The Game Of Life….An Avneil Ss….(Part 1)

Hii frndz….i am sreenandana back with a new ff…..i hope u all liked my concept….

Lets start the ff…

A happy family is travelling in a car….A baby girl of 7 is sitting in the car with her parents…….

The car suddenly loses the balance….it hits a fast travelling lorry….

A girl wakes up from her sleep and screams….she cries badly….

Girl – Maaa…..

Another lady along with the same guy in the car comes inside her room….

Lady – Avni….my bacha….did u dream about Ashaji and Asishji’s accident again….ur neela ma is here na….dont worry….

Yes….the girl is none other than avni….lady in the dream is asha, the guy is asish and the second lady is Neela….

Avni – maa….i try a lot….but i cant forget maa and papa’s accident….

Neela – ashaji had given ur and asishji’s hands in my hand….i sometimes feel i failed as a mother seeing ur plight….

Avni hugs neela….

Avni – maa…i didnt meant 2 hurt u….

Neela – i know bacha….but i cant bear ur sadness…

Avni again hugs neela….

Neela – now sleep….

Neela waits for avni to sleep….even asish waits there….later they both goes to their room….

Neela – avni’s condition worsened after her breakup with neil….

Ashish – yes….she is broken from inside but acts 2 b strong infont of us…

Neela – i hopes she comes out of that….

Ashish – a proposal came 4 her yesterday….i hope she agrees 4 that….

Neela – lets talk about it tomorrow….

Asish and neela too sleeps….

Morning:

In Khanna House:

Shwetha makes tea for neil and prakash….

Shwetha – Prakashji….i am worried about neil…he is not agreeing 4 any proposals….he is broken from inside…

Prakash – its not our mistake…

Shwetha – after avni and neils breakup his life changed completely….

Prakash – he only is the cause 4 that….we cant blame avni…

Shwetha – prakashji….plz dont blame him….he was not matured that time….

Prakash – matured….is he matured now.???he is always in the pull of alcohol….

Shwetha – he realised her worth after she went….he is already broken….even u hate him….a

Prakash – whatever….

Shwetha – u havent even talked 2 him for 9 years….

Prakash – its bcoz of him only….

Shwetha – i will come back after giving this tea to Neil….

Shwetha goes 2 neil….

Shwetha – tillu…wake up..how many times i had told u not to takedrinks….but who cares about my words….

Neil – mom…plz…dont start again….

Shwetha – do u know how much me and ur papa are worried about u ??always busy in ur own world.along with drinks….

Neil – mom plz….

Shwetha – what plz???now have this coffe….

Neil – i dont want…

Shwetha – tillu plz….atlest for me….

Finally neil gives up and takes the coffe….

Shwetha – tillu….actually i want to tell u something…a request…

Neil – say mom…no need of this creepy introduction….

Shwetha – u know ur dad’s friend Mr.Kapoor ry8???

Neil nodes….

Shwetha – he…he wants his daughter to b married in this family…and u know u r the only boy child and moreover she knows everything..everything…

Neil (shouts) – mom…how many times i had told u not 2 talk about my marriage….but u really dont care….i swear i will leave this house if u dare 2 talk about this again…

Shwetha – tillu…calm down….

Neil goes down….

Shwetha (POV) – i hope avni somehow returns in his life….only she will b able 2 control him….

In Mehta house:

Neela – avni….bacha….wake up….its too late…

Avni – maa…just 5 more minutes…

Neela – avni…u r saying the same sentence from past 1 hour…dont u remember that 2dau u r having an interview….

Avni wakes up suddenly…..

Avni – omg…i completely forgot about it….

Neela – finally….u woke up….gud Morning bacha….

Avni kisses neela..

Avni – gud morning maa….

Neela – avni…..actually…me and ur papa wants 2 say something 2 u….come down fast….

Avni – okay maa…

Neela goes out….avni gets ready 4 the interview….later she goes down….

Ashish – its bcoz of ur stubborness…otherwise u could have joined our office….

Avni – papa…i said na i would do this job till i feel i am capable of joining our business….

