A Burnt Rose – IMMJ2 : Chapter 3 – Persuading! (Saam)

CHAPTER 3- Persuading! (Saam)

(Here you go with the replies of last chapter ➡ https://www.tellyupdates.com/a-burnt-rose-immj2-chapter-2-unfolding/ )

“I’m Abheeti Jaiswal, AJ”

She introduced herself to him by proposing a shaking hand, While Vansh was still agitated. He can’t digest the fact that AJ is before him. He thought AJ to be any out of sight rival of him. But he never thought it should be someone whom he never met. What made him agitated was the fact that AJ is a WOMEN!! How could he fail to figure out that?

“Mr Raisinghania, do you have Haphephobia?”

She raised being perplexed by his no-reaction. Out of blue Vansh replied

“No…No Ms AJ”

He grabbed her forearm. They formed a power shake hand, Vansh welcomed her.

“Have your seat, Ms…..”

“Abheeti ya AJ sounds cool, Ms. and Mrs are little weird.”

AJ cuts-off him. To which Vansh just shook his head. They took their respective seats, then Abheeti put forwarded.

“So let’s talk business VR.”

It was 2 hours since both were having their discussions. AJ wants Vansh to sign the deal, for that she is ready to travel miles. But on the other hand, Vansh is still adamant.

“Boss!”

Angre intervened their talk. Vansh

Angre left from there while both Vansh and Abheeti continued.

“I’m not at all surprised by your reaction, very well know that Vansh Raisinghania won’t accept anything easily,”

“Your deal is intriguing, but why VR industries? ZIVENTA group can build their self, then what’s the need of a partner.?”

With an evil smirk, Vash queried. Within a spur, Abheeti replied with her full attitude and confidence.

“From past three months VR Industries’ gross value is drowning, This deal is vital for VR Industries, ZIVENTA can rise without joining hands with VR Industries, But if VR signs the deal; then ZIVENTA and VR together will be a Strongest global brand. Now it’s up to you Mr Raisinghania.”

Vansh is lost his thoughts. He wasn’t able to make up his mind. He very well knows that The proposal by Abheeti only results in the heightening of his business, but still he is adamant as he doesn’t want to join hands with some random stranger. AJ is still an unsolved puzzle for him.

Breaking his thoughts, Vansh heard the rhythm of a finger-snapping by Abheeti.

” I will be here for a week, so take your time. Future of VR Industries is in your hand If its destruction or success you are only responsible!”

More than an offer, it sounds threat to Vansh. Vansh took his intercome on the cabin corner and dialled.

“Angre !!”

As soon Vansh disconnected his call Angre entered to Vansh’s cabin. Abheeti was about to leave when her Phone started a beep indicating a call. She swiped on her screen to answer the call.

“What the hell!! ” Hot under the collar she squawked.

“How could you be too careless in your job? Now, where shall I…… No! I don’t wanna hear a word from you. Do whatever you can within 3 hours arrange me a place for accommodation with the same luxury. And remember to pay the bill from your salary.”

She disconnected the call and started walking to the door. She started counting within her mind

” 5,4,3,2,1″

“Excuse me AJ”

Vansh stopped her and continued.

“If you don’t mind, then you can stay in the VR mansion until your accommodation gets ready. “

Vansh said it with a smirk, while Angre was showing his denial in his face.

“Not needed, I’ll manage my self. And you’re just inviting in the sake of Mehmaan nawaazi I appreciate that But I can’t stay with strangers.”

she replied to his offer with a hidden smirk.

“I have to provide accommodation for you, it’s my duty. And I make sure that by the time you’re staying in VR Mansion we could have a healthy discussion about your proposal. It’s all about a business only.”

Vansh put forwarded. While Abheeti thought

“This is what I needed Mr Vansh Raisinghania. Get ready for your destruction. By staying near you only I could witness your wrecking ship.”

Abheeti just gave a “Hmm” as an acceptance.

___________

A car was heading towards its destination for so long, once it reached. Abheeti Got out from the car and removed her sunglasses. She stared at VR Mansion.

“VR Mansion or Semi-haunted mansion, what should I call this den?” 

She thought. A servant came and took her baggage. Vansh was waiting before the entrance, he welcomed her.

” won’t you introduce your family?” Out of curiosity, she queried.

“Of course” He replied and forward his hand showing the way.

