Hello girls! Iโve noticed… only girls read my ffsย ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐คฃ.
Sorry for the delay… Here goes the first part of a loooooooooong episode.
Special thanks ๐๐ผย to @Seanna_0044 and my cousin, Unnati who has recently joined the tellyupdates group (I donโt know her ID๐… please comment Unnati so we all know ur ID). Both of them have helped me… And thanks to Lucy (Sahada) for all her suggestions and I am surely going to implement whichever possible suggestions are there.
So here it goes…
NOON 12 PM
At the VR mansion
Vansh: But whatโs the problem Aryan?
Aryan: You just donโt get it, right!? You along with Riddhima have planned MY date with MY girlfriend! And you expect me to go there and propose Sejal?
Vansh: So whatโs wrong in it?
Aryan: Everything! YOU have planned the date! Not ME!
Vansh (muttering under his breath): Heโs getting on my nerves! Couldnโt Riddhima ask Sia or Ishani to do this! I wouldโve told him that even Sejal wants to propose to him if she hadnโt asked me not to!
Aryan: What are you whispering to yourself?
Vansh: Nothing! I have a solutionโฆ Iโll ask Riddhima not to tell Sejal that we have planned the date
Aryan: That wouldnโt change the fact that you did! And I know that you planned my proposal! I donโt like it! Why donโt you understand, Bhai!?
Vansh: Okayโฆ Another option! Iโll remove all the decorationsโฆ just keep the same place! Okay?
Aryan (with some hesitation): Okayโฆ Iโll go there.
At RiJalโs house
Riddhima: Why? Donโt you like the way I decorate?
Sejal: You know, itโ s not that!
Riddhima: Then WHAT IS IT!?
Sejal: I donโt want the date to be planned by you! I want it to be planned by me!
Riddhima: Okayโฆ Iโll ask the helpers to remove all decorationsโฆ but please keep the location the same?
Seja (hugging Riddhima): Okay! I love you! Bye!
Riddhima is calling Vansh when the doorbell rings.Vansh receives the call while Riddhima is going towards the door.
Vansh: Arenโt you taking too long to open the door?
Riddhima (Opens the door but is still talking on the phone): Couldnโt you tell me that you are standing outside?
Vansh : Obviously I could. But I love giving surprises.
Riddhima hangs up the call and starts talking face to face.
Riddhima: Welcome to my little heaven!
Vansh: Hmmmโฆ Itโs not as big as my mansionโฆ But I like itโฆ Itโs cute, like you.
Riddhima: And it makes me comfortable, like you
Both smile at the compliments.
Vansh: I came to tell you that Aryan was adamant on planning the date himselfโฆ So I sent him to the location to check out the place.
Riddhima: Uh-Oh!
Riddhima quickly finds her and Sejalโs bikeโs keys, two black riding jackets and two helmets and pulls Vansh down towards the elevator.
Vansh: What happened? Why are you hurrying so much!? Why are you looking like you are going to ride a motorbike!?
Riddhima: Sejal has gone to check the location tooโฆ We need to hurry up so I am opening my and Sejalโs college secret to youโฆ We LOVE riding bikesโฆ We used to raceโฆ The bikes are really fastโฆ Weโll reach sooner.
Vansh: Okayโฆ got it! Letโs race!
Riddhima: Huh! Donโt even try! Youโll lose badly!
Vansh: Weโll see that!
They both get on their bikes and start riding.
AFTERNOON 12:30 PM
At Kabirโs house
Kabir is looking at his and Riddhimaโs pictures. He remembers the time he spent with her. He remembers lying to her that he loved someone else. He remembers her kissing Vansh accidentally. Kabir wonders if his plan would work and he would get Riddhima and his revenge.Anupriya comes there and picks up Kabir and Raginiโs Raksha Bandhan photo. Kabir suddenly realizes that his mother is standing next to him.
