The evil soul (Naagin,Manmarziya,Vishkanya and Meri aashiqui tumse hi) Intro

Hi guys I am Siddhi and this is my and RS’s ff.We both have created this ff and intro and 1st episode will be written by me.

Ranveer Mehra:He is Arjun,Ritik and Malay’s brother.

Ritik Mehra:He is rude and is Arjun,Ranveer and Malay’s brother.

Arjun Mehra:He is also rude and is Ritik,Ranveer and Malay’s brother.

Malay Mehra:He is a playful boy and is Ritik,Ranveer and Arjun’s brother.

Shivanya,Apu,Radhika and Ishaani are sisters.

Nandhitha:She is a evil soul who wants to kill all the couple.

A road is shown which is very dark.Then a car comes but stops in between.

Two boys comes out of the car.They are Ritik and Arjun.

Ritik:This car have to stop here only.

Arjun:Yaar now what we will do?

They are standing when something pushes Ritik.

Arjun:Ritik what happened?

Ritik stands up and fills pain to his back.

Ritik:Don’t know that something pushed me hardly and now my back is paining.

Arjun sees that there is got a injured mark on his neck.

Arjun:Ritik there is Mark on your neck.

Ritik:I know

Precap:Ritik gets injured mark on his back and Arjun,Ranveer and Malay gets worried.Ranveer comes to hall when the shelf starts falling on him.The shelf falls on him.
How it is?This idea is of my and RS.

  1. Brin

    Good start, continue with the story, waiting for the next episode. 🙂

    1. Siddhi

      Thanks brin?

  2. Maya-Shelly

    Gud start dr.
    Seems interesting
    Continue dr
    Keep smiling
    Take care

    1. Siddhi

      Thanks shelly?

  3. Harisha

    Good story yaar

    1. Siddhi

      Thanks harisha?

  4. Nice start waiting for the epo

    1. Siddhi

      Thanks very much for us comment ?

  5. Nice start waiting for the epi

    1. Siddhi

      Thanks duvraksha

  6. Shreyaa

    It’s a very good introduction

    1. Siddhi

      Thanks shreyaa?

  7. Very nice dear the starting is very good waiting for the episode ?

    1. Siddhi

      Thanks neelam?

  8. Kathy

    Good start siddhi n RS… Thanks for adding vishkanya too…. Post next seen… Will b waiting….

    1. Kathy

      Next episode … Good luck….

    2. Siddhi

      Thanks Di I will try to write my best

    3. Siddhi

      Thanks Di from myself and rs

  9. Siddhi u know na that I don’t read ffs accept the ones accept the ones posted on our vishkanya page so the only thing I could say to you is to keep it up u r doing good and best of luck for the ff

    1. Siddhi

      Thanks ooshi?

  10. Dp is changed because I am commenting from cell phone

    1. Siddhi

      So that’s why u r do changed.

  11. Ur dp is nice if I am not wrong then it’s kasam’s lead jodi

    1. Siddhi

      Yeah ooshi it’s kasam’s lead jodi

  12. Narendran

    Thnx for adding matsh.. Keep writing..

    1. Siddhi

      Thanks naren?

  13. Nandana


    1. Siddhi

      Thanks nandana?

  14. Rookey Rookers for ever lover of ranvi

    good epi , i have a question bro , if u really don’t believe in love and god surely u would not believe in fate too , then how u end up in writing a love story …….?????? and what u learned from these serial ???? i know u r a kasam fan , they what u learned from that love story !

    1. Siddhi

      See Rookey I don’t believe in love but I know about love as I see in serials and add that only.And I love the write ff but if I will not write a love story or else then no one will like it so I write like this but in real for me love is like when I don’t get a pen then I get sad for 1 or 2 days and love is also like that

  15. RANdomfANCreationz

    hey nice intro siddhi and u know i m a big fan of mmz and ishveer 🙂

    1. Siddhi

      Thanks farin and I know u are a big fan

  16. HarSHaN

    Mark of Injury n Falling of Shelf?!!mysteries…guddd…keep continue..share nxt soon Siddhi

    1. Siddhi

      Thanks harshan bhai?

  17. Roma

    Very good intro…plzzzz continue dear. .all the best. . 🙂

    1. Siddhi

      Thanks roma?

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