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Bz I loved her..Sanskar’s love story (Episode 17)

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Flash back:
Ragini recalls the moments in MM when she came there to meet Sanskar after his Kashmir trip.
His face lightened when he saw me in door step.
“Hey kiddo come in”.I entered his room.
“This is ur jewellery box from Kashmir.”
Ragini: “It’s beautiful”.
Sanskar:”Not much as you”.Hearing this unknwly I blushed.
Sanskar:”r u blushing..?”.
He raised his eye brows look at me questionably.
“Me ? No am not”. I try to hide it ..am also unknown to this and cover it with another topic.
“Tmw is Didi’s birthday and u know this Laksh is going to mad day by day. How many surprises left for tomorrow. Today he filled her room with teddies.I really wonder what will happen next if it’s a trailer.
Sanskar: “My Bhai is like that , he is the best ro know how to surprise someone with gift.”
Ragini: “yah u r rite he is the best and also for my di and by d way Mr.Maheshwari you must learn something from ur brother.Everytime u only gives roses from your garden…you r a big miser but my Di she always happy seeing those like she got diamond from u…pagal”
Sanskar:”ohh kiddo am Sanskar Maheshwari a struggling photographer, but he is Laksh Maheshwari young business tycoon if he wish to do something he can gift moon from the sky..”
Ragini: “ha ha i know See this iPad Laksh gifted to her after his proposal”.
Sanskar: “nice, but what this doing in ur hand”.
Ragini:”You know everything in Di ‘s is also mine, I can use them”.
“Oh no there is a correction everything in di’s is mine except u, she allowed me to use everything except the thing which u gifted her.even if its hair clip she didn’t allowed me to touch it”.
He smiled at me.
“Sometimes I really wonder why she keep that old stuffs in her box like a treasure..clips , scattered bangles, chocolates cover , name slips, earnings, pencil, eraser..etc Every silly thing that u gifted her.Don’t dare throw eggs on me again..sometime I really surprised why didn’t u fall in love with my di..which type of friendship is this”.A vase broked from his bag.
“What was that u r very careless Sanskar”.
“Oh no I brought it from Kashmir for Mom”.
“Oh then what will do?”
“No I have another gift for her”. He showed some accessories.
“Wow these all r for maa”.
“No, not all”. He pick a beautiful silver anklet from there .
“This is for shona her birthday gift and bangles and kasmiri showl are for uttara and sumi aunty”
“Oh this much purchasing unbelievable, so Mr.Maheshwari u r try to impressing all the women’s in MM and Gagodia family.. Smell something fishy is any hidden intentions behind this? “.
He chuckled.
“I always purchase something for them when I got a chance in b/w my journey. This is not a new thing for me”.
“What…u never brought anything for me.This is not fair “.
“Actually we r always fighting and u didn’t like the things which i brought for u.But this time I have something”.
“What ” he give her a small box.she hurriedly opened
“Saffron from Kashmir”.I didn’t expect this ,in excitement I hugged him.we parted he looked at me with disturbed face.
“Am going bye. “But he hold my hand.
“I want to talk to u”.
“Why did u applied this kajal Ragu”. I fumbled and bite my tongue.
“Don’t tell this to di,she will kill me that I used her’s which u gifted .”
Sanskar: “am not asking that, u never applied kajal before and u r looking different today”.
She didn’t answer.
Sanskar :”Ragini , maa told anything to u”.
She said hesitately .” you need some time for marriage “.
Sanskar: “oh no maa bhi na..she misunderstood me”. He put his hand on his head. Then lowered his head.
Sanskar: “I can’t marry anyone in this life”. I looked at him questionably.
“I didn’t told this to maa bz she will worried for me, that’s y asked her for sometime to marriage.I already told her that u r younger than my uttara , then how can I..?.U r only my kiddo and I..”. He searching for words.
Ragini: “who told u that am not ur kiddo.When maa talk about our match, didn’t take it seriously”.
He sighed .”Now I got relief “.
Ragini: “am not going to leave u easily Sanskar, u always excuse from marriage proposal and now dont want to marry anyone why? .I know there is a reason behind this”. He turned back look outside through the window. There is a seep silence in b/w them .she stand near to him.
Ragini: ” I know u deeply in love with someone, anyone can guess after reading that diary .But bit confused about the person mentioned indirectly in ur words .
Sanskar: “yah i admit.. there is Someone in my heart ..in my every breath. Don’t ask me who’s that, would nt able to tell u about her”.
Ragini:”so my assumptions r rite she is the same girl u wrote about in ur poems and stories.But where is she..? Why can’t u marry her?”.
Sanskar:”Now she is away from me, I can’t be reach there “.
Ragini: “But why..? If she lives in abroad we can reach there na..I didn’t understand what is bothering u, if u have no address we will find out her at any cost I will help u”,he smiled sadly.
Sanskar:”No Ragu, she is 1000 and 1000 miles away from me, its impossible to reach there. May be next life..hmm it’s my bad luck may be she can’t be mine for next life also..but I can’t cheat any other girl by a marriage.”
Ragini:”Are u going to become a devadas..I believe in this life Sanskar…we can’t assure there is another life after death, its a foolish thing to think like that, I want to live this moment. If u can’t manage things in present we will lost it in future also. I think u didn’t try to get back her”.
Sanskar:”Yes u r right.. am a fool who waited for the right time to fix everything, but when it came I lost her.”He fisted his palm.
Ragini:”You know Sanskar if u really want something in ur life with true heart whole universe conspires in helping u to achieve it”.
He sighed.Looked through the window with wet eyes.
First time I saw him like that and am still surprised the possibility of anyone in his life other than my Di bz from his words I can understand the pain and love towards that unknown girl. When he himself admit then it’s true.i dont know Di knows about this, these two people are impossible for me to crack.
I hate the person who has no value in his words .Wedding day I slapped him bz I knew that he loved someone then how can he cheat my Di and Laksh.I tried many times to contact with Laksh, but he is avoiding me, may be he is hurt I really doubt his strange behaviour on wedding day.why Sanskar marry my Di , if she is the same girl who he loves unconditionally , then why didn’t he tell anyone about this.Why he create this much drama.when Baba is searching alliance for didi Laksh proposal arrived.we all agreed with this.Many questions arise my mind. Now Di also accept this relation.. Only bz he is her best friend.. Then what about Laksh.God knows what’s going on these two people, they r impossible. I know the person who can give all answer is Sanskar and I didn’t give him a chance to explain his version.I have to meet him.
She reached his office.He quiet surprised when saw Ragini at reception. They moved to the visitors sitting area.
Ragini looked at him said straightly.
“I want ur explanation”.
Sanskar “For what..?”.
Ragini: “About ur marriage”.
Sanskar: “I already told about this in mandap”.
Ragini:”Then what about that girl whom u loved”.
Sanskar: “She is Swara..”.
Ragini: “Di ..r u kidding.. Then why u create this much of drama .u can said it straightly na.When I ask about this Everytime u denied.u r disgusting Sanskar ..u cheated ur brother and family and ur best friend and every single person.”
Sanskar: “I never said that ..the girl I loved is not Swara.what would i say when she become my brother fiancée “.
Ragini:” But still u marry her by cheating everyone .
Sanskar: “Enough , I don’t think so its required to give u any further clarifications on this matter”
Ragini:”You may succeeded in convincing Laksh and everyone .But I can’t forgive u never ever ,u r a cheap and selfish person Sanskar Maheshwari ,I hate u”. she is shivering with anger.Stamped her foot on the floor and left from there.He freezd there with pain.”we can’t satisfy everyone feelings Ragu..may be situations make people helpless. I can’t give u any explanation now may be u could nt able to understand. ”
His phone rang.
“Hello Sikhar how many times I called u and ur phone is switch off. Do u get any information “.
On the other hand
“Yes am following her for 2 week.But didn’t find anything unusal”.
Sanskar: “oh shit..I can’t give up easily.You keep eye on her”.
“Don’t worry thats my duty.What about my payments”.
Sanskar: “oky then come to meet me at park road today evening”.
“No today is not possible , will meet u a day after tomorrow.May be I can give u some good news.”
Sanskar: “oky then bye”.
……..……………………………………………….
Hi guys thank u for your extreme support and thank u my silent readers.Typed in hurry.Now I am in my father’s house can’t use my phone there Everytime. I will reply ur comments on prev epi Dr..sure..so little bcy catch u all later.

