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Home»Colors»Bepannah»~DESTINY~ Short Story – Part 10
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~DESTINY~ Short Story – Part 10

Jiya ABy Jiya AApril 7, 20236 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey.. I’m back with next part of my story… And I’m sure that this part will blew your mind…. So… 

Let’s Start…. 

Hooda house…

Aditya enters the house and start finding avni…He go to avni’s room… He listen someone’s weeping sound…..

Aditya: Avni… What happened?… Why are you crying?…
Avni didn’t reply…
Aditya: Did you saw that jerk again?…
Avni again didn’t say anything…
Aditya: How many times I ask you… Just once tell me his name… I’m telling you… I won’t spare him…
Avni: I’m ok Aditya…

Parallel scene…

Zoya go behind Raj…
She saw Raj looking at a photo sitting in his car…
Zoya go towards him… He saw zoya and tried to hide that photo and his tears also…
Zoya:What is this Raj?….Why are you looking so sad?…..Are you crying?….But why?….why there is tears in your eyes?… Is you’re hiding something?… Raj you are behaving different since you came here… Did something happen on mussoorie?….
Raj: No… Nothing zoya… Look… I’m alright…
Zoya saw the picture that Raj was hiding…
Zoya: This?…

Parallel scene ( Hooda house)

Aditya: Avni… Plz… You know that I can’t see you like this?…I asked you several times… But you never tell me his name?….. I still hate that moment… I was not able to came on your most important day….you know that dad’s condition was very serious that days…i was not in touch with you….. I just wanna know who he was?….
Avni:You know that we’re not together anymore… Then why?… Why do you wanna know his name?…
Aditya: Because I can’t see you like this?… I just wanna ask him that… Why he hurt you?… What he got by hurting you?…
Avni: Ok… I’ll tell you his name….
Avni tells aditya his name..

Parallel scene…

Zoya:She is the same girl whom I just met..
Raj: Yes… She’s Avni…
Zoya: Who Avni?… And how you know her?…
Raj hesitates: She.. She …is…my… Ex wife…

Zoya get completely shocked….

Zoya: What?… Are you in your senses Raj?… Do you know what are you saying?… Are you drunk?….
Raj: Sorry….. I didn’t tell you before…. A lot of things happens after you left mussoorie … I know there is a lot of questions in your mind… I’ll try to answer them all….I thought to tell you but your life was already very messed up… I thought why to disturb you…
Zoya: Disturb…. Ohh… Really…. You was teaching me something about disturbing last night… Remember….
Raj: That’s a different thing zoya…
Zoya: I understand your situation…. I won’t get angry like you does… Now will you plz tell me how all this happens?… You and avni… How you both get married… And when this all happens?..
Raj: After you left Mussoorie…. I was very alone…One day I went for a meeting in a cafe… There I saw avni… It was love at first sight…. She was there with some of her friends….I tried to talk to her… We both became friends and then we start dating… And after 2 months of relationship we decided to get married…. But you know my family… They want me to do arrange marriage but still I and avni got married in a court… I want to tell you about my wedding but you changed your number and I was not able to reach you…. Then after marriage my family accept avni… We was having a beautiful life…
Zoya: Then why you both are not together now?….
Raj: It’s very late zoya… Let’s go home.. I’ll tell you everything there..
Zoya: Ok…

They both reach home….
(MUTED CONVERSATION)

Hope you guys like it… Let me know in comment that did you except something like this …Or you’re surprised with this plot….. I really wanan know your views on this story…. Bye… ❤

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Jiya A
Jiya A

    6 Comments

    1. harsheeee
      harsheeee on April 7, 2023 2:33 pm

      i thought they must have dated in past but as always you surprised that they were married eager to know the reason of their separation and will they be together again , will zoya help him or will adi start hating raj and with avni and raj’s past will zoya n adi unite
      like i’m very keen now for the up coming major twist

      • Jiya A
        Jiya A on April 7, 2023 5:05 pm

        Glad you liked it…. ❤

    2. Alisha146 on April 7, 2023 3:37 pm

      Wow yaar
      I have my exam on monday
      But came here to read thi
      superb
      Waiting for the next part

      • Jiya A
        Jiya A on April 7, 2023 5:06 pm

        Thanks…. ❤
        Best of luck for your exam….

    3. Jasminerahul
      Jasminerahul on April 8, 2023 5:37 am

      Is avni aditya’s sister or cousin?shocking that raj and avni were married but got separated.aditya is worried for avni.will avni’s past make aditya mess up with raj?

      • Jiya A
        Jiya A on April 8, 2023 11:56 am

        Avni is Aditya’s childhood friend and best friend….

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