Jo Tu Mera Humdard Hai … part 25

ello Everyone!
Since this episode marks the beginning of a new season of the ff I can ask you all to be patient to listen to all that I have to say
Firstly, Thanks to everyone who has read this ff & has taken time out to comment or even think about it. TellyUpdates Dada!! The biggest thanks goes to you to let us voice our opinions & stories. Through this platform I’ve actually made friends. Another thanks to all those silent readers who commented on the previous part … If I had to name the last part it would be “Awaaz- awakening of silent readers” … Thanks Gulnaz,Sharon,Juhi & Khyati for commenting … I really love all my readers…

Now, I solemnly declare that you will get your DevAkshi soon … Welcome to the journey towards an insane reunion, enough of rona-dhona!!
Is this the real life?
Is this just fantasy?
Caught in a landslide
No escape from reality
Open your eyes look up to the sky & see
I’m just a poor boy
I need no sympathy

Because I’m easy come easy go
Little high little low
Anywhere the wind blows doesn’t really matter
A man of about 28 year was singing ‘The Bohemian Rhapsody’ by ‘The Queen’. His entire concentration was on the song. A guitar hung from his neck & was elegantly held in his hands, rejoiced when the white fingers played it. No one could take their eyes off this well sculpted guy with messy hair which made him look all the more desirable when the wind blew his hair & stationed his hair just above his eyes. Time had made him even more handsome, Dev Dixit the owner of Dixit enterprises was now the youngest business tycoon of India.
As he finished his song, girls came rushing towards him. He picked up one of them & gave a light peck on her cheeks & then gently kept her down. He noticed a guy of about his age. The short heighted man waved & called him towards him. The dark skinned man had a pleasant smile on his face. A stethoscope was lying casually on his shoulder. Dev went near him.
Dev: Hello! Dr. Ritvik? (or whatever the spelling is)
Ritvik: Hey … Dev, so these are the girls you wanted me to meet
Dev: Yup!! Aren’t they cute?

Ritvik: I thought that you are talking of proper girls …
Dev: Aaah … So that thought brought you here
Ritvik: No … I just came to see how my patient’s doing … & you seem to be perfect … just perfect today
Dev: What did you say?
Ritvik: Perfect … Just perfect … What’s the matter? You look tensed?
Dev: No … nothing some old memories flashed by
Ritvik: I would someday like to dive in this sea of old memories of yours … There is a lot buried in you
Dev: So … How is my NGO?
Ritvik: Amazing … whenever you spoke of these girls that you go to meet I thought that you are Casanova but now I can clearly see that the girls that you were talking of are these little angels of about 15 years ( I can bet that you were thinking the same, am I right or am I wrong reader) …
Dev: It gives me some strange relief to help these girls who were facing problems because of discrimination to them
Ritvik: You have an amazing depth of character …
Dev: Thanks Dr. Ritvik
He smiled when he turned around to look at the name of the NGO “My Shona’s”
Ritvik: Chalo now I need help

Ritvik: Today is Ashtami
Dev: So
Ritvik: Dude … I need to visit the Durga Puja Pandal at CR park … I need to buy something decent to wear …
Dev: Puja hi to hai!! Buy a simple outfit
Ritvik: HELLO Mr. Non Bengali this is no simple festival it’s the Bengali’s Christmas &
Dev: And?
Ritvik: And a special friend is coming back to Delhi
Dev: So?
Ritvik: Propose karna hai
Dev: Waah re mere bhole balam!! I’ll pakka help you now
Ritvik: Great!! Waise bhi almost everyone Bengali in Delhi comes to CR park during Durga Puja
Dev: Every Bengali?

Ritvik: Yes
Dev: Umm Ritvik I’ll come with you to this Puja
Ritvik: Mr. Atheist are you okay?
Dev: Yes
Ritvik: Soch lo … after helping me hope ki tumhe pachtana na pade
Dev: Let’s move enough of this dialogue-baazi
As Dev & Ritvik got into the car, Dev’s curiosity level was at its peak
Dev: What is the name of this girl?

