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Home»Fan Fiction»FLAWLESS LOVE AND MARRIAGE- VANI, TANSHI, AVNEIL FF (CHAPTER 2)
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FLAWLESS LOVE AND MARRIAGE- VANI, TANSHI, AVNEIL FF (CHAPTER 2)

AldyBy AldyFebruary 12, 20222 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey guys so here is the second chapter

 

Veer:- woh.. actually mein…

Rishi:- tum.

Veer:- main Neil se baat kar raha ta.

Rishi:- kya?

Veer:- Haan.

Manpreet:- kaun Neil?

Veer:- woh hip hop dancer. Avni ki friend.

 

Manpreet takes Rishi to a side.

Manpreet:- Bhai mujhe lagta hai veer Bhai woh hai.

Rishi:- woh kya?

Manpreet:- woh…Bhai 2 AM tak ek ladke se baat kar raha ta. Matlab he is interested in boys. Samaj raho na aap.

Rishi:- kya? Matlab veer..

 

Veer sees them discussing something.

Veer:- what are you both discussing?

Rishi:- kuch nahi hai veer. Tum theek hai. And these all are so normal these days. Don’t shy to tell us anything.

Veer:- tum kya bol rahe…kya?

Manpreet:- bhaiyyaa it’s ok. We understand you. We won’t tell it to anyone.

Rishi:- Haan.

Veer:- tum dono na mera dimag kharab kar rahe. Main jaa raha hu. Byy.

Manpreet:- byy.

He goes.

 

Bani reaches home and pinches Neil.

Neil:- kya hua? Did i disturb you both!

Bani:- as usual.

Neil:- OMG..veer will kill me.

Bani:- don’t worry, main hoona?

 

Anita(their mom) comes there.

Anita:- kaha thi tum? Pata haina kal papa aaraha hain?

Bani:- how can I forget? Isliye toh jaldi aayi hun main.

Anita smiles.

Anita:- tanu tumse naraaz hai. (All calls her tanu)

Bani:- kyun?

Neil:- kyun?…aaj mera aur tanu ka performance thi aur tum nahi aaya.

Bani:- sorry, Neil. Woh….maine…

 

Neil:- reason bataane ke zarurat nahi hai. I know it.

Anita:- kya reason?

Neil:- woh…

Bani:- mera designing classes and all.

Anita:- Haan. Theek hai. Swetha, prakash aur main jaaungi thodi der baad airport par.

Bani:- itna jaldi..

Anita:- traffic hogi. Yaha se 4 hours hai. Uska flight 2am land hogi. Now it is 8 pm. We have to eat dinner, get ready and then ok.

Bani:- ok mumma. Main dii ko dekhti hu.

Anita:- araam se. Waha uska watchwoman hai.

Bani:- OMG.

Neil:- all the best, bani.

Bani:- Neil..(shouts)

 

Singhania’s house.

Rishi and Manpreet tries to go to their room without any noise. Suddenly light gets on.

Rishi:- mom. (They sees Raman, Ishita, asha, Ashish, veer and avni)

Ishita:- where were you both?

 

Rishi:- we were in office maa. I was teaching Manpreet about business. Haina Manpreet?
Manpreet:- kab..(Rishi winks him) haa..haa. he was teaching me.
Raman:- acha….Manpreet kya padaya hai tum?
Manpreet:- woh…
Rishi:- Papa, we are grown up.
Raman:- toh..
Rishi:- papa…main sach bol Raha hu. We were in office.
Ishita:- accha, toh office club kab hogaya?
Rish and Manpreet gets shocked. They both looks at each other. Veer whistles them and he and avni shares hy5 with each other.
Rishi:- (in his mind) yeh veer bhi na.
Ishita:- veer ko kyun dekh rahe?
Rishi:- woh mumma hum..
Raman:- club main ta. Aur waha party kar raha ta. Haina Manpreet?
Manpreet:- Haan…..no..
Ishita:- asha, give me the stick.
Asha:- ji bhabhi.
Ashish:- bhabhi Aaj ke liye chodo. Kal dekhle ga.
Ishita:- yeh tum 4 month se yeh hi dialogue use ekar Raha hai. Aaj mein kisiko nahi sunungi. Asha..
Asha:- yeh hai stick bhabhi.
Ishita:- Rishi, Manpreet idhar aa.
Rishi:- mumma hum bade hai.
Ishita:- toh..
Manpreet:- it will be paining.
Ishita:- woh sab drink karne se pehle sochna ta. Idhar aa.
Rishi:- chotte…run..
They run through the corridor, Ishita behind them. Everyone was laughing seeing it.
Avni:- veer Bhai, humara plan successful hogaya.
Veer and avni laughs.

Bani was going to Tanu’s room. Suddenly
“Udhar Rukh”
Bani:- Ahaana
Ahaana:- kya? Idhar kyu aayi?
Bani:- woh main tanu ko dekhne ke liye.
Ahaana:- tanu dii bahut sad hai ab. You can’t see her now.
Bani:- why she is my sister also.
Ahaana:- you are the reason for this. Why didn’t you go for their programme?
Bani:- woh..mujhe kuch kaam thi..
Ahaana:- kya kaam.
Bani:- woh main usko bolungi. Hat jaa.
Ahaana and bani were fighting.
Bani:- Ahaana, she is my sister also. I want to see her.
Ahaana:- no you can’t see her.
Bani:- why? I will see her.

They were shouting. Tanvi comes there.
Tanvi:- stop . Ahaana, bani stop it.
They stop their fight.
Tanvi:- Ahana why were you fighting with her?
Ahaana:- sorry dii. (She goes)
Bani:- tanu…sorry. (she hold her ears). Sorry……

Tanvi looks at her.

So how was it. Please tell me through the comments…..

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    2 Comments

    1. Revu
      Revu on February 12, 2022 7:25 pm

      Nice episode , I laughed lot when Manpreet and Rishi made that comment on Veer. Ishita as Mom 😧🥳 – only that one is hurting me because I can’t see her as mom of so much big children. But in this FF she was so super cool . Haan she taking stick was so funny. Last part fight 🤔 why it happened ? I am also thinking on it.Nice episode. Keep writing more

      • Aldy
        Aldy on February 12, 2022 9:13 pm

        Thanks….last part ahaana is so protective about Tanvi and she likes to argue with bani..just sister goals..they are very possessive about Tanvi..that is it. Thanks for reading and commenting…😍😍

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