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UNDENIABLE DESIRE – Part-16

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“Where is my Chiraiyya?”- A black man with white beard shouted on the top of his voice,”Omkara Singh Oberoi..I promised you to vacant the land and you stole my chiraiyya”.
All the members looked at the surprised face of one another…
“Ek minute”- Shivaay came forward to protect his long haired brother,”Why will Om steal your bird from Bareilly?”
“Oye Black Thakur..”- Rudra put logic,”O is Shivaay Singh Oberoi’s brother.. he can buy many birds if he wants to..Parrot,pigeon,peacock,dove,crow,sparrow,cuckoo…he can tell his brothers..”.
“O is a complete vegetarian..”- Shakti also joined the fun,”he can never stole your Hen from Bareilly”.
“Stop making fun of me”- Kali Prasad Thakur roared,”That chiraiyya means my lady love who Om stole from Bareilly”.
Hurraiy!!!!!!…..
“Bhaiyya..”- Rudra chirped,”chiraiyya means girl friend…which bird name would you love to give Annika bhabhi?”
“Er…”-Shivaay remembered meeting Annika first time with a yellow dress,”Black hooded oriole.. but I named her sun flower then..”.
“Where is Omkara ?”- Tej discovered that his son is missing from the particular discussion,”who is this lady
love of Kaali Thakur?”
Chulbul dropped the plate he was carrying. Annika looked at him.
“Gouri Kumari Sharma”-Kali took the name with almost in a trance,”She is my chiraiyya..we were marrying in Bareilly and your saint son eloped with her at the last minute”.
“Dekh puttar O didn’t brought any girl here..”-Kalyanijj replied politely,”You can search in our home”.
“My son is not a cheap to steal any Chirraiya from Bareilly”- Jhanvi took the easy way,”may be he saved that Gouri from you”.
“Who the hell are you to teach me right and wrong”-Kali almost ran on to attack Jhanvi,”truth is he married my fiance in front of all people in Bareilly.. all saw it except me”.
“Shut up..”- Tej came in between Kali and Jhanvi,”She is my wife.. Jhanvi Tej Singh Oberoi.. mind your behaviour”.
“I will take revenge on your family for this”-Kali left Oberoi Mansion.
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“Chulbul..”- Annika hold his hand almost to the green jealous face of Shivaay,”I have to exchange certain words with you”.
“Jhanvi aunty..Pinky aunty”-She asked the other motherly figure to the nearest room down stair.
“What is Annika bhabhi planning to do with Chulbul bhaiyya”- Rudra increased the curiosity of an eager green Shivaay,”This Chulbul is too much..”.
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“Oh my maatha!!”-Pinky cupped her own mouth with both hands,”he is she..I mean she was he!!”
“Annika .. this is a girl”-Jhanvi find her voice back.
“Kali was saying truth may be”-Annika said,”I get many missing pieces and put them together to get this Chirraiya out of her chirota look”.
“That Om eloped with a girl from Bareilly is true”-Dadi find out too as Shivaay send her to check what the ladies are doing behind a closed door,”hey bhagwan I lied to that man”.
“One day I find her with out the twig on her head”- Annika feed them with further information,”She told that her husband left her soon after marriage.. a name related to Shankarji is her husband..and she has been taking care of our Om..that her marriage happened with our any willingness..that it was just for her protection”.
“Now only I found the correct thing as she dropped the stack of plates being afraid of Kaali”- All ladies stared at the smart choice of their son Shivaay and her maturity,”She is married to our Omkara”.
“I didn’t know then that this is Omkaraji’s house”-Gouri shake her head,”that Sultana madamji gave me money to stalk her fiance and I then realised her truth and instead helped him”.
“We know that”-Pinky and Annika answered,”Shivaay praised you one day.. about your special care to Om”.
“If only I knew from the beginning the reason Omkaraji and his anger”-Gouri sighed,”I asked him in Bareilly but find the reason after working here”.
“He is so nice.. situations and his love for me turned him like this”- Jhanvi cried.
“I know that now”- Gouri stood ,”I will leave from here now . I don’t want to risk all your peaceful life just because of me”.
“Oye Harry potter”- Dadi hold his hand ,”you are our now.. people comes in here on their own.. but are not allowed to leave on their own from Oberoi mansion”.
“My dream..”- Jhanvi hugged Gouri,”I am so happy today”.
“Lets go and share this news with every one”- Pinky proposed,”Now remove this nakli hair and this round round chasma”.
“No..”- Gouri hesitate to disclose her identity in front of all,”How can I ..??”.
” This is a zoo..”Dadi used the precious name Annika gave to their home,”you are another endangered species here”.
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“Oh my maatha”-Shakti sat with a thud,”Kali said truth”.
“why not a game reality show”- Tej proposed,”with Omkara Singh Oberoi. Go and change in to your previous chulbul avtaar”.
“Where did this boy went suddenly?”- Jhanvi smiled,”to art gallery or in search of his wife”.
“Hello..”-Rudra called suddenly “Thank you my love angel for giving hope to me.. for consoling me when I was complaining “.
“Another namuna …”- Dad pat his back,”he is crazy for a radio jockey from last month”.
“Yeah we know”- Shivaay smiled,”he went in search of her to invite on my marriage”.
” You are always welcome Amar Prem”-came a sweet voice from other side,”I am happy that you heard my advice and wait with patience”.
“I went to meet you but they make a fool of me”-Rudra came to cry baby mode,”you have to come for my brother’s marriage”.
“send the address “-Love angel gave her Radio station whatapps number,”I will come for few minutes only for your brother and you”…
“You are the best yaar”- Rudra thanked,”I am coming to meet you now at your studio”.
Rudra ran out side. He got a chance to meet his lovely love angel. He is not a fool to miss the chance.
“Khotiyya””- Dadi smiled from his back as others looked at his childish behaviour,”left his protein shake here”.
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“Annika”- Shivaay patted the empty place beside him indicating her to sit on the pool side,” The revelation is a reason my head is spinning now”.
“Shivaay”- Annika ran to get a balm,”I will message it”.
“They said like this in movies when this type of scene happens “- Rudra again interrupted with Saahil,” I again missed Love angel today at the nick of time”.
“I want to meet Love angel now”- Rudra hugged Annika bhabhi,”here in the pool”.
“She is love Angel… a jockey..”- Shivaay
searched way to send them away,”Not a fish that we will find here in pool water”.
“where is Soumya?”- Shivaay asked Saahil.
“Oh yes”-a bulb glow in the intelligent brain of Rudy,”I have to thank Sumo”.
“You too go and take rest Annika”- He ordered,”the evening will be hectic with the haldi function”.
“Wait..”- Explain me importance of this function and the turmeric paste”.
“The Haldi makes both the groom and bride share a same colour.. of each other”- Annika reasoned,”protects them from infection during marriage”.
“I guess you are a fan of both Ethen Mathew Hunt and James Bond”- Shivaay praised,”a smart one”.
Good night Billuji”- Annika wished.
“Annika”- He show the glowing sun,”I am distracting you to an extent that you are forgetting the count of time”…”this is afternoon only..not night”.