Ritvik: You’ll get to know … Have patience … Waise she’s different from the rest … Perfect just perfect she is

Dev shifted in his seat a bit an unknown fear was clutching him whenever Ritvik said Perfect just perfect but after so many days or years rather his heart was fluttering and he was full of optimism.
Dev: Dr. Saheb … After listening to your description I can recall a shayari cum song… Wanna hear it?
Ritvik: Irshad

Suna hai log use aankh bharke dekhte hai
So uske sheher mein kuch din theher ke dekhte hai
Suna hai bole to baaton se phool jhadte hain,
Ye baat hai to chalo baat karke dekhte hain
Suna hai rabt hai usko kharab haalo se
So apne aap ko barbad karke dekhte hain
Suna hai din ko usse titliyan satati hain
Suna hai raat ko jugnoo theher ke dekhte hain
Suna hai hashr hai uski ghazaal si aankhein
Suna hai usko hiran dasht bharke dekhte hain

Suna hai uske labon se gulaab jalte hain
So hum bahar par ilzam dhar ke dekhte hain
Ruke to gardishein uska tawaf karti hain
Chale to usko zamaane theher ke dekhte hain
Kahaniyaan hi sahi,
Sab mubaldein hi sahi
Agar wo khwab hai tabeer kar ke dekhte hain
Suna hai log usse aankh bhar ke dekhte hain
So uske sheher mein kuch din theher ke dekhte hain
(If there are any mistakes in writing any urdu word … Those who know urdu accept my apologies)

Unknowingly, Dev had lost himself into the depth of the poem, his heart was fluttering faster. He mumbled under his breath, “Sonakshi…”
As Dev was reciting the poem, a girl of about his age, SLIM & beautiful came out of the airport. There is no need to describe the beauty of that girl, she herself defines beauty. The shayari depicts her perfectly. She saw someone & ran towards her & hid her face in the lady’s embrace
Asha: Shona!! Kemon acho?
Sona: Eakdom bhalo acchi …
Asha: You had to arrive yesterday only why are you so late?
Sona: Maa, I had an emergency

Asha: Now, your emergency bahanas won’t work dear because
Sona: Ya ya … Now I’ve to work in Delhi …
Asha: Don’t make that stupid expression … Have you rehearsed? You have to sing today at CR Park
Sona: No I haven’t why did you even give my name
Asha: I am out of this !! Your Kaka is now the head of the organizing committee & you know he is when it comes to boasting your talent
Evening, Chittaranjan Park, New Delhi

Dev & Ritvik’s car stopped at a distance from the Pandal
Dev: Woaah !! Is this a festival or we are at a wedding?
Ritvik: Bengali’s Christmas describes its all.

As soon as Dev & Ritvik got down from the car a lot of heads turned to look at the handsome duo but the hope that had unknowingly, crept into Dev was making his eyes look for his Sonakshi. They moved towards the pandal & Dev was mesmerized with its beauty. The theme of this year was something year … The pandal spoke of the great Bengali writers (with Riti being one of them … hopefully someday)

Dev’s gaze shifted to the idol of Goddess Durga, Clad in white the statue was majestic. To others the idol marked the ‘Mahishasurmardini’ avatar of the Goddess but the Bengalis prefer to adorn her by calling her Kali Mata who has come to visit them along with her children Ganesh,Kartikey,Laxmi & Saraswati. Dev who was lost in the splendor of Kali Mata didn’t care about the facts. He looked at Maa’s face as if smiling & assuring him that his quest was now going to end
Then began the characteristic Bengali style Aarti which can transport you to Bengal

They started with the Aarti … A different style of drum was being played by two men who danced in front of Durga ji in a different style … It was too long & the smoke made me feel choked … I came out & sat in my car with the A.c. on … It was an hour already & my restlessness was at its peak now … The arrangement was no less than a ‘mela’ … I have to get out this is suffocating me …
Thinking so Dev got out of the car & was about to bid goodbye to Ritvik when he heard a magical voice & he stayed rooted in his place. He couldn’t comprehend what the singer was singing but he felt a connection
Daariye aachho tumi aamar gaaner o pare