Anupriya: You promised Shona that youโll protect her. You couldnโt fulfill that promise. Now, you have to avenge her deathโฆ you can not back off.
Kabir: I am not backing off! I was just wondering if the plan would work.
Anupriya: You are doubting yourself?
Kabir keeps staring at his picture with Ragini.
Anupriya: KABIR! ARE YOU DOUBTING YOURSELF!?
She takes a breath. Kabir lowers his head.
Anupriya: This is the last time I am telling you, you will NEVER doubt yourself.
Kabir: Yes, mom.
Anupriya: Inspector Kabir! You will never doubt yourself!
Kabir: YES MOM!
Anupriya: Good! Now have this milk and prepare for what you are going to do tomorrow.
At the date location
Riddhima and Vansh reach the place together. Itโs a tie.
Vansh: I must say, it was hard to compete with meโฆ youโve done a great job!
Riddhima: You too.
Riddhima removes her helmet and opens her hair. Vansh stares at her. Then he gets conscious and looks away and thinks โWhat the hell are you doing, Vansh!? Stop staring at her like a fool! All cute girls look hot in bike jackets, but it doesnโt mean you stare at them!โ
Riddhima: What! What were you saying about cute girls?
Vansh (talking to himself): How did she know what Iโm thinking!?
Riddhima: What are you muttering?
Vansh: Nothing! Nothing at all! Haha! I think your ears are ringing Riddhimaโฆ You should get them checked.
Riddhima: Very funny! Now letโs go!!
Vansh: Ya!
They reached the place where they had everything decorated.
Aryan: Are you free?
Sejal: When?
Aryan: For your entire life?
Sejal is both surprised and puzzled. Aryan bends on his knees.
Aryan: Will you marry me?
Sejal is very happy and starts hopping around.
Sejal: Of course I will! Do you need to ask that!?
They hug each other. Riddhima and Vansh are very happy too. Riddhima starts jumping around. Suddenly, she hugs Vansh and he hugs her back. Riddhima says, โIโm so happy today! My friend finally got her dream life and her dream partner!โ
Vansh: Okay! Okay! Calm down! We have to leave before they see us!
Riddhima stands back and wipes her tears and says, โYa!โ
Vansh: Hey! Why are you crying!?
Riddhima: Nothing, itโs just been a while since Iโve been happy.
Vansh: Are you seriously shedding your precious tears for some jerk who doesnโt even care about what you feel!? Come on! Stop crying! You donโt look good when you cry! I wish your ex would come in front of me! I would file a murder case against him!
Riddhima is shocked and puzzled.
Vansh: He murdered such a beautiful girlโs smile!
Riddhima finally smiles.
Vansh: Now thatโs more like it! Come on, letโs go
Vansh and Riddhima start to leave but Aryan notices them and Sejal follows his gaze and sees them too.
Sejal: Riddhima!!
Aryan: Vansh bhai!!
Both turn around and see that theyโve been caught.
Sejal: What are you both doing here?
Aryan: I thought Sejal didnโt know about this?? Bhai?
Vansh: Yaโฆ ummmโฆ
Sejal: Ridz??
Riddhima: Itโs Riddhima, Sejal!!
Sejal: Are you seriously arguing with me regarding your name right now!?
Vansh: Itโs not her mistake, I forgot to tell her that she doesnโt have to tell you and anyways, does it matter? The marriage is still on!
Aryan and Sejal together: You knew!?
Riddhima: Yaโฆ Well, we discussed it at the park during our morning walk.
Riddhima and Vansh get awkward remembering what happened at the park.
Sejal: What happened? Why are y’all silent?
Riddhima and Vansh together: NOTHING!! Nothing happened!
Sejal and Aryan look at each other.
Riddhima: Anyways! It’s already decided that Vansh and I will plan the wedding and thatโs FINAL!
Sejal: You love weddings so much, donโt you?
Vansh: Ya! That she does!
Sejal looks surprisingly at Vansh.
Vansh: We discussed that too in the morning.