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519 Comments

  1. sethooty on April 26, 2016 8:25 am

    Hi guys this is my 17 epi don’t know what happened it posted as epi 2

  2. shan on April 26, 2016 8:30 am

    awesome dude…..i know he loves swara…..so that only he took photograpgy profession….but whom he s searching????

    • sethooty on April 26, 2016 12:32 pm

      It will reveal soon Dr…yes he loves Swara more than anything else..

  3. Dhara on April 26, 2016 8:54 am

    Superb asusual.

    • sethooty on April 26, 2016 12:35 pm

      Thanku so much dhara..

  4. Joya on April 26, 2016 9:57 am

    Take ur time dear……and very nice episode…………….

  5. Prateeksha on April 26, 2016 10:02 am

    It’s very nice… Thanks for the update.. Please continue

    • sethooty on April 26, 2016 9:09 pm

      Thanku pratheeksha and Anu for ur valuable support…

  6. Anu Ann on April 26, 2016 10:12 am

    Awesome dear

  7. Sus on April 26, 2016 10:35 am

    Nyc

    • sethooty on April 26, 2016 9:10 pm

      Thanku u sus…how u Dr..?

    • Sus on April 27, 2016 12:15 am

      I m fine dear. Your fanfiction is too awesome, sometimes when I don’t get your fanfiction I felt so bad, but txx to god. And no doubt I m always waiting for fanfiction, love u dear

  8. Vini on April 26, 2016 11:20 am

    Really nice dear,was surfing and saw yours, but epi 2 confused a litlle but when I read I understood it is the continuation,day by day ur writing style is becoming more n more beautiful ..keep going .

