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Home»Fan Fiction»The great wall of Shivaay – ep 17
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The great wall of Shivaay – ep 17

VJeyBy VJeyJune 24, 201720 Comments9 Mins Read
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Link for the previous episode: https://www.tellyupdates.com/great-wall-shivaay-ep-16/
Note: I want to know whether I should continue this story or not! Please share your opinion about it.

As of now in the story, I am focusing on Anika’s past and her reuniting with her family. As Shivaay is not yet aware about it, he doesn’t play much of a role in it. Kulgothra pooja track starts in 3-4 episodes. After that only his role get much of an importance. Then the explanation of the topic GREAT WALL OF SHIVAAY will come! It is definitely not great wall of Lavitra!

Please let me know what you guys think about the story!
Due to few message I got previously, I consider giving upon the story. This is not the first time! Please let me know if you guys think it is “waste of time” and “full of rubbish!” I will stop the story!
EP 17
Daksh tried to looked at Anika from the head to toe… Omkara and Rudra stood before her covering her… SHivaay became furious…
Shivaay: How dare you look at her?
A gigglish-laugh boomed through the hall…
Lavitra was walking inside with her left arm around a girl… they both were laughing their heart out and both their hands have a bottle of vodka…
They are drunk…
Ranveer and his family stood up with a shock. Daksh ran his hands through his hair out of frustration.
Rishi: Lavitra! What are you doing here?

Rishi: What are you doing here Lavitra?
Lavi: I came to tell that this marriage will not happen because I don’t like it!
Rishi: Please don’t do this Lavitra. We can talk about it later. Now go home, I will come there once this is done. Ranveer loves Priyanka. For the anger you have against me, don’t ruin my son’s life. GO home now! I will meet you there!
Lavitra didn’t mind him or anyone. She walked to the centre of the hall and sat on the sofa. She started to drink vodka from the bottle and she slyly looked at Priyanka and winked at her.
Kamini was angry…
The girl who came with Lavitra sat on the hand rest of the safe which Lavitra was sitting, she started to chuck down vodka from her bottle.
Ranveer walked towards the girl and took the bottle from her hand and threw it away.
Ranvver: What are you doing Sheetal? Why are you drinking? Since when you have this bad habits? This is why I never wanted you to be with najayas like Lavitra?
A slap on Ranveer’s cheek echoed in the hall…
Sheetal: How dare you call her najayas?! Lavitra might not know her father! She is still better that you who threatened Priyanka using me. Didn’t you say your di died because of her and her bhaiyya? Using that you threatened her to say that she is in love with you to Shivaay Singh Oberoi, even though when she is not! You killed me when I am still alive and used me. What does it make you? You called Lavitra ‘najayas’… don’t forget it… you are an illegitimate child of Rishi Malhotra and you are just bearing my father’s surname. You are not a Randwana! Don’t forget that! Look at yourself before accusing anyone you blo*dy bas*ard…
Om: Ranveer threatened Priyanka? What are you saying?
Sheetal: I am the girl Priyanka hit on with her car 5 years back. I was found by Lavitra and Ishaan Singh Malhotra that night injured. Even though because of my mother, his family broke Ishaan bhaiyya took me in as his sister and saved me. All these 5 years I was grateful for that accident and you guys even without knowing who did that accident was, You guys gave me a loving family.
Shivaay: this means he was blackmailing my sister and fooling everyone of us!
Om: Why you didn’t tell us Priyanka?
Lavitra: can the Oberoi’s deal with your drama later? I am here so that Sheetal’s name will not be trashed and also fake promise of Malhotra’s will make a deal with Oberoi’s… decide on what to do with the engagement, Sheetal and I have to leave.
Jhaanvi: what is there to even think? This engagement will not happen. As for the partnership with Oberoi industry, you don’t have right to decide Tej. You are no longer part of it. I don’t want these evil people’s shadow to even be on this house’s daughters. Throw them out…
Daksh looked at Anika…
Daksh: I will come for you my love!
Daksh walked up to Lavitra…
Daksh: you will regret this! You will regret this when your Swamini maa dies!
Lavitra: hahahahaha… you think you can touch her shadow till I am alive! Best of luck!
Daksh: Then beready to welcome your death!
Sheetal: this dog only knows to bark! Don’t forget Daksh Khurana! My brother can ruin your company in a minute and make you nothing…
Priyanka: One minute Ranveer…
“Looks like she bought my lie of being in love with her! I should play with this!” Ranveer thought with a smile and turned around.
Ranveer: I know Prinku! I know you will believe in me and my love! Thank you Prinku!
A slap echoed in the room…
Priyanka slapped him again…