Sejal looks past them at the bikes and shouts.
Sejal: YOU TOLD HIM OUR SECRET!! I DIDNโT EVEN TELL ARYAN ABOUT IT!!
Riddhima: Stop shouting! Weโre at a public place!
Vansh: A public place thatโs owned by me?
Riddhima: We are standing outside your โpropertyโ
Vansh:Ya but-
Riddhima: -whose side are you on?
Vansh: Yours, of course!
Riddhima: Then why are WE arguing?
Vansh: Aryan! Everything is decided. Soโฆ
Riddhima: You both decided whether you want to marry with your consent or we forcefully do that!
Sejal: Okay! Stop threatening us like that now! But Iโm still pissed off at youโฆ So I’llย ride with Aryan
Riddhima: Alright! Go ahead. Iโll ride with Vansh!
Vansh: What !?
Riddhima: You have some problem?
Vansh: Nope! Never!
Riddhima: Come on then! Weโve got a race to win!
Aryan: Win? Who said youโll win?
Riddhima: I did, my dear Jiju!
Aryan: Letโs see then!
Both the pairs get on the bikes and start riding. Vansh and Aryan are driving while Riddhima and Sejal are sitting behind them. Vansh and Riddhima are winning. As they reach near the house, Vansh looks at Riddhima in the mirror. He keeps looking and they lose.
Sejal: We won!!
Aryan: I told ya!
Riddhima: What did you do! Vansh!? What were you doing that at the end only you lost control!?
Vansh: I wasโฆ Ummโฆ Iโm sorry!
Riddhima turns her face from him and stomps into the apartment.
Vansh and Aryan leave.
NIGHT 8 PM
At VR Mansion
Everyone is at the dining table. Vansh is still thinking about Riddhima and wonders how to pacify her.
Sia: You know, Daadiโฆ
Daadi: Yes, Sia beta?
Sia: I think nowadays Bhai either has a lot of work or he has fallen in love.
Vansh breaks out of his thoughts and listens to what Sia is saying.
Daadi: Why are you saying so, bachcha?
Vansh: Exactly! What do you mean?
Sia: You arenโt eating momโs halwa! And since you have come home, you are thinking and thinking and thinking and doing nothing else. This only happens when you have a lot of workload orโฆ
Vansh: I was thinking about Aryan!
Uma: What about Aryan?
Vansh: Mom, Aryan loves someone.
Pradeep (Vanshโs father) starts coughing and the plate Uma had her hand drop on the table.
Daadi: What!?
Vansh: Ya! Remember that girl you were praising for the decorations of Siaโs birthday? That girl is Sejal and they both love each other.
Sia: Oh! You were thinking about that!
Pradeep: Sia!? You knew about this?
Ishani: Sejal and Riddhima are Siaโs friends. After you left for home yesterday, we were playing and they told us about itโฆ We all know.
Pradeep: Aryan? I think as your parents, we ought to know about this!
Aryan: Dad, I was gonna tell you about itโฆ Please meet her first and then judge the situation! Please! Please! Please!
Uma: Stop being a puppy now! Okay weโll meet her.
Aryan: Thank you so much, mom!
NIGHT 10 PM
At Riddhima and Sejalโs House
Riddhima is in her and Sejalโs room. She is lying on the bed but canโt sleep. She is regretting her behaviour with Vansh. She decides that the first thing sheโll do the next day when she visits VR Mansion would be apologising to Vansh. Just then, she hears a knock on her window. She goes to check what it is. She sees Vansh and is surprised to see that he had climbed up to the window. She opens the window and lets him in. They both start whispering so as to not wake Sejal up.
Riddhima: What are you doing here!?
Vansh: I came to apologise for what happened todayโฆ the raceโฆ Iโm sorry.
Riddhima: I should be the one to apologise. I shouldnโt have behaved like that. It was just a stupid bike race and I reacted as if my life depended on itโฆ Iโm sorry.
