The guy who never loved – a Ragsan & Swalak mystery- (episode-1)

Hey wonderful readers !!Im back with the first episode ..So first I’ll start with some basic intro..which is essential for better understanding as the story moves on..

The story reveals the betrayal,jealousy ,murder of unexpected people .Shekhar one of the most influential business man had three sons and a Daughter but contrary to the normal family set up shekhar didn’t treat all his children equally..He had dev and shravan to back up his business expansion but he wasn’t satisfied in his son’s talents..he foundDevinefficient,meek and lame eventhough he was his father’s son and followed each & everything he was said to do..AndShravan was bold,strong ,manly but a womanizer who gets easily distracted in between his works..soshekhar relied on Ishant and decided to raise him as his business heir..He never speaks well todev or shravan like all fathers generally do..he was always partial to ishant..As in case of ragini..she was shekar’sfavourite..and the lucky charm for him..all the brothers were equally affectionate and caring towards her..

Ragini never spent a day without bullying her brothers ..and a hour appears as hell to her if she doesn’t see sanskaar..She was 23 ..as in these 23 years of her observation ..”Sanskaar was a quite reserved person who prefers loneliness ..he doesn’t speak much ..but has a very keen observation..and can read minds..He is a genius and topper @ his school ,college..he doesn’t party like guys of his age and doesn’t drink nor smoke..books are his friends..& he was an excellent athlete..The stadium gets overflowed with girls the day he is in match..He was good in auditing as his father did that job previously For shekhar..he learnt out of self interest& is currently managing shekar’scrore sprawling business accounts..The brothers have a separate respect For sanskaar…and sanskaar ,dev were close and compatible..”

Raginiwanted to Do an MBA ..but she opted suddenly for this stream shocking everyone in her family..
The frame opens up with a girl openinga door and stealthily running out(only her back is shown) ..she climbs the ladder of the overhead tank in the Forth storey of her house and sits on it..She opens her plaited hair as the strands of her hair communicate with air..The girl in a beautiful white chuditar..She stands on the tank and peeps down..
Unknown: ragini!!!
She gets startled and is about to fall while the hand pulls her with much difficulty standing on the ladder..her hair covers her face unrevealing her clear face..The unknown person pulls her with great force and she falls on him on the terrace..
Unknown: Ouchhh!!
Raginihas fell on that person and her hair was covering his face..and the unknown person sneezes continuously as her hair hit his nostrils..
Ragini: uhhh..Im sorry sanskaar!!

She moves her hair From his face and there we see our mr.handsome looking as usual stunning in a white kuta and pyjamas..and she moves her hair behind her neck and there is miss .Raginigadodia looking as usual raunchy ,cute without any make up…He helps her get up..
Sanskaar: why are you here??
Ragini: sanky..today is holi na???Im planning for some dhamaka!!
Sanskaar: not here..
Ragini: why??
Sanskaar: don’t you know??

Of course ragini knows this was sanskaar’s favourite spot and eventhough the bungalow was spacious enough sanskaar stayed in the outhouse and this terrace was his spot so no member of this family gets here..so as not to disturb him..
Ragini: actually ..Everyone was trying to splash colours early this hour..so..i escaped here..
The truth was she wanted her first colour to be applied by sanskaar..Sanskaar never celeberated any festival normally bcoZ he gets his parents thoughts nd the moments he spend with them..
Ragini: Sanskaar ..dadi ma was searching you..
Sanskaar: haan will go..
Ragini was having colours in her hand but..he might shout or..moreover she was frightened to ask him to apply colours..So she slightly opened the colours..
Ragini: uhh.sanskaar! please hold this coloursna..
Sanskaar glares at her while she makes a pleading look..afterall she is an expression queen..na??? Sanskaar holds the colour and some scatters on his hand..
Sanskaar: ragini ..
Ragini was busy pretending to unfoil her entangled hair in her earrings..
Ragini: haan,,sanskaar..