Vansh took Abheeti to the Living room where whole Raisinghania’s were present. Abheeti’s gazes shifts from one to another.

ABHEETI’S POV:

” Dadi, the elder and matured member of Raisinghania family, but when it comes to her Vansh, she’ll forget all her life experience and become like a 1-year-old child.

Chacha and Chachi, how much they try to hide their greediness are always visible in their face.

Ishani, pretty sister of Vansh, Whose only companion is ego.,

Angre, True-blue to Vansh and Family.

Aryan, ‘khudki koyi sikka bhi nahi hain aur doosron ki kaamai barbaad karne mein lagi hain’ A life of Riley!”

“Who is she?”

Abheeti asked looking at Sia.

“She is Sia Raisinghania, my Lil sister our apple of the eye,” Vansh replied

“Why I was unaware about this girl?” she thought.

Hello, I’m Mrs Ahaana Vansh Raisinghania”

Ahaana Introduced herself, While everyone present there except Abheeti furrowed at her action.

“You both doesn’t seem to be.”

Out of blue Abheeti said. Ahaana furrowed at her.

” I meant you both seemed to be soulmates, a perfect pair”

Ahaana had a grin from ear-to-ear, while Vansh excused himself and left from there. Abheeti smirked looking at vansh walking away.

______

“Something is there in AJ, “

“But bhai, why you invited AJ to stay here? she might turn out to be a menace”

“Keep our rivals close to heart, I made AJ stay here only because we can have an eye on her every time. Angre, I wanted to get full details of Abheeti ASAP!”

“OK bhai”

” I wanted to know whether Fish is on trap or Fish is laying trap!”

Precap:

Vansh: What!, How does she got released?

Angre : Ahana is responsible.

Author’s note:

Yo! Buddies, I was upto post it on Friday, but TRP of IMMJ2 took back.

Its my Humble request to all Please do watch it on TV at sharp 7pm on colors.

And don’t even change the channel during ADs.

Also please Search about Immj2 in Google browser, YouTube, Voot, MX Player and wherever you can

So that Its ORMAX value increases. (I’m not sure about it, someone told me).

____

Guys be free to bash me whenever I do any mistakes just like our MAKERS. 😜😜

Don’t be in a illusion about Abheeti being Ridhima. Abheeti is Abheeti only.

AJ or Abheeti ? which one is more confy?

Please do share about your opinions and views about my FF. Whether positive or negative I’ll always welcomes.🤗🤗

You Guys won’t spare me if i delays the next update. So I’m finding an excuse for delaying😜😜. From today onwards I’ll be posting chapters  according to comments. 

0-10 – 1 week 

10-20 – 6 days

20-30 – 5 days

30-40 – 4 days

40 and more  – 3 days

And Ayshu, Are you here or not? Warna  Pakisthan Embassy mein missing complaint file karoogi!

57 Comments
  1. In your conditions, it is not written that a person cannot comment twice. So I am going to use all my ids for commenting today😉

    1. Immj2 Admirer

      Amazing episode!!!!!

    2. @TSA
      🤣😝👍🏻🤣😝👍🏻🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
      Kya baat hai!!!!

    3. Denza

      Chup pagli 🤨🤨

  2. FirstRaysOfSun

    Outstanding episode!!!!!!!

    1. FirstRaysOfSun

      Don’t know how my logo got changed 😅😅🤔🤔🤔

    2. Itni baar change hova hai aluuu…😂
      Tm kab post kro gi apni FF

    3. Kal kar dungi 😅😅

    4. Denza

      Tu la jawaab hoon 😏😏

  3. FirstRaysOfSun

    Outstanding episode!!!!

    1. Riansh Lover

      So many times😂

    2. Riansh Lover

      Super amazing den💖…awesome..
      I wanted to know whether Fish is on trap or Fish is laying trap!”
      Amazing dhi💓…
      Update fast please🤗😁❤

    3. Denza

      Ta, My cute @Riansh Lover🥰🥰
      Keep reading keep loving
      and do share your views and opinions about the FF.
      Love youuuu

  4. Amazing episode🥰… Waiting for the next one😊….

    1. Denza

      Hey ShivuuI’ll try to update next chapter by tomorrow. Now its gonna end within 4 chapter.
      Keep loving 🥰🥰