    • sethooty on April 26, 2016 2:19 pm

      thank u vini..actually i got some free time in b/w wrk
      rarely happen…when i came here to chat all r gayab.
      missed all chats in ur ff…now couldnt reply there also

  9. Neha on April 26, 2016 11:25 am

    Hi sethooty I was getting bored and I opened ur ff part 16 and then I was like ?I read all your chapters in one go it’s amazing when I found this part I’m so happy to be a reader of this amazing story really wonderful…….sanskar loved him in whole swara never shares anything gifted by sanskar what type of relationship she shared the gifts given by laksh but not sanskar beautiful but I have one confusion actually had two but ur this part solved the next one but one is still left
    Why did laksh broke marriage with swara? Is it bcoz swara can’t conceive or reason is something else which still left to open

    • sethooty on April 26, 2016 2:13 pm

      Happy to know that u like my story…
      am not a good writer dr,but i tried my best to achive ur expection
      level…about Laksh yes, his POV is yet to be revealed…i tried to
      explain my story in a normal way…may be Laksh POV will
      also hav normal reason..hope u all will satisfy by his justification…
      pls keep reading and support me thank u dr

    • Neha on April 26, 2016 2:29 pm

      Yeah I’m waiting for his pov well ur story is really good and ur last part was just rocking I was laughing holding my stomach poor uttara removing hurdles from swara’s way kam wo kare aur credit sanky ko ?but I loved each n every scene then dinning table scene she is completely lost in him nothing she needs now n that walking like robo keeping palm on her cheek seriously ? the best funny epi ever but sweetly written

    • sethooty on April 26, 2016 9:17 pm

      Haha thanku Dr…reached 7 th sky yaar…..koyi muje pakadoo I will fall from there …didn’t expect many of u laughed after reading this…

  10. sethooty on April 26, 2016 12:49 pm

    Hi guy’s replied ur all comments in previous epi..

  11. Joya on April 26, 2016 2:52 pm

    Helloooooooooooooooooo

    Are kya huaaaaaaa sab k sab so gaye hai kya????????

    Kya huaaaa agar vini di k page ka comment box gayab ho gaya to……..hum yaha pe apni masti continue kar sakte hai na………………….sethooty yr abhi humne to tease bhi nahi kiya………..abhi Hum Baki Hai Dear??

    Vishu tum yaha pe apne bade wale comments post kar sakti ho………

    Dnt cry vinita……..humra janm duniya ko rulane k liyr huaaaaaa hai?????

    Rups kaha ho????

    Vini di aap yaha par baat kar sakti hai na???????????

    Ya needhi aur divya shayad unhe pata nahi hoga ki vini di ne update kiya hai…….

    Aur ha guys sab log thoda thoda butter lekar aana shraddha k liye qki yeh ek bar gayab ho jati hai to dikhai nahi deti……….

    • sethooty on April 26, 2016 9:08 pm

      Haha joya..where ur kachaa mangoes want to eat now….do u know how to climb in trees…I will teach u…hehe

  12. musku on April 26, 2016 3:42 pm

    Ohhh it was just beyond words ….amazing

    • sethooty on April 26, 2016 9:31 pm

      Thanku musku ur comments motivated me lot…keep reading

  13. Vinita on April 26, 2016 4:26 pm

    Sethu di!!!!! It is so nice!!!!!! Aap ne kya socha aapki choti behen aapko asani se chor dengi???
    It is so nice!!!!
    Hamare ghar ke piche mango tree hai par mango abhi tak pake nehi ??
    Joya di how are u????
    Ek aur announcement agar aaplogoko ko mere naam se koi galat comment Mila toh mind mat marna. My c cousins are planning to do something to irritate me. Pls mind mat marna. Bye!!! Ab Mai unlogo ka class lene jati hu

  14. Vinita on April 26, 2016 4:28 pm

    Aisa class lugi Ki pura janam yaar rakhenge ????

  15. Vinita on April 26, 2016 4:32 pm

    U knw joya di there was a Bengali essay writing competition mujhe na aapki bohot yaar a rahi thi. Aapki shayari and poems…. Mai soch rahi thi Ki agar aap hoti toh aap aisi shayari bolti Ki hum usko translate karte hi first aa jate??

    • Joya on April 26, 2016 8:17 pm

      I m fine vinita………..
      R u talking about Vinu???????

      It’s kkkkkk?????????

      Yeh lo sab k liye aaaaaaaaammmmmm……

      Kya yr pehle batana chahiye tha na…………..agali baaar se pakkkkkaaaaaaa aisa hi karenge ha…..1st prize ka to pata nahi bas chappal na khani pade??

  16. Vinita on April 26, 2016 4:34 pm

    Whenever I see anyone wearing white and golden sarees the first thing which comes to my mind is vini di and sethu di…..

  17. Kaku on April 26, 2016 4:35 pm

    Can anyone pls give me the link of previous chapters

    • sethooty on April 26, 2016 9:30 pm

      Hi Dr this the link
      https://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Bz+I+loved+her

  18. vaishnavi on April 26, 2016 6:31 pm

    Hey seetu di….episode is awesome dear….poor ragini she will regret d most when she will know abt d truth….nd again a mystery dat who is finding abt…entire epi was awesome….but u wat still last episode’s scenes r rotating in my mind dat was d best u know…..