Priyanka: Don’t you dare to take my name from your mouth… never come infront of me… go away!
Shivaay looked proud of his sister and wrapped his arm around her and held her in a protective way! Rudra and Om stood next to Priyanka and Shivaay in a way of supporting them…
Sheetal: Looks like today my precious brother is getting slapped often!
Rishi yelled!
Rishi: SHUT UP SHEETAL! OR ELSE YOU WILL NEVER KNOW WHAT I WILL DO!
Lavitra stood up by then…
Lavitra: True! A person like you who killed his own daughters can do anything! Can go to any extent! But you know what a person like me obviously do! Don’t you! You want me to do it???
Rishi walked out of the house without a word followed by Kamini, Ranveer and Daksh. But everyone was glaring at Lavitra.
There was a dead silence…
Sheetal walked up to Priyanka…
Sheetal: I am sorry that you were got into all these mess because of me! I sincerely apologize to you about everything. I am so grateful to you… Thanks for running the car over me that day! Even if have died back then, I would have been more happy… So imagine how bad it would have been for me to like with my own mother. You are the angel who saved me… so never blame yourself…
Priyanka smiled at Sheetal and hugged her…
Everyone was looking at the interaction with overwhelmed emotions… few with anger and hatred whereas the others were happy that their Prinku was safe…
Anika looked at Lavitra who was sitting alone in the sofa with a bottle of vodka in her hands… she was just drinking… then she silently stood up and walked to her room without being noticed by anyone… But Anika was observing her…
Priyanka: Thanks for saving my life and also helping me today…
Sheetal smiled at her…
Sheetal: I am leaving! Bye!
With that she left!
Jhanvy: Where is Lavitra?
Pinky: Haan! Where is my daughter?
Anika: she already went to her room, I guess…
Dadi: Thank god! Our family is safe!
ShivOmRu went with Priyankaa to her room…
Anika went to Lavitra’s room…
Anik saw Lavitra sitting on the bed, doing something on her laptop and drinking at the same time!
Anika: tell me all the truth!
Lavitra: Ouch! You are taking advantage of a drunk women to spill secrets…
Anika: Lavi! This is not the time to play!
Lavi: You want to know the secret! Fine! Then close the door and come… sit next to me!
ANika did as she was told to do!

Lavi: Like you saw earlier, your father Rishi Singh Malhotra, had relationship with Kamini. He wanted to give everything to Kamini and their son Ranveer. But there were few problems in that, like your father already being married and Malhotra’s give the power to the girl children in the family. So he decided to kill you and Chutki! What happened after he kidnapped both of you is still mysterious for everyone. Swamini maa tried to find you and got the dead bodies of her daughters after 20 days. She was heart broken and decided to kill herself. She was saved by you chachu Inder Singh Malhotra and chichi Vanshika. They tried to get her out of depression by many ways and failed badly. That time, Vanshika maa gave birth to a son and she even gave the son to Swamini maa… so that she can come out of it. Unfortunately, all swamini maa was able to do was arrange a care taker for him than being the one who takes care of him. You remember Barun? It is him. Your brother. Ishaan’s younger brother. Through him only I came into Swamini maa’s life. She slowly gave up on suicidal ideation and came out of depression. Slowly, I became her daughter and world at the sametime, she became my mother and world. She means a lot to me Ninu… I know her more than anyone… She loves you Ninu! please! Let her explain everything to you… give her a chance!
Anika was in tears… She just looked at Lavitra without saying any word!
Prinku’s room:
Priyanka have fallen asleep on Shivaay’s lap.
ShivOmRu tucked her to bed and left.
Shivaay entered the room only to see Anika sleeping on the bed.
Shivaay without a noise went to his portion in the bed and slept.
Once Anika was sure, he was asleep, she went to terrace and cried her heart out…
She was screaming in pain…
She felt guilty for hating her mother all these years…
The anger she had towards her mother killed her…
She felt ashamed for believing her father’s words…
All of sudden rain started to pour…
She got drenched by it… and suddenly there was no rain pouring over her but was there around…
She looked up to see her devar Omkara Singh Oberoi and his loyal friend chulbul holding an Umbrella for her.
They sat next to her and she cried silently…

