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Sanky:what????
Swara:y r u surprised .this should happen at any time
Rag was numb she is in a shock
Sanky:but. What is the need
Swara:need??u r talking as if u want to bee with her only
Ragsan were shocked
Rag:noo dii he was saying as u are telling all of a sudden naa thats y
Swara:u know him better
Rag was shocked again
Sanky:wt do u want tell it clearly
Swara:it is clear as I returned so there is no point for rag to be with u.nd she too have a life nd she can’t waste her life in this hope less relation
Rag:u r right dii .divorce is the right thing actually it is my mistake that I have not tought about it early
Swara:ok fine we will go to lawyer tomorrow then
Sanky was shocked he didn’t understand wts going on nd wt to do
Swara(in mind):wt is this I tought someone will stop it but these two are soo stuborn
All left Sanky nd rag werr left
Sanky was starting rag she didn’t see him she was completely involved in her world nd she too left from there
Scene shifts
TanI:maa do u think they will confess
Swara:I hope so
Scene shifts to garden
Rag sat there on a bench nd was fully broken
Sanky see this from far don’t know y he too feeling sad
Rag was crying Sanky went near her
Sanky:r u ok
Rag wiped her tears nd smiled at him
Sanky:r u crying?
Rag:noo y will I cry .everything happening as I expected .
Sanky kept his hand near her eyes nd hold a tear nd saw her (signed with eyes what was that)
Rag:voo happy tears at last every thing becoming perfect
Sanky saw doubtfully
Rag was not able to control her self hugged him at once .Sanky was shocked for her sudden reaction but he felt happy nd hugged her tightly
Swara saw this from far with teary eyes nd tani hold her hand to console her swara saw him and gave him a warm smile nd hugged him
Tani:r u ok maa
Swara:haa nd took him away from there
Scene shifts
Rag:if I won’t tell it to u I may not be able to tell it in my whole life
Sanky was about. To release the hug
Rag:plzz I can’t tell this by facing u
He hugged her again .
Rag:I know it is not a right thing but don’t know when it happened (she was crying only)really I don’t want to come btwn you two iam sorry but I should tell u now only.y u came in my life Sanky before u came it was routine nd I don’t know anything about love u tought me how to love .she closed her eyes painfully (I LOVE YOU SANKY)
Sanky released the hug (as he was shocked)rag relesed the hug nd ran away from there with out seeing him
Sanky sat there only it started raining he started crying some one kept a hand on his shoulder Sanky turned nd saw swara
Swara:y u didn’t stopped her nd told her that u too love her did I came in your mind(with a teary eyes)
Sanky hugged her nd stared crying
Next day
Tani:maa wr is mammaa
Swara:she may be in her room see
Tani:noo I saw now only she is not there in house
Sanky listened nd saw swara she too saw him .immediately he ran nd checked all the rooms nd found a letter
“Dii Sanky learned every thing nd now there is no need of me there so iam going I know if I tell u will stop mee that’s y iam leaving see u soon .iam sorry tani I didn’t say goodbye to you but I kept a gift for u in ur room plzz forgive mee .love u guys byee ”
Sanky eyes were filled with tears nd he left the letter
After 4years
A boy is shown seeing the pictures of tani from chaild hood with rags
(Yes he is tani )
Tani:mammaa u promised mee that u will come when I need u noww plzz come back
Sanky:tani come fast iam getting late
Tani:yes baba comming
They left
Sanky dropped him nd left from there
Tani was about to goo but don’t know y he felt someone calling him he turned back nd saw rag standing there (yes rag came as she is missing tani a lot she came to see tani)
Tani ran nd hugged her
Tani:mammaa u kept ur promise
Rag hugged him tightly
Rag:y not after all I gave a promise to u??