    • Joya on April 26, 2016 8:10 pm

      Same here yr…..sply lines in noteboooooooookkkk…………

      Kyu naye lag rahe……my favorite songgggggggggg alsooooo……….

    • sethooty on April 26, 2016 9:39 pm

      Haha thanku Dr..actually Ragini is an angry bird..and very straight forward she is very irritated with emotional drama..have to justify her action on first epi why she slapp him..some people are like that very sensitivity same time they will carm like kids…

  19. vaishnavi on April 26, 2016 6:48 pm

    Seetu di koi party nahi kar rahi hu mai…aur hum kya kare hamari kismath aisi hai ki jab aap free ho mai free nahi hoti hu….aapko pata hum sab ne aapko kitna yaad kiya hai …aapne hamari chats toh padi hogi , bahut funny hai na ….aapko ko pata hai vini di ne mujeh, shraddha di ko aur vinitha di ko 1st prize ki jagah injection de di yaar aur mujeh bahut dard ho raha hai issi liye so rahi thi…aur bichari shraddha di issi vajeh se gayabh ji hogayi..hehehe….

    Haa joya di hum yaha pe masthi karenge…aapko pata hai uss long comments mai mai ne uss unknown ko bhi sunaya tha but wo post nahi hue hai…aur ha ye shraddha di kab aathi kab gayabh hojathi hai pata hi nahi chaltha iss bar aane do hum sabh uski class lenge….

    Kya shraddha di joya di ne kaha unke ghar ke samne hi aam ki ped hai toh aap vaha kaa rahi ho kya…achcha tik he agar ja hi rahe ho toh hamare liya bhi laana aam….aur ha joya di shraddha di aam ke liye tree climb karegi na toh aap unki pics click kijiye , hum sabh ko dikhake kahenge ki dekho hamari monkey shraddka kya kar rahi hai…hahaha….

    • Shraddha on April 26, 2016 8:04 pm

      Our vaishu ki bachiii
      Tu toh mujhse Anjali ke page pe dekhti hai nahi??? Phir kaise gayab?
      N ya main aayi thi tabhi dekha USS unknown ka comment den detective giri shuru kardi apneee ki majra kya hai??
      Phir baithke sare episodes ke comments dekhe ki joya kaha hai???
      N wapis aayi toh yeh Ganda page comments disable kar chuka tha!!!?
      Phir abhi dekha Sethu ne episode 2 kyu post kiya?????
      Acha hua dekh liya warna phir 17th miss hojata?
      N yaar I envy u vaishuuu
      Tumhare vacations on hai? pata hai aisa vacation phir tumhe nahi milnewala full on enjoy karleee…..
      Humare abhi sabhi project reviews chal rahe hai?? 6 subs 6 course project?
      N only relief among this hectic schedule is fanfiction?? n tumlog
      Haaa dil ko sukoon milta hai

    • vaishnavi on April 26, 2016 9:05 pm

      Nahi shraddha di abhi bhi I have two more entrance xams to write after dat I am free ….

    • sethooty on April 26, 2016 9:47 pm

      Haha shradha thum bhi naa…haha…
      Who’s that unknown.. Will chk..

    • Anjali on April 26, 2016 10:23 pm

      mujhe bhi vacations nhi h 🙁 🙁

      It’s sooo hot outside…. Padhne ka mann hi nhi karta

    • Shraddha on April 26, 2016 11:10 pm

      Oh aisa kyaaaaa
      Toh ache se karna bacha!!!
      I know tu phod degi….?
      Vijayibhava✋✋
      Hahah??
      All the best vaishu ache se karna

    • sethooty on April 26, 2016 9:43 pm

      Haha…omg I was laughing like a mad….after reading this..my mom scold me why r laughing… Haha…

  20. vaishnavi on April 26, 2016 7:07 pm

    Aur ha kabardar agar koi meri seetu di ko tease kiya toh ….seetu koi bath nahi mai aaphi ki side hu tikh he …..achcha seeetuuuu diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii sach batana koi bhi aisa nahi mila na aapkho??….

    aur ha aapne toh sach mai bada vala secret bataya vo emojis ke baare mai….achcha aapkhi phone kis company ki hai …agar samsung ki hai to mujeh nahi pata ki emojis kaha hoote hai…par koi aur company ki hai toh vahi keypad mai hi hote hai emojis…..achcha didis koi toh mujeh bata ki samsung phone mai emojis kaha hoote hai kyu ki key pad mai toh nahi hai dats y I am asking (meri bhi vahi phone hai aur jab bhi mai emojis dalthi hu na tabh mai tab mai se comment karthi hu kyu ki ye phone mai toh pata nahi kaha pe hai)

    • Joya on April 26, 2016 8:48 pm

      Ayyyyyyyyyyooooooooo……….kitne innocence hai pure comment me……..yeh vinita,rups,vaishu ki innocence Pe hum puri duniya har de………

      Ha hum sethooty ko tease nahi karenge par ek condition hai…..vini di ne jo injection hume prize me diya hai wo tumhe lena padega????????

      Humre phn me keypad k ENTER KEy ko 2-3 sec k liye press karo to emojis ka option aata hai…..

      Aayyo shraddha humre yaha aayi hai……..par abhi tak pohchi kyu nahi……….kahi sanskar k sath DATE pe to nahi gayi???????