For real the hair got stuck and ragini got to real trouble..
Ragini: Oww!! Its paining I cant get this hairoff…
She began to pullout her hair harshly..as she got panicked..her left hand was stained with bright red holi colours..so she couldn’t use that hand..
Sanskaar: Stop ..Let me help you..
He kept the powder aside and began to unveil the entangled hair..
Sanskaar: Ho gaya!!
Sanskaar looked at her face and got uneasy and a bit in dismay..While unveiling her hair the colour in his hands have stuck on her cheek..
Ragini: Sorry sanskaar..
Sanskaar: uhhh..why .

She pointed at his shirt which had crimson red handprint of ragini on his shoulder that he never noticed..(It has happened when she fell on him)..
Sanskaar gives a stern glare at her while she left disappointed as she couldn’t get colours applied by him..
Dadi: ragu beta..come here..
Ragini comes near her in a sad mood..
Ragini: haan..dadi..
Dadi: who applied gulaal on your cheek???
Ragini: dadi see..This is not gulaal..It must be some dust or grease..
Dadi: ragini..see this texture..im sure its gulaal..but who applied it???
Ragini suddenly gets glimpse of sanskaar’s sudden look after he unveiled her hair..
Ragini: sanskaar..
DadI: sanskaar??
Ragini runs to her room in excitement..

Precap: Ragini is assigned to work under sanskaar..for a murder case..

Im done with my first episode..I’ll be posting a longer one from next time..And the plot will get thicker from next episode,please let me know your comments..and next episode will unveil swara and laksh …swara’s character will be a bit intense and might be shocking ..so pls get prepared to accept the plot..And im sorry for first time Im doing a ragsan FF so I’ll try to make it more interesting..nd sorry if it was not up to your expectations..

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31 Comments
  1. Awesome

    1. Aradhana

      thanks a lot aleeza..

  2. Shivi21

    Where is swalak

    1. Aradhana

      in next episode I’ll be revealing them..dear..their characters are intense..so I’ll take the nxt complete epi for them..

  3. Follybraverl

    Hey so good you nailed it

    1. Aradhana

      thanks a lot dear..Im glad u liked it..

  4. sorry by hurting u commenting like this .. if u are the same aaradhana who asked to readers to choose pairs.. there some choosen swasan and raglak and some ragsan and swalak..
    did u justice with all ?? its like u went through poll is it correct?
    so never ever ask readers to choose pair.. if u already decided whom pair u want to write ff. dont ask readers and dont dissoppoint them… im commenting here to say my pov no offense to anyone so plz … dont hurt others dear its request to u dont ask readers to choose pair which they want… try to understand .. hope u come to know what readers feels when the authors only asked and didnt full filled..
    and sorry for this message .. sorry for hurting u with my post ..

    1. and sorry if ur not same aradana.. if u are same then dont ask to choose couple to readers choose ur self and write..

    2. Aradhana

      I chose swasan and raglak only for that ff ..and this is another ff which Im writing for those frnds who needed ragsan and swalak..

    3. Aradhana

      And I felt guilty for those voting and didnt want to hurt those who needed the other pair so I decided to give another ff and I dont want to dissappoint my readers, friends..Im ready to hurt myself but not my readers..They mean a lot to me, So I decided to give 2 ffs one on 1st pair and other on 2nd pair..

    1. Aradhana

      thanks dear..

  5. Shrilatha

    Awesome

    1. Aradhana

      thanks dear..

  6. Lahari

    Superb

    1. Aradhana

      thanks dear..

  7. waiting for swalak but prefer swasan more

    1. Aradhana

      Im writing 2 swasan ffs ..U can read if u r interested..

  8. A.xx

    nice xx

    1. Aradhana

      thanks dear..

  9. Asra

    awesome dear….loved it alot….u nailed it….eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

    1. Aradhana

      thanks a lot dear..Im glad u liked it..

  10. Inu

    Superb epi.

    1. Aradhana

      thanks a lot inu..

    1. Aradhana

      thanks mk…

  11. Jazzy

    Superb

    1. Aradhana

      thanks dear..

  12. Soumya85

    Aru di it was amazing I’m a huge fan of swalak and thanks for swalak ff I loved it waiting for next chapter egarly to know about swalak characters

    1. Aradhana

      ohh thanks somu dear!

  13. Fabulous dear, loved it

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