  5. Finally!!!!!
    I founded you….It has been so so so long yr….😔
    I just ended reading your previous chapters…and must say they are just awwweeeseoomee….❤️(your English is so damn good…half words to mjhe samjh hi nahi aye…😂😂….but I understand the episodes)
    VR mansion or haunted house…🤣🤣…ur humour always find its way….
    You write so well…one Little request plz don’t mind it…plz try to avoid using that green colour….as I read it with great difficulty….hope you will consider my request…
    Pagli its “Khudka koi sika bhi nhi” not khudki…ur hindi is week…(but koi nhi set ho jaye gi…😁)…
    While reading last chapter things were going in my mind like:
    1-After falling from cliff maybe ridhima got saved by someone and she undergo some surgery and her face changes and now she is hell bent to take revenge…so she is AJ with new face and identity…🤔🤔
    2-Ridhima is saved by someone and that girl turned out to be AJ…she is her long lost sister who was in search of her…now ridhima is in comma and she wants to take revenge for her sister…😌
    (My these guesses sound good na…😏)
    Ahana… I don’t like her at all..😒
    Well AJ has given the right description of everyone specially dadi…when it’s something related to Vansh she becomes 1 year old….(well honestly telling after that Ahana track and dadi denying to recognise ridhima… I don’t like dadi.. actually I don’t like single person in VR mansion as somehow they all are evil.. except Sia i still like her….😔😔)
    Pagliii….ur demands are getting high🤨…ab 40+ comments tm ko chahye then u will provide us the next episode after 3 days…u should have written if 40+ comment mile u will provide the next episode within a day…😂
    Now I wanna tell you that i misseddd youuuu sooooo sooos sooo muchhhh….!!!.
    U know I have a problem of over thinking….so i was thinking that I don’t matter to you anymore…like you just have a little amount of affection or attraction for me in the start nothing else then that…so now that got over and u forget me…(i know i m sounding weird but what to say i can’t keep up that thing anymore inside me)….
    But I really missed you…2,3 times i was just on the verge of crying as i was missing you…
    But now TSA has told me that you are sooo busy in ur life…
    Kindly prvide me ur schedule that when ur paper are starting and when will they end and about other activities…so that i don’t make u feel tense or don’t bother you….
    At the end IHU so much!!!❤️

    1. Denza

      Ayshuuuu😍😍😍😍
      Im sorry yaari for these much delay.
      Uss din Green colour ki first and last day thi mera FF mein.
      My full credits of my english skills goes to Allah miya and Google bhaabha 😂😂😂😂
      Mein Aryan ki tarah hoon, khudki koyi skills nahi hain, bas google baaba ki knowledge se jee raha hoon 😅😅
      And about the semi-haunted mansion, I wasn’t at all getting some weird name for VR Mansion. so I just googled it. Then I comes to know that there is a Haunted Mansion in Los Angeles(virtual) S o I just passed its Screen shot on Hangouts. So our Alu became a FARISHTA😇😇 for me and commented Semi-haunted mansion.
      Vaise you know naa, I’m not a native in hindi. My mother tongue is Malayalam which doesn’t at all have any resemblance with hindi. And I broke all my ties with hindi 5-6 years ago. So HINDI grammar se panga lena padegaa…🙃🙃
      Your guessings about AJ is HALF-RIGHT just like half bro. Lets see in coming updates.😉😉
      And About the family, even I don’t like dadi after that incident.
      Poora Raisinghania family ko bina tadpaake mein yeh FF nahi chodoonga 😂😂😂😂
      .
      Ayshu comments aren’t my demands…..its my excuse for being dealay to post the FF🤣🤣🤣🤣😅😅😅😅

  6. One more thing is it you in the cover pic…in this one and in the he last one as well!!!
    If yes how cruel you are….u r burning these beautiful roses pagliii…😂😂😂

    1. Denza

      No….Noo….Ayshu, woh mein nahi hoon
      Woh Google Uncle ne diya hain
      Waise mein itna cruel nahi hoon joh flowers ko burn karti hain 😂😂😂😂

  7. Amazing episode!!!!
    Do AJ is Abheeti
    I think she is related to ridhima somehow
    Plz post next one soon!!!

    1. Denza

      Yshu,
      You know naa AJ and Abheeti are same.
      May be she have some connection with Ridhima’s murder
      Lets see 😉😉

  8. Amazing episode

    1. Denza

      Ta, Jen 🥰🥰
      Keep loving

  9. Thakur Priyanka

    Amazing story

    1. Denza

      Ta, Priyu🥰🥰
      Keep loving

  10. Outstanding episode but who cares is AJ ? Is she is riddhima or someone else? Please post next partas soon as possible.

