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Tum Pas Hoke Bhi Apne Nahi (SS Part 6)

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Hlo everyone….. Well here I am wid d 5th part… I can’t believe that mai yaha tak pahuche… Mtlb mein mai ek composition likh k bad ek hate tak kuch nh likhti thi….. All thanks to u guys…

Well this part dedicated to my dear friends on tu who are a constant support n my inspiration… Samm, Kehkasha n Priya Di… Luv u guys….😊😊😊😊😊 I think I should stop now… N start wid d update….
Scene 1(in Dean’s cabin)
Naira:-(peeping from d door)May I come in Sir…
Dean:- Ya Naira… Come in….
Naira:-Gd mrng Sir…. Gd mrng uncle….☺☺☺☺
Tej:- Gd mrng Naira…..(In a bit serious tone)
Dean:-Naira… Waise toh tumhe pata hi hoga ki Maine tumhe yaha kyu bulaya hai… Par phirr bhi… M tumhe clear kar details hu… Tht… Aj Jo tumne , Anika or Shivay me kiya h … That is not at all acceptable… Ye college hai… Koi akhada nh h… That u people were showing Ur fighting skills…. N on top of that… Anika or Shivay abhi tak yaha nh aye…. Tumhare bas is behaviour k liye koi clarification h…??
Tej:- Yes Naira!!!Is this the way to behave in college premises…. Tum log bachhe nh ho ki khai p bhi ladne lage…..
Naira:-Exactly uncle…. Humein aise behave nh karna chahiye tha…. I totally agree wid u… Bt aap logo ko pta nh hai us ladke ne kaise behave kiya mrng mein……. I was so shocked… Tht itne bade or prestigious college mein aise uthai….(She was going to say Uthaigere….😉😉😉)…
I meant to say that aise ill-mannered student kaha se aa gaya??
(I pause for a while to see the look on their faces…. N guess what… Wo log batli mein almost utar gaye the…😉😉😉)
Dean:-What did he do Naira??
Tej:-Ha bête….. Kya kiya usne…. I’LL not leave him??(in his usual furious tone… I hope u guys can imagine)
Naira:-Uncle,Sir… U won’t believe ….. He used such bad n pathetic words for Anika…. (Taking a pause…)
He called her ROADCHAP and what not….(acting like disappointed… When she is actually angry…)
Tej:- I can’t believe this Mr. Rajput….(Dean)
Aise students ko admission diya h Apne college mein…. Height of leniency…..😣😣😣😣
Dean:-Sir… But….
Tej:- u just shut up…..😣😣😣
(Facing Naira)…. Naira bête… U continue…
Naira:- Just imagine Uncle, Agar wo ladka (by luck😂😂😂).. future mein kisi badi company ka employee bana or usne was aise words use liye kisi senior k liye…. To Wht will people think abt our college??
Tej:-(thinking deeply) ….. Hmm…. U have a point…
Dean:-Bt Naira, humara college beech mein kaha se aa gaya???(in a confused tone)
Naira:-Sir humara college beech mein nh rahega…. Wo to highlight ho jayegi… Harare college ki negative publicity hogi…. People would start questioning our administration….
Dean:-Wo kaise???(highly confused)
Naira:-Wo aise Sir, that jab wo ladka aisi language mein, itne reputated logo ke beech mein baat karega,then everyone would start questioning his….(she was cut off in middle by the Dean)
(A/N-Teachers ki tang adane ki adat Na…. Fictional stories mein bhi nh jayegi…. Do share ur views on this thought abt teachers interfering nature…)

Dean:-(with a shine in his eyes….as if he has won Kaun Banega Karorepati ) his character…
Naira:-Nahi sir…. They would question his education ….. Like uski degree kis college ki hai ,etc…. Or phirr…
Dean:-(scared… As if he will loose his job…😂😂😂) Or phirr….
Tej:-(completing) Or phirr people would start pointing fingers on our college….. (With determination)N I won’t let that happen….. Not bcoz of that random ill-mannered boy…..
Naira:-(acted lyk understanding) Exactly my point Uncle…. Hum kisi bhi random student ya students k wajah se Apke salo ki mehnat ko aise zaya nh hone denge…. U have worked so hard for glorifying the name of this college… N we can’t let any random guy to destroy that….
Tej:-U r absolutely right bête…
So, do u have any idea to solve this issue….
Naira:-Ya uncle…. There’s something in my mind…. (taking a little pause..)
We can arrange for a grooming class or a personality development class for these students… I meant to say uncle tht hamare profession mein speaking skills matter a lot… N there are few students who are just bunch of idiots…. Leave speaking skills… They can’t even initiate a normal conversation….
Dean:-I agree wid u beta…..
Ye toh dhang se teachers ko gd mrng tk nh bolte….(in a disappointed tone)
Naira:-(continuing) We’ll simply introduce these classes as an important subject input syllabus… N everyone will have to attend these classes as per the rules…
Tej:- U think they’ll attend the class????
Naira:-(with an evil smirk) Of course they will….😎😎
Dean:-(being super confused)Wo kaise beta??
Naira:-Wo aise(the plan is muted which will be disclosed later ….)
Tej:-(smiling) That’s a brilliant idea sweetheart…😊😊😊…. I’m so proud of u…. This will definitely work… N u know what… We’ll be the first college in India with such rule….
Naira:- I’m so glad that u liked my idea….☺
Dean:-Thank u so much Naira……
U solved a very big for us….
Naira:- No need to thank me Sir….
It was completely my pleasure(smirking😎😎)
(Shivika were peeping through the window throughout the conversation….. Bt they arrived a bit late…. N u know why??😉😉)