Vansh: So you forgive me?
Riddhima: Not so easily! You have to do something for me.
Vansh: Anything you ask for!
Riddhima: Iโm unable to sleep! Letโs watch a movie!
Vansh: NOW!!?
Sejal turns on her bed.
Riddhima pulls Vansh behind a curtain. They are standing really close. They share an eyelock.
Vansh: You really wanna watch a movie now?
Riddhima: Ya but the guest room would be better if you are gonna speak at this volume!
Vansh: Sorry!
Riddhima: Are you my friend?
Vansh: Ya
Riddhima: So then no sorry and no thank you.
Vansh: Okay. I think we can go to the other room now.
Riddhima: Ya.
They both go to the guest room and start Riddhimaโs laptop and decide to watch a comedy movie. They spend a good time together. It gets very late.
Riddhima: Itโs 2 am! I think you should stay here tonight.
Vansh: Nope. You and Sejal need to wake up early and if Sejal wakes up she will find it weird. It’s better I get going.
But Riddhima keeps insisting.
Vansh: Okayโฆ Then letโs do one thingโฆ Tomorrow, after mom and dad agree for Sejal and Aryanโs marriage, weโll have another party at the farmhouse.
Riddhima: Ummโฆ Okayโฆ But this time, letโs keep the bride and groom out of the partyโฆ Sia once told me that Daadi believes that it isnโt good for the bride and groom to meet before the wedding.
Vansh: Wellโฆ Alright! So for the party it’s only gonna be you, me, Ishani,Sia and one of my friends who is also my ex-fiance’s brother is gonna attend the weddingโฆ Is it okay if I call him?
Riddhima: Definitely! The more the merrier. I will get to know more people and it would help us have more fun. Invite him. No issues.
Vansh: Okay. So I will call and inform him tomorrow.
Riddhima: Okay, Bye!
Vansh walks towards the window.
Riddhima: Why are you going from the window? You can go from the door now.
Vansh: Oh! Ya! I forgot!
Vansh leaves and Riddhima falls asleep.
MORNING 6 AM
At RiJalโs house
Riddhima: Sejal!!!! Wake up!!!! Today you have to come with me to the VR Mansion! You have to meet Aryanโs parents. Wake up!!!!!!!
Sejal (now awake): What yaar, Ridz! It was such a good dream!
Riddhima: What were you dreaming?
Sejal: I had married Aryanโฆ
Riddhima: Oh! Thatโs why! But donโt you wanna marry him in real life? Go! Get ready!
Sejal: Offo! Thereโs more!
Riddhima: Ok! Speak up, but quick!
Sejal: So I had married Aryan andโฆ You had married Vansh and we were all living together! Me, you, Vansh, Aryan, Sia and Ishani, altogether! Wonderful dream naa!
Riddhima: What rubbish are you talking about!? Me and Vansh married!!!?? Are you nuts!!?
Sejal: But you both look perfect together! Like a pair made in heaven! โRab Ne Bana Di Jodiโ!
Riddhima: Sejal!!! Do you want me to murder you? Stop talking about this!
Sejal: Okay! Okay! Iโm going to get ready!
MORNING 7 AM
At VR Mansion
Sia knocks on the door of Vanshโs room.
Vansh: Come in, Sia. How many times have I told you? You donโt need to knock!
Sia: Iโm getting accustomed. When my bhabhi will come, then you will need privacy naa!
Vansh: Sia, please! I am not getting married!
Sia: But bhai! I found a perfect bhabhi for me! Donโt do this to me! I like her very much and you know her too!
Vansh: Please, Sia! And who is this girl whom you want to make my wife forcefully?
Sia: Iโll send you her picture downstairs. (Then murmuring to herself while leaving) And anyways, you will have to agree because I have made a full proof plan!
MORNING 8 AM
Riddhima and Sejal reach VR Mansion.
Riddhima: Sejal, go insideโฆ Iโll park and come.