    1. Denza

      Ta, dear🥰🥰
      AJ isn’t Ridhima.
      And I had submitted next part, soon you’re gonna read it.

  11. amazing episode.

    1. Denza

      Hey Nehal,😍😍
      You’re the same Nehal na in whose comment I commented
      When Nehal meets Neha1?? Tell me dude.

  12. Hi Den,

    I was intrigued by your FF title and decided to read it. The word”burnt rose” to me seems to reflect the anguish and pain suffered by Riddhima as a result of Vansh and his family, which was somewhat missing from the original track on TV where Riddhima, most of the time is portrayed as a week character. (Hopefully my thoughts on your FF title is accurate). Thanks for the superb episode.

    1. Denza

      Ta, Jay dear🥰🥰
      Its for the first time someone understood exact meaning behind the Title.🥺🥺
      (May be they understood buy won’t commented here)
      And much pleased to see your immense support.😍😍
      Keep loving….

  13. Denzu….😁😁🤭…..it was amazing yaar..😍…..
    Waise idhar kanjoosi nahi karungi….😂🤭…
    AJ ka intentions accche nahi hai.. aur rahi baat ghar toh usne jaan bhooj ke kiya hai…..smart girl!!…
    Family members ki introduction ki koi zarurat nahi thi par phir bhi ….. AJ ko chahiye tha… Khair Vansh was asusual….😂😂😂….
    Keep going on aur plzz yaar ye comments ke hisaab se episode post matt karna..😂😂😂…

    1. Denza

      Nimo, Lets see what’s hidden behind AJ.
      Is her intentions are wrong or People around her are wrong?
      Stay tuneed……
      (Yeh kanjoosi reply mera badla hain😜😜)

    1. Denza

      Ta dear 🥰🥰

  14. Fantabulous 🤩🤩

    1. Denza

      Fantastic + Fabulous = Fantabulous
      Im I right or I’m I right 🤭🤭
      Ta dear🥰🥰

  15. Kya likha hai Den!!
    Maza aa gaya….
    Aur joh task ki baat hai fikar not bhot jald hi complete kar denge 😁😉

    1. Denza

      Tum bhi naa,
      Vaise meine apni promise aaj poora karoonga
      what about your??

  16. Wow amazing 😍😍❤️😍❤️
    It’s really super 👌😍.
    Thanks for updates 😊😍❤️. Keep rocking dear you and your updates 😊😍❤️. iam waiting for your next updates 😊😍❤️.

    1. Denza

      Ta, sree🥰🥰
      Keep loving

  17. Priyadharshini

    So nice updates 😊
    Thanks for updates 😊.

    1. Denza

      Ta Priyu,🥰🥰
      For this over whelming support

  18. It’s really super and awesome 💖😊
    Waiting for next one 💖💕.

    1. Denza

      Tum nahi maanogi!!
      How many times I was asking about something
      And you hadn’t at all replied……

  19. Wow fabulous 😍❤️😍❤️😍
    Thanks for updates 👍
    Keep rocking🔥🔥🔥.

    1. Denza

      Ta dear🥰🥰
      You always makes me energetic…

  20. Kya khoob likhti ho tum!!
    Whoever is AJ hope she destroys everyone in VR mansion..
    And AJ sounds cool than Abheeti
    AJ is maybe long lost sister of Riddhima as Ayesha di said..
    Or she came for her revenge from those liesinghanias!

    1. Denza

      Its visible from story that AJ is on Revenge mode.
      Well I’ll make sure that every Liesinghania suffers

  21. I am loving your story a lot.

    1. Denza

      Alu🙄🙄

  22. Its Fantastic 😍😍

    1. Denza

      Ta Dear🥰🥰

  23. Oh AJ is AJ only but we want Ridhima back to give life to him as he is lifeless. I thought you could make Vansh say she is not my Mrs and my one and only Mrs is Ridhima. I would have loved it and both Vansh and AJ share same attitude and all trap is almost same and thoughts are also very similar. Nice update

    1. Denza

      Stay triggered for the mouse and cat chase of VR and AJ 😉😉

  24. Amazing dear!!
    Excited for the upcoming events

    1. Denza

      Ta, Diha🥰🥰
      Stay triggered

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