    • Needhi Singh on April 26, 2016 11:16 pm

      Vaishu , what a score dear!!!!!!!!
      I just read about your marks and trust me girl i am on cloud nine.
      Where’ the treat??????
      Lucknow aake dogi ya Tamil Nadu aana padega????? Mein bahut badi bhukkad hu to , koi bhi option chalega bas treat chaiye. All the best dear for future exams.Hope u outmark everyone.

    • Needhi Singh on April 26, 2016 11:31 pm

      Sorry vaishu, Telangana( Andhra Pradesh) instead of Tamil Nadu.

    • vaishnavi on April 27, 2016 1:24 am

      Ohh I trust u girl!!! Of course yaa u need to come to hyderabad if u want party…good u itself corrected dat its telangana not tamil naadu actually I get angry …lol..just kidding….thank u dear nd all d bst to u tooo nd wat r ur 12th marks I think they didn’t come yet but surely inform me whrn dey will come…

    • Joya on April 27, 2016 3:13 pm

      Hey vaishu r u using Samsung’s phn???????

      Setting me dekhna kahi to insert smiley karke option hoga…..agar mila to bachchu whtp se copy paste kar lena?????

  21. Shraddha on April 26, 2016 7:53 pm

    Hey sethooooo….. Yaar everytime this marriage issue comes up I feel very sad for sanskaar?
    Jaldi uski innocence prove karo na?

    N actually Joya nice idea mujhe yeh flash he nahi hua…….
    N hello madam ??
    Main kabse yehi pe hu Kahi nahi gayi….
    But this stupid Page? Comments disable kardiyaaa
    You know Joya tumhari waje se maine pura adha din apna dimag kharaab kiya hai….???
    Arey yaar yeh Unknown ladki kaun he maine Sree ke harr page pe ja ja ke tumhare comments dekhe ki tumne aisa kya kardiyaaaa n you know to tell her if she misinterpreted but Gosh utne me he disable kardiya gaya comments?
    Yaar joya pagalon ki tarah start from epi 1 to current aisa CId jaisa dhundti rahi u know???? aur yeh madam hai ki bass taag chichayii karti hai??
    Huh shey joya this is not acceptable?
    I’m deeply hurt????
    Hey bhagwan

    • Joya on April 26, 2016 9:15 pm

      Oye sharddha
      Itna pyar karti ho tum humse?????????

      Are yr huaa kuch nahi…usne shree ko kuch kaha tha to humne bas usko nahi humne needhi ko kaha tha ki UNKNOWN’S opinion about shree is wrong……that’s it…..yr itna bhadak gayi woooo…..waha pe bhi kaha ki humne uski insult ki hai………hum sach keh rahe hai ki humne kahi notice kiya ki usne kab kaha ki wo humne like karti hai……..guys leave that yr………us unknw ki wajah se kuch achchha hi huaa hai hume pata chala ki aap sab kitna pyar karte ho humse????.shree k sath huyi anban bhi thik ho gayi……..so achchhhhhhhaaaaaaa huaaa naaaa…….

      ????aayyyyyooooo naraj ho,dukhi ho………….sorryyyyyyyyyy………………………………..

      Kaaaaaan pakdar sorry kehte hai hum…..
      Humne diye hai na tumhe bahot saare gam…..
      Achchhhha ji galti huyi hai humse ab maan bhi jao na……………
      Dekho ab yuh na aur rootho ab apni joya ko gale lagao na………..
      Ek muskan ko thare,tarse naina humre,
      Ab chaloooooooo jadli humne maaffffff kar do naaaaaaa………..

      Kehat hai joya jara dhyaaan se suno
      Hum Sab kuch chhodenge par humri sari doston ko tang karna na chhodenge………Summer me nimbu pani ki kasam??????????

      No maskari……..no masti……….
      Seriously sorryyyyyy……and thank you so much humre liye inta sab karne k liye……i wannn say thanks to every1…….thank you guyssssss……….

    • Joya on April 26, 2016 9:41 pm

      Puchho q nahi chhodenge hum Doston ko Pareshan karna……qki hume aur kuch nahi aaata……..

      Humne kayi sabji k naam aur kuch colors k naam kisi language me nahi aate…..dal-rice banate the hum par exam period me kiya nahi kuch to jab se exam khatm huyi ha ya to pani jyada ho raha hai ya rice pura jal raha hai…..matlb kya to hume kuch nahi aataaa……………

    • Needhi Singh on April 26, 2016 11:07 pm

      Joya di ,u r really so lucky . U have such a lovely gang.I wish i could be a part of it but i guess it’s too late .Neverthless , atleast i am your friend right???????
      Good night( Sabbakhair )

    • Shraddha on April 26, 2016 11:20 pm

      Ayeeeee Joyaaaa
      Dosti ki hai nibhani toh psdegina re baba?✋
      Akhir Woh dost he kya Jo some dost ke bare me galat sulat sunsake….
      Because it’s one n only OUR rite????? to say anab shanab abt u?
      N kya tum bhi pagli…..
      Dosti me no sorry no tq remember???. Kai kartees tu…..