Neela – beta…eat something…

Avni – ma…u said na u and papa need 2 talk something….

Neela – haan…wo…actually a proposal came 4 u….and we want u 2….

Avni – ma…plz…i dont want 2 talk about this….

Neela – but bachha…

Avni – bye ma…bye papa…

Neela – eat something bacha…

Avni – sorry ma…but its already too late…..

She takes neela and asish’s blessings….she leaves….

Neela – asishji….i knew this would happen….she loves neil even now….

Asish – leave all this now….i will call ali…i think he will help us….

Neela – i think that would b helpful….

Asish – i will call ali….

In Khanna House:

Neil takes his phone and goes out….suddenly he gets a call from mitali….

Neil – hello mitali…hw r u??

Mitali – fine neil…neil..i actually called u 2 tell that next monday its my engagement…

Neil – oh…congrats…who is that unlucky guy???

Mitali – neil…..His name is ali….a sweet guy….

Neil – oh…ali…so i guess its a love marriage…

Mitali – yaa…mom and dad were against our relation initially but later accepted him….

Neil – okay…i will surely come….

Mitali – u should…afterall u r my bff…bye…

Neil – bye….

Neil feels happy for his bestie but at the same times feels sad reminsing avni…..

In xyz company:

Interviewer – ms.avni…u r appointed….

Avni – tnq….i promise i will do the best….

Later avni comes out from the company….

Suddenly a car stops in front of avni…a guy gets down from the car…its none other than ali….

Avni – alii…

She hugs him…..

Avni – how is mitali bhabhi??

Ali – fine…and there is a gud news….my marriage with mitali is fixed…

Avni – congrats dear….

Ali – next monday is d engagement ….

Avni – i will surely come…

Ali – avni….i need 2 talk 2 u…

Avni – ali…i know what u want 2 talk…plz…leave that topic….

Ali – but avni….one day or another u have 2 move on….

Avni – ali plz….

Avni and ali walks on street…

Later ali gets mitali’s call and he goes 2 attend it….

Avni walks on streets…she sees a girl and a boy fighting for a doll…

Girl – hey idiot…leave this doll…i need this….

Boy – no…its mine…

Girl – no…its mine…and u r trying 2 steal it….u r a thief…

Boy – me and thief??its u who is trying 2 steal this doll..

Boy suddenly takes the doll and runs away…the girl follows him and takes the doll from the boy…their fight continues…

Meanwhile a tear falls.from.avni’s eyes….

Flasback:

In Mehta House:

Avni – ma…riya is coming back right???

Neela – haan…tomorrow….

Avni – i think we should buy some gift for her….

Neela – even i think so….

Avni – so…we r going 2 a gift show now itself….okay??

Neela – okay bachaa…

Avni – i will come back after getting ready…

Neela – okay bacha…

Later they both goes 2 a gift house….

In xyz gift house:

Neil was inside the gifthouse….Neela and avni too reaches there…

Neela and avni looks for a gift for riya….they both select a gift….

Even neil was searching 4 a nice doll 2 keep in his room….

Suddenly avni sees a teddy bear and instantly likes it….even neil likes it….

Both avni and neil holds the teddy from either sides

Both avni and neil holds the teddy from either sides….

Avni – leave it…i need this….

Neil – no i saw it first….so i will take this….

Avni – no…i need this…

Neil and avni’s war continues…neela comes there….

Neela – bacha…let it b…give it 2 him…

Avni turns to neela….

Avni – no maa…i need this…

By the tike neil snatches the doll from her hand and he pays the bill….he runs away….even avni follows him….

Neela – avni….beta…stop…

Neela pays the bills and runs behind avni….

Avni – u cheat give my doll back….

Neil – ur doll…no way…its mine…

They both fights for the doll….avni tries to take the doll…but in vain…finally neil runs away with the doll…and neela takes avni to their house….

Precap: Falshback continues……..

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  1. Nice track dear..

  2. It’s like bepannah’s 1st episode

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      i was inspired from beppanah. . Tnq…

  3. Wow lovely episode can’t wait for the next one plz update soon thanks

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      Tnq…… Will update soon…….

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