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Fan Fiction Swaragini

Complicated (ragsan ss) shot 10

A12345By A12345December 5, 201722 Comments5 Mins Read
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Thankyou all for liking this story.. Your liking made me to write another part..
Still many r asking to make Ragini normal bt sorry it can’t bcs its autism…
Let’s begin….

Lak gets worried as wr might sanskar go?
Ap:laksh…u should check on him…he is broken now…he needs someone…
Lak:ma…i vl search him…

He goes in search….

Here sanskar was in isolated place….
He was sitting in the car silently….

He gets laksh’s call
He sees and picks
Before laksh could say something
San:lucky..i m fine..dont worry….and i vl be back soon….
Lak:are you sure bhai?tell me wr r u i vl come there
San:no..i m fine lucky i m not broken
He disconnects the call….

Next day it was swalak mehendi..
There comes dadi masi…(she vl be played by ragini’s dadi… In this fic she vl sanskar’s dadi…)all call her dasi…(short form of dadi maasi)

She comes and sees everyone are sad.. She gets confused….

Ap:maasi ji… She goes to her and takes her blessing…

Then all meets her
Dasi:wr is sanskar…?

Suji who was present there gets tears… She goes from there…
Lak:woh..dasi..he is just out for a work

At the time Sanskar comes…
He dirsctly goes to his room…
Dasi gets confused..

Later laksh manages the situation

It’s night…

Mhndi was at gadodia’s side..
So all Maheshwari’s went there…except sanskar

Ragini was sitting there… Lost…
Suji sees her…she gets angry bt controls she know that it isn’t her fault bt seeing her makes her rent sanskar’s fight

Rag was hvng an envelop…
Sahil comes and sits next to her
Sahi:laado!wat is this?
He was abt to take..
She doesn’t give him
Rag:no..laado wont give?
Sah pouts: why?? Wat is that? You don’t want to give bhaiyyu…
Rag nods in no
Sah: bhaiyyu is katti
Rag smiles: laado..ok
Sah opens his mouth in shock
Sah:ok…i wont talk to you…
She just smiles
Sah:i m not talking seriously
She gives no response by smile
Sah:i wont talk to you from this sec
She held his hand.. And keeps her head in his shoulder…
He smiles
Rag:not talking..still talking
He smiles he her hairs….
Sah:u know na.. I can’t stay without talking to you…

After some time..
Ap makes sw sit and it was some ritual that mil should apply first mhndi to the future dil
Sw:one min…
She gets up
Dasi: wr r u going?
Sw smiles and she brings Ragini with her
She makes her sit beside her
Sw:laado loves mehendi ryte?
Rag nods
Sw smiles she tells one of the mhndi girl to apply mhndi one rag hand
Dasi: this was an important work for you.. That you hv disrespect us
Sw: disrespect?
(Note here dasi knows that she’s autistic)
Dasi: yes… Bcs u brought an abnormal girl to the mehendi
Sw gets angry: dasi…you r elder.. everyone respects you that doesn’t mean that you can talk anything
Ap:maasi….plzz
Dasi:i was saying..
Sw: anyone here doesn’t want to know wat you were saying
Dasi gets angry on her… She was abt to talk about pari convinces her and takes her from there…
Ap:swara beta…i m sorry from her … We should start the ritual

After the function…
Everyone were prsent there
Rag only apolied mehndi on her left hand..in her right hand she is hvng the envelop

Laksh comes…after some swalaks’s photo sessions

Rag comes:laado…want help!
Swalak looks at her
Sw:u need something….?
Rag nods
Sw:laa…
Rag:laado..want help lak… laksh
Lak smiles
Sw: wat help you want from laksh?
Rag:laado secret
Sw:bt…
Lak sighs her and assures her..
Sw goes
Rag gives the envelop(it was a hand made envelope)
Lak was abt to open
Rag:no..open..
Lak:then?
Rag: envelope… crying boy
He doesn’t understand
Lak:this is not for me
Rag nods in no…
She turns and sees sahil
She pointed to him
Lak: to sahil
She nods in no
He wasn’t understanding
Rag:crying boy…
Lak guessing:u mean my brother sanskar
She nods in yes
Lak smiles: ok..i vl give it to him
Rag: cheating..no…
Lak: ok
Rag:laado promise
Lak:laksh promise
Rag smiles

