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After the break up ( swasan short story ) Last part

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Swara’s POV

Today is our anniversary… I was still thinking that he will surely come today.. But I brushed my thoughts when I remembered my promise I made… To him and to myself…

I got up from bed and after my bath I sat in front of my mirror… I don’t know why I wore his favorite dress and doing make up… But I felt like to do that… I finished my make up and went to had the breakfast…

Just then the door bell rang and I went to open… But when I saw him , I was just awestruck… I couldn’t feel anything else… “Sanskar”- my voice was barely audible to him… I thought it was my imagination so I pretended to be normal… Not even a bit of surprise was on my face….But when Ragini came and started scolding him, I came to senses and ran into my room…

Sanskar’s POV

It’s finally the moment…. I have to tell her all that I feel, all the way she took me wrong and I pretended to be okay just so I could give her a surprise…..

I can see her now. She never seemed so beautiful, so elegant, the best someone can imagine an angel…. I thought she dressed so well just to make me feel guilty for what u did to her…. But I was wrong… She was dressed for me, Ragini told me…

I didn’t tell her that I was coming that day but as if she knew, she was not surprised… She ran into her room… May be she hates me now so she doesn’t want to see my face… My heart was aching but I knew it was less than the pain she suffered…

Ragini welcomed me and then asked me to go to her room… I followed her order…..

Ragini’s POV

I asked Sanskar to go to Swara’s room… He followed my order and I followed him..
I was outside her room and Let Sanky to go inside…

We both saw her crying out of hell… She was pressing herself on the pillow and held the teddy… Sanskar just slowly opened the door and didn’t lock it as I told him to do so…

When Swara heard the sound of door opening, she slightly lifted her head and without looking towards Sanskar she started telling her broken voice to leave him…

We were surprised that how she knew it was Sanskar but to my utter surprise Sanskar hugged her tightly without letting her talk….

” Shh… Stop Swara, I know I did a mistake but plz forgive me…It is a special day plz don’t ruin it by crying… ” Sanskar told while running his hands on her hair…

Just then Swara jerked him and told, “Who are you Mr, I don’t know u… Plz go from here…”

Sanskar : “I m sorry princess, It was just a idea for your surprise… But I didn’t know it would give u so pain.. I m sorry… Plz plz forgive me…”

Swara : “Where is your Mrinal?? You brought her to introduce her to me na, so where is she??”

Sanskar: “R you mad princess??? It was just a prank to irritate you dear.. Plz understand me…”

Swara: ” I know Sanskar what do you mean…plz don’t break me more… I don’t need u… Now go…”

Sanskar : ” Ok Swara, I am going… But the truth is I loved u , I love u and I will love u till my last breath…Hope u ll understand me before it is too late… I am sorry… I couldn’t be a good life partner either… I m…”

He couldn’t finish the line and ran towards the door with a broken voice and tearful eyes…

Before he reached at the door, a voice stopped him…

“Hey Mr., wait… U gave me a lot of pain and u should bear punishment… So how can you go without taking ur punishment?? ” Swara said with a smirk on her face…

Sanskar looked back and lowed his head to avoid the tears…

“So Mr Maheswari, your punishment is u have to make me Mrs Swara Sanskar Maheswari in order to bear me for life time… By the way I am not asking I am telling u…so u have to get punished…”
This time she had tears in her eyes…

Sanskar couldn’t understand at first but after some seconds, he ran towards her and hugged her tightly as there is no tomorrow…

She hold him tight and whispered “Dobara aisa kiya to muje kavi wapas nehi paoge, maine socha ki maine tumhe kho diya”…..

I wished her a happy anniversary which by the way my own stupid plan ruined…. She too was happy now…. It was past 20 mins they were together near the living room and suddenly I went to them to broke their hug…

” Ahem, Ahem, when will u leave each other?? Actually u forgot Sanskar that u had to give you another surprise… ” I told them giggling…

They broke their hug listened to me and totally embraced… I pulled their legs and they both ran behind me to beat me…

I was so happy to see my bubbly friend back in her avatar again…

“I need a treat bro… I helped u so much na…” I told Sanskar to divert him from beating me…

“What!! U knew everything…” Swara was surprised…

“Yes, it was our plan…but u ruined the plan… We planed to take u for a romantic dinner with bro but u agreed so easily… It’s ok… At least money is saved…” I told her with a naughty smile while Sanskar chuckled…

“You two!!!”- Swara was again running behind us…

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I m sorry for late update guys… By the way plz comment… Luv u a load..?????

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5 Comments

  1. shan on May 4, 2016 11:43 pm

    awesome dude

  2. Sree on May 5, 2016 9:31 am

    sweet and very nice story

  3. Prateeksha on May 5, 2016 10:09 am

    Very nice…

  4. Dharsha on May 5, 2016 11:52 am

    Perfect……love u loads?

  5. niti on May 5, 2016 7:00 pm

    I thought sanskar would give her a great surprise 🙁

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