49 Comments
  1. Astha baby youvrocked tge way rudy was making fun of KT it was funny post next part ASAP.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Darling
      Chiraiyya.. Om Is vegetarian ha ha..ha ha..

  2. VHM

    i haven’t yet seen the original episode of IB yet but i first went ahead and read your episode…amazingly infectious…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Haarika..
      but see the IB episode.. blushing Shivaay Singh Oberoi is not a face to miss….it is a rare sight …

  3. Surbhi Sharma

    Astha di , 😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍 …..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Surbhi sister,….. powerful blank comment for me..
      Now I can imagine what ever I want in this blank place..

  4. Di it was a SUPER DUPER Funny epi………. kali thakur ki tho OMM ho gaya….. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt…..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Banitha.. Thnx .dear
      I am happy it make you entertained..

  5. Sairan

    Wowww..Maaza Gya padh ke..Chiraya chirota 😂😂😂😂

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Sairan…
      keep loving and laughing..

  6. Amazing epi dear…😍😍

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Lilly dear…

  7. Rudra’s antics were amzing😂😂😁😁😁really funny,especially the black thakur part.. Nd rudra has an impeccable sense of time… Loved it!!
    Eagerly waiting for the nxt.. Update asap!😍😊

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Bhavana… thank you dear..
      Rudy is always punctual while disturbing romance.

  8. Navz

    Last line is awesome aastha..both were lost in each other that they r not giving attention to anything…..and super funny wen complete family was making fun of kali takur

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Navya.. thank you.
      Always In DBO they are sucking our life by showing a dangerous red pair of eyes of KT.. so I made fun of him.. kuch alag karne ki koshish kiya hai … hope all will like it…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Rashi..
      I am waiting for your long comment one day I hope I will get that on my post….

  9. Awesome…waiting 4 next

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Nihika. keep loving Undeniable desire..

  10. Amazing…
    Oberoi Family making fun of KT…..
    Adorable Shivika & Rudra~ The Madcap….
    waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Shivika.. Kali shock…Oberoi rock!!!

  11. ……….. Astha dii…….. You are my Rockstar……. My.. Laughing therapy… Is going on…. Waiting…for.. The… next…… Update…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nikku.. thank you . Maza aaya.. and hansi bhi hey na sister..
      be happy always and radiate your smile.. no saddy saddy but be like ruddy…Ok dear…

  12. Astha di it’s was an awesome super duper episode 👌👌👌👌👌😘😘😘😘😘.I’m waiting for your next episode. update soon……….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. AHSANA … I will try soon dear..