Sejal: Okay, but come fast! Iโm very nervous!
Riddhima: Ya! Iโm coming, go!
Sejal: Come fast okay?
Riddhima: Ya! Gooo!
Sejal goes inside. Sia, Ishani and Daadi welcome her. She sits in the living room with Aryan, Uma and Pradeep. They all talk while Sia and Ishaani talk to Daadi
Sia: Daadiโฆ I get it that Vansh Bhai doesnโt wanna marryโฆ but he is the eldest one! If he doesnโt marry then how can Aryan Bhai marry? He is younger naa!
Ishaani: Yes, Daadi! Vansh bhai has to marry! Even I want a Bhabhi!
Daadi: You girls had planned all this already, right? And since you had planned this, you must have found a Bhabhi for yourself.
Sia: Yes! And sheโs just like you wantedโฆ She believes in God very much and respects elders. She loves everyone and she is very good at heart.
Ishani: Sheโs very talented alsoโฆ She cooks very well! And donโt tell this to maa, but she makes better halwa than Mom also.
Sia: When did you eat her halwa?
Ishani: You brought it home that day remember? And we finished it so that no one knowsโฆ
Daadi: You mischievous girls! You didnโt give it to me!
Sia: Daadi, you can have it too if she marries Vansh Bhai and comes hereโฆ then you can ask her to make halwa everyday!
Ishaani: Ya Daadi! Please! Please! Please! Bhai ki shaadi kara do un se! (Please make brother marry her)
Daadi: Okay! Okay! But at least show me how she looks!
Sia: Ya! Let me show you her picture!
Ishaani: No need! Look! There she comes!
Riddhima enters the VR Mansion.
51 Comments
Ohh God! Even though I helped you while reading it I couldn’t stop smiling. You completed it whereas I was only for half. It was just โค๏ธ
Thank you for the credit,Buddy but without you, it wouldnโt have been so ineteresting
The proposal was very cute. While I was imagining the situations in my mind, I realized your ffs are longer than the episodes telecasted. Really loved it. Keep going!
Ya… they are and I get a lot of work stress bcz of it… but when I read the comments, I feel itโs all worth it. Thank you for the suggestions you gave and youโll see them working in the next one.
I was overwhelmend and enjoyed while reading !! I was waiting for so long and i am happy now ๐โค lots of love to uuu…๐waiting for next ff ๐
Thank you Mrunal, and once again, sorry for the delay… keep supporting me as I entertain you all.
Today’s episode was quite interesting. The bike scene was just awesome.
Thank you Nazifa, Iโll try and keep giving you all such entertaining scenes.
It is amaaaazing and I really enjoyed it so much they both plan the wedding of arjal but they dont know that someone is planning for them
Yes,Chhavi, somebody is planning really hard for them… but you might have got a hint that Kabir is not entirely evil… Alas! The main villain is still a mystery, even for me!
Oh i love this maha episode …Sejals dream eill come true ๐๐๐
Thanks and of course the dream will come true… โSubah Ka Sapna Sach Hotta Haiโ
Evrything was juss so perfect…& ya as for girls reading ur ffs bcz Girls hv bettr taste xD..But ya seriously so well….Waiting..for the nxt update….
Ya! That we are! And besides… I donโt think boys watch IMMJ2… and Iโll try to update soon. Sorry for the delay
Mind voice nu nenachu saththama pesureenga ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ
Translation: you are talking louder thinking that it’s your mind voice ๐๐๐๐๐ (I think that’s what happened with Vansh). This ff is superb and thrilling ๐โค๏ธโฃ๏ธ๐ฅฐ๐๐
Thank you and I decided that I would keep that part (how Ridhima heard that) a mystery for everyone (even myself๐)
Wow it was just perfect i just cannot even explain how cool it was with my word as i just don’t have the words to describe it.