      Arey Woh toh haan chod dete he unko…….
      Oh God shree ke saath unbann???
      Kya kya hua hsi yaar?? Chalo ant bhala toh sabb bhala???

      N arey waaahhhh kitnaaa pyaaara poem hai???
      N best line goes too summer ke nimbu pani ki kasam????
      Joya darling???
      Chalo maaf kiyaaa
      Akhir mera dil kitmnaaaa bada hai?
      N hum apne joya se thode naraaz reh sakte hai????

    • Shraddha on April 27, 2016 8:51 am

      Lol Needhi ???
      What do u mean by”I guess it’s too late”??
      Is there some train that u missed or some gate that we have closed ??
      Chill man just start the conversation n really don’t need to seek permission or hesitate OK?

    • sethooty on April 26, 2016 11:30 pm

      Shradha Dr..sure I will sort out this haha..I know u don’t want to see sanky in tears.. ? ?? ..actually Ragini yese he ki..usee bahuth gusaa aathi hai kahi ke hi galathi hogayi thoo..she is very straight forward.. And childish..I just want to justify her hatred towards him that’s all…
      I don’t know wen I got time to type next epi..now I reached home..tomrw again going back to father’s village…

    • vaishnavi on April 27, 2016 1:28 am

      Needhi its not late yaar u can join anytime…u r always welcome here…infact I think u r already part of dis grp coz vini di namesha tumhari naam bhi lethi hai but since u were irregular u lost touch with this people I think

    • Joya on April 27, 2016 8:47 am

      Hey
      Good morning….

      Yes needhi i m so lucky….u r also member of this gang …..i mean Army………of course u r my friend dear……did u forget we all like ur dramatic family????.

      Shraddha sadhy mi library chya chakara marat aahe????
      Yepiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii……..shraddha man gayi shraddha maan gayi…………..?????????
      Hahaha bade dilwali shraddhAaaaaaaaaaaaaaa???

  22. Vinita on April 26, 2016 9:10 pm

    Vaishu ki bachi!!!!! “koi meri sethu di ko tease mat karna!!!!! ? tumne mujhe aise akela Chor diya??
    Aaj phir se Pune ka match hai.god knws kya hoga……. Itna har raha hai?? ab rsp ke liye tension Ho raha hai?
    Joya di joote nehi first prize milega??? abhi bi result nehi Diya hai pata nehi kya hoga agar aap hoti toh sure shot first prize mil jata!!!!
    Shraddha di thank god aap aa gayi!!
    Joya di woh konsa aam hai? Kya woh Maharashtra ja famous Alphonso aam hai?? I can’t find aam ka emojis!!;!
    Vini di kaha chale gayi???????
    I was talking about vinu. Sethu di ka last epi Mai jab vini fi praised her ff dhe smartly thanked vini di and she used my email id??

    • Shraddha on April 26, 2016 11:21 pm

      Arey vinitaaaa main yahi hu re???

      Tum bolo kahin toh Jane wali thi na ???
      Kisi ke saaaaaathhh…
      Kya hus uskaaa???
      Hahaha lol kidding dear…
      How’s u??

    • sethooty on April 26, 2016 11:35 pm

      Vinitha I read that comment 3 tthings which u loved most….eating sleeping and reading history book..voo teacher ki tharah mein bhi smile kar rahi hum…???

    • Joya on April 27, 2016 9:05 am

      Vinita agali baar se pakkkaaaa haaaa………hahahaha maharashtra ke famous aam hai….khaass ratnagiri se mangvaye hai humne Army k liye…..

      Shraddha tum sanskar k sath aur yeh vinita Mahi k sath date pe gaye ho naaaaaaaa…..batao batao…….humse yuh chhupao na……………????????

      Sharmana to yaha allowed hi nahi hai…………jo sharamata hai usko besharam banane ki responsibility humri…?????

    • Needhi Singh on April 27, 2016 11:29 am

      Good morning all of u,
      Joa di u remember that comment.Great
      Shraddha di ,thanks for the advice.Train hoti bhi ,to mein daud ke pakad leti.
      Ya Vaishu becoz of stupid exams i lost touch with people.
      What about mains dear?????

    • Vaishnavi on April 27, 2016 2:20 pm

      Needhi yaar mains ki to poocho mat I mean I am qualified but just qualified I will not get seat with dat stupid marks….then wat abt u??

  23. Vinita on April 26, 2016 9:16 pm

    Rsp nehi rps. Acha joya I read in a paper in Pune there is a famous food called tilli and buffaloes ka spleen usme use hota hai??? is it true?? I was laughing ? after reading that ??

    • Vinita on April 26, 2016 11:57 pm

      *joya di

    • Joya on April 27, 2016 9:08 am

      It’s k vinita………i dnt have problem wid joya…….

      Yr yeh famous food ka….kuch samaj me nahi aaya hume…..

  24. sethooty on April 26, 2016 9:26 pm

    Vinitha ur cousins r planning something to irritate u..if I were there , will join hands them to do something big…voo kya hee na ki kisi koo pareshan karne mein badi hi mazaa athi hai….I think my Hindi is improving..
    Guy’s do u remember kriya’s entry she played prank to niti…comment something as niti and we all confused who is actual niti..