Shivika gave her a “U r impossible look”
N she gave them an “I m d best look ” in return….
Tej:- Cutie….
Naira:-hmm…..
Tej:- You’ll have a very bright future in the business world… Mark my words sweetheart….😊😊
Naira:- Thanks for d compliment uncle😊😊
Tej:- It’s not just a compliment bête… Trust me on that….
Naira:-Thank u so much uncle… It really means a lot to me….☺
Tej:-(thinking a bit) N ya….. Cutie.. Janvi wants to meet u… It’s been a while since u met her…..
Naira:- Yup. It’s been a while…
Tej:-Hey, Why don’t u join us at the dinner today ?? I’LL be fun….☺☺
Naira:-bt uncle… Mr. Malhotra… (was cut off by Tej…)
Tej:-No ifs… N buts…. U r coming with Shivay…. N don’t worry I’ll talk to Ur dad…..
Naira:-then it’s fine uncle…..☺☺☺ U r d best….
Tej:-Ur wlcm Cutie…..😊😊😊

(After 2 hours)
Scene 2(near the notice board)
Boy1:-Abe ye kya hai yr??
Boy2:-Ha be… Ye kya bakwas hai???😑😑
Boy3:-(the jerk… I hope u remember him)
Abe hatio..!!!!! Ye kya naya natak hai??
(A/N:- Dil than kar baithiye kyuki hone wali h heroe ki entry…😎)
Naira:-woow yr…. This is amazing… Humare college ka management itna fast kam krta h… I never knew that….. Chalo acha hai….☺☺
Boy3:- Ye sab tune kiya h Na??😣😣😣
Naira:- bilkul sahi guess kiya tumne…. Shakal dekh kar lag nh raha tha ki samaj paoge….
Pr acha h… Meri energy waste nh hogi….😎😎
Ab toh tumhe pata chal hi gaya hoga ki tumhe mere sath kaise behave Krna hai…. Kyuki ye to sirf mere return gifts ka ek chota aa trailer tha ….n trust me….. Tum Puri movie nh dekha chahoge ……
So, u better watch out……(passing death glares to him…)
As soon as she left from there… Our Shivika came towards the notice board to read the notice…..
Shivay:-Dear Students,
This is to inform u that from there will be one extra subject in your syllabus from now onwards named Personality Development.. Attending the class is compulsory n if a students fails in this subject he/she will be declared fail overall….
By:-
Mr. Rajput
Anika:-O bête ki….. Tabhi toh us Chipade ki sitti-pitti full ho gayi thi isse padhne k bad….
Shivay:- Ya.. u r right….
Suddenly a voice came from back..
Kaha the tum dono?????😣😣😣😣😣
Shivika:-(together) phail gaya raita…😥😥😥😥
A/N-so Guys …. What do u think who is tht person … N how was the hatke notice by Naira….. N I think this is my longest chapter… So please comment guys….
Precap-Naira n Janvi’s conversation…..

6 Comments
  1. Samm

    i guess some typing or posting error was there. some words couldn’t be read. but from what i read, it was good. i wonder what janvi and naira’s conversation will lead to… 🙂 😀

    1. JanviSingh

      Hey sis…
      Actually tu has posted it again n tht to with lots of errors… Really sorry for that….
      N thanks for reading dear……😊😊😊

  2. Shubhadra

    This was nice,yaar….This was offbeat and yet looked so good….Naira’s character is so endearing and her ideas too…🙆🙆🙆👍👍👌👌

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks u so much dear…… This really means a lot to me….😊😊😊

  3. No need to give importance to naira give some shivika scences

    1. JanviSingh

      Hey dear…
      Actually this story is abt n Naira only…
      U can read the theme of the story….. Ur confusions will get cleared……
      N thanks for reading…☺

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