Precap:
Om apologizing to Lavitra.
Om’s business partner makes things difficult for him…
Rudra getting jealous seeing Soumya calling Barun her best friend…
Chulbul, Anika bonding over a…. *evil smirk! Wait for what the are going to bond over!*

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    20 Comments

    1. Charitha on June 24, 2017 8:25 am

      Awesome

    2. aryaraju
      aryaraju on June 24, 2017 8:45 am

      It’s really awesome.. Plz continue…loved it…. If possible in future updates please give some Shivika bonding ?

    3. Samaira20
      Samaira20 on June 24, 2017 9:02 am

      Update was Fab…..do continue with it…. eagerly waiting for your next….

    4. Charitha on June 24, 2017 9:06 am

      I want the last one..comedy on chubul and anika’s bonding

    5. Niriha
      Niriha on June 24, 2017 9:40 am

      Awesome….fabulous part loved it eagerly waiting for next update soon

    6. wonder3112
      wonder3112 on June 24, 2017 9:42 am

      hey…this is so nice. i happened to read all your works right now and i find them really amazing. please do continue…

    7. Honey on June 24, 2017 9:52 am

      Pls don’t stop…it’s awesome

    8. Sairan
      Sairan on June 24, 2017 10:11 am

      Fantastic fabbbbbb
      No it’s not rubbish at all..it’s just that ki might be since u update after long gaps..ppl e annoyed with that and just frustrated nothing else… continue asapppp

    9. Dhar
      Dhar on June 24, 2017 10:17 am

      Loved it to the coreee plzz post the next update ASAP ??

    10. Anoushka
      Anoushka on June 24, 2017 11:16 am

      Continue dear and make sure to end these drama and show some shivika moments and obro moments

    11. Shivika on June 24, 2017 11:20 am

      Awesome….
      Omru r d bst devars….
      waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

    12. nikita_jai29
      nikita_jai29 on June 24, 2017 12:11 pm

      It is awesome dear.. Plz continue

    13. Madhuani
      Madhuani on June 24, 2017 1:24 pm

      It’s amazing dear.
      It’s not at all rubbish but since you update after a long gap so they must be annoyed but believe me I like it.
      Plz continue it.
      Waiting for next.

    14. madhu.r
      madhu.r on June 24, 2017 1:29 pm

      Super episode sis do continue dont stop writing

    15. alekhika20
      alekhika20 on June 24, 2017 7:38 pm

      Superb update

    16. Arthi
      Arthi on June 24, 2017 10:15 pm

      Precap sounds interesting dr do.post the next part soon dr and this was superb awesome and I just loved it…..

      Don’t stop writing pl continue dear

    17. Banita on June 24, 2017 11:33 pm

      Hey!!!! Don’t dare 2 stop this AMAZING ff…. It’s just Superb!!!! I’m n’t a regular commenter but a regular reader of ur ff dr….. Nd 2day epi was Fabulous…. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt…

    18. sanjanagarg
      sanjanagarg on June 25, 2017 1:45 am

      Amazing dear…just loved it….plz never stop writing

    19. Yvonne Codner on June 25, 2017 6:27 pm

      Vjey, please continue your extremely wonderful work…I read from episode 2 to 17 in one go. I am really amazed by your work. You should really sell your work to the writers of Ishqbaaz. Why..because we have been watching for so long, and they have not told us why Anika does not have a surname. You have told the story so much better than they have. LoL

    20. gayathri.visu
      gayathri.visu on June 25, 2017 11:46 pm

      Hi VJey.
      Ippothan innum interestinga irukku. Plz don’t stop this ff. Ellaroda doubttum titlela Shivaay peru irunthu, storyla Lavithravuku importance thandhathu yennu thaan puriyaama irunthuthu. Ippo neenga sonna piragu naanga upcoming partsku wait pandrom.

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