Later in mm
Sanskar was doing some work in the living room….
Laksh comes
San smiles weakly: is function went well
Lak:yup..without you it was boring
San:m sorry..u..
Lak:no need for the explanation bhai..i understand..i hv something to give you..

San confused: wat?
Lak thinks to cheer him: someone has said to give this for crying boy
San sees the hand made envelope he gets confused
San: who?

Lak;my saali
San shocked :you mean Ragini?
Lak nods smilingly
San smiles widely forgeting anything
He was abt to take..
Lak pulls back
San:lucky…
Lak: there’s one condition
San: wat? Give it to me fast…
Lak; keep smiling like this… Sadness won’t suit you
San: give me
Lak:ok ok… He gives it
Lak: she made this for you at night… And she didn’t let anyone to see this… Even she took promise from me that i shouldnt see
San smiles..
Lak turns to go…
He see rp and ap at the door

He goes from there…

San opens it…

It had a folded chart…
It had 4 sentences…

“Keeping silence or crying wn u r hurt is the first betrayal you doing for yourself”

“Being hurt is the best way to find your strength”

He smiles

Rp and ap saw that
Rp:is Ragini written this??
San turns and nods

The envelope had something else
It has a golden coloured spoon..
She had made a smiley on it..
He smiles….

San:mom..was saying that she is abnormal…bt even a normal person doesnt hv her thoughts….


To be continued…..

It’s boring
Sorry…i hv typed in flow.. Watever came to my mind in spot i hv written it..

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Fan of drashti&gurmeet and obviously tevar my ragsan???i get new story on them everyday bt too busy to write?

22 Comments

  1. Sreevijayan on December 5, 2017 1:04 am

    One of the best episode till date.awesme

  2. mk on December 5, 2017 6:03 am

    Amazing dr

  3. Satya on December 5, 2017 6:41 am

    Awesome part

  4. Neethu on December 5, 2017 6:51 am

    This is the bestest story i ever read.

  5. Ammy on December 5, 2017 7:03 am

    Awesome

  6. sug on December 5, 2017 7:32 am

    Wow

  7. snehahari on December 5, 2017 8:48 am

    Superb dear

  8. Manisha on December 5, 2017 10:01 am

    Awesome

  9. vini on December 5, 2017 4:10 pm

    awesome

  10. manu on December 5, 2017 4:54 pm

    How cute ragini. Best ff

  11. nive on December 5, 2017 5:18 pm

    Sissy totally amazing chappy.

  12. Shalini on December 5, 2017 5:29 pm

    Fantastic. You are correct sanskar she’s not abnormal that dasi and suji only abnormal

  13. RAGSANIAN on December 5, 2017 5:49 pm

    Amazingggg your stories are not indeed you’re indeed writer aliya. Thanks and lots of love and hug for you for this adorable story.

  14. PriyaS on December 5, 2017 6:05 pm

    Superb

  15. vani on December 5, 2017 6:17 pm

    Beautiful cute dear

  16. aditi on December 5, 2017 6:35 pm

    Excellent. So there is no chance to cure ragini.

  17. keerthi on December 5, 2017 6:44 pm

    Marvellous update

  18. maha on December 5, 2017 7:07 pm

    Wonderful. Ragini is talk was cute

  19. geet on December 5, 2017 7:42 pm

    Amazing superb beautiful

  20. Rikashini on December 5, 2017 8:39 pm

    Awesome

  21. moni on December 5, 2017 9:34 pm

    Awesome

  22. Sushree on December 17, 2017 3:12 am

    Fan of your writing..amazing plot

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