i will always love u…(part 26) udaan

Thanks a lot guys for ur love..hope u will enjoy this one too………sorry if it bores ul…….
Enjoy reading…

Chakor: suraj….
Arjun: chakor..its ok no need of explaining him…….
Suraj gets more angry…
Suraj: yup he is right……no need of explaining……….i hope ul stay happy in ur life……..
He goes from there….chakor follows him……but gets hurt in her leg……..suraj goes in the room…..
Vimli and tina were waiting for him….

Suraj comes…..
Vivan: dude what happened……
Imli: yup where is di…
Suraj: I lost her……
Vivan: what????
Suraj: imli was right instead of realizing her love for me she started loving arjun…….
Vivan: how can u say these….
Suraj: arjun proposed her and she said yes…………
Imli: what how can di say him yes…..i have to talk to her……
Suraj: imli wait……..u wont say her anything……
Imli: but…….
Suraj: I lov her and want to see her always happy and for that reason even if I have to see her with arjun I can do that….
Vimli and tina were crying……….
They were thinking how can a person loves another person so much…….
Vivan hugs him…….
Suraj: it ok I m fine………..unless and until that arjun takes care of my chatterbox……

Chakor on the other side…….
Chakor: how can I do this I lost him forever……….how can I accept arjun’s proposal…….how can I hug him…….now what about suraj…….
Arjun: nothing…….as he loves tina……..
Chakor was shocked to see arjun behind her……
Chakor: u…
Arjun: yup me…listen I heard what u told……….u r yet confused that why u accepted my proposal……but chakor suraj loves tina……..he doesn’t even care for u….
Chakor: no he does…..
And she goes..
Arjun: oh no what to do now…….
He thinks something and smiles…….
Arjun: I guess this one will work……

On the other side….
Suraj is continuously crying harder and harder….he is cursing himself thinking about all that happened…
Suraj: I wish I could tell u that I love u so so much….u r my life chatterbox….but today u aren’t with me…….why god why for the first ever time I loved a girl so much and u………u took her away from me……
A person: why r u cursing god…..
Suraj gets shocked to see a person…….its himself…..i mean his internal soul…
Suraj: who r u??????
His soul: I look like u so definitely I will be ur internal soul…….
Suraj: why r u here….
His soul: u were cursing god…….so I came to tell u that it isn’t god’s fault….did u ever took any relationship seriously..no na just think about those on how would they have felt when u left them…..
Suraj: its true..but this time I really love her….
His soul: that’s why she doesn’t love u…..
And he disappears….
Suraj: oh god its all because of me……
And he hits the wall again……
When he turns towards the wall..he is shocked…..

On the other side…..
Arjun: hi tina….
Tina: why r u here..
Arjun: I came to meet u yaar……..anyways how is suraj….
Tina: he is alive but after what u did with him he will be dead…….
Arjun: what yaar I was making a way for u only……
Tina: for me…..how..
Arjun: see…….chakor is with me so suraj will forget her and will move on with u…..
Tina: r u mad……
Arjun: don’t u love him…..
Tina: no I don’t….
Arjun: oh please u can lie me not urself……….anyways u know he is a dam coward…
Tina: u don’t have any right to say him such things…..
Arjun: why do u care…..
Tina: cause I love him………
Arjun: that’s what I wanted to hear……..
Tina realizes what she says……
Arjun: tina listen I m saying u na he will be urs forever……..
Tina: but he loves chakor…….
Arjun: that’s what I m saying na……we have to separate them as u love suraj and I love chakor…..
Tina: it would be selfishness….
Arjun: it wont be………u just tell me that u love him or not……..
Tina: I do
Arjun: so help me…..
Tina: no I cant…..
And she goes…….

So that was it….guys I m not well……I m in hospital and so couldn’t write anything yesterday……..and I guess I will be here for a week……..so I will be posting shorter ff as I cant use my cell for a long time………hope ul will understand and sorry too…….thanks for reading……….do tell me how it was……………….

50 comments

  1. ShriyaT

    |Registered Member

    Hi komal bad to hear that u r not well…hope u get well soon and dont worry about ur ff…its fantastic and dont take stress of writing it…everyone can understand☺☺

  2. Sia

    Dear ur ff was fab no matter it is short or long but ur ff makes me smile n happy…. Feeling bad to know u r not well but get well soon sis…

  3. dil dhanushi

    Its amazing as always. Yesterdy whn it ws nt posted i thought smthng must hv hpnd. Get well soon. It doesnt matter whthr its short or long cz it always mk my day
    I hp u unite sukor soon as i love thm as a pair

  4. Liya

    |Registered Member

    The epi was awesome dear..hope chakor realize the true face of arjun soon! I like the internal soul part very much! Get well soon dear 😘 take care of yourself!

  5. urooj

    Ur ff is awesome
    Hope u get well soon ….
    N the person who said bad about u may that person also get well soon ….
    Plz dont stop writer …may b u dont know bt u r very good writer ….i think u should write ur own book too ….
    Keep writing ….dont care about others …people talks bcoz its their habbit ….just live ur life….
    Thanks for writing such a beautiful ff

    Love sukorr

  6. urooj

    Ur ff is awesome
    Hope u get well soon ….
    N the person who said bad about u may that person also get well soon he or she is vvvv much ill even he or she doesnt knowc….
    Plz dont stop writing…may b u dont know bt u r very good writer ….i think u should write ur own book too ….
    Keep writing ….dont care about others …people talks bcoz its their habbit ….just live ur life….
    Thanks for writing such a beautiful ff .

    Love sukorr

  7. Tarn 💜

    I hope you feel better soon. Don’t worry we all understand that your health comes first. As for today’s episode I’m glad Tina actually has a conscious,and her first instinct was not to support Arjun and split up Sukor. It shows that she is not selfish like Arjun. Well atleast for now. Anyways I hope Sukor will unite soon.

  8. vinlora

    Lovely update. …but can’t see sukor separatedont plz don’t make tina negative. ..Tina should unite sukor. ..Get well soon dear…stay blessed. ..takecare 😊🌹🌹🌹

  9. Deepa

    Hai
    I am a fan of your stories. everyday I am eagerly waiting for your story. I appreciate your writing skill.God bless you and I pray for you that you get a speedy recovery. take care
    I have a request : need some romance between Sukor in post love confession scenes.

  10. shabdi

    Today’s epi was super…you gave a big twist in the story & i luv it. Continue writing & i will pray for health. Take care. God bless you….get well soon

  11. Lalli

    Awesome episode dear I love the wat how chakor realizing her love ❤ for Suraj and please dude unite them soon clear the misunderstanding between them update next asap soon

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