  13. Chavi

    Hi astha dear…how r u😊..
    Asusual i loved ur ..undeniable desire part 16..ah..awesome😃😊👌🖒..keep writing meri jaan..loveu…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      I am very fine meri Jhansi ki raani.
      I hope you are at the peak of your health condition.. be happy lots of love to your both angel..
      and thank you dear…

  14. Tanz

    Good Night in the afternoon, definitely Shivaay is distracting her a lot.And finally they come to know the truth of chirraya Gouri. i really like the way you include all the family members in your ff. And I hope our Rudy meets his love angel soon and that will be a zor ka jhatka for him.
    Byee di,
    take care. 🙂

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Diamond Tanz…
      Good night daily wish karte karte aadat hogaya hai na so only.. and he pulled her leg…
      for me its always #one for all.. all for one..in my ff.. they are all always together forever..

  15. Ruksy

    Loved the update totally amazing

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Rusky…
      wow!!! you heard me and put your dp..good good…

  16. That was so funny . Loved the update

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Fffan. It was a comic part only…

  17. Hi Astha di ( cCaniIcall u that?)
    I have been a silent reader of your comments and fictions and os, butafafterreading your darwazatod analysis and lovely ff, I had an undeniable desire to comment. Your jodi of sso bhaiya and science rocks to the core!
    Even I am a lover of science u see, and Imust admit, your bhaiya is so hot♨, always makes Anika blush but today the tables turned on him!
    Luv u and your ff to the power of tiffany. Don’t end this, because if u do, Iwill get a heart attack and u will be to blame, got it? (Just kidding)
    Will u consider me your friend or better still.. your I littlesis?

    Loads of love ,
    Vivikhta💞
    P.S You r hilariously sweet and your writing style is too unique!

  18. Aastha_Reddy

    Viviktha dear… I said earlier to many Ishquise…All are my family( in full SSO style)..
    Despite of my age. here are many girls calls me as Astha di and seriously.. I always feel happy when some one wants to call me as Di…
    Thank you for following me and Love you too…
    Have a event full.. excitement full and happiness full life ahead…

    1. Now that u r my di, no thank you and sorry!

      1. Aastha_Reddy

        Only Ishqbaazi and love. OK deal..ha ha …

  19. Anah

    wow ashtha dr….
    what an amazing one….
    ur dp also very cool….
    keep rocking dr…..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Anah.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Alekhika…

  20. I loved this update aasthu gaaru!! Lol even shakthiji was trolling KT!! Lol😂😂
    And glad that the ladies grp know abt Gauri.. waiting for shivika wedding!!
    Post soon gal!!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Anu.. Bechara KT kahan phas gaya iss ajeeb ghar mein.. Uski toh Oh my Maatha kar diya in paaglon ne…
      Not only ladies group ..all except Omkara know the truth of Chulbul .
      I will try to post the next part soon…

  21. Amayaa

    Ha to Aastha di
    I m back
    Maine undeniable desire as gaya h morning me hi dekh liya tha par thori busy thi so longggggggggggg longggggggggggg comments ( like this 1 ni ) type kar sakti thi
    Hmmmmmmmm kya kahu jab new parts padhti hu to aisa lagta h
    This 1 is de best
    Ab tak ke saare khirkitor episodes ko break karte hue Ek new amazing episode with full of laughter
    Ek new record bana rahi h aap har last records ko break karne ka
    M I right? ?????? ????????
    Mai aapse kyon puch rahi hu
    I already knew that
    Waise aaj ka episode chulbul aka gauri Sharma aka gauri Omkara Singh oberoi par concentrated tha par
    Shivika ka chotu sa glimpse hi kaafi h kisi bhi episode ko khirkitor banane ke liye ………………………..
    Aise di being a tashan member ( one who loves Shivika nok – jhok more than their romance ) I m asking u where is nok – jhok between them from long time in ur ff
    I missed them di
    I m desperate 2 read nok – jhok between them in Aastha style

    So lasting I m saying again
    I m eagerly waiting for de grand wedding 😍😍😍😍😍
    Oohhhhhh shit !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    It seems that I m too late 2 read my favourite ff 😊😊😊😊😊

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Ammu.. waiting for wedding. I know tumhari nazar bilkul feast par hi hoga( kidding) .
      don’t expect nok-jhok between Shivika more as they are mature and responsible in my story…but as my crazy Ammu is demanding now I will try to put some.
      First few parts was only Shivika then only I concentrated only on Gouri in this part.
      and you are right I am in a tough competition with my self to write…

  22. Jerry_36

    Awesomeness overloaded only *Claps*👏

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Till hands turns in to tomato..clap clap!!!!!

  23. Piyuu

    awesome

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