Aur ho…… Meri bebasi ka bayaan (Prologue)

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Hello all. This is the new story of mine. i am trying something like this for the first time. Hope you guys like this too. So here it is….


Vivaan finished the drinks in one go and stood up to leave. As he was heading to the exit he saw a girl standing far away from the dance floor and the bar. He got surprised seeing a girl trying to be away from the famous party and the famous boys.

He went to her direction checking her back. She is wearing blue tight jeans and top. She has waist length which is let down in waves adding more to the beauty.

‘She has a s*xy back’ He thought as he neared her and stopped just behind her.

“Hey babe.” He said to her. The girl got surprised hearing a male voice and turned around.

He got stunned for a moment when she turned her face to me.

‘Gosh! So beautiful!!’ He thought and just stared at her face.

She got surprised by seeing him so close to her and got nervous. He smirked at her and thought ‘girls always have that effect whenever I am near them.’

She looked at his face for a second saying “hi” and started to look left to right and she lifted her hand nervously to put the hair aside which was falling on her face. But he was quick and put her hair behind her ear looking into her eyes she too looked back at him.

They both stared at each other his hand still on her ear lobe. Suddenly the girl felt conscious and looked down at her feet.

Vivaan took his hand back and looked at her for a moment not knowing what to say.

“Don’t like the party?” He asked her with a questioning look.

She looked up at him in surprise to his question and said, “ah…mm…..a.a….mm….” hesitating to answer still feeling nervous.

He just stared at her lips all the while.

‘Luscious lips! I so want to kiss them.’ He thought to himself.

“Sort of?!” she replied seeing him staring at her for answer.

After hearing her answer he came out of his thoughts and said, “Relax, I don’t kill you for not liking this party just because it is my cousin’s.” noticing her nervousness and trying to relax her.

She just smiled a bit not knowing how to tell him that it’s his close proximity that is making her nervous.

“I need to go.” She said and tried to go away from his but he was in her way and she can’t turn back as there is pillar While, he was just staring at her features.

“Will you please excuse me?” She asked looking at him as he wasn’t giving her way to go.

“Not so soon, sweety.” He said surprising her and took her in his arms by waist. She stared and him with open mouth. Before she can say anything, her lips were closed by his lips kissing them.

She tried to get out of his arms but unknown to her, the wriggling made her body rub his and he was turned on by it. He kissed her more passionately and started to bite her lips. She now started to punch him on the chest with her little fists which was unaffected to him.

She got out of breathe and her head started to spin but he wasn’t stopping. While she leaned on to him unknowingly cause of the dizziness he lifted her up in the ground and tried to wrap her legs on his waist. But she didn’t.

When he got out of breathe he left her lips and she just put her head on his shoulder leaning more on to him as she is still up from the ground in his arms.

After few minutes he put her down on the ground and she got back to the reality. She looked him staring at her. The anger rose up in her and she slapped him!!


So how is it?? Good or bad? Are you guys interested to read? Should i continue or not? Please tell me your views in comments. Please comment long. 🙂

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  1. Fenil

    Fabulous !! Is it romantic story with emotional essence ?
    Boy is flirty and Girl is introvert.
    Can’t wait for next.

    1. Veera

      Thanks for commenting. I am glad that you liked it. Yes it is a romantic story but it has more emotions like jealousy angst and all. You will know about the characters once the story starts.

      1. Fenil

        yup !!

  2. Niyati

    Wow di… is awesome ….Loved it…Want to read more…Update soon…Love u ? ?

    1. Veera

      Thanks a lot dear. I will update after getting more readers. Love u too?

  3. AMkideewani

    I liked the tension between them. Their loves story is gonna be hot

    1. Veera

      Thanks for commenting. Yeah i am trying to write it that way. Hope it works out well.

      1. AMkideewani

        Will be waiting for this story??

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