Excited for the next one hope u post soon
I know Naira… you start lacking words after so many comments๐ ๐๐คฃ…just kidding, Thank you very much
6 out of 5 stars:1-For taking your time to write.2-For creativity.3-For keeping me/us entertained.4-For keeping me/us curious for more.5-For the length.6-For being mindful of your(international) audience.
Than you very much
1. For appreciating my efforts.
2. For noticing my hard work.
3. For helping me make my work so beautiful
4. For giving me the support that very less writers have.
Saach bholuthoo real story sae jyada sabkae ff bahuth. Interesting lagrahaehai.
Vansh and ridhu moments are so cute, romantic and very funny.
Waiting for the next one pls update it soon.
I enjoyed it very much and I loved it sooooooooo much
Thank you M! And ya! The ffs are so good that you feel you donโt wanna watch the show only๐ ! I read all Immj2 ffs… and they are amazing!
Heyy!!!
This episode is toooo gooodโ
Just in love with ur ffโค๐
Though we were waiting for sooo longggg but i think it was worth it….โโ
Plzz post d link for part 2 ๐๐
Eagerly waiting for it…..
Thank you Riya! And not just yโall but even I had to wait for all these comments! Thank you very much and I share the link on my wall post and here soon…
So the dream is comming true ha!!
Keep updating us really enjoying your creativity
Thank you Diha! Now Iโm having lack of words bcz of replying to everyone๐คฃ!
Ohh god I could not stop smiling and the bike race was amazing ๐คฃ๐
Oh no Kabir will come on the house party that not good bit maybe riddhu for making him jealous do something…….. Ohh iwill ne making assumptions, plz post next episode fast lighting fast!!
Any spoiler alerts..
Thank you very much! And your assumptions give me ideas! And Iโll give spoiler as soon I find appropriate ones… also, my ideas are purely spontaneous!
I NEVER PLAN BEFORE WRITING! Everything just comes to me as I write…
Damn these two girls, they’ve already planned how to wed Riddhima and Vansh, haha. But the episode was lovely and I love how everyone’s bonding better with time. Also, why call Kabir in the farm house stay? Anyhow, looking forward to the next episode.
Haha! Riaa, we need some matchmakers na! And Kabir is coming to the farmhouse because… You can read it when I post ( or maybe when I give a spoiler)
sure, looking forward to it
โคโคamazing episode..waiting for the next one๐๐๐
Iโll try and shorten your waiting period and sorry for the delay… And thank you very much!
Heyy!!!๐
This episode is tooo goodโ
I m in love with ur ff๐
Though we were waiting for a lonngggg time
But i think it was worth it โคโค
Just tell me when r u going to post part 2๐
Will u post today???? โ
Plz share the link for part 2 ๐๐
Regards: riya thakur
I share the link as soon as I post it… It might get late… sorry ๐
Really loved the episode a lot
Thank you Sahanaz! Keep reading ๐!
One question
By when u will be posting part 2
Plzz post by today night
Plzzzz๐๐๐๐๐
Okay… Iโll try my best and most probably, it will be there by tonight… but itโs a looooong episode so Iโm really very sorry but I canโt assure you.
Great episode….just awesome.
Thank you ,Ravi… keep supporting me like this ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ
It was really good apart from riansh conversation I really liked that part when ridhima was telling aryan that sejal is not here and he said that she was very good person I laughed at that part.I loved their friendship and missing my friends in school only friends not school and teachers Xd.
Iโm sorry dear but i think you have commented at the wrong place…
Oh!sorry dear.waiting for your next episode eagerly.ArJal’s engagement part 2..
Will u be posting todayโ๐โบ
Or tomorrow? ๐
Iโll try to post it soon…
really too good the conversation between Riddhima and Vansh, eagerly waiting for the upcoming episodes.
Thank you Kaivalya
Hii๐
When r u going to post part 2 ๐
Plzzz try to post today itself by night
Plzz๐๐๐
Iโll try my best!
Hiiiโ
When u will be posting part 2?????
Very excited……..๐
Will u be posting by today night???