    • Kaku on April 26, 2016 11:03 pm

      Sethooty can u pls give me link of previous epis…as I cant find it

  25. Anjali on April 26, 2016 9:35 pm

    Dudeeee….. I finally found time to read this…. after seeing in all the analysis and all……

    Sethooty….. YOU’RE SUCH A GREAT WRITER….. I JUST LOVED IT SOOOO MUCH….
    Am sooo sorry for.not reading it all these days.
    .. ???

    But I promise to read it from now on… pakka…. ????

    • sethooty on April 27, 2016 6:42 am

      Anjali Thanku Dr…time to go office catch u later..

  26. Vinita on April 26, 2016 9:55 pm

    Joya di aapki wrds sunkar koi bhi melt Ho jayenga ?

    • Joya on April 27, 2016 9:15 am

      Ohhhhh hoooooo……my sweeettttt girl………………jaise humne kaha wo sach kaha hai ki tumhari,rups aur vaishu ki innocence pe hum apni sari duniya kurban kar de…….

  27. Vinita on April 26, 2016 9:56 pm

    ????pune acha khel raha hai??

  28. sethooty on April 26, 2016 10:02 pm

    Vaishu ki bachi..thunee bhi tease kar rahe hoo…..???
    Heee hoooyee yeeee yepeeeee got emoji…. Thanku joya..pressed enter button emoji ayi…..????????????????????????????
    Omg ithene sarae emoji….
    Vaishu kithna innocent hai..wen u said don’t know how we get emoji’s in Samsung I thought u have other company phone…hahaha
    Joya…thumaree liye..voo injection bhi manzoor hai….thanku for emoji’s ..??????????????

    • vaishnavi on April 27, 2016 1:33 am

      Aapkho bhi mil gaya emojis …ohh noo ….pat mujeh nahi mila iss phone mai…

    • Needhi Singh on April 27, 2016 12:16 pm

      Sethu di etnne saare emojis .Thode muje bhi de do kyuki meri bhi Samsung ki mobile hai aur mujhe bhi emojis nhi mile.Vaishu we r on the same boat.

    • Joya on April 27, 2016 9:17 am

      Yarrrrrrrrrrrrrr……….dekhoooooo………sethoooty kitni happppppyyyyy happpy lag rahi haiiiiiiiiiiiiii……………..thanks qqqqqq???????????

      Dekho sethooty ne hume paraya kar diyaaaaaaa thanks bolke………………….?????????????

    • Anjali on April 27, 2016 12:20 pm

      ☺??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????❤?❤?✊☝✌☝✌????✋???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????⛪??????????

      Sorry couldn’t resist…. ????

    • Sree harini on April 27, 2016 12:42 pm

      Lol…everyone here are equally mad but I too don’t know how to get emogies in my mobile…feeling sad.

    • Needhi Singh on April 27, 2016 1:17 pm

      Thanx Anjali.Waise kaafi jyaada hai.

    • Anjali on April 27, 2016 2:04 pm

      Lol.. I’m mad… True…

    • Anjali on April 27, 2016 2:35 pm

      Lol… Ik…. Bht zyaada ho gaya na?

      But I’m used to this… Whatsapp me hamesha aise hi karti hoon m……

      *puppy dog eyes* Forgive me??

    • Anu on April 27, 2016 2:38 pm

      Lol… Haha ? ?

  29. sethooty on April 26, 2016 10:40 pm

    Joya read that unknown comments .and ur explanation… I think she is a school going girl or very sensitive non matured type..otherwise no one will comment like that in a public platform …especially hatred comments …comment box thoo gayab hogyi nahi thoo me bhi comment karthi vaham… Your explanation thoo teek thaa..she will definitely apologise u if she
    really like u..jise pyar kathe hoo use ham nafrath nahi kar sakthee..
    Nahi thoo hum army he naa payar karnee ke liyee

    • Joya on April 27, 2016 10:05 am

      U r ri8 Army hai na…………………….

      Non matured se hume ek kissa yaad aaya………i was very small whn Atalji was our PM…………hum na road side k Katte pe baithe the…..waha ek gadi aake ruki qki unke samne ek lady wid small kid aayi…..unhone (person in car..he is a local politician) us lady ko khoob danta…….to hume itna bura laga k humne Atalji ko letter likha tha?????….post kaise karte hai nahi pata tha to Aai ko bola…….aai ne humse puchha kya hai ye….i told her everything….. Wo politician humre aai baba k friend circle me the to aai ne unhe sab bata diya……pehle to wo bahot hase aur fir aai se kaha ki usko bola aage se aisa nahi hoga……….fir humne letter fek diya?????

    • Needhi Singh on April 27, 2016 12:04 pm

      Meine bhi kuch aisa hi kiya tha par apne papa ko likha tha.Papa army hai ,to unhe bahut kam holidays milti hai.Infact J&K mein jab posting hoti hai ,tab to jaldi baat bhi nhi kar sakte .Mein Papa ko bahut miss karti thi khaskar jab mamma mujh pe chillati thi ,tab mein Papa ke liye letter likhti thi aur mummy ki khoob shikayat karti.Papa ghar aane par saare letter padhte aur mummy ko daatne ki acting karti aur mein had se jyaade khush ho jaati.