Tani:how r u(still hugging)
Rag released the hug nd cupped his face
Rag:how can I live with out u
Tani:plzz don’t leave me again
Rag:sorry I should goo nd I promise I will come when ever u call mee but u too promise mee that u will not tell about mee to dii nd Sanky
Tani was shocked by seeing someone on rags back .rag turned to see and is shocked to see the person
Rag:Sanky
(Yes Sanky came back as tani forget his carriage box)
Sanky gave a tight slap to her
Rag nd tani were shocked
Sanky:how dare u left mee when I need u
Rag was confused
Sanky hold ger hand nd dragged her towards him nd hugged her tightly nd started crying rag was shocked by his reaction but she released the hug by seeing the person at the back of Sanky
Rag:dii nd ran nd hugged her
Swara released the hug
Swara:who is she jiijuu
Sanky:ur sister
Swara:ohh she returned back to you woww
Rag was fully confused
Rag :what??
Sanky took her aside
Fb shows
on the day of operation
Swara:Sanky today I will tell u truth that by this operation I will loose my memory
Sanky:what??
Swara:will u promise mee one thing
Sanky:promise u ask anything I will do it
Swara:when I gain my conciousness then plss don’t tel me about my past let me live my future happyly
Sanky:y??
Swara:I don’t want to remember all these complimentary situations plzz
After operation
Swara:who am I
Tani:my maasi
Swara:maasii??
Tani:haa my mammaaa ‘s sister (by showing to rags photo)
Sanky was numb he was fully broken he dont know what’s happening
Swara:who is he (pointing to Sanky)
Tani:my dad
Swara:y is he sad
Tani:mamaa was angry on him nd left him
Swara:y??
Tani don’t know wt to say
Tani:he slapped her thats y
Swara:how cruel u r y u slap my sister .tell me about my sister otherwise I will give complaint
Tani:naa naa maasi he is nice but maa misunderstood him nd went away she will come soon
Swara:ok then till then I will take care of u
Fb ends
Rag was shocked nd tears were rooling from her eyes
Rag:This much happened nd I don’t know anything about all these iam sorry
Sanky was about to talk
Swara:ohoo di dii excuse him naa poor guy waiting from u from 4 years .u know how many girls tried for him but never took advantage plzz come back
Rag hugged swara
Rag:y not I will always bee with I only
Swara:not with mee with jijuu
Rag gave a fake smile
All went home
Night
Rag was sleeping with tani
Swara:ofoo budhuu they met after many days give them some privacy nd u come with mee
Rag:noo need swara I like to be with him
Swara came near her nd say in rags ears
Swara:I know u too want to enjoy dont worry I don’t mind nd she took tani with her
Rag was tensed
Sanky closed the door
Rag :I know u r acting for dii its ok iam ok .u sleep on bed I will goo after they sleep
She was about to goo Sanky hold her hand tightly
Sanky:again u r running away from mee .how many times I should tell u to not to leave mee .he pulled her towards him she was collided with him
Two were facing each other
Sanky(by seeing into rag’s eyes ):I am not doing this for swara iam doing this for mee as I came to know that iam not complete without u .yess “I LOVE U””ragini nd I can’t live without u
Rag became emotional nd hugged him tightly
Lights off
Movie over (ha ha ha)
End of this ff all e happy
Tnk u very much for ur love nd support plzz read my next ff “but my hear is with u”
Urs darling pavani
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Amazing akka chala awsm ending.
Tnk u megha chelli
sry to say your end story was injutices swara because she was a mother how can use change mother and children sorry to say your story end very worste
hey friend ending was good but what message did u gave from this story that if we are married also or if we have child also than we can not trust our husband it is seen in story because he will fall in love of other girl and will leave to us and u spoilt jija sali relation in this story and remember one thing if a person is married than even if anything happen that person must live woth his original wife and u can take example of u in real life that what happens when ur own husband storts loving other people
I know u will tell it is just story but friend remember here many girls and boys are reading story and it is not good to show this type of story
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Ha ha ha ya I can say u the concept of the story it is 1)the women who gives birth is not only a mother
2)love is not only to be with our loved once but also to make our loved once happy
Nd about Sanky nd rag love happens no one can stop it hope u understand it now
friend can I ask u onething in ur ff sanky started loving ragini within a month only and forgot his wife who has one child but when rags left him for 4 years than he must had fallen in love with swara again because she is his wife and she is his first love
do not think that I am swara fan so telling but I am telling because the way u portrayed sanky character in this story that way he must have fallen in love with swara again and this time his love rags was not with them please think before bashing my comment
Ha ha ha ya I can say u the concept of the story it is 1)the women who gives birth is not only a mother
2)love is not only to be with our loved once but also to make our loved once happy
Nd about Sanky nd rag love happens no one can stop it hope u understand it now
nice….but y did you end it so quickly
Tnk u azure darling
I can’t handle 2 at a time
Finally u did wat u wanted ryt ?? Rag San ko unite kardiya n Forgot da First Wife who Spent Her whole Life fr Her Husband n Kid ??..Srsly wat a Stupid Ending …u wrote a Stupid Story wich showed First Wife is nthing infornt of 2nd Wife..Ok i agree Sanskaar has Moved on n Loves His Sali nw den y did u bring Swara’s Character bak ?? U cud have made her Die in Coma itself..bt No Wanted to Spoil Swara’s Image ryt ?? Srsly Nonsense Story..Rag San cn never beat SwaSan…M Happy finally u ended da Story..finally no more torture of Rag San Jodi..Thnks fr Ending it Soon..