Daariye aachho tumi aamar gaaner o pare
Aamar soorgoli paay choron
Aami paai ne tomare
Daariye aachho tumi aamar gaaner opare
(There you exist beyond the realm of my prayer/song
My melodies may touch your feet, but I am the betrayer
Translation courtesy:

As the singer went on Dev stood there as if in a trance. As the voice subsided he went near the pandal. There were too many people standing in between he had to see the singer desperately. After shoving aside the crowd what he saw made him squeal in joy
Dev: Am I dreaming? Or is it really Sona?


I know you may be thinking that is Ritvik going to propose Sona? Has Dev recovered from cancer? Will they reunite in the next episode? When will Sona get to know that Dev loves her & he had cancer?
Wait wait everything will be answered
Comment & let me know your views

  1. wow… so interesting…
    m curious to read the further episodes 😀

  2. waiting. post soon. baki next epi me. agar reunion hua toh next epi long comment.

    love u?????

  3. Wow!!!! SssSsuperbbbb????.. jus fabulous???…. loved it…..
    Excited to know Sonakshi’s reaction after seeing Dev….??

  4. Riti1107

    I need a good amount of bashing for the typos & auto correct ka problem
    When Dev enters the pandal it is something new not year

  5. Awesome episode dear desperately waiting for the next episode

  6. SamayraKashyap

    Awesome awesome awesome. Jaldi milwaao hamare bichhde baccho ko. Post next ya twinny!?

  7. Aamu

    Ohh god..!!!..,!!!!!???…
    U know dis made my heart sank….no not with d update…with the precap..’BEKARAR DIL IS TARAH MILE..JIS TARAH KABHI HAM JUDA NA THE’…uff..dis one????…
    I jz loved it…
    N d epi was indeeed perfect…i loved it….
    Ritwick kahi sona ko to propose nahi karne waala soon..
    Love u ..n lemme know wen u post

  8. Awesome awesome awesome plsssss post soon

  9. V.V.harshita

    Yaar I really hate…..u r making me restless …..yesterday nite I actually started reading but my mom start scolding so….I had to keep my phone…..but really whole I was thinking abt the starting and did nt even sleep till 4:00 ….plzs Post asap
    Wid lots of love
    Akshada ????????????

  10. DramaQueen1004

    Awsum….. season ki shuruvat itni interesting thi ki baaki epi padne ke liye mujhse intezaar nhi ho pa raha
    Pls post soon
    N m sry fr commenting late… woh actually mere gar mein Internet kal dopahar se nhi tha toh mein ye epi pad nhi saki
    Love you loads and loads

  11. Nikkita0194

    no words to define brilliant
    tarif karu kya uski jisne tumhe banaya chalo kr hi deti hu angels of 15 seriously arey 15 sal ki bachiya toh half ladies hoti hi i mean bachhiyon se thodi zyada aur ladies se thodi km half ladies aur yeh bachiya shah ki cuteness pr fida nhi hui and one of them got his kisss vari java kash uski jagah mai hoti ab ap log apna drama mat shru karna ki bhai ki kiss le lo vagehra vagehra but u no ki ap kitne smart ho ap urdu bhi likte ho bengali bhi aur dialog bhi even unki lyrics bhi orientalist ho toh kaunsi kaunsi bhasha atti hi apko and itne lyrics yad kaise karte amazing dii manna toh padega u r none other than magic

  12. Nikkita0194

    nd yup good luck 4 season 2

  13. di how? how could you do this to me? aap naya ff likh rahi hai mujhe nahi bataya. hate u.????

  14. woww!!awesome epi…the way u have described each and evry scene..when i read it takes me to that place..such a good work..eagerly waiting for the next epi..juss love it??

  15. Awesome blossom update riti…
    In love with your ff….will be waiting for the next one..?

  16. Plsss post soon dying for next episode

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