    • Joya on April 27, 2016 2:48 pm

      Hey needhi
      Ek baat batate hai hum tumhe…………is duniya me sab se jyada respect hum army walon ka karte hai…..jinki saanse humri saanson ki raksha k liye kurbaan hoti hai ya huyi hai….unko tahe dil se salam….even hum freedom ka sara credit gandhiji ko nahi dete….qki kai logon ne apni jindgi de di bina ek pal soche….un hajaro known unknown sare freedom fighters,krintikarak,aur humre army k tino dalon ko humra sir jhukale praman……………….

  30. Divya shankar on April 26, 2016 11:03 pm

    Hi every one hi joya vini sharadha malar actually sorry for not commenting because only reason is in my mobile no net pack offer I told my mama to recharge he told in Vodafone tomorrow u will get offer in tat shop currency not yet come only then in my mom mobile have offer for 1gb I told to recharge he recharged then at 20th April 2016 at night 11.58 min I have read vini fiction then i commented at last I noticed tat their is no post comment option in tat mobile I feel very bad last time it is their but now it’s not their. .then i took my frnd mobile but it’s hanging..later again I recharge to my mobile then i see its full of comments..their is no place only..so thought to comment in next chapter even i have laptop then computer but I. M very lazy to open..then do u know I reply to ur comment did u saw tat..then i hv written story 3/4 th but I feel bored to complete compare to all my story is nothing….then do u know I. M daily 3 to 4 times I. M checking and reading ur comments..vini fiction is my screen saver.. then next week my village festival. Then dr do u know I girl is their her name is dolly she met with accident tat to she is so small pls Pray for her..then today pune team is playing I just remember you….then did u finish ur exam..hope u done well..lastly hi malar actually I love ur fiction very much tat to gang rape it’s very unique then hatts off to ur humbleNess because ur showing sanskar in different shade even she is victim of gang rape he married so great of him and showing so much love..mainly hatts off to you then dr do u know when I read ur story I just remember my rally do u know admini case how is raped in my college one week we have done strike..then theye do rally ten kilometer all my frnds joined to it when I. M doing rally I feel so much proud..then how to overcome dis type of prb if ur d minister of our state wat wud have done tell me..then dr my name also God name not divya tat to very big and unique name I have….then gn tc sorry for long comment

    • sethooty on April 27, 2016 6:16 am

      Hey divya happy to see u again…we just told about u and needhi yesterday and u came here…do u like kachaa mangoes.. (Kid of mango ??????????). Joya welcomed all to eat mangoes from mango tree ..
      Thanku for liking my story Dr…you couldn’t post comments no pblm dr…even I have less time to reply and read fiction, following many stories but now didn’t get enough time to read all…
      Feel bad after reading the incidents happened in ur college.. But hats off u Dr..and ur college friends that u go for a strike..great .At least u raise ur voice against this ..proud of u Dr..
      I want to ask u the same question what u will do..if u become the minister of the state..I really want to know about this
      Hey army this question is for u all..?

    • sethooty on April 27, 2016 6:40 am

      I think in our country culprit get less punishment for this crime…2 and thing is women’s safety.. We have the equal rite to travel everywhere day and nite…but today’s condition we can’t do that like foreign countries.
      1. Defending… Want to train all the women’s kunfu or kalari payattu.strict training in colleges and schools for women’s .For working women’s and house wife , aged women’s there will be separate traing section.. And tips how u protect themselves …You u know women have lots of power more than a man have bz they r multi talented.. They r mother, wife, sister, daughter, working women, housewife everything… ..that we are devi’s..just think our goddess have lots of power
      2. Increase the punishment so that dare to do this to any girl.
      3) awareness.. Nowadays 6 month girls child also victim of ra*pe..what we do yaar. We can’t believe anyone.so we should do whatever we can.They even don’t know what happening to them.
      Many more things are left…the to go office

    • Shraddha on April 27, 2016 9:00 am

      Hey Divya!!✋✋
      Good to see u back!!! Very sad to hear such a thing abt ur friend…..

      True sethoothy I too agree with all 3 points u mentioned …
      I believe in 1st one more than anything else…..

      Because defence is always better than attack I think like we study science maths n subs in school EE need to be trained in self defence rite from tender age do that aage Jake we can take care of ourselves on our own

    • Joya on April 27, 2016 10:47 am

      Hey divya….

      Welcome back yrrrrr…………i really proud of u…………………i m completely agreee wid sethooty aur shraddha……………

      Humne apne is baat pe aap sab se baat karni hai…..shayad bahot lengthy comment hoga guys…….wapas aake comment karenge hum………….

    • Divya shankar on April 27, 2016 2:24 pm

      We shd proud for tat we r born to be girls..then dr do hv holidays or wat..hope ur enjoying it then wat else where is vini..then u didn’t ask my name…then my miley ask u.. then she told to say take care..then yesterday I order new legena in online….then i hv a doubt if we send any gift letter from bangalore to Mumbai it will go or wat for other country how to send gifts and all….I. m curious to know…pls anyone know means ans me

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