or a REQUEST !
By the way ur seniors had messaged u 10 times asking abt where I am ? Did u find me or not ?

So here I go guys … a new ise crept my mind yesterday …first I thought to write an OS but this story was more of their bumping into each other ; two exactly different charcters…a cop nd a 2 day old criminal who once was a top dr in SDCH ….rather than just a story so this will be few shots ….!
Now many questions r here !!!
Is he really he criminal ?
Some sort of offence or murder ?
Instead being a cop …a “khduus” cop who made her free to help him ?
Where are they ? Why ? How ?

This is TRISHA here wd another little story …Nd few things I would like to specify here will be the dresssing sense of Sanchi ….here is the link ….
SDCH veer Isha prgya all characters will be same !
If u guys liked the teaser …want me to continue or not ? …any new ideas ?….suggestions ?….all will be welcomed ! Nd I will continue this one unlike unspoken feelings nd like wedding chaos !
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Stay tuned
Do tell me ur views abt this story of FS !

54 Comments
  1. Trisha u always come up with theveryone sort new ideas I don’t know how, I want to ask u question What does ur mother give u to eat or what do u eat daily ?????????? I m asking seriously, u always give us some sort of new surprise nd it is so good. Really ur such an amazing writer m in love with ur ff nd Os or anything else u write it’s just so perfect how do u manage it, I really want to know. Well talking about the this one it’s stupendous, amazing,fab,mind blowing nd don’t know what u nailed it again yaar. U know what I do everyday just wait for ur ff, they make me smile in fact make my day ur my morning sun nd moon of night love u loads, nd seriously don’t know what to say. I just fell do good in fact proud to comment on ur ff I m do lucky Trisha m blindly in love with u. ??????????????? plzz keep writing always. Well I hv first time written su have a long comment only for u trisha love u.

    1. Well sorry for so many spelling mistakes I dint read it first hope u understand.

    2. Trisha139

      Thts absolutely fine dear…lots of love to u

    3. Trisha139

      Awwwww this isn’t the bestest longest sweetest loveliest comment I have ever received I thought to see the comments tomoroww but ur cmmnt made me do that today now at the same time ….love u tooothe too the heights of sky…I want to know ur real name as I would like to call u wd tht …I forgot ??‍♀️Silly me sorry

    4. No problem it’s mrunmayi.

    5. Trisha139

      Thanku for telling

  2. You are a fab writer Trisha. ……..It is great and something different . Your teaser is great just like you.please please continue it..????

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku swati nd I will surely continue this one

  3. I just hope that u won’t portray Kabir as a bad guy…..

    1. Trisha139

      Of course not sana dear he is my fav character of sdch

  4. Trisha i really liked ur story unspoken feelings but u discontinued it…. wedding chaos also was superb so hoping the same from dis one also… keep going girl

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku for the hopes u hd wd me dear nd sure

  5. Palak.Sharma

    OMG YES this is really good!!!! Please continue this ff!!!

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku palak nd sure

  6. It’s a nice plot and I hope you won’t portray Kabir as a bad guy

    1. Trisha139

      no Sana don’t worry sweetie

  7. Aweeeesomeeee track

  8. u are awesome sis ur story ff and os are awesome may god have blessed u for ur witting skill awesome
    post next update soon

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku so much shreya nd sure sissy

  9. sorry due to excitement I called u sis hope not feel bad

    1. Trisha139

      That’s absolutely ok
      U r like my sis

    2. thanks Trisha

  10. Please continue the story yaar.nice start.keep it up????

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku anu nd sure dear

  11. Hey trisha trisha trisha what i can say i have just one word for u i m jabra fan of u n ur writting dear so dont be late start it sooonnnnnn as u can witting dear

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku so much niyaa sure I will start as today itself

  12. Trisha doll your all the ff and os are totally adorable and yes this one is fab ,lovely girl.

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku kanchi that is so sweet of you ??

  13. Niyaaa

    I dont to dear what happend i did commnt but why not showing anyway trisha u r amaz n super se uper seriously kya khakar soti tell me sweetie i mean new idea aate khaan se h n wo bhi mindblowing u nailed everytime

    1. Trisha139

      Awww thanku so much niyaa nd maggi ??just kidding sweetie

  14. Abhilasha

    It was the best!!!
    I m itna itna itna itna excited that I m jumping…. Trishu u nailed it…. Loved it…. O god what a story…… Trishu my heart beats are increasing………post soon…… Or I will go mad for this…… I agree with Riya plz tell ur secretDon’t worry.. Just kidding… I know ur ideas are due to ur brilliant creative mind!!!
    U should den ur scripts to indian daily soaps an Bollywood movies Yr….. It would be blockbuster!!!
    And what a coincidence even I have submitted new plot for my upcoming ff… Choose any 1 since there are two.
    And Luv uh and ur story!!

    1. Trisha139

      Omg omg omg hue cmmmt made me to write the frst shit now todaybutself nd don’t worry I am in live with u ur writings nd ur cmmnt sweetie
      I am going to post the episode today itself ! Luv u too sweetie nd thanku so so much for this wonderful cmmnt

  15. Story is different and unique a different appearance of the characters ur ideas are always mind blowing do continue

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku sanu nd sure

  16. Always nailed it dear

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku ashnita

  17. our trisha dear is back again with a new idea, new concept…….my dear, ur story based on wedding chaos was one of my personal favorite updates of all times……… & hope this new one would also add on to this list……… i just hope that there is no end to this list………so much expectations from my sweetie………..haha…….. kya karoon………afterall u hv reached to such a level ki tumse kuch kum ki umeed karna impossible hai, touch wood……….luv u a lot my cutie pie……….

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku so much riya …luv u too sweetie nd sure ..,: that is so sweet of u thanku thanku for the sweetest cmmnt

  18. Fenil

    This chappy is awesome

  19. Superb Trisha story is different and unique it’s full of mystery.

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku neera thts so sweet of u

  20. Anee

    Hey Trishu really really really amazing yaar. i don’t understand different concept differet ideas how you managed all this? you give me surprise everyday with your new and unique stories. i want to ask you, do you want become a writter.
    if yes then you will be amazing writer in future.keep writing dear luv you a lot.

    1. Trisha139

      Thanku so much anee…Nd no I want to become a doctor but as I had few spare time so continued giving my fantasies ; the words ! Luv u too

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