Ha ha ha how insecure u r for ragsan if they can’t beat swasan then y u wasted ur time in reading my story nd its my wish to write a story nd I don’t need ur judjment for it iam happy with them who like it nd ur torture started again as I came with one more ragsan ff nd in that also swa is lover of Sanky nd I seperated them ha ha u want u can read that also
Hahahaha nice reply dii ??
Tnk u darling
Watelse we cn expect frm u Guyz…Anywyz m nt interested in ur story n who told i read ur story fully..i dnt have tym to read all these nonsense..i jst go through da end part dats it..to knw hw u ppl cn show or make Rag San as couple to compete wid Swaasan…anywyz nw u r strtinf new story na so i wish dat too ends soon b4 it strts…n Yes M Insecure fr SwaSan n M Proud of it coz They r Best n it cn be seen on TRPs…Coz of SwaSan Swaragini is going on still nw..u Accept it or nt SwaSan r Best..fr ppl like U Sacch is alwyz Bitter bt its True..SwaSan r Best n will be Best..Writing in FF doesnt mean Rag San will be Pair..
What ever it is ur wish to read or not iam also not interested in ur fav couple u be happy by praising them I am not against them nd I like ragsan its my wish nd about cvs and all bulshit I don’t bother I write as I like them .be hapy live hapy with ur swasan goodbye
Love u so muchhhhhh di…. Super duper reply…. Ha I just loved it…….And ya swasan fan good bye to u and ur hurtful cmnts… Haha love u di…. Ummah and big hugs to u my best di….
Ha ha ha tnk u sissy
Yessssssssss finally u r going yipeeeee
Now we will fell fresh on this ff before i always used to smell something burning
And yeah we don’t care about u , ur life or ur so called swasan n we don’t give a damn to the trp’s
Swaragini trp’s are high cause of raglak to so u better shut ur mouth
Ha ha ha nice one yashal darling
Thanks di
Lol..Who is Burning ?? N dat too wid Rag San Jodi n their Fans..we r nt soo Free to Get Jealous of U all n ur Bhai Behen Jodi..We have mny other wrk also n cnt waste time in getting Jealous of u n ur Bhai Behen Jodi…ur Reply will nt Effect Me at all..Let ur Soo Called Readers Support U..i dnt care coz SwaSaninas t Much More Pwerful n Strong n its been Probed many times so i dnt need to Reply to All ur Nonsense Comments n Replies…so Bye Bhai Behen Jodi n their Fans…n dnt think we r Jealous of Ur Bhai Behen Jodi..we dnt need to be Jealous or Burn Jealousy happens wen dat Couple or Person is Famous bt here Rag San r nt at all Famous also n infact cvs never showed Rag San as Couple they showed dem Brother n Sister wem Rag called Sanskaar as Bhaiyyia wen she was Evil ???. ..so this itself shows Rag San r Bhai Behen Jodi ?????
Ufff shukar hau ab ye chali to gaye bye kehte par koi bharosa ni Ye wapis bhi à sakti hai aur koi lecture de ne ??
N from one side u r saying that u don’t need to prove n on the other side u r saying ragini said bhaiya n all to sanskar
I don’t know what you call this but for me u r proving ??
Awesome ending